the lady warrior wrote:You shouldn't flame yourself girl it's good maybes needs a tiny few improvements here and there with detail but who gives two monkeys this was really good and i think you should continue this fanfic but if ur really unhappy with the first chapter just rewrite it when u have time and then post it up then carry it on, just some advice you dont have to listen to lousy ole lady warrior if you dont wanna baby J but u have my support in anything u do baby J
Thank you very much
And it's alright, I really don't mind much. I wrote this when I was a geeky little 14 year old with no real writing skills. I was in the eighth grade. I'm kinda surprised nobody flamed me lol.
Now I'm a geeky 19 year old with a little bit more skill and common sense soooooo.....
I just might give it another go!
