"the beginning." (maybe)

[Harley]

Oh be quiet Vermin76! What if Vermin some sleazy bouncer at a some two bit strip club. Kickin deadbeat ass and mopping up man goo.

[Ranchgal]

in the midnight hour we cried more more more!

OH Goodness---I Love that song!!!

makes me want to jump up and dance around yelling YYEEEE HAAAWW!!!

Works for me !!! LOL

[I SHOT CYRUS]

Anymore On Its Way, soldier heavy muscle?

[The Rogue]

lol harley if that was true then he would have life made[/quote]

[fist fighter]

a young hoodlum about 19, 20 maybe, is escorted into his new home an 8x10 cell at rikers island! he's blonde, kinda tough looking, a little scared. this is his first bit. he shudders when door slams behind him, and just then he notices he is not alone, he has a cellmate! sitting against the wall in the shadows on the bottom bunk is a large dark figure. the dark figure calls out what the f*ck is that on your hand? he's refering to a small W on the back of the new guy's hand. the young hood gathers all his courage and shouts warriors, from coney! the dark figure snickers a little bit and snorts and then replies what the f*ck do you know about warriors? the real warriors. the figure slides out from the bottom bunk and the shadows, stands up, and turns to go to the sink and the youngster see's the tattoo's on the back of the older inmate, across the top shoulder to shoulder was "warriors" in old english, across the bottom was "ajax" also in old english. it struck him like a bolt of lightning he knew who this was, could it be? everybody in our hood knows about the 9 who went to the bronx for a big meeting back in the day, and got blamed for some sh*t they didn't do and got through miles of enemy hood just to get home, and beat-ass all the way! hell yeah they were famous in our neighborhood, you better know, especially if you are a warrior! it's folklore! ajax turns around and says i'll tell you about the warriors!

wow good job that would be a great start off for the movie!!!!!!!!!!

[fist fighter]

ajax turns from the sink, got a name boy? popeye, the youngster replies. ajax, laughs sarcasticly. what are you a tuff guy, like popeye? i do o.k. the kid says back. ajax laughs again, we'll see! ajax stare's hard for a few second's, well more than a few. he then sigh's heavy, and start's to speak. i always knew cleon was a fuckin idiot, swan too. warchief, my ass! i told em it was stupid, goin to the bronx, truce, big meeting, ha! bullshit! if cyrus was the one and only how come he couldn't stop a bullet?! he says snickering! he then start's to stretch, and crack his neck and the younger con, notices several long, ugly scars on the side of ajax's face, and neck. that happened in here, ajax says. not on the street. it's the only way they can get me, 4, or 5 at a time! 5 boppers, out in the yard got me. yeah, cleon comes walkin up one day talkin some sh*t, about goin to the bronx. every gang is goin he says, we GOTTA go, he says. the leader of the g. riffs, biggest gang at the time. what about now, ajax asks? still are, popeye replies. fuckers, says ajax. anyway this faggot, cyrus, supposed to be all mystic and sh*t! got this brilliant plan for a truce, all the gang's to be one, and all this garbage about takin over the city! yeah right! we see how that turned out! so this one friday, it's hot man, middle of july. cleon comes walkin up the boardwalk, says we're goin tonite! he got the word this morning! i thought it was bullshit! i though we we're bein set up! but what i though didn't matter! i guess they were the ones who weren't very smart! so he says be here at 4:00 for your assignment. so i take off, go see my chick. thank god i did! i ended up in fuckin jail that night, and ain't seen daylight since! fuckin cleon! so we show up about 4 or so. there was 9 of us, that's what that dickhead cyrus wanted, 9 guy's and nobody carryin. weirdo! it was me, cleon, swan, my buddy cochise, cowboy, vermin, snowball, rembrandt and the fox. we were the 9 cleon picked, out of about 120 warriors at the time. the only good idea he had! how many now? he ask's popeye. about 350, he replies. we're still kinda small compared to some, riff's got over 800! so cleon dishes the line-up, and we start rollin down the walk, man! i guess it was kinda cool, i figured at worst we would get some kinda action! either fist's, or chick's!! so after we stop and eat, it's just getin dark by the time we hit the platform, to catch the train. we bullshit for awhile, till train pull's in. hop the train, and start movin!

good job thats awesome!!!!!!!

[fist fighter]

in the midnight hour we cried more more more!

who does that song????

[GonzoNYC]

Billy Idol.

[SoldierHeavyMuscle]

"popeye", follows "ajax" out of they're cell, after the buzzer sounded, and the cell doors opened for lunch.
ajax, stops at a cell a few cells down, turns to popeye and says, we aint alone! popeye could feel the stupid look on his own face! what the hell does that mean? he thought. (he wasn't to hip on penitentary lingo yet) ajax pops his head into the cell, and yells,
YO VERMIN!
WHAT?? is the reply, from inside the cell.
LUNCH, FAGGOT!
WHAT, BALONEY SANDWICHES AGAIN?
THAT'S ALL WE EVER HAVE FOR LUNCH, I'M SICKA BALONEY!!
VERMIN, QUIT YOUR BITCHIN, AND GET OUT HERE!! I GOT SOMETHING TO SHOW YA!
WHAT?? again is the reply from inside the cell!
OK, THAT'S IT!! ajax fly's into the cell!! and after a short commotion, and what sound's like a bit of a scuffle! he emerge's pulling a big, stocky black haired dude, out with him.
he looks at popeye, with "that just punched somebody in the eye" kind of evil, smile!! and says, you know who this is? he was there too!! this is "vermin"!
get the fuck outta here!!! says popeye! (he can't believe it!! two, of the original nine, are here! one, his cellmate, and another two cell's down!! he can't believe his luck! except, for the whole prison thing!!)
at least he had some back, if shit ever goes bad in here!! and who better than the man himself, ajax!! to have his back!! (there were none of the younger, newer generation, warriors here.)
because of the over crowding prison system, most of the young, new first-time cons were being sent out of state. it was just timing and a fluke, basically that popeye ended up here!
vermin looks popeye up, and down, and says who the fuck is that? what the fuck is that?
ajax, gives vermin a skipper-slap to the back of his melon! (ya know one of those slaps, that slide over the back, and top of somebody's head!!)
he's from coney, ya moron!!
you mean..he's?
yeah, he's a warrior!!
vermin's face lit up!! (neither him, nor ajax, had seen another warrior come through those door's, except for "cowboy" when he was there for a 15 month bit! for the attempted murder, of a *mongol*!! five years ago.) (vermin was doing a twenty five to life for the MURDER of a mongol! he got here about six, or seven years after "the meeting"
then a million questions, come flying out of vermins mouth!! is the wonder wheel still there? and the bathhouse? what about the boardwalk? what does it look like, now?? are the warriors still holdin it down?? how many warriors are there?? we still rackin the *mongols*??
popeye doesn't know which question to answer first!! and starts to stutter a bit! ajax laughs, and tells vermin, shut the hell up!! let's go get lunch! he's got time to answer questions, he ain't goin nowhere for.. how long rookie?? he snicker's!!
twenty two month's popeye replie's, wearily.
like i said, he ain't goin nowhere!
so the three of em head down the metal stair's to the cafeteria, there are six, or seven line's in the cafeteria, until ajax, vermin, and popeye come through the door, the line's split, and go to either side of the cafeteria, opening up the center of the caf. for the three warriors to walk straight up to the chow line! (kinda like the parting of the red sea) the warriors even now commanded, and were given, and showed respect!!!
it was due in part, to ajax! everybody knew who ajax was!! (and if the truth be known, ajax was responsible for more than a handful of con's meeting they're maker, and leaving rikers, in a bag! since he started his extended stay, courtesy of the state!)
and vermin was nobody to be fucked with either!
and then there was the fact of who they were, from back in the day.
and there was the riff's! they had deemed the eternal respect brand on the warriors! meaning they were given a lot more pull, slack, and consideration then any other gang, since that hot-ass night, back in july 1979!
they got they're grubb, and sat. ajax tells vermin, i was tellin him about "the meeting" vermin laughs! how much were you plannin on tellin him? i'm guessin only up to the part, where you dumb-ass got busted tryin to rape a chick-cop!! he laughs!! ya can't tell him anything else ya lunk-head! ya weren't there! you were playin grab-ass in the back of a squad car!!!
ya know you ain't funny sometimes, vermin! ajax sneered! i didn't try to rape, anybody!!
relax, tough guy!! i'm just playin with ya!
yeah, says ajax!
anyway, don't listen to him! he probably told you HE was warchief, not swan!!
i aint got that far yet, wise-ass! scoff's ajax.
well, where did ya get to?
just past the part where cyrus took the slug, ajax, laughs!!
hey!! not so loud!! says vermin. you wanna wake up missin a one of you nutt's?? the riffs don't tolerate any bad talk about cyrus! even now, he's still magical to them! i always thought the riffs were pretty weird, anyway. but there's way to many of em in here, to be talkin shit about cyrus!!
let's go outside, says ajax it stinks in here!! like baloney, right vermin??
shut-up ajax, you know i hate that goddamn baloney!!
ya know that little high-hat, that i think snatched my shampoo, the other day, i'm gonna turn popeye on loose on him in the yard!!
and if he's a punk, i'm gonna cut that w off his hand and throw him out of my cell, and tell everybody he sweet-fag! don't worry, hell find another celly, probably one who'll be VERY NICE to him! bein so young, and blonde!!
popeye's stomach got queasy, he wondered if ajax was serious? but he knew one thing, there was no way he was gonna look like a punk, in front of two of the most famous warriors, in coney history!
as they walked out of the cafeteria, on they're way out to the yard, vermin leaned in close to ajax, and wispered, you're not really gonna do that to him, if he gets whupped, are ya?
of course not!! he's from coney!! and he's a warrior!! but you gotta admit, that look on his face when i said that was pretty damn funny!!! ajax, cackles!!
vermin kinda smiles, and says yeah, that was pretty damn funny!!
meanwhile, popeye in back of them is starting to sweat, and it's only about forty degree's outside!!!



p.s i know you guys are waitin for ajax to continue the story, but i had to work someone else in the mix!! ajax wasn't there for the whole story!! but i promise, not to make you guys wait for the next part of the story!! i'll get the next page up tommorrow, tommorrow night, latest!!
*mongol* the warriors closest, rival gang! as per the original script!

[I SHOT CYRUS]

u keep writing it ill keep reading it

[Coney Island Baby]

I'm lovin' the stories too SHM, keep 'em coming.