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thats awesome man cant wait for the next part
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Best fan-fic i've ever read
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Swan led his soldiers through the train station for half an hour and they still had'nt found anyone. They had walked past the same set of shops about 5 times and the Warriors wanted to go home and have a drink. But Swan was determined to find them. They continued walking. The Swan stopped. So did the rest of the Warriors. They had all heard something from behind them. They turned round to see the Punks walk round the corner. About 30 of them. They were outnumbered.
"Well well well.....look whos came back. You guys got alot of nerve comin down here after what you did to us" The Leader said
"Look....we dont wanna fight....we wanna form a truce" Swan said
"Oooohhhhh.......so you've become the Riffs bitches now? Well thats fine with me. But you can count us out. We aint gonna take commands from those pussies. So....What now? I let you guys go tell the Riffs we said fuck em? Or kill ya? I think killin ya would be easier. And besides we dont even need you assholes. We got our own truce formed." He replied "Now...Punks, Kill them all"
"WARRIORS STAND YOUR GROUND! WE CAN BEAT THEM AGAIN" Swan shouted, running towards the Punks. He hit the first Punk he saw with a hard punch to the temple. He was knocked out. The two gangs rumbled for a few minutes when Swan relised they were going to be over run. He was about to shout to the Warriors to get away when he was jumped on by the Punk Leader.
"Oh man....I've been waitin to do this for a long time" The Punk said raising his blade. This was it, Swan thought. He was going to die. The blade came down and Swan closed his eyes. Then he heard a scream. Swan looked up to see Ajax standing over him and the Punk leader with a large nail through the side of his. Blood pouring out the wound. He was dead
"Thanks man" Swan said
"Dont mention it" Ajax replied
"NOW WARRIORS GET OUTTA HERE!" Swan shouted as he ran from the Punks with them in hot pursuti. They ran up the stairs and saw a train due for Tremont. They ran on it. The train pulled away with all the Warriors safe.
"Thank God for this train. Haha" Vermin said, out of breath
"We gotta see the Riffs straight away. Theres gonna be an all city war guys. I hope you're ready. The Warriors knew it was right "We got our own truce formed" Thats what he said. They were going to have to fight for their lifes soon.
"Well well well.....look whos came back. You guys got alot of nerve comin down here after what you did to us" The Leader said
"Look....we dont wanna fight....we wanna form a truce" Swan said
"Oooohhhhh.......so you've become the Riffs bitches now? Well thats fine with me. But you can count us out. We aint gonna take commands from those pussies. So....What now? I let you guys go tell the Riffs we said fuck em? Or kill ya? I think killin ya would be easier. And besides we dont even need you assholes. We got our own truce formed." He replied "Now...Punks, Kill them all"
"WARRIORS STAND YOUR GROUND! WE CAN BEAT THEM AGAIN" Swan shouted, running towards the Punks. He hit the first Punk he saw with a hard punch to the temple. He was knocked out. The two gangs rumbled for a few minutes when Swan relised they were going to be over run. He was about to shout to the Warriors to get away when he was jumped on by the Punk Leader.
"Oh man....I've been waitin to do this for a long time" The Punk said raising his blade. This was it, Swan thought. He was going to die. The blade came down and Swan closed his eyes. Then he heard a scream. Swan looked up to see Ajax standing over him and the Punk leader with a large nail through the side of his. Blood pouring out the wound. He was dead
"Thanks man" Swan said
"Dont mention it" Ajax replied
"NOW WARRIORS GET OUTTA HERE!" Swan shouted as he ran from the Punks with them in hot pursuti. They ran up the stairs and saw a train due for Tremont. They ran on it. The train pulled away with all the Warriors safe.
"Thank God for this train. Haha" Vermin said, out of breath
"We gotta see the Riffs straight away. Theres gonna be an all city war guys. I hope you're ready. The Warriors knew it was right "We got our own truce formed" Thats what he said. They were going to have to fight for their lifes soon.
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There was silence in the room. The news of the new truce and Buds capture had shocked everyone. Masai stood in front of them thinking what to do.
"Alright listen up. If this stuff about another truce is true wo gotta get every gang we can to be on our side, thats simple enough. Jackson, I want you and four other Leiutenants to go and get every gang you can to join us, and try to stay out of trouble. As for Bud....Swan you guys and the Orphans are gonna have to go in there and get him back. And we have to get him out fast. Its only a matter of time before they waste him" He said
"Ok, Cowboy, Ajax, go back to Coney and round up everyone you can then come back here. Chubba do the same for the Orphans. And Masai can I talk to you for a minute?" Swan said leading Masai to the other side of the room.
"This is gonna be hard man, theres already the Turnbulls, The Furies and The Punks. There three of the biggest sets around. And they're bound to get more." Swan said
"Yeah I get ya. But you gotta remember. Weve already got the JSB's, The Vancourtland Rangers, The Electric Eliminators and were in talks with the Saracens. We got nearly 800 guys" Masai said
"Yeah I know but-" Swan was cut off.
"Swan let me handle the truce. You concentrate on gettin' Bud back" Masai said
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Bud woke up in a small room. He could see four Furies standing staring at him. Suddenly he felt an excrushiating pain in his thumbs. He looked down and saw his feet werent touching the floor. He then looked up and saw that he was suspended form a bar by his thumbs. A Furie walked up to him.
"So...what do the Riffs have planned pussy?" The Black faces furie said. Bud tried to say "Fuck off" but he couldnt. He was in too mu8ch pain and felt drowsy. He would pass out any minute.
"Answer me shithead!" The Furie growled. Everything went dark. Bud has lost conciousness.
To be continued...
"Alright listen up. If this stuff about another truce is true wo gotta get every gang we can to be on our side, thats simple enough. Jackson, I want you and four other Leiutenants to go and get every gang you can to join us, and try to stay out of trouble. As for Bud....Swan you guys and the Orphans are gonna have to go in there and get him back. And we have to get him out fast. Its only a matter of time before they waste him" He said
"Ok, Cowboy, Ajax, go back to Coney and round up everyone you can then come back here. Chubba do the same for the Orphans. And Masai can I talk to you for a minute?" Swan said leading Masai to the other side of the room.
"This is gonna be hard man, theres already the Turnbulls, The Furies and The Punks. There three of the biggest sets around. And they're bound to get more." Swan said
"Yeah I get ya. But you gotta remember. Weve already got the JSB's, The Vancourtland Rangers, The Electric Eliminators and were in talks with the Saracens. We got nearly 800 guys" Masai said
"Yeah I know but-" Swan was cut off.
"Swan let me handle the truce. You concentrate on gettin' Bud back" Masai said
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Bud woke up in a small room. He could see four Furies standing staring at him. Suddenly he felt an excrushiating pain in his thumbs. He looked down and saw his feet werent touching the floor. He then looked up and saw that he was suspended form a bar by his thumbs. A Furie walked up to him.
"So...what do the Riffs have planned pussy?" The Black faces furie said. Bud tried to say "Fuck off" but he couldnt. He was in too mu8ch pain and felt drowsy. He would pass out any minute.
"Answer me shithead!" The Furie growled. Everything went dark. Bud has lost conciousness.
To be continued...
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"Alright, plan of action" Swan said to the near 170 soldiers standing in front of him "Were gonna have to lure them out. The Furies are almost certainly gonna pretect some shops, and theres bound to be the usual operations, drugs and the rest of it. Now remember the AC's are gonna be there too so its gonna be a tough fight. We can definetely take them but it wont be easy. Chubba, you take 15 soldiers to the East of Riverside, Cowboy, you take Ajax and 15 others and take the west, Snowball I want you to take the park. Just scout around, look for some Furies and waste 'em. So me Vermin, Cochise and Rembrandt are gonna take the rest of the place. Lets get to the station now" Swan said
The soldiers joked around on the train until they came to Riverside. When they stepped off the train they were deadly serious. They had to get Bud back. The left the station and went their seperate ways, Chubba to the east, Cowboy to the west, Snow to the park, and Swan to the strip. They were going to have to attract alot of attention to get the Furies out.
Cowboy's Party- Cowboy, Ajax and the rest of the soldiers walked around the west of Riverside in search of the Furies. Their search was unsuccessful for 15 minutes. Then they spotted something that made them delgihted. There was 5 Turnbulls and 3 Furies standing, talking. Cowboy stopped the party.
"Look over there" He said to Ajax
"Lets go wreck 'em now then, what we waiting for?" Ajax asked
"Were gonna flank them. Look there standing in between two allys. If we can get round the other side, we can split up into 3 groups. One goes at 'em straight, distracting them, then the other 2 run round from the allys and thake them by surprise. So Ajax you stay here with 5 more guys. We'll go round the long way into the allys."
Cowboy led the men round into the opposite end of the allys. He took one group to the left and sent another group to the right. Ajax saw this and decided to move. He ordered the soldiers to follow him. He walked from round the corner
"HEY PUSSIES! YOU WANNA FUCK WITH THE WARRIORS? THEN COME GET SOME!" He shouted. The Turnbulls and Furies both turned round. They immediatly started walking towards the Warriors and Orphans. Cowboy took his chance. The 2 groups sped round the corner and ambushed them. At once the Furies and Turnbulls knew they were beaten. But they stood their ground. Cowboy led the pack as he punched a Furie in the nose bursting it open. Ajax and his party came running over too and jax started going to work on one of the Turnbulls. He punched him rapidly in the face, firing blood everywhere. The AC never stood a chance. Finally Ajax put the guy's head through a window and then, picking up a brick, smashed it on the AC's skull. He fell to the ground. The other Warriors and Orphans took care of the rest of them.
"Come on lets fuck up this store" Cowboy said pointing to the window that Ajax had smashed
Swan's Party- The strip was empty when the party walked down looking for good shops to destroy. Rembrandt had already done 5 pieces on the walls of Riverside, some over the Furies tags. They continued walking until Swan saw a suitable shop. It was a store called Harrys Electricals. Perfect for wrecking. Swan put the window through and signalled the Soldiers to climb in.
"Trash this place" Swan said. The Orphans and Warriors went to work on the shop, destroying toasters, TV Sets, Radios, whatever they could. Rembrandt sprayed a W on the wall followed with a 'FUCK THE FURIES' on the back wall. Sparks flew, litterally as the gangs ransacked the store. Swan heard footsteps and turned round with a Tv in hand. He saw 10 Furies standing outside the store. They had got what they want, but they were outnumbered. Swan smiled.....
To be continued.......
The soldiers joked around on the train until they came to Riverside. When they stepped off the train they were deadly serious. They had to get Bud back. The left the station and went their seperate ways, Chubba to the east, Cowboy to the west, Snow to the park, and Swan to the strip. They were going to have to attract alot of attention to get the Furies out.
Cowboy's Party- Cowboy, Ajax and the rest of the soldiers walked around the west of Riverside in search of the Furies. Their search was unsuccessful for 15 minutes. Then they spotted something that made them delgihted. There was 5 Turnbulls and 3 Furies standing, talking. Cowboy stopped the party.
"Look over there" He said to Ajax
"Lets go wreck 'em now then, what we waiting for?" Ajax asked
"Were gonna flank them. Look there standing in between two allys. If we can get round the other side, we can split up into 3 groups. One goes at 'em straight, distracting them, then the other 2 run round from the allys and thake them by surprise. So Ajax you stay here with 5 more guys. We'll go round the long way into the allys."
Cowboy led the men round into the opposite end of the allys. He took one group to the left and sent another group to the right. Ajax saw this and decided to move. He ordered the soldiers to follow him. He walked from round the corner
"HEY PUSSIES! YOU WANNA FUCK WITH THE WARRIORS? THEN COME GET SOME!" He shouted. The Turnbulls and Furies both turned round. They immediatly started walking towards the Warriors and Orphans. Cowboy took his chance. The 2 groups sped round the corner and ambushed them. At once the Furies and Turnbulls knew they were beaten. But they stood their ground. Cowboy led the pack as he punched a Furie in the nose bursting it open. Ajax and his party came running over too and jax started going to work on one of the Turnbulls. He punched him rapidly in the face, firing blood everywhere. The AC never stood a chance. Finally Ajax put the guy's head through a window and then, picking up a brick, smashed it on the AC's skull. He fell to the ground. The other Warriors and Orphans took care of the rest of them.
"Come on lets fuck up this store" Cowboy said pointing to the window that Ajax had smashed
Swan's Party- The strip was empty when the party walked down looking for good shops to destroy. Rembrandt had already done 5 pieces on the walls of Riverside, some over the Furies tags. They continued walking until Swan saw a suitable shop. It was a store called Harrys Electricals. Perfect for wrecking. Swan put the window through and signalled the Soldiers to climb in.
"Trash this place" Swan said. The Orphans and Warriors went to work on the shop, destroying toasters, TV Sets, Radios, whatever they could. Rembrandt sprayed a W on the wall followed with a 'FUCK THE FURIES' on the back wall. Sparks flew, litterally as the gangs ransacked the store. Swan heard footsteps and turned round with a Tv in hand. He saw 10 Furies standing outside the store. They had got what they want, but they were outnumbered. Swan smiled.....
To be continued.......
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Still Swans party- Swan stared the front Furie dead in the face. He had Green Facepaint with a red blotch around the eye. They stared at each other for a while and Swan realised the Fury was trying to scare him by not saying anything. Then from over the Furie's shoulder Swan saw Cowboy and the others walking round the corner. Cowboy had realised what was happening and crept over with his soldiers behind him. Swan smiled and nodded his head to show the Fury what had happened. The Fury turned round and saw Cowboy and the other members standing there. The Furies were now outnumbered. The Furies eyes widened in horror as Swan spoke
"Ha! Waste these pussies" He said running towards the Fury. Swan grabbed his head and smashed it through another store window. The Fury fell and Swan jumped on him, pounding his face. Cowboy had another Fury on the ground and was hitting him repeatedly in the ribs. He finally picked up a TV and dropped it on the Furie's head. He was dead instantly. The Furies were wiped out in a matter of seconds and Swan left with the others to go and regroup.
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"Ha! Waste these pussies" He said running towards the Fury. Swan grabbed his head and smashed it through another store window. The Fury fell and Swan jumped on him, pounding his face. Cowboy had another Fury on the ground and was hitting him repeatedly in the ribs. He finally picked up a TV and dropped it on the Furie's head. He was dead instantly. The Furies were wiped out in a matter of seconds and Swan left with the others to go and regroup.
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Chubbas party- Chubba walked the streets of East Riverside without a sign of any Furies or Turnbulls. He could see some of the soldiers were starting to worry.
"What the hells wrong with you guys?" He asked. Most of the group were Newbloods.
"Its just...these guys are real heavy you know?" A newblood Orphan replied
"Yeah....and so are we. Just remember that" Chubba replied. Just then they walked round the corner into an alley and saw a great green thing hovering over them. The Turnbulls Bus. Chubba smiled.
"You guys wait here" He said
"Where you goin?" A Warrior asked
"Just wait here" Chubba replied
5 Minutes later...
Chubba came running back round the corner with 7 bottles full of clear liquid.
"Whats that?" An Orphan asked
"Molotovs" Chubba replied with a grin
"Where the fuck did ya get those?" A Newblood Warriors asked
"Remember the gas station we passed just there? Well I got these bottles and filled them up there" He said. Chubba handed the home made bombs out "Fire away boys". The Warriors and Orphans started smashing the windows of the bus before throwing the molotovs. When they were done Chubba was first to throw his in. He threw it right through the windscreen and set the front of the bus alight. 5 more flew through the windows, turning the bus into one huge fireball. Chubba picked up the remaining bottle and ran round to the engine. He stood back and blasted it off the front of the bus. The gangs ran a little and turned round to see a huge explosion. The sound was deafening.
"Hahahahaha! There bound to come out now" Chubba said. Just then 10 Turnbulls came running round the corner. They were in shock.
"Hey assholes. Lets go" Chubba said. The two gangs then ran at each other and collided. Chubba went straight for the first Turnbull, grabbing him and headbutting his nose. The skinhead fell back and Chubba jumped as high as he could and came down right on the AC's head. The Turnbull screamed in pain and then fell silent. Chubba turned to see an AC brandishing a blade. He watched as it plunged into an Orphans neck. Chubba felt the anger flaming inside him. He pelted towards the Turnbull and hit him with a clothesline like move sending the AC flipping in the hair and dropping the knife. The battle was still going on all around him and the Newbloods were outstanding. The Orphans and Warriors had it covered. Chubba picked up the knife and dived on top of the AC. The bald man never said a word, he just stared Chubba dead in the face. Chubba then lifted the blade and put it in the Turnbull's head, killing him. But he never stopped there. Chubba, engulfed in rage, stabbed the man multiple times all over the body. He stopped after 13 times. Chubba stood up with blood on his clothes and walked away silently with the others. The Furies would be out by now.
"What the hells wrong with you guys?" He asked. Most of the group were Newbloods.
"Its just...these guys are real heavy you know?" A newblood Orphan replied
"Yeah....and so are we. Just remember that" Chubba replied. Just then they walked round the corner into an alley and saw a great green thing hovering over them. The Turnbulls Bus. Chubba smiled.
"You guys wait here" He said
"Where you goin?" A Warrior asked
"Just wait here" Chubba replied
5 Minutes later...
Chubba came running back round the corner with 7 bottles full of clear liquid.
"Whats that?" An Orphan asked
"Molotovs" Chubba replied with a grin
"Where the fuck did ya get those?" A Newblood Warriors asked
"Remember the gas station we passed just there? Well I got these bottles and filled them up there" He said. Chubba handed the home made bombs out "Fire away boys". The Warriors and Orphans started smashing the windows of the bus before throwing the molotovs. When they were done Chubba was first to throw his in. He threw it right through the windscreen and set the front of the bus alight. 5 more flew through the windows, turning the bus into one huge fireball. Chubba picked up the remaining bottle and ran round to the engine. He stood back and blasted it off the front of the bus. The gangs ran a little and turned round to see a huge explosion. The sound was deafening.
"Hahahahaha! There bound to come out now" Chubba said. Just then 10 Turnbulls came running round the corner. They were in shock.
"Hey assholes. Lets go" Chubba said. The two gangs then ran at each other and collided. Chubba went straight for the first Turnbull, grabbing him and headbutting his nose. The skinhead fell back and Chubba jumped as high as he could and came down right on the AC's head. The Turnbull screamed in pain and then fell silent. Chubba turned to see an AC brandishing a blade. He watched as it plunged into an Orphans neck. Chubba felt the anger flaming inside him. He pelted towards the Turnbull and hit him with a clothesline like move sending the AC flipping in the hair and dropping the knife. The battle was still going on all around him and the Newbloods were outstanding. The Orphans and Warriors had it covered. Chubba picked up the knife and dived on top of the AC. The bald man never said a word, he just stared Chubba dead in the face. Chubba then lifted the blade and put it in the Turnbull's head, killing him. But he never stopped there. Chubba, engulfed in rage, stabbed the man multiple times all over the body. He stopped after 13 times. Chubba stood up with blood on his clothes and walked away silently with the others. The Furies would be out by now.
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Snows party-The park was deadly silent as Snow led the group thhrough it. They were walking past a large statue when Snow heard something from round the corner. He stopped the group and told them to run round then he said go.
"1......2.........3............GO!" He shouted as they ran round. Snow sprinted round the corner and stopped dead in his tracks.
"Yo.....cool it, cool it" Cowboy said "You gave me the fright of my [bad word deleted]in' life"
"Holy crap, I thought you guys were the Furies"Snow said. Just then they saw Chubba walking up to them with there party.
"What the hell are you guys doin' here?" Snow asked.
"Everyone had to pass through here to get to the meeting place"Chubba said
"Okay, lets get-" Snow got cut off
"There the frieks over there" Ajax said. There was 50 Furies standing at the entrance and they were followed by 20 Turnbulls.
"Jesus Christ" Chubba said
"Come on we can take these clowns. Now lets do this" Ajax said to the parties "Hey faggots! Lets go" He shouted to the opposing gangs
"EVeryone ready?" Cowboy asked
"Yeah lets go" Snow said and with that the two gangs charged at each other. They collided and a mass battle started in the middle of Riverside park. Cowboy ducked under a swing form a Fury and uppercutted him in the stomach, then kneed him in the chin. He picked up a bat and rattled a Turnbull, who was fighting Chubba over the back off the head.He continued hitting the Furies and Turnbulls. He had knocked down 5 when he felt a sharp pain in his side. He looked down and saw blood trickle down his side. He then looked behind him and saw a Turnbull standing with a knife, fighting with Ajax. Cowboy somehow never felt pain but rage. He picked the bat up once again and brought it down into the Turnbulls knee. The skinhead fell to the ground and Cowboy swung the bat down onto hi head. Ajax then stuck the blade in his throat. He was dead. Ajax was then knocked down as Cowboy turned and ran toward another Fury. Snow was fighting two Turnbulls at once and wasnt winning. They kept punching him in the head and face until he went down. He recieved a hard kick to the mouth and the AC's moved on. Chubba was fighting with two other orphans against 5 Turnbulls. They put upa valiant effort but were finally floored by their opponents. The Orphans and Warriors were being over run and would be defeated soon. Suddenly there was the sound of footsteps as Swans party came bursting into the fight. Swan jumped into 4 Furies, knocking them all down at the same time. Cochise and Rembrandt were also getting right in amongst the fight, battering AC's and Furies all over the place. Cowboy and Ajax were back up and fighting again. The tables turned almost instantly as Fury afetr Fury and AC afetr AC fell to the ground. In a matter of minutes there was a mass of bodys lying in the park some dead, some alive, some from one side and some from the other. Ajax noticed Vermin was missing.
"Wheres Vermin?" He asked
"Look up there" Swan said as the rest of the soldiers looked over to their right. Vermin and 4 Orphans came walking down with Bud on Vermins shoulders.
"BUD!"Chubba shouted and the gangs cheered. It was over.
"Lets go give Masai the news" Swan said
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"Thank you everyone. The truce has been made possible because of you. You dont have to worry about the Turnbulls, Punks or Furies again. They'l be deatl with. They'll either join or die. I know we wanted to try and do this truce by reason but sometimes theres no other way. Thank you Warriors and Orphans. Tou'll always be friends of the Riffs" Masai said. The Orphans and Warriors left soon after, going their seperate ways.
Bud and the Orphans sat on the train exhausted.
"Yo Warlord" Chubba said "We definetly gotts have a party when we get back". The Orphans all laughed and joked the rest of the way home. They had accomplished what they had set out to do. They had got to the top.
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"1......2.........3............GO!" He shouted as they ran round. Snow sprinted round the corner and stopped dead in his tracks.
"Yo.....cool it, cool it" Cowboy said "You gave me the fright of my [bad word deleted]in' life"
"Holy crap, I thought you guys were the Furies"Snow said. Just then they saw Chubba walking up to them with there party.
"What the hell are you guys doin' here?" Snow asked.
"Everyone had to pass through here to get to the meeting place"Chubba said
"Okay, lets get-" Snow got cut off
"There the frieks over there" Ajax said. There was 50 Furies standing at the entrance and they were followed by 20 Turnbulls.
"Jesus Christ" Chubba said
"Come on we can take these clowns. Now lets do this" Ajax said to the parties "Hey faggots! Lets go" He shouted to the opposing gangs
"EVeryone ready?" Cowboy asked
"Yeah lets go" Snow said and with that the two gangs charged at each other. They collided and a mass battle started in the middle of Riverside park. Cowboy ducked under a swing form a Fury and uppercutted him in the stomach, then kneed him in the chin. He picked up a bat and rattled a Turnbull, who was fighting Chubba over the back off the head.He continued hitting the Furies and Turnbulls. He had knocked down 5 when he felt a sharp pain in his side. He looked down and saw blood trickle down his side. He then looked behind him and saw a Turnbull standing with a knife, fighting with Ajax. Cowboy somehow never felt pain but rage. He picked the bat up once again and brought it down into the Turnbulls knee. The skinhead fell to the ground and Cowboy swung the bat down onto hi head. Ajax then stuck the blade in his throat. He was dead. Ajax was then knocked down as Cowboy turned and ran toward another Fury. Snow was fighting two Turnbulls at once and wasnt winning. They kept punching him in the head and face until he went down. He recieved a hard kick to the mouth and the AC's moved on. Chubba was fighting with two other orphans against 5 Turnbulls. They put upa valiant effort but were finally floored by their opponents. The Orphans and Warriors were being over run and would be defeated soon. Suddenly there was the sound of footsteps as Swans party came bursting into the fight. Swan jumped into 4 Furies, knocking them all down at the same time. Cochise and Rembrandt were also getting right in amongst the fight, battering AC's and Furies all over the place. Cowboy and Ajax were back up and fighting again. The tables turned almost instantly as Fury afetr Fury and AC afetr AC fell to the ground. In a matter of minutes there was a mass of bodys lying in the park some dead, some alive, some from one side and some from the other. Ajax noticed Vermin was missing.
"Wheres Vermin?" He asked
"Look up there" Swan said as the rest of the soldiers looked over to their right. Vermin and 4 Orphans came walking down with Bud on Vermins shoulders.
"BUD!"Chubba shouted and the gangs cheered. It was over.
"Lets go give Masai the news" Swan said
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"Thank you everyone. The truce has been made possible because of you. You dont have to worry about the Turnbulls, Punks or Furies again. They'l be deatl with. They'll either join or die. I know we wanted to try and do this truce by reason but sometimes theres no other way. Thank you Warriors and Orphans. Tou'll always be friends of the Riffs" Masai said. The Orphans and Warriors left soon after, going their seperate ways.
Bud and the Orphans sat on the train exhausted.
"Yo Warlord" Chubba said "We definetly gotts have a party when we get back". The Orphans all laughed and joked the rest of the way home. They had accomplished what they had set out to do. They had got to the top.
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Wow man thanks for an excellent story
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Cowboy.. that was good.. real good.. the best. Thanks for writing all that, it was great.
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Sorry to bring this post up again, but I'm confused about one thing in this story: didn't Bud already kill the Punks leader? If so, how the hell does Swan end up fighting him? Did I miss something?
Anyways, great story!
Anyways, great story!
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Re: The Orphans-time to get the respect they deserve-- Final
He wasnt killed, only slashed down the eye......well sayin ONLY probably is the right word lol but he wasnt killedCowboy Is Cool wrote: Sorry to bring this post up again, but I'm confused about one thing in this story: didn't Bud already kill the Punks leader? If so, how the hell does Swan end up fighting him? Did I miss something?
Anyways, great story!

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Alright, thanks for clearing that up!
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