INTRO
The electric eliminators are a gang who are devoted to music, rock being that type. the gang was started by a guy named tracer and his best friend header, they got the idea for the name when headers sister told him i should be electric as in "electric" guitar. they formed in 1977 and lost control of hunters point, brooklyn in 1981.
but this is the story of how tracer managed to get to the meeting, he had a plan, a plan which was to take a couple of guys into moonrunner territory and show them that the electric eliminators were hardcore members ready to fight. this is their story.........
*story beginning soon!!!*
It's going to be Electric
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It's going to be Electric
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Re: It's going to be Electric
The Electric Eliminators were one of the best gangs ever! Sure they didn't appear much in the movie but I loved their suits and they were cool in the game. Can't wait for this one!
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Re: It's going to be Electric
tracer and header, frontmen of the electric eliminators are waiting outside the hangout, tracer is smoking a cigarette.
"those things will kill ya trace"
"i know but once ya start ya can't stop"
"we got some guy who wants to join up by the way"
"oh yeah? is he up for it?"
"kids got some mouth"
"okay, so he's got mouth but what about muscle?"
"i dunno, he should be back later, i told him you'd think about it"
"did ya catch his name?"
"andre"
"someone call?"
a long blonde haired kid in a green t-shirt emerges from the shadows, he has a mean look.
"what the f**k are you doin hangin around here?"
"i wanna sign up you dumb s**t"
"you got the biggest mouth i ever seen kid"
"yep, you got the biggest nose i ever seen"
header has a big grin on his face as header and andre fight
"back down header i like this kid"
"but..."
"look kid if you wanna jacket, then you gotta earn it"
"yeah, well i'm a hardcore soldier so bring it on"
"you got a lot of balls, header, get the boys"
header smiles and walks away. 20 minutes later andre finds himself up against 10 mean looking eliminators, his mean face turns into an even meaner one. the eliminators start laughing.
tracer and header watch from a platform above the fence everybody is caged in.
"sorry to say this kid, but your mouth isn't going to help you now"
one of the eliminators say "good luck kid, you'll need it"
andre gets ready as the eliminators close in.
andre clenches his fists, the first eliminator raises his fist and tries to punch him, andre ducks and jabs him in the ribs, the eliminator lets out a high pitched cry. the next one tackles andre and brings him to the floor, the eliminator starts to punch him, andre gets his knee and brings it into the eliminators balls as hard as he can. the eliminator clutches his crotch area and rolls on the floor.
two more eliminators move towards andre, andre elbows the first one sending him to the ground with a bleeding nose. then he grabs the other eliminator and takes his knee to his face, the eliminator falls and doesnt get up.
the eliminator andre elbowed before approaches him, andre puts his two fist together and brings it down on his face like a hammer, blood spurts out his nose. the remaining eliminators take andre to the ground and start pummeling him. andre swings violently until he gets away from the crowd, andre picks up the nearest thing to him, which is a large rock, and hurls it at one of the eliminators faces, the eliminator falls on his back.
"STOP!!"
all the eliminators freeze, header and tracer look at each other in wonder, the kid can fight.
part 2 comin up
"those things will kill ya trace"
"i know but once ya start ya can't stop"
"we got some guy who wants to join up by the way"
"oh yeah? is he up for it?"
"kids got some mouth"
"okay, so he's got mouth but what about muscle?"
"i dunno, he should be back later, i told him you'd think about it"
"did ya catch his name?"
"andre"
"someone call?"
a long blonde haired kid in a green t-shirt emerges from the shadows, he has a mean look.
"what the f**k are you doin hangin around here?"
"i wanna sign up you dumb s**t"
"you got the biggest mouth i ever seen kid"
"yep, you got the biggest nose i ever seen"
header has a big grin on his face as header and andre fight
"back down header i like this kid"
"but..."
"look kid if you wanna jacket, then you gotta earn it"
"yeah, well i'm a hardcore soldier so bring it on"
"you got a lot of balls, header, get the boys"
header smiles and walks away. 20 minutes later andre finds himself up against 10 mean looking eliminators, his mean face turns into an even meaner one. the eliminators start laughing.
tracer and header watch from a platform above the fence everybody is caged in.
"sorry to say this kid, but your mouth isn't going to help you now"
one of the eliminators say "good luck kid, you'll need it"
andre gets ready as the eliminators close in.
andre clenches his fists, the first eliminator raises his fist and tries to punch him, andre ducks and jabs him in the ribs, the eliminator lets out a high pitched cry. the next one tackles andre and brings him to the floor, the eliminator starts to punch him, andre gets his knee and brings it into the eliminators balls as hard as he can. the eliminator clutches his crotch area and rolls on the floor.
two more eliminators move towards andre, andre elbows the first one sending him to the ground with a bleeding nose. then he grabs the other eliminator and takes his knee to his face, the eliminator falls and doesnt get up.
the eliminator andre elbowed before approaches him, andre puts his two fist together and brings it down on his face like a hammer, blood spurts out his nose. the remaining eliminators take andre to the ground and start pummeling him. andre swings violently until he gets away from the crowd, andre picks up the nearest thing to him, which is a large rock, and hurls it at one of the eliminators faces, the eliminator falls on his back.
"STOP!!"
all the eliminators freeze, header and tracer look at each other in wonder, the kid can fight.
part 2 comin up
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Re: It's going to be Electric
Pretty cool, the Electric Eliminators were always one of my favorite gangs. I like how you explained the origin of their name as well. Keep it up.
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Re: It's going to be Electric
"okay kid i'm gonna introduce you to the boys"
tracer takes andre to the hangout, the eliminators that fought andre are in there.
"this is shelby"
shelby has tissue stuffed up his nose from the bleeding, he nods his head
"this is jeff"
jeff has bruises all over his face, he manages to gurgle "hi" while blood trickles from his mouth
"then there's jason, matthew and lemmy. they are all my front men, although you're a newblood, i'm impressed with you, you're joining the team andre"
andre has a puzzled look on his face. "team?"
header turns towards andre and explains. "9 guys, packed to the max, going into moonrunner territory, gonna bomb the system newblood"
andre has a shocked look on his face
"you're all outta your minds, we're outnumbered 9 to 80"
"there are 90 moonrunner soldiers actually" jeff gurgles
"why moonrunners?" andre asked
"we don't like guys who steal our look" shelby said
"you scared kid?" lemmy says
"i'm not scared, i'm just surprised you got the balls to do it, i'll waste em all"
"we're going tommorow"
"tommorow, why not now?"
the eliminators laugh
part 3 comin soon
tracer takes andre to the hangout, the eliminators that fought andre are in there.
"this is shelby"
shelby has tissue stuffed up his nose from the bleeding, he nods his head
"this is jeff"
jeff has bruises all over his face, he manages to gurgle "hi" while blood trickles from his mouth
"then there's jason, matthew and lemmy. they are all my front men, although you're a newblood, i'm impressed with you, you're joining the team andre"
andre has a puzzled look on his face. "team?"
header turns towards andre and explains. "9 guys, packed to the max, going into moonrunner territory, gonna bomb the system newblood"
andre has a shocked look on his face
"you're all outta your minds, we're outnumbered 9 to 80"
"there are 90 moonrunner soldiers actually" jeff gurgles
"why moonrunners?" andre asked
"we don't like guys who steal our look" shelby said
"you scared kid?" lemmy says
"i'm not scared, i'm just surprised you got the balls to do it, i'll waste em all"
"we're going tommorow"
"tommorow, why not now?"
the eliminators laugh
part 3 comin soon
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Re: It's going to be Electric
Thats Mint, the Electric Elimanators are my favourite gang by FAAAR !! 8)
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