"The Punks - Bopping To The Top" some fan fiction

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Well I thought it was about time I did my own Warriors fan fiction piece and I thought I'd do it about my current favorite gang: The punks. I'd really appreciate some feedback. I also hope War Chief, Fox and Gonzo will excuse a a few swear words, but it's set in The Warriors universe so it's hard to not have a little.

The Punks - Bopping To The Top
You love your family because you?re born into your it and go through everything with them. You learn from them, you go places with them, you live with them. You go through hard and good times with them. Well that?s just what it?s like when you?re a member of The Punks. You?re born into this gang kicking and screaming from your initiation, you earn your name and most of all you go through everything with them.

Us Punks don?t back down. We stand even if we?re outnumbered 10 to 1. My name is Vance and as of now I?m the Leader of The Punks. By my side I have my brothers, however there are three of them who are more than brothers, I?d swear we?re closer to being actual siblings than any other biological brothers.

Hog ? My lieutenant, loyal and outgoing. He?s my right hand man and he always will be. He?s always supporting me, we made it into this gang together and now we run it together.

Maurice ? Smart and fast. He?s not afraid to lip off to anyone or talk himself into a fight because for one thing, he knows we?ve got his back and for the other, he just loves trash talking.

Ed ? Last but not least, Ed. Heavy muscle, if not the heaviest. The silent giant is a nick name that some of the boys use. He has saved my ass plenty of times and doesn?t need anyone to save his. He can handle himself in any situation.

Our leader used to be Adrian, beloved by all of us and we honour his memory. He started the gang and led it until he was stabbed when ambushed by some other gang. To this day we still don?t know who it was but we know that Adrian didn?t go down without a fight. The gang voted me leader and I accepted. Though we all respect Adrian I was the one who took The Punks all city. We stole our current turn from The Red Blades, a now extinct gang. Gangs pass through the subway all the time so we?re constantly running into trouble, but nothing we can?t handle. Now here we are a few months later, it?s Friday night at union station and I?m looking for a good time?

?Vance I?m going on patrol with Ed and Maurice, you in?? Asked Hog.
?You know I don?t like some scout doing the work for me, if you want something done you have to do it yourself, right?? I said as I left Adam, Nero and Spike at the arcade.

We had wandered slightly off our territory and it was had only been 10 minutes before we ran into trouble.
?Over there? Said Ed as he pointed towards a Boyle Avenue Runner eyeing us from a distance.
?I see him. And he?s not alone.? I said.
?What the hell are you talking about man? Do you see anyone around? This part of the station is dead. Let me go over there and bust his head!? Said Maurice excitedly.
?Tell you what, you three go over to him, I?m gonna take a look around.?
Hog, Ed and Maurice strutted over towards him as he began running and they followed.
?Where you going man? The fun?s just starting!? Said Maurice as they cornered him after a brief chase.
?You?re right about that, the fun is definitely just starting.? Said another Boyle Avenue Runner, who stepped out of nowhere with 6 more.
?Oh crap?? Said Maurice in regret.
?Back off.? Said Ed firmly.
?And why the fuck should I do that? What you gonna do? I?ll waste your fucking head man! You Punks are gonna pay for wrecking my scouts last night? Yelled the ?Runner.
?Those three rejects? Please man Ed took them out himself! Beat their chicken shit asses up for trespassing on Punk property!? Said Maurice mockingly.
?I hope you like hospital beds, ?cause you?re all gonna be lying in them for a very long time.? Said the lead Boyle Avenue Runner.
?You?re going to regret coming back here.? Hog said confidently.
?And why is that??
?Look behind you you?re about to get fucked up!? Said Maurice as he tackled the ?Runner he?d been chasing. Before the lead runner knew what hit him I went ahead and hit him with a baseball bat in the back of the head. He went down like a crashing plane.

Two of them lunged at me. One laid some light punches on me but I didn?t care since I was beating the crap out of his friend. I whacked him in his jaw, he kneeled forward and I kneed him in the face. I then threw the bat at a ?Runner who was giving Hog a bad time and elbowed the other ?Runner.

He punched but I dodged and punched him right in the balls. He went down and I stapled his face with my shoe.

Ed threw a ?Runner into a trash can and kicked another in the stomach. Just as the lead ?Runner was getting up on his knees Ed grabbed his head and kneed him right in the face.

Before I knew it every last of the 7 Boyle Avenue Runners was on the floor either knocked out or crawling around like worms.

?Ok let?s get out of here? Shouted Hog.
Cops patrolled the station and the last thing we needed was to get busted after busting a few heads.

Back at our hangout we awaited another patrol to come in, they were an hour late, which wasn?t normal for James, who I?d out in charge. Just then Snake and AJ burst in.
?They got them! They got them!? Cried Snake. They were bruised and bleeding. AJ had a serious looking cut over his left eyebrow that bled down over his face and Snake was just generally looked like a train wreck.
?What the hell happened?!? Demanded Ed.
?Jones Street Boys?they jumped us...James, Snake, Reaper and I were on patrol?we were on our way to get a few beers when all of a sudden we were jumped?there were so many of them!? Whimpered AJ
?And they were packed, they had crowbars and wrenches. Me and James had pipes but we were no match for them?and Reaper?oh god?? Snake said as he stopped to breathe.
?What about Reaper? And where?s James?? I said firmly and trying to stay calm.
?Reaper was backed into a corner, they took out blades and then I had to fight off this one bastard?when I looked back at Reaper he was twitching and bleeding on the ground?there was so much blood.? AJ said gasping for breath.

?The same would have happened to me if James hadn?t tackled the JSB who was coming at me with a switchblade. James told us to get out of there, we were all ready beaten and could barely run. I looked back and I saw the lead Jones Street Boy stabbing James in the gut?? Snake said looking shameful.

?How many were there?? I asked.
?At least 10?maybe 15 max.? AJ responded.
?15 of them and still they come packed on four dudes?!? Maurice shouted.
?Get ready boys, we?re gonna turn Bensonhurst into a war zone?? I said as I tool out a switchblade of my own, it had been given to me by Adrian. I?d put it to good use tomorrow night.

End of part one. So...feedback? :D
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Freakin' amazing!
Can't wait for the rest!

Well done!
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Nice, nice, nice. Real good man hurry up and finish the next part :D
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wow man, thats some good quality fan fiction, keep up the killer work

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im gonna do some fiction myself soon, but youres is ace! keep it up!

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PART 2 (final part as well)

The following night we got ready. Me, Ed, Hog, Maurice, Snake (AJ was too injured to come for revenge) as well as Steve and Nero, two of my best guys got ready for bopping. We came armed this time too, what the Jones Street Boys had done was beyond cowardly and they?d pay for wasting two Punks.

The whole ride there we were all silent. We said the bare minimal to each other. We were getting ready, we knew it?d be hard. Especially considering that tonight The Punks were busy, some were at a graffiti challenge hosted by the Moonrunners, but we also had tight patrols considering that Black Hands and Hurricanes had been pushing into our territory and we were expecting more Boyle Avenue Runners, since they?re persistent bastards.

But right now for me there were no Boyle Avenue Runners, Hurricanes or Black Hands, only Jones Street Boys, they were all that mattered as of now?and they were going to pay.

We got to Bensonhurst and it was surprisingly quiet. We got closer and closer to JSB turf and we prepared ourselves.
?Wait here, they?ve probably got scouts around here somewhere, I?m gonna go see if I can take them out.? I said as I hurried off into the shadows.

I was just sneaking up behind a dumpster when I spotted a JSB scout. He looked lively and alert. I snuck up quietly, I knew I couldn?t screw this up. He stretched his arms and lost concentration for only a moment, but it was enough for me to sneak up from behind and bash him in the back if the head. He went down, and to make sure he stayed down I delivered a few kicks to his head. I signalled for the rest of The Punks to come over.
We made our way silently towards a certain park where our scouts had informed us that a lot of Jones Street Boys hung out.

We then saw them. I counted 13 against us 7. None of us cared. Not now, we were too angry to care.

?Well look who came back. The Punks! What?s the matter you guys didn?t get enough last time? I thought wasting two of your boys was enough but it looks like we gotta waste seven more!? Said the lead JSB as he stood up firmly and the rest gathered behind him.
?You jumped us last time when we were unprepared, that?s not gonna happen this time! You?re not gonna get away with what you did to James and Reaper!? Yelled Snake.
?Yeah, you guys are gonna pay, nobody messes with The Punks! Nobody!? Maurice added.
?So when I waste you sorry bastards, that?ll be seven now, two yesterday and that one Punk way back. The guys who stood his ground against us when he was all by himself??
?Adrian?? Said Ed in disbelief.
?When I?m finished with you, you?ll be either dead or begging for me to finish your sorry ass off.? I said as I pointed at him.

A split second passed but it felt like much longer. I noticed how quiet and peacefull the park was. A complete contrast to the chaos that would ensue. I let the rage build up inside me. Then we charged.

Both gangs ran intro each other, smashing together like a car crash. I tackled a JSB to the ground and mercilessly began pummelling his face I screamed out of anger as I beat him senseless, leaving him bruised and bloodied. I then got up only to be punched repeatedly by another JSB. I blocked his punch and grabbed his arm, I then twisted it and eventually broke it. He screamed in pain but I only delivered a knee to his face and threw him to the ground.

I then glanced over and saw Ed picking up a JSB and throwing him onto a park bench, breaking the bench and wrecking the JSB in the process. Out of my negligence a JSB punched me in the stomach and tackled me to the ground. He beat away at me but I took the hits, I kept seeing Adrian before me, I didn?t feel the pain. These were the cowardly killers, these were the ones who killed Adrian. I then pushed him off of me and elbowed him in the jaw. He stood up to face me. He punched and kicked away. I grabbed his leg in the middle of one of his kicks, leaving his crotch wide open for my knee. He screamed and fell to his knees, in which I kicked his jaw so hard I think he lost a tooth or two.

I then turned to see Snake fighting the lead Jones Street Boy. Snake fought hard but was thrown to the ground. The lead Jones Street Boy then took out his knife I ran towards him but a JSB tackled me to the ground, I got up and got the JSB in a headlock and pounded away at his head, then threw him to the ground and kicked him in the face. When I turned to Snake again he was lying lifelessly on the ground.
?YOU!? I bellowed at the lead Jones Street Boy.
?Your turn to die?? He said as a disgusting grin came across his face.
?After you.? I said as I delivered a quick punch to his eye, causing him to drop the knife.

He kicked me in the stomach and punched me hard above my eyebrow. I fell but got back up. I got him in a headlock and delivered both knees and fists. But he twisted my arm and the tables turned once more. He was so fast, he punched away before I had the slightest chance to block. I had a black eye and a busted lip, my nose was bleeding as well. I was in so much pain. He then tackled me to the ground and started choking me. I was too tired and beat up to fight back. Things started getting dark. But just in time I took out my knife and stabbed him in the gut.

He fell off me and screamed in agony. I stood before him and looked down on him.
?Please! Please don?t?? His plea was cut short my me stomping him in the face. He let out some faint sounds but I kept stomping him in the face until he wasn?t moving anymore.

I looked around and saw hog elbow the last JSB in the face. Nero had gone down but Maurice helped him up. Ed was looked mad yet satisfied.
?We?re done for now.?
?Snake?? Hog began.
?I know. But there?s nothing we can do now. We have to move on and grow stronger from this.?
?Every time we fight we learn new moves. Every time we get hit we get angrier. Every time we lose a brother it strengthens the bond with the rest of The Punks. ?
?Vance is right.? Said Ed.

We got back and took it easy for a few nights. We had a lot of people to mourn. The pain of losing Adrian came back. After a week we were back to normal, and we?d grown stronger from it.

Trey, one of our scouts came in.
?Guys there?s a new bar opening up in Chinatown, I hear it?s supposed to be a kick ass place.?
?Chinatown? That?s Savage Huns territory though.? Said Maurice.
?So? Anybody up for a good time?? I said as I stood up and got ready to go, continuing The Punks? legacy. We?ll never quit and never fall back. You can kill us, but you can?t kill our name, no matter how hard you try, we?ll always be here.

THE END
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Nicely done.
I love it.
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Well thanks, I guess feedback doesn't get much better than that :D

BTW The knife that is given to Vance by Adrian is supposed to be the knife that Swan takes from him in the movie. Just thought I'd mention that. :p
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Very enjoyable and well written prozium. Would be interesting to find out how Vance gets his switchblade back from Swan :shock:
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:o so intense. i was feelin' every word of it. ;) good job.
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It's a great story it makes me hate the Jones Street Boys even more!

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dude that was frekin asome!!!!!! i have never heard a better gang story than dat bravo!!!!!! punks story is really cool
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i wasnt a big fan of the punks until i read this killer story. keep it up.8)

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