How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Geinus pure Geinus man i canot wait till what happens next KEPP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SixteenM16s
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
this is a great story. keep it up man i like it 
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KingOfTheWarlords
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Chapter 4: Always Help a Brother out Part 1.
Cleon, Vermin, and Snow stepped off the train onto riverside station as they moved off the platform they saw a bunch of cops surrounding... none other than Ajax. One Cop tried to hit him with his nightstick but Ajax ducked and uppercut the cop in the chin. "I don't know if we should help Ajax or the pigs" said Vermin. "We'd better help him out" added Snow. "Right, lets roll soilders" said Cleon. They charged the cops, Cleon grabbed a cops nightstick in mid-swing and flipped him over his back he then stomped on the cops head three times knocking him out. Another cop tried to hit him with his nightstick but Cleon blocked it with his nightstick, he then made a stabbing motion with his nightstick then whacked the cop while he was holding his sides. He saw a cop come from behind Ajax so he threw his nightstick, hitting the cop square in the forehead. Vermin punched a cop in the nose, he then pulled his feet out from under him and delivered a swift blow to his groin. Snow ducked a cops nightstick and then he grabbed the cop's arm twisted it and slammed his elbow on the cops. He heard a crack and the cop howled in pain. Snow dropped him and went for the other cop he punched him in the face, head butted him, and then elbowed the top of his head. He got on top of the cop and punched him three times along with two headbutts. Vermin had pulled up the other cop and held his arms behind his back while Snow headbutted him from the front. Two cops were closing in on Ajax, one got two close and tried to hit Ajax but Ajax ducked, hit the cop in the face and threw him into a collumn. The other cop swung at Ajax but he grabbed the downed cops nightstick and smacked him in the face with it. He then bashed the cops head against a wall finishing him off.
"Thanx, Warlord I thought you were dead" said Ajax "And we thought you were locked up" added Snow. "Ya, well those panted freakes ambushed the patrol car I was in" said Ajax "I managed to grab the keys to these cuffs and got to the train station, the pigs closed the train station down on a count of Fox getting hit by the train." He paused. "Looks like were gonna have to bop through the Furies turf. They made there way to the streets and were soon surrounded buy eight Furies. "Allright theres no where to run to where gonna have to bop through these freaks, stick together and don't let them surround you, everyone ready?" asked Cleon "Ya" said Snow. "I'm always ready Warlord" added Vermin. "F**kin A" shouted Ajax. "Alright Warriors, TAKE EM' APART" Cleon yelled.
Thats the end of chapter 4 hope you like it
Cleon, Vermin, and Snow stepped off the train onto riverside station as they moved off the platform they saw a bunch of cops surrounding... none other than Ajax. One Cop tried to hit him with his nightstick but Ajax ducked and uppercut the cop in the chin. "I don't know if we should help Ajax or the pigs" said Vermin. "We'd better help him out" added Snow. "Right, lets roll soilders" said Cleon. They charged the cops, Cleon grabbed a cops nightstick in mid-swing and flipped him over his back he then stomped on the cops head three times knocking him out. Another cop tried to hit him with his nightstick but Cleon blocked it with his nightstick, he then made a stabbing motion with his nightstick then whacked the cop while he was holding his sides. He saw a cop come from behind Ajax so he threw his nightstick, hitting the cop square in the forehead. Vermin punched a cop in the nose, he then pulled his feet out from under him and delivered a swift blow to his groin. Snow ducked a cops nightstick and then he grabbed the cop's arm twisted it and slammed his elbow on the cops. He heard a crack and the cop howled in pain. Snow dropped him and went for the other cop he punched him in the face, head butted him, and then elbowed the top of his head. He got on top of the cop and punched him three times along with two headbutts. Vermin had pulled up the other cop and held his arms behind his back while Snow headbutted him from the front. Two cops were closing in on Ajax, one got two close and tried to hit Ajax but Ajax ducked, hit the cop in the face and threw him into a collumn. The other cop swung at Ajax but he grabbed the downed cops nightstick and smacked him in the face with it. He then bashed the cops head against a wall finishing him off.
"Thanx, Warlord I thought you were dead" said Ajax "And we thought you were locked up" added Snow. "Ya, well those panted freakes ambushed the patrol car I was in" said Ajax "I managed to grab the keys to these cuffs and got to the train station, the pigs closed the train station down on a count of Fox getting hit by the train." He paused. "Looks like were gonna have to bop through the Furies turf. They made there way to the streets and were soon surrounded buy eight Furies. "Allright theres no where to run to where gonna have to bop through these freaks, stick together and don't let them surround you, everyone ready?" asked Cleon "Ya" said Snow. "I'm always ready Warlord" added Vermin. "F**kin A" shouted Ajax. "Alright Warriors, TAKE EM' APART" Cleon yelled.
Thats the end of chapter 4 hope you like it
Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!
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Vermin/Cowboy
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Good.... Real Good .... THE BEST!!
The Warriors ain't good. Not even really good. They're the best!!
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KingOfTheWarlords
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Chapter 5:A Runnin With the Furies.
The Warriors came face to face with no less than eight Furies, they charged the Furies head on. Cleon punched one in the face and stomach, he then bashed his head up against a wall. A Furie tried to hit Ajax with his bat but Ajax kicked him in the stomach and threw him into the sub-way breaking the doors down. Vermin got hit in the stomach with a bat but quickly recovered and uppercut the furie in the chin sending him flying, another Furie tried to hit him from behind but Vermin caught the bat in mid-swing and kneed the Furie in the groin, he then stomped on his head three times. Snow was facing three Furies at once, one tried to swing at him but Snow ducked socked him in the stomach and threw him into a wall. Cleon came over and punched one in the face, stomach, and roundhoused him. Snow flipped the other Furie over his shoulder and stomped on his head before twisting and brakeing his arm.Ajax held the last Furie from behind why'll Vermin jumped into the are and elbowed the Furie in the groin. "All right lets go Warriors" said Cleon and they soildered on.
The Warriors were marching threw an alley when they came face to face with seven more Furies. Cleon bashed ones head up against a wall and kicked him in the head. He then grabbed his bat and made a stabbing motion with his bat at a furie, he then kicked him in the face and elbowed him there too. Ajax punched a Furie in the face and uppercut him in the chin. He then grabbed another Furie and slammed him against a wall punching him five times and bashing his head to the ground. Vermin grabbed a Furie punched him in the stomach and the groin. Snow bashed a Furies head against a wall and roundhoused another in the face and he then bashed their heads together knocking them out. They moved on with out a word.
End of Part 1
Tell me what you guys think
The Warriors came face to face with no less than eight Furies, they charged the Furies head on. Cleon punched one in the face and stomach, he then bashed his head up against a wall. A Furie tried to hit Ajax with his bat but Ajax kicked him in the stomach and threw him into the sub-way breaking the doors down. Vermin got hit in the stomach with a bat but quickly recovered and uppercut the furie in the chin sending him flying, another Furie tried to hit him from behind but Vermin caught the bat in mid-swing and kneed the Furie in the groin, he then stomped on his head three times. Snow was facing three Furies at once, one tried to swing at him but Snow ducked socked him in the stomach and threw him into a wall. Cleon came over and punched one in the face, stomach, and roundhoused him. Snow flipped the other Furie over his shoulder and stomped on his head before twisting and brakeing his arm.Ajax held the last Furie from behind why'll Vermin jumped into the are and elbowed the Furie in the groin. "All right lets go Warriors" said Cleon and they soildered on.
The Warriors were marching threw an alley when they came face to face with seven more Furies. Cleon bashed ones head up against a wall and kicked him in the head. He then grabbed his bat and made a stabbing motion with his bat at a furie, he then kicked him in the face and elbowed him there too. Ajax punched a Furie in the face and uppercut him in the chin. He then grabbed another Furie and slammed him against a wall punching him five times and bashing his head to the ground. Vermin grabbed a Furie punched him in the stomach and the groin. Snow bashed a Furies head against a wall and roundhoused another in the face and he then bashed their heads together knocking them out. They moved on with out a word.
End of Part 1
Tell me what you guys think
Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!
Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Sweet i cant beleive that they took on all those furies just like the movie ol.
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
15 Furries vs 4 Warriors. I like that. I like it. Keep it up King.
The Warriors ain't good. Not even really good. They're the best!!
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KingOfTheWarlords
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Chapter 6: Meeting old aquaintences.
A squad of no less than 16 furies ran threw the park looking for the Warriors. They decided to split up into warparties to increase there search. After they left the park Cleon, Ajax, Snow, and Vermin skulked out of the shadows. "Man, those freakes are gonna be all over Riverside lookin' for us" said Vermin. "No, s**t dumbass" responded Ajax. "You wanna start somethin apeman" mocked Vermin. "Hey you two cut it out" yelled Cleon at Vermin and Ajax. They did as they were told but continued to glare at each other. "We need to get out of Riverside before the Furies find us" said Snow. Just then a baseball came and hit the tree behind them. It came from the Furies leader Cobbs, he was surrounded by no less than eight Furies three of which were leuitanats. Ajax was the furst one in the brawl he knocked out two Furies by hiting the across the face with his bat. He then punched another one in the stomach and kicked him in the face. Vermin managed to take out a Furie with three swift to the face, but another one came from behind and cracked his hat across his head. He was avenged by Cleon who punched the Furie in the face then elbowed him in the balls. Snow and Ajax were busy fighting the other four Furies, which left Cleon and Cobbs....
Hope you like it like haven't been able to update but I joined ROTC this year.
Next chapter Cleon v.s. Cobbs.
A squad of no less than 16 furies ran threw the park looking for the Warriors. They decided to split up into warparties to increase there search. After they left the park Cleon, Ajax, Snow, and Vermin skulked out of the shadows. "Man, those freakes are gonna be all over Riverside lookin' for us" said Vermin. "No, s**t dumbass" responded Ajax. "You wanna start somethin apeman" mocked Vermin. "Hey you two cut it out" yelled Cleon at Vermin and Ajax. They did as they were told but continued to glare at each other. "We need to get out of Riverside before the Furies find us" said Snow. Just then a baseball came and hit the tree behind them. It came from the Furies leader Cobbs, he was surrounded by no less than eight Furies three of which were leuitanats. Ajax was the furst one in the brawl he knocked out two Furies by hiting the across the face with his bat. He then punched another one in the stomach and kicked him in the face. Vermin managed to take out a Furie with three swift to the face, but another one came from behind and cracked his hat across his head. He was avenged by Cleon who punched the Furie in the face then elbowed him in the balls. Snow and Ajax were busy fighting the other four Furies, which left Cleon and Cobbs....
Hope you like it like haven't been able to update but I joined ROTC this year.
Next chapter Cleon v.s. Cobbs.
Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!
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KingOfTheWarlords
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Chapter 7: Cleon v.s. Cobbs
Cobbs tried to swings at Cleon, but that was ineffective as Cleon ducked and hit Cobbs in the stomach. This was also ineffective as Cobbs picked Cleon up and Slammed him onto the ground. Snow tried to hit Cobbs from behind but Cobbs swung hard and cracked his bat on Snows head. Next came Ajax who unleashed a barrage of fists on Cobbs face did little damage as Cobbs punched him in the gut and bashed his face into the wall. It looked like the Warriors were doomed when Vermin came from behind and pnched Cobbs in the balls. He then picked up a bat and hit him in the in the stomach. Then he hit him in the knees bringin him down to Vermins level. He broke the bat across his face and shoved him through the gate and broke it down. Cleon and Snow got up and looked at Vermin work " Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn" said Cleon Snow said nothing. Vermin tried to wake Ajax but found it difficult to wake him by tapping him. So he started kicking him and when he reeled back his foot to kick him Ajax grabbed his foot in midswing and tripped him. Ajax got up and mumbled something about not tickling a man when he's sleeping.
Immmmmmmmmmmmmmm Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack, please reveiw
Cobbs tried to swings at Cleon, but that was ineffective as Cleon ducked and hit Cobbs in the stomach. This was also ineffective as Cobbs picked Cleon up and Slammed him onto the ground. Snow tried to hit Cobbs from behind but Cobbs swung hard and cracked his bat on Snows head. Next came Ajax who unleashed a barrage of fists on Cobbs face did little damage as Cobbs punched him in the gut and bashed his face into the wall. It looked like the Warriors were doomed when Vermin came from behind and pnched Cobbs in the balls. He then picked up a bat and hit him in the in the stomach. Then he hit him in the knees bringin him down to Vermins level. He broke the bat across his face and shoved him through the gate and broke it down. Cleon and Snow got up and looked at Vermin work " Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn" said Cleon Snow said nothing. Vermin tried to wake Ajax but found it difficult to wake him by tapping him. So he started kicking him and when he reeled back his foot to kick him Ajax grabbed his foot in midswing and tripped him. Ajax got up and mumbled something about not tickling a man when he's sleeping.
Immmmmmmmmmmmmmm Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack, please reveiw Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!
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rembrandt33
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Dude freakin amazing. you should be a writer
Ill shove that bat up your ass and turn you into a popsicle.
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rembrandt33
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Please hurry, I cant stop reading this its so good.
Ill shove that bat up your ass and turn you into a popsicle.
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
eah, this fan fic, has made it a long way.
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
hey King, come one man.. you gotta continue your story. dude that story was great.
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OMG. This is definitely the best Warriors story posted here! keep it going man. the people want more!!!
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KingOfTheWarlords
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Alright everyone this is part one of my eight and unfortunately final chapter hope you like it
Also feel free to play the song Kung Fu Fighting by the Foo Fighters while reading this chapter
Chapter 8A: Heading Home
The Warriors were heading down a street to the train station when all of a sudden they heard police sirens coming from behind them. "Lets move Warriors" said Cleon as they took of at full speed. They had just made it to the train station when two cars full of police, four in each pulled up to them quickly giving chase. "Split up Warriors" yelled Cleon as he and Vermin ran deeper into the police station while Ajax and Snow ran into a train to lose the cops, unfortunately they didn't notice the sign on the train said Soho( bum bum bum ).
Cleon and Vermin gave up running and faced the four cops who had followed them. "2 each?" asked Vermin facing Cleon. "You know it" answered Cleon. Cleon and Vermin turned to face their attackers to see they were armed with nightsticks. "This is gonna be too easy" said one.
Cleon saw there was one cop coming from behind him so punched the cop in front of him in the ribs, he then kicked the one behind him in the stomach. Turning to face the one in front of him he punched him in the left and right cheek, he then kicked him in the stomach and while the cop was bent over in pain Cleon roundhouse kicked him in the face. the one behind him put his nightstick infront of Cleon's neck cutting off air. Thinking fast Cleon flipped the cop over him onto the ground, he then got on top of him punching him in the face a few times before bring his elbow down onto the cops face.
Vermin tackled one cop into a piller and proceeded to give him a right and left hook before giving him a punch to the face him then bashed the cops head into the piller. He was hit in the head from behind by a cop and while he was on the ground gave the cop a sack tap, he then picked the cop up and literally pit him through a bench knocking him out.
Cleon and Vermin saw that the other cops that were chasing Ajax and Snow come down the stairs. They ran into a subway tunnel to avoid being seen. They then ran down the tunnel hoping their friends were alright.
I'm such a jerk doing that too and Ajax well hope you guys like the story so far. Next Chapter Ajax and Snow vs the Hihats.
Also feel free to play the song Kung Fu Fighting by the Foo Fighters while reading this chapter
Chapter 8A: Heading Home
The Warriors were heading down a street to the train station when all of a sudden they heard police sirens coming from behind them. "Lets move Warriors" said Cleon as they took of at full speed. They had just made it to the train station when two cars full of police, four in each pulled up to them quickly giving chase. "Split up Warriors" yelled Cleon as he and Vermin ran deeper into the police station while Ajax and Snow ran into a train to lose the cops, unfortunately they didn't notice the sign on the train said Soho( bum bum bum ).
Cleon and Vermin gave up running and faced the four cops who had followed them. "2 each?" asked Vermin facing Cleon. "You know it" answered Cleon. Cleon and Vermin turned to face their attackers to see they were armed with nightsticks. "This is gonna be too easy" said one.
Cleon saw there was one cop coming from behind him so punched the cop in front of him in the ribs, he then kicked the one behind him in the stomach. Turning to face the one in front of him he punched him in the left and right cheek, he then kicked him in the stomach and while the cop was bent over in pain Cleon roundhouse kicked him in the face. the one behind him put his nightstick infront of Cleon's neck cutting off air. Thinking fast Cleon flipped the cop over him onto the ground, he then got on top of him punching him in the face a few times before bring his elbow down onto the cops face.
Vermin tackled one cop into a piller and proceeded to give him a right and left hook before giving him a punch to the face him then bashed the cops head into the piller. He was hit in the head from behind by a cop and while he was on the ground gave the cop a sack tap, he then picked the cop up and literally pit him through a bench knocking him out.
Cleon and Vermin saw that the other cops that were chasing Ajax and Snow come down the stairs. They ran into a subway tunnel to avoid being seen. They then ran down the tunnel hoping their friends were alright.
I'm such a jerk doing that too and Ajax well hope you guys like the story so far. Next Chapter Ajax and Snow vs the Hihats.
Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!