Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
[glow=red,2,300][/glow]Wasn't that like the most dramatic ending yet?[glow=red,2,300][/glow]
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Im in the middle of finishing the next story! 

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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
good because i wanna see more of this awesome story!joe123abc wrote: Im in the middle of finishing the next story!![]()
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
believe me!There will be more!Alot more
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
so far its great cant wait [-o<
Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
yes quite intense and suprising keep it up
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
niiiicceeee i like it keep it coming
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
I will keep it comin! 

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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
!The next story should be up soon!



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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Indeed it is:
The Breakout
(The next 2 days Swan just cried,didnt sleep)
Ajax-Alright guys,tonights the night,I put I pill in Swans drink that'll
make him sleep for as long as it will take us to get his broad back.
Vermin-Swan,you feeling ok man?
Swan just nods.
Vermin-Dont worry man,we'll get her back.
Five minutes later Swan fall asleep.
Ajax-I'll put him to bed.
(Ajax puts Swan on the couch that turns into a bed and put blankets on
and all that stuff)
Ajax-Sleep tight...Warlord.
Cowboy-Lets go.
Vermin-Lets do it.
The guys go to the same joiliet jail that Ajax got locked up in for a night.
Ajax-Hey Guys,theres only one guard there tonight.
Vermin-How would you know Ajax?
Ajax-Because,when I got locked up that one night I read their schedule!
Vermin-oh.
The all walk in the jail.
Security Guard-(recognizes Ajax) Hey you punk!
Ajax punches the guard to the ground,making him pass out.
Cropsey-Theres the key.
Mercy-What are you guys doing here?
Cowboy-(opening the cell door)What'd ya think?We're busting you out!
Vermin-For Swan.
Mercy-He loves me doesn't he?
Cowboy-Are you kidding!
Ajax-C'mon lets go.
They all go to the subway.
Swan-(wakes up)Guys?Guys?GUYS!
An hour later they come back to the hangout
Mercy-(Grabbing Swans rear end)Hey.
Swan-(Just smiles at the guys)
(Both of them kiss)
Vermin-Guys!Not Swan!BOYS NIGHT OUT!!!!!!!
The guys-YEAH!!!!!!!!!
(Mercy and Swan go into The BEDROOM)
Vermin-Lets GO!
Ajax-Dude are we going to them chicks house?
Vermin-In five more days!
Cropsey-Hell Yeah!
Cowboy-Holy mother of Jesus!
Ajax-RUN!
Cops are following the guys.
Cowboy-Lets split up!
Ajax-Suit yourself!
Cop-Your goin down punks!
Ajax gets put on the ground,but not hauled away.
Ajax-God damnit!
Ajax tries to get out of the cuffs but doesnt.
Ajax-C'mon!C'mon!Please god please!
Ajax tries a few more times,but on the last try,he
breaks out of them with him hands!
Ajax-Thank God!(jumps behind a newspaper stand)
Vermin-Man this is ruining my night!
Cropsey-Dude this sucks!(pops bubblegum a few times)
Cowboy was still running the fuzz he ran to the subway station,but when
jumped in the tracks,and after the train passed,he was gone,lost in the
roar of the passing train.
Cop-We lost him.
Another cop-Damnit!
Wheres Cowboy?Is he dead? Are the boys gonna get back home?
Find out in the next story!
The Breakout
(The next 2 days Swan just cried,didnt sleep)
Ajax-Alright guys,tonights the night,I put I pill in Swans drink that'll
make him sleep for as long as it will take us to get his broad back.
Vermin-Swan,you feeling ok man?
Swan just nods.
Vermin-Dont worry man,we'll get her back.
Five minutes later Swan fall asleep.
Ajax-I'll put him to bed.
(Ajax puts Swan on the couch that turns into a bed and put blankets on
and all that stuff)
Ajax-Sleep tight...Warlord.
Cowboy-Lets go.
Vermin-Lets do it.
The guys go to the same joiliet jail that Ajax got locked up in for a night.
Ajax-Hey Guys,theres only one guard there tonight.
Vermin-How would you know Ajax?
Ajax-Because,when I got locked up that one night I read their schedule!
Vermin-oh.
The all walk in the jail.
Security Guard-(recognizes Ajax) Hey you punk!
Ajax punches the guard to the ground,making him pass out.
Cropsey-Theres the key.
Mercy-What are you guys doing here?
Cowboy-(opening the cell door)What'd ya think?We're busting you out!
Vermin-For Swan.
Mercy-He loves me doesn't he?
Cowboy-Are you kidding!
Ajax-C'mon lets go.
They all go to the subway.
Swan-(wakes up)Guys?Guys?GUYS!
An hour later they come back to the hangout
Mercy-(Grabbing Swans rear end)Hey.
Swan-(Just smiles at the guys)
(Both of them kiss)
Vermin-Guys!Not Swan!BOYS NIGHT OUT!!!!!!!
The guys-YEAH!!!!!!!!!
(Mercy and Swan go into The BEDROOM)
Vermin-Lets GO!
Ajax-Dude are we going to them chicks house?
Vermin-In five more days!
Cropsey-Hell Yeah!
Cowboy-Holy mother of Jesus!
Ajax-RUN!
Cops are following the guys.
Cowboy-Lets split up!
Ajax-Suit yourself!
Cop-Your goin down punks!
Ajax gets put on the ground,but not hauled away.
Ajax-God damnit!
Ajax tries to get out of the cuffs but doesnt.
Ajax-C'mon!C'mon!Please god please!
Ajax tries a few more times,but on the last try,he
breaks out of them with him hands!
Ajax-Thank God!(jumps behind a newspaper stand)
Vermin-Man this is ruining my night!
Cropsey-Dude this sucks!(pops bubblegum a few times)
Cowboy was still running the fuzz he ran to the subway station,but when
jumped in the tracks,and after the train passed,he was gone,lost in the
roar of the passing train.
Cop-We lost him.
Another cop-Damnit!
Wheres Cowboy?Is he dead? Are the boys gonna get back home?
Find out in the next story!
The one and only!
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Oh man this story rocks, it is the best fan fic I have ever read and hope that there is a lot more parts to come. They beter get back and Cowboy best be stil alive. Keep up the brilliant work joe
Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Thank you THank you!There will be alot more to come!
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
i hope so man i hope Cowboy is still alive!joe123abc wrote: Thank you THank you!There will be alot more to come!![]()
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
wow this is so cool :p
Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
[glow=red,2,300][/glow]Fourth ones ALMOST DONE people![glow=red,2,300][/glow]
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