Are my writing skills poor?

[Baby Bear]

May I ask do I have poor writing skills? I know I make small grammatical errors every once and a while but does my stories suck? Im just asking cuz when I post my stories on this oter site they say I have poor writing skills. I just wanted to ask the members here do yo all think I have good stories? Just take a look at old stories I've made on this fan fiction section. I believe I worked really hard on them.
Tell me what you guys think.

[GramercyRiff99]

What is this other writing site?

[nazzac]

those over dudes don't know wht they are on about, you are good at writing

[Baby Bear]

What is this other writing site?

its not actually a writing site but its a site called Predator hunted. They always nickpick little things in my story and turn them into big mistakes.

[GramercyRiff99]

its not actually a writing site but its a site called Predator hunted. They always nickpick little things in my story and turn them into big mistakes.

Ahahahaha. They have no right to say you suck. In fact, I just checked them out and looked at a few fics. You're a better writer than most of them, hands down.

Seriously:

Once there was a man who always wished he could die he tried boungie jumping shooting himself and using a flamethrower but they did not work he always lived so one summer he had a oppium overdose so he could move or fell nothing it was summer and a predator was nearbye he then could only fell nothing after a while the predator started jumping through the city it was a bad blood then later there was a group of people coming bye he had laid out some barbed wire one bye one there necks were scliced blood spilled down there necks the wire was cutting deeper and deeper until it cut all there heads off simaltinously the predator then ran away after taking the bloody heads he than saw another gruop lined up with there brief cases getting to work he shot a spear from his gun and and it hit all of them there was a purplish red spiral running through the air the groaneed as they hit the wall they kept going and ther now were ppl rats and electronics on the spear. they fell in ocean then sharks ate the spear the point of the spear made it bleed causing a feeding frenzy the predator laughed then started breaking heads in a bloody mess he eventually came to the bathroom with the odd suiccide man in it he took him bye the legs and RIPPPed them apart then through them on the wall the blood started to spray the predator then riped the mans arms off and woth the mans last thought he said i don't want to die.

Absolute brilliance. You have nothing to fear.

[Ajax88]

ppl rats...... they will eat you 

IIRC don't Predators hunt for honor instead of killing for the fun of it?

[cowboy rules]

Nah man dont listen to these idiots, they're just losers with nothing better to do than to try and bring people down. Your stories dont suck, I enjoy reading them, you're very creative.

[Baby Bear]

its not actually a writing site but its a site called Predator hunted. They always nickpick little things in my story and turn them into big mistakes.

Ahahahaha. They have no right to say you suck. In fact, I just checked them out and looked at a few fics. You're a better writer than most of them, hands down.

Thanks. My username on there is Left hand ov god.
However thanks guys. Im glad u all appreciate my stories.

[BaseballFury100]

Man, who cares if somebody doesn't like your writing and people say it sucks,  unless  someone who has actually wrote a book and got it published and it sold at least 1 copy, says your writing is lame, then thats when you should be thinking about what others think, a bunch of losers on the internet who play critic on forums mean nothing, PM a copy to your next or most recent writing and i want to read it.

[Baby Bear]

Man, who cares if somebody doesn't like your writing and people say it sucks,  unless  someone who has actually wrote a book and got it published and it sold at least 1 copy, says your writing is lame, then thats when you should be thinking about what others think, a bunch of losers on the internet who play critic on forums mean nothing, PM a copy to your next or most recent writing and i want to read it.

in that case check out some of my other stories on this forum. I have some stories here.

[Gezza]

Man, who cares if somebody doesn't like your writing and people say it sucks,  unless  someone who has actually wrote a book and got it published and it sold at least 1 copy, says your writing is lame, then thats when you should be thinking about what others think, a bunch of losers on the internet who play critic on forums mean nothing, PM a copy to your next or most recent writing and i want to read it.

in that case check out some of my other stories on this forum. I have some stories here.

sorry to bring this back up guys but i remember reading some of your storys on there Baby Bear and they were hell good so i dont know what them guys were on about, also the people who do hand drawing on there are very talented!

[Baby Bear]

haha thanxs dude...I've been writing for over a year now so I do have improval.