the knuckles part 5 added (please leave feedback. good or ba

[turnbull_badger]

"s**t" cried tony. "them damn firetasters have thrown another brick through my shop window!"
"oh god not again" said tony's friend jack. "lets go f**k dem up"
"yer, pass me dat bat, theres a pipe outside you have that. now lets go round up stu and alex."
a few minutes later down at the park. stu and alex are mugging a man.
"hey stu, alex! get yo asses over ere now!"
"what's happenin" said stu.
"we're gonna go pay the firetasters a visit"
"what all of em!"
"no, just the ones that trashed my store, lets go!"

5 minutes later they get to one of the firetasters hangouts. "hey look!" cries a firetaster
"we just trashed your store and now you want us to trash you and your little pals here!"
"no, were gonna trash you, you son of a bitch"
stu, alex, jack and tony start beating up the 3 firestarters.
a couple of minutes later the firestarters are out cold on the floor.
"you know tony we should make our own gang" said jack
"yer you're right, but we need a name,ow god my knuckles bloody hurt, hey thats it we should call ourselves the knuckles!"
"YER!"
"now jack and stu you start recruiting, only get people who can pull their own weight, no pussy's. alex you start gettin us some cash. tomorrow we'll go get some threads. got it"
"yer"
"now go, by tomorrow evenin the firetasters will be long gone!"
to be continued...

[Jigsaw]

Obviously a low rank (ex. Newblood, Destroyer, Lizzie) did this one.. does it have enough * signs to show swear words, even though it says specifcally not to do that. Aside from that, if you take out the swaering it could be pretty cool. Good luck on your next part.

[turnbull_badger]

"stu, alex!" tony called. "i want you to go down to the prison to recruit an old friend of mine who has just been released"
"ok" they replied

they caught a train and were there in 30 minutes
when they got to the prison they saw a tall muscular man by the door. "are you Bull?" asked stu
"yer"
"well lets go then, how was prison?"
"alright, i was sharing a cell with a guy called errr Ajax or summit, he tried to rape an undercover cop"
"what were you in for?"
"cop assault, arson, theft, breaking and entering and vandalism"
"wow"

they all got on a train and started talking happily, but if they knew what was going to happen later tonight they would never of even thought about going back home.
to be continued...

[turnbull_badger]

tony and jack had found a writer.
stu and alex had gone out to pick up bull, so tony had started searching for a writer. it didn't take long to find one, and he was brilliant. his name was snuff.
"hey kid if you want to be our writer you'll have to learn our mark. can you do this?"
tony handed snuff a piece of paper with a fist drawn on it. it was facing upwards and it had brass knuckles, flames were in the background and underneath it in big green lettering the words "the knuckles" were written.
"yer i can do this, just give me a day or two to practice"
"sure, go back to the hangout and get started"
"got it"
snuff walked off to the hangout.
"he's a good writer" said jack
tony was about to reply when he was hit with a brick from behind. jack saw who had done it and instantly froze. at the end of the alley stood at least 20 firetasters.
they bagan to advance, tony got up rubbing his head. they were about to run when 3 people came running round the corner, stu alex and bull! this made it a bit more fair, especially with bull. the firetasters at first looked scared to see bull but then they pulled out knives and bottles. they began to walk towards them to fight, they weren't going to chicken out no matter what the odds, this was going to be a fight to remember...

[turnbull_badger]

stu was the quickest. he lashed out with his fists and knocked 3 firetasters to the ground, he was about to kick one in the face when a firetaster hit him with a crobar in the face. stu fell to his knees, the taster was getting ready to finish him off when bull hit him in the face. the taster went flying back into a wall and then fell to the floor unconscious or dead.
bull dragged stu's unconscious body out harms way and then got back into the fight but after 5 minutes of fighting it was obvious that they were going to lose. these tasters were skilled.
Jack lay on the floor, blood gushing out of the slash in his neck, and tony had a huge gash on his head but was still fighting. Alex was cornered by 6 tasters, he was using 2 knives to fend them off and was doing pretty well at it. bullwas the least injured he had on scratch on his left arm and on his left leg but he was tired, he couldn't fight much longer.
they were about ot give up, see if the tasters would hav mercy, when suddenly they heard shouting. at first they thought it was more tasters wanting some action but then 15 knuckles including snuff came charging round the corner. they made quick work of the tasters. they thrashed them all except one. one taster had hidden but once the fight was over he leapt out and grabbed stu's unconscious body and ripped his throat out with a knife. he then ran towards tony, knife raised but just before he got there alex leapt on him, wrestled the knife from his hands and plunged it into his heart.
they were about to collect the bodies of their fallen comrades when they heard sirens getting nearer.
"we gotta go" said tony
"what about stu and jack's bodies" replied alex
"theres no time, the police will sort it out!"
and with that they ran back to their hideout leaving their fallen friends and the many dead and unconscious firetasters.

[turnbull_badger]

it was 9pm and snuff was laying down another burner, his fifth tonight. it was dangerous, he was in firetaster turf. ever since the fight and the loss of stu and jack, the knuckles had started fighting harder than ever, they wanted the tasters wiped out.
snuff finished the burner, he turned around and came came face to face with a cop.
"crap" snuff muttered
the cop jumped on top of snuff and started wrestling with him. snuff hit him in the face but it didn't effect the cop and a minute later snuff was in cuffs. "how do you like that, street trash" said the cop and then he kicked snuff in the stomach.
" i'll kill you" snuff replied
"of course" the cop said then spoke into his radio "this is unit 1 to hq, i got some trash that needs takin' care of, send a car to pick him up"
"understood, a car is on the way, ETA 15 minutes"

10 minutes later the cop heard a car coming down the road but it wasn't a police car, it was a blue sedan. it stopped next to him and 3 knuckle members got out.
"holy s**t" the cop cried
one of the knuckles ran towards him, the cop lifted his truncheon but was too slow,the knuckles hit him in the face and then booted him in the balls, the cop fell to the ground, rolled around and then lay still and unconscious. they quickly uncuffed snuff.
"how'd you guys find out i was busted?"
"we have 2 radios, one for music the other for listening in on the police, we tuned it into their radios.
"clever"
"yeah well we better get goin, that car he called will be here soon"
they were about to walk off when a police car came around the corner, the driver took one look at them and the cop on the floor and then quickly called in backup
"i bet you backup is on the way" said snuff
"no s**t" a knuckle replied "run"
they took off but it was a long way home, with cops and tasters in between. this wasn't goin to be easy
to be continued...

[Bopper69]

nice idea but it could be wriien a bit better and also it seems to be kinda rushed.
my advice, slow down the story, space it out and take your time.
it should turn out great.
also it would be cool if you or someone else tried drawing the knuckles logo.