Ajax's Tale [explicit at some parts]

[Ramsey]

Riverside Park.

"This guy tough or what?" asked one of the cops. "Yeah, this guy's tough. Let's go toughguy." said the other officer. Ajax had handcuffs on now and was sitting in the back of a police cruiser. He gave the woman officer one last glare before he was sat down in the back of the car. It drove off through Riverside Park. Ajax was sweating heavily and was pissed off. "You f**kin' pigs. If I ever get out of these cuffs I'll--" "Shut up!" yelled the pigs in the front. He kicked the car door. "Hey, tough guy, your already going in for trying to rape one of our officers, and I don't think Vandalism will go well with that report." yelled one of officers. "Awww, f**k you!" Ajax shouted back. The 2 minute car ride through the park seemed to take hours. All Ajax could do was kick the car door, hopefully enough that it will fall off. "Alright, scum! I warned your a--" CRACK!. A baseball had hit the windshield, hard. Then another, and another. Admist the pelting, the officers had to communicate. "Can you see the perps?!" they yelled. And then they could. In front of the car, a tall, muscular man wearing all black and having what looked like 2 bats tied together appeared, along with 5 other soldiers. Ajax looked on. "Those clowns!" he yelled. The cops radioed for help. "HQ! We got a 10-43 in Riverside Park! Dispatch a unit! We need back-up!" Ajax recognized them as those baseball freaks that they bopped with. The policemen got out of the car. They took out the mace. "Freeze! Hold it right there!!" The Pig sprayed the tall one with mace, but it seemed to have no effect. He took a swing, and the rumble was on. Back-up units wouldn't come for atleast three minutes, and Ajax saw this as his chance to escape. He pursisted kicking the door and it practically fell off its hinges. He sneaked up some nearby stairs, cuffs still on, and thought to himself, 'Where the f**k is everyone?'


Can you tell me what you thought of it please?

[Romero]

Wow that was great! I loved the way you included the furies leader  .

[CleonWarlord]

that's really good...add more..i like it..nice adding Cobb

[Sleeping Dragon]

yeah.funny name he's got there....

[Ramsey]

thanks guys.. should I write more once I get the time?

[Sleeping Dragon]

yes!!