so here it is guys:
chapter 18
swan's aprtment
Swan helped dianna pack her stuff for her friends sally, she was coming to pick her up in a matter of minutes and dianna was just packing the last few bits and peaces, she zipped the suitcase up and said"well i guess i wont see you and my baby boy until the wedding day,bye my 3 speacail boys", she kissed swan then kissed fletcher then she slightly cuddled slash the dog. then just like that she heard sally bibbing outside and she went!! now swan was left on his own with fletcher and slash to big baby's to look after, that night he went to the hangout trained and walked around his streets to see if everything was safe and sound and then went home,went in the shower,fed slash then fed and sung baby fletcher asleep then went to bed!!
The next day he woke up to a morning without dianna lying next to him in bed and without her lovely sunny-side up's being made, he phoned a couple of the warriors to go into the swell town centre of bensonhurst, the first he went to when he got there was the bensonhurst wedding tailor shop and he bought some base suits and asked the tailor man kindly to put the gang logo on them, because there was so many warriors he decide to invite the ones he new and like the most and ones what will always stick beside him they were: snow,ajax,rembrandt,cowboy,cochise,vermin and some new-bloods,champ,wire,rocket,fish,jay and west and 40 others!! then he bought a nice gold-emerald jeweled ring for dianna....3hours had passed and he started to get tired but least he had got in nearly all the stuff he was supposed to get including the venue and other stuff.
Dianna on the same day had went to harlem town center and managed to get everything including her lovely elegant white dress with dimonties down the side and a nice vail to wear, she also bought a silver necklace, some nice cream flowers and orange ones to go on the tables and she also bought brides maids dresses, and last but not least a gold ring wich had the warriors logo on it and underneath at the two sides it had dianna,george and fletcher and dianna knew he would like it!! then next two days for both swan and dianna was spended getting the last finishing touches for the wedding and both sides were missing thier lover and couldnt wait for the wedding. it had been a month now and swan knew it was coming up for the wedding and 3days before the wedding he decided to have his stag-night and the same with dianna!! swan had gotten his mam to watch baby fletcher because it was his stag night. he made his way into the hangout and burst through the doors!! everyone ran at him because they couldnt wait for the night to begin, first off they all but stag novelty antlers on and had a few drinks and then headed to harlem to go see the night-life!! they got the sub-way and when they got off they headed straight for the new-rebuilt pussy-palace and payed two strippers to have a good time with swan then they had a few shots, even rembrandt did and ajax was loving this stag-night so much he went in the toilet with a girl he met on the dancefloor!! then after that they went to another one and then swan went back home drunk out of his head and lay on the bed and fell asleep!!
Dianna had a quiet hen-night with sally and her other friends jane,jessy and annie, they put a little buffett on and had champagne and watched romance movies and by the time it was 1:00am they had fully passed out including dianna!!
The next day swan woke up with a throbbing head-ache and looked at his calendar and saw that now it was only a day away from his wedding he went into the bathroom and looked into the mirror to find he had sex-addict written on his head, he thought to himself, im gonna kill ajax, that little shit still ajax will be ajax. he went into the shower and after got dryed and put his colours on, then fed slash an took him out for his morning stroll then took him back and went to south of coney to pick fletcher up from his mamma's!! he knocked on the door and he heard his mamma's sweet,new-yorken accent asking"who is it" she looked through the key hole and saw swan and she opened the door and greeted him"george my baby, your gonna get married i cant believe its only a day away, well least your marrying the girl you love, aww sweety i love you" then she grabbed him and kissed and cuddled him and as he said" i love you too maw", then she said"come on in george, so do you want some coffee,team,smoothie-oh i'll make your favourite banna-cream smoothie how does that sound"?, swan smiled and said"swell maw,just swell", as she went into the kitchen to make it swan looked around at his mothers house(the house he was born in) that he hadnt saw for ages when he was growing up he just thought it was a stupid,little,cosy house but now to him because he hasnt bin home for ages it looked like a cosy,little palace, he was mezmorizing all of the photo's up on the fireplace, there was one of him and his dad fishing when he was 7-8 years old with his little werid-shaped adult teeth starting to grow, him pulling his little cheeky smile and his dad laughing at him and then he saw a one of his dad senior george with his mamma maisy on thier wedding day and another one of his mum holding him when he was first born looking so tired but proud all the same!! then his mum came back in with his smoothie and said"there ya go" as she placed it in his hand he smiled and drank as he was watching t.v and talking and when it was nearly time to go he asked"mum erm can i take fletcher, now"
"oh yeah son, he's right in thier in his cot-well it was your cot when you were a baby but ya know, o my he looks so like you its like i have my little baby george lying there"!! swan laughed then picked him carefully out of his cot and kissed him then said goodbye to his mamma then went back home and went to sleep!!
Now it was his big wedding day and he woke up early at 7:00am because his his wedding was at 12:00pm on the afternoon, so it would give him enough time to get ready.... first off he went in the bath then put his perfumes and deoderants on then he ironed his clothes and put them on then brushed his shiny-clean hair. he looked in the mirror staring at hisslef in the mirrior and he looked at his nicely tailored base suit with its respectful, warriors logo on the back of it and he smiled and thought, cleon would be proud,real proud. then he was interupted by a knock at the door and he opened it to find rembrandt and cowboy standing there looking very cute with thier suits on and rem said"wow you look amazing man" and then cowboy added"yeah you dont even look like a street-brother you look like bond,james bond"! swan said"yeah right" and he laughed while he said it:
"ya know you dont look to bad yourself's you might find a nice,cute chick"
"that would be great but it's your lucky day not ours swan"
"aww com here you big softy's"... and he gave them a big wet,manly kiss.by the time it was 11:00am nearly all swans brothers were there, snow asked"so are we ready to go warlord", swan agve him a nervous but positive look and replied"yes we are", so they went outside and got into the 1960's styled car with a big red ribbon on and snow was driving it. then another car came and it was a beetle which was for rembrandt which was taking baby fletcher to the wedding and ajax,cowboy and vermin!! and the rest took a cab and some the sub-way coz the weddign was at a beatiful church in gramecy, and dianna was just leaving the house at 11:05am and she came down the stairs to show all her friends which were her bridesmaids her dress and they screamed and said it was beautiful and then she went outside to be greeted by a 1930's style car and her own personal chauffer and her other friends were driving in sally's car!!
It was now 11:40am and swan was smartly and proudly standing in the chapel waiting for his wife to burst through them doors, then he heard a car door open and knew it was her!! the organ started playing the traditional wedding song-here comes the bride, then swans eyes lit up in amazment as he saw his gorgeous looking wife getting given away by her dad richard and on that exact moment she looked as gorgeous as ever. then she standed by swan and hugegd him and she started crying coz she had been missing him and now they were about to be married!! so the preist went through some of the vows and asked for the ring-boy to bring the rings and everyone started laughing and smiling and awing kindly as they saw rem carry baby fletcher in his litle white sailor suit thing with rembrandt holding the rings in his hand but sorta pretending it is in fletchers hand as rem came closer and fianally was infront of swan and dianna he gave the rings to them on the cushion and then dianna kissed fletcher and then rembrandt took him back with him to his seat, then as the preist was saying the vows they had repeat the lines then say the ring lines:
"i george-patrick-johnson give you this ring", and he slipped it on her slender hand.
"and i dianna-belinda-johnson give you this ring", then they said the i do bit and the preist at last said"you may kiss the bride" and he grabbed her and swung her down as he passionatley kissed her, and at that moment everyone was clapping and whistling and everyone had a tear in thier eye for they gave praise and luck to the future. they signed the registerery thing and had there photo taken by the photographer and by family and friends then they went to thier nice manor-house venue in the west of gramercey and cut thier cake and made a speech, then danced to thier song which was my girl and then at 11:00pm they went home, back to coney while they were in the 1930's car with tin cans and just married on the back of a banner on the back of the car!!
Ok guys that was the long chapter 18 and the wedding and i hoped you liked it and as i said before this will be soon ending on chapter 20 or 21 so i havent got long now and hope when it finishes you have had a great experience reading it and enjoyed every secound of it coz i have!! and also i'll be doing chapter 19 tommorrow or on wednesday, until next time adios boppers!!
the warriors-a love story chapter 18
- the lady warrior
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Re: the warriors-a love story chapter 18
Yeah, that was pretty long, but it was good. It was pretty cool to see the wedding and the stag night and everything, because it's something that people never really think about when they think about gang-life. Was also pretty good seeing Swan to back to his house and see his mother -- something else which I've never thought about.
Overall, it's good, and I'm liking how you've done this story, so just keep it up for these last few chapters. The end is in sight. 8)
Overall, it's good, and I'm liking how you've done this story, so just keep it up for these last few chapters. The end is in sight. 8)
Re: the warriors-a love story chapter 18
lovin the story...i thought that it would be interupted by a rival gang but thank god it didnt
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause
Re: the warriors-a love story chapter 18
Wonderful story! I could see everything as if it was a movie, and the part with sex addict written on the head i had a very clear image for. I love this story and im sad to hear that it's coming to an end, but I want to see how you end it off.
Good Job
Good Job
- union_jack
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Re: the warriors-a love story chapter 18
youre right rocko, very cinematic!
i can tell LW can really picture this and so can i
really good on an emotional level as well, covered loads of stuff gave the whole scene depth and also left me with a simple "aww thats nice" lol
i can tell LW can really picture this and so can i

really good on an emotional level as well, covered loads of stuff gave the whole scene depth and also left me with a simple "aww thats nice" lol
