The Grizzilies:Smiling faces tell lies!( Trixter universal idea)
The Grizzilies:Smiling faces tell lies!( Trixter universal idea)
August 25, 1976
12:09am
Long island, Queens. Once known to be a place to be safe but it wasn't at this time of year. It was a safe haven but not now. Gangs such as The Queens Bridge Mutilators and The Grizzilies moved in a made the neighborhood worse than it already was. The Grizzilies were a gang filled with Dr.Jekls and Mr. Hydes that ran the town with a iron fist and were also suggested for help enforcing tribute and what not. Well this time they recieve a offer from the Moonrunners and this time they don't refuse and want to play a simple trick on this gang thats having probelms with keeping gangs away from their trains.
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Dj: I hope my babies and boppers enjoyed last nights heatwave. Lets hope your in now to hear the latest word. Ok. The E Street Shufflers outbopped the Boppers in a disco inferno competition.All I have to say was things got steaming hot! If you know what I mean. Now the big highlight. The Moonrunners are enforcing a tribute and gangs aren't taking kindly to their idea. So they'll need help so this call is going out to that hardcore gang in the Queens.Yes the Grizzilies. They beg for your help.They'll even throw in a reward. Adios!
Warlord, Baby bear takes a breath while folding his legs across desk table. The room was silent. With only him in it made him feel like Scarface except without a pile of narcotics covering the table. He had the radio lying right next to his chair. He heard the offewr the Moonrunners gave his gang. He wants to take advantage of the Moonrunners badly. His idea was to stab them in the back and betray them.
"I'll help you weaklings enforce the tribute." Bear murmured.
The dim lightbulb flickered and shone onto bears tan brown skin. He got up from his chair and vaulted over the table with his brown converse contacting the cold concrete ground. He opens the door of his office and walks out into the living room of the mansion. He then walks outside to the backyard passing by Alphonse and Hermosa garage where they worked on cars.
In the tall grass a large serpent was resting without sleeping. Her name was Anubus. She was treated like a queen.All the thugs you can eat buffet. Baby bear crouches next to the large serpent and rubbed its huge head.
"Im sorry you haven't had nothing to eat yet but im sure the Moonrunners will be a healthly treat. I'll get you something. Just wait."
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Pelham,Trainyard
12:54am.
The Moonrunners Warlord, Castor was laying on the wall thinking about the tribute enforcing with The Grizzilies. Could he trust them? He knew that the Grizzlies were a hypocritical gang and he knew his troops lives would be on line if the indian gang took it upon themselves to betray. Nearby two Moonrunner sentries approach Castor with their Purple vest and Moon necklaces hanging from their necks.
Sentry, Stormstar put his hands in his denim blue jeans with his head leaning to the side. Sentry, Fryer was a big mouth so he had to ask the Warlord about the tribute.
"Uh Castor you think we can trust the Grizzilies? They got heavy real quick and they are getting to big for their britches and they might turn on us."
Castor sighed. 'Well we'll send our ambassador over to the Queens and talk this out with them. I'll make sure that our guy is packed with one revolver and a switchblade just incase the gang gets out of hand. So you don't have to worry."
"Yeah really? We'll use Scotty cause he can talk a good game and he was known to be a great figter. So he surely be able to hold his own against them." Fryer said smiling.
"I told ya we got a good thing going for us. you watch."
Do the Moonrunners have something going for them? Will they be able to enforce and take control with the help of the Grizzilies? We'll see. Adios.
Give me honest Feddback!
Chapter 2- The Deal and Smooth talk......Coming soon.
12:09am
Long island, Queens. Once known to be a place to be safe but it wasn't at this time of year. It was a safe haven but not now. Gangs such as The Queens Bridge Mutilators and The Grizzilies moved in a made the neighborhood worse than it already was. The Grizzilies were a gang filled with Dr.Jekls and Mr. Hydes that ran the town with a iron fist and were also suggested for help enforcing tribute and what not. Well this time they recieve a offer from the Moonrunners and this time they don't refuse and want to play a simple trick on this gang thats having probelms with keeping gangs away from their trains.
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Dj: I hope my babies and boppers enjoyed last nights heatwave. Lets hope your in now to hear the latest word. Ok. The E Street Shufflers outbopped the Boppers in a disco inferno competition.All I have to say was things got steaming hot! If you know what I mean. Now the big highlight. The Moonrunners are enforcing a tribute and gangs aren't taking kindly to their idea. So they'll need help so this call is going out to that hardcore gang in the Queens.Yes the Grizzilies. They beg for your help.They'll even throw in a reward. Adios!
Warlord, Baby bear takes a breath while folding his legs across desk table. The room was silent. With only him in it made him feel like Scarface except without a pile of narcotics covering the table. He had the radio lying right next to his chair. He heard the offewr the Moonrunners gave his gang. He wants to take advantage of the Moonrunners badly. His idea was to stab them in the back and betray them.
"I'll help you weaklings enforce the tribute." Bear murmured.
The dim lightbulb flickered and shone onto bears tan brown skin. He got up from his chair and vaulted over the table with his brown converse contacting the cold concrete ground. He opens the door of his office and walks out into the living room of the mansion. He then walks outside to the backyard passing by Alphonse and Hermosa garage where they worked on cars.
In the tall grass a large serpent was resting without sleeping. Her name was Anubus. She was treated like a queen.All the thugs you can eat buffet. Baby bear crouches next to the large serpent and rubbed its huge head.
"Im sorry you haven't had nothing to eat yet but im sure the Moonrunners will be a healthly treat. I'll get you something. Just wait."
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Pelham,Trainyard
12:54am.
The Moonrunners Warlord, Castor was laying on the wall thinking about the tribute enforcing with The Grizzilies. Could he trust them? He knew that the Grizzlies were a hypocritical gang and he knew his troops lives would be on line if the indian gang took it upon themselves to betray. Nearby two Moonrunner sentries approach Castor with their Purple vest and Moon necklaces hanging from their necks.
Sentry, Stormstar put his hands in his denim blue jeans with his head leaning to the side. Sentry, Fryer was a big mouth so he had to ask the Warlord about the tribute.
"Uh Castor you think we can trust the Grizzilies? They got heavy real quick and they are getting to big for their britches and they might turn on us."
Castor sighed. 'Well we'll send our ambassador over to the Queens and talk this out with them. I'll make sure that our guy is packed with one revolver and a switchblade just incase the gang gets out of hand. So you don't have to worry."
"Yeah really? We'll use Scotty cause he can talk a good game and he was known to be a great figter. So he surely be able to hold his own against them." Fryer said smiling.
"I told ya we got a good thing going for us. you watch."
Do the Moonrunners have something going for them? Will they be able to enforce and take control with the help of the Grizzilies? We'll see. Adios.
Give me honest Feddback!
Chapter 2- The Deal and Smooth talk......Coming soon.
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Im liking it man, Real good.
PArticular use of detail is excellent, cant wait to see where your going with this.
PArticular use of detail is excellent, cant wait to see where your going with this.
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Re: The Grizzilies:Smiling faces tell lies!( Trixter universal idea)
Chapter 2: The Deal and smooth talk
August 26, 1976
7:09am
Warlord, Castor looked at his ambassaodr with faith knowing that this guy will talk the Grizzilies warlord into helping them in their tribute. Ambassador, Scotty leaned his head to the side with his hands in his pockets waiting on what Castor has to say. Castor walks up to his desk and pulls out a Revolver and a switchblade. He then walks back over to Scotty and hands to him.
"You know what your mission is?" Castor asked.
"Yes sir. They won't say know. Looking at what your equipping me with must seems that I will have to ask for their help by force if neccessary." Scotty said.
"Your right. It is also for protection just incase they take it upon themselves to jump you in broad daylight. Now you know how to use a revolver,right?"
Scotty looks into the firearm chamber and examines the bullets. He closes the chamber and stuffs it into his pocket along with his blade.
"Hell yeah. My father used one in Vietnam."
"Alright then soldier. Get going."
Scotty walks out the hideout with his moon pendant swinging off his neck right to left. He straightened his purple headband while combing his close crop afro. Thoughts came into his head about what might happen but as long as he had that revolver the Grizzilies wouldn't dare lay a finger on this guy.
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Queens, Long island
8:32am
Scotty walked out of the subway with the flurorescent light shining on his pasty skin. He ran up the stairs and onto the streets of Queens. He walked past many buildings and neighborhoods. He walked past a tree and saw a cat looking down at him.
"BOO!"
He scares the feline and makes it fall out the tree so he can get a good laugh. He's finally at Queens bridge keeping his cool he has to be calmer since the Queens Bridge Mutilators have that part of turf. They can smell fear. Scotty walks past the bridge and sees a couple of Mutilator troops staring at him. They didn't budge cause they must saw the bulge in the right side of his jeans. They knew what it was.
He walks from the bridge and finally reaches some corner stores. Something on the roof catch his attention. He pauses his walk and looks up to see two Grizzily scouts looking down on him with Bow and Arrows. To him the two scouts looked like two little monkeys ready to throw fruits at their enemy. He didn't want to start anything so he kept walking.
20 minutes later...
No static from the two gangs and he finally makes it to the Grizzilies Hideout. He has to understand that he doesn't need to take no sh*t from the Warlord what so ever. He runs up to the Mansion and opens the door. Its game time!
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In the Office.....
Scotty was guided inside the hideout with the Grizzilies two sentries, Jacoby and Aegina. They expected a visit from the Moonrunners. Scotty was lead to Baby bears office.
Scotty walks up to the desk to see Baby bear getting his hair braided by his girlfriend, Pandora. Pandora wasn't only Baby bears girlfriend but she was part of the gang also. She was beautiful with long black hair and tan skin with a sexy slender body like any supermodel. Her ethincity was India.
"What do you want mister Moonrunner sir?"
Scotty puts on his serious face." Our Warlord Castor asked if he can use you to enforce our tribute. We've heard about you taking out The Orphans, The Roadmasters, Delaney Rovers, and The Turnbulls. Now you all became a kick a** gang in only 3 months."
"Yeah so? If we put our a**es on the line for helping you all what will give us?"
Scotty had to think it came up to him that he'll make up a lie." Ok. We'll give you valuable needs. Walkie talkies. Blue prints to any subway turf of your rivals. Specialty blades and chemicals."
Baby bear strokes his goatee." Well we won't be needing any blade specialties but those walkie talkies and chemicals will come into use. I had thoughts of stealing battery acid from some pimps down at their hangout spot in Brooklyn. You changed my mind you got-
Something in the ambassaodrs pocket caught his attention.He saw a small bulge in it. He can tell its a revolver. How can his sentries not confiscate him?
"Slick bastard" Baby bear murmurs."
"Excuse me?"Scotty asked.
"Nothing!" Baby bear pulls out a bowie knife and stabs it into the wooden table to make it sit up right."Now get outta here!"
Scotty walks out the hangout with a smile on his face. The Grizzilies actually took the deal. His smooth talking worked. The two gangs have something going for both of them. Baby bear accepts the Moonrunners deal but he tends to betry them. Scotty lied to the Grizzilies and makes them help the tribute without a prize. You wanna know the real plan of the Moonrunners? Well find out in-
Chapter 3......Why weren't you there? Coming Soon!
August 26, 1976
7:09am
Warlord, Castor looked at his ambassaodr with faith knowing that this guy will talk the Grizzilies warlord into helping them in their tribute. Ambassador, Scotty leaned his head to the side with his hands in his pockets waiting on what Castor has to say. Castor walks up to his desk and pulls out a Revolver and a switchblade. He then walks back over to Scotty and hands to him.
"You know what your mission is?" Castor asked.
"Yes sir. They won't say know. Looking at what your equipping me with must seems that I will have to ask for their help by force if neccessary." Scotty said.
"Your right. It is also for protection just incase they take it upon themselves to jump you in broad daylight. Now you know how to use a revolver,right?"
Scotty looks into the firearm chamber and examines the bullets. He closes the chamber and stuffs it into his pocket along with his blade.
"Hell yeah. My father used one in Vietnam."
"Alright then soldier. Get going."
Scotty walks out the hideout with his moon pendant swinging off his neck right to left. He straightened his purple headband while combing his close crop afro. Thoughts came into his head about what might happen but as long as he had that revolver the Grizzilies wouldn't dare lay a finger on this guy.
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Queens, Long island
8:32am
Scotty walked out of the subway with the flurorescent light shining on his pasty skin. He ran up the stairs and onto the streets of Queens. He walked past many buildings and neighborhoods. He walked past a tree and saw a cat looking down at him.
"BOO!"
He scares the feline and makes it fall out the tree so he can get a good laugh. He's finally at Queens bridge keeping his cool he has to be calmer since the Queens Bridge Mutilators have that part of turf. They can smell fear. Scotty walks past the bridge and sees a couple of Mutilator troops staring at him. They didn't budge cause they must saw the bulge in the right side of his jeans. They knew what it was.
He walks from the bridge and finally reaches some corner stores. Something on the roof catch his attention. He pauses his walk and looks up to see two Grizzily scouts looking down on him with Bow and Arrows. To him the two scouts looked like two little monkeys ready to throw fruits at their enemy. He didn't want to start anything so he kept walking.
20 minutes later...
No static from the two gangs and he finally makes it to the Grizzilies Hideout. He has to understand that he doesn't need to take no sh*t from the Warlord what so ever. He runs up to the Mansion and opens the door. Its game time!
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In the Office.....
Scotty was guided inside the hideout with the Grizzilies two sentries, Jacoby and Aegina. They expected a visit from the Moonrunners. Scotty was lead to Baby bears office.
Scotty walks up to the desk to see Baby bear getting his hair braided by his girlfriend, Pandora. Pandora wasn't only Baby bears girlfriend but she was part of the gang also. She was beautiful with long black hair and tan skin with a sexy slender body like any supermodel. Her ethincity was India.
"What do you want mister Moonrunner sir?"
Scotty puts on his serious face." Our Warlord Castor asked if he can use you to enforce our tribute. We've heard about you taking out The Orphans, The Roadmasters, Delaney Rovers, and The Turnbulls. Now you all became a kick a** gang in only 3 months."
"Yeah so? If we put our a**es on the line for helping you all what will give us?"
Scotty had to think it came up to him that he'll make up a lie." Ok. We'll give you valuable needs. Walkie talkies. Blue prints to any subway turf of your rivals. Specialty blades and chemicals."
Baby bear strokes his goatee." Well we won't be needing any blade specialties but those walkie talkies and chemicals will come into use. I had thoughts of stealing battery acid from some pimps down at their hangout spot in Brooklyn. You changed my mind you got-
Something in the ambassaodrs pocket caught his attention.He saw a small bulge in it. He can tell its a revolver. How can his sentries not confiscate him?
"Slick bastard" Baby bear murmurs."
"Excuse me?"Scotty asked.
"Nothing!" Baby bear pulls out a bowie knife and stabs it into the wooden table to make it sit up right."Now get outta here!"
Scotty walks out the hangout with a smile on his face. The Grizzilies actually took the deal. His smooth talking worked. The two gangs have something going for both of them. Baby bear accepts the Moonrunners deal but he tends to betry them. Scotty lied to the Grizzilies and makes them help the tribute without a prize. You wanna know the real plan of the Moonrunners? Well find out in-
Chapter 3......Why weren't you there? Coming Soon!
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Hey Baby Bear, I really like this story. Keep going with it
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Re: The Grizzilies:Smiling faces tell lies!( Trixter universal idea)
Chapter 3 : Why weren't you there?
August 26,1976
2:09pm
Pelham Trainyard...
Scotty vaulted over a piece of metal while getting to the hideout. He was happy that the Grizzilies accepted the offer. He couldn't wait to tell Castor the good news. He burst through the hideout and encounters Stormstar at the entrance smoking a Newport cigarette.
"You got the Grizzilies convinced?" Stormstar asked.
"Yep." Scotty pulls out the revolver and smiles."Their Warlord must've seen this and started p*ssing hiself he had no choice but to accept it. Im going to talk this out with Castor."
Scotty smacks Stormstar on the arm playedfully and rushes towards Castors office.
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Castor office...
Scotty comes in the door and sees Castor laided up with some girls. Scotty hates to interrupt but he has to tell Castor about the news.
"Excuse me. Castor? The Grizzilies accept the deal." Scotty said twirling the revolver.
"Oh yeah?! Thats good to hear. Now if they send their soldiers down here to help we can hold them hostage and slowly kill them. We really don't need any help with that tribute. Our goal is to lead the mouse to the cheese and get caught by the mouse trap."
Scotty raises his eyebrow." What? You sure we can do that? They'll find out that their troops will be missing and their soldiers will come down hard on us."
Castor takes a breath and rolls his eyes." Look at what you have in your hand. They can't stop that. A gun against a brick who wins? The gun. So don't get your panties in a knot!"
The two girls laugh at the joke Castor was saying. Scotty cringes and walks out the hangout and goes outside. The Moonrunners are actually going to set the Grizzilies up?
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Outside....
Scotty looks up at the sky bored. He can go to the storeowners and collect protection money but he doesn't feel like it. He looks past the transit trains to see legs moving on the other side. Who over there?
Scotty slowly walks over to the unused train and puts his back on it to take cover and not be seen. yelling was heard and it sems that someone is wrestling according to the noise of ruffling dirt.
Scotty peaks from the side of the train to see Fryer on the ground hurt badly. Scotty comes from his hiding place and approaches Fyers body. Someone did this to him but who? Something on the train caught his attention. It appears that it was The Go hards burner.
He turns his head and sees three Go hard soldiers running away. Scotty produces his revolver and aims at the Go hards. His finger is steady on the trigger. He cocks the gun.
*Boom,Boom!*
He luckily shot one in the back of the head but the others got away. Scotty then turns his head to Fryers body. He puts his hands around his neck to check for pulse. No luck. Fryer is dead. Beaten to death. Scotty was late to find be the hero for today. He has to go back to Queens and talk to the Grizzilies about this. Why didn't they come? He didn't tell Castor but we're sure he'll find out later.
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Baby bears Office....
Scotty is angry so he kicks open the door of The Grizzilies warlord office. Scotty comes up to Baby bears desk giving him a angry look.
"You said you agree to our offer. For damn sake I gave you an offer you couldn't refuse!" Scotty shouts.
Baby bear stays calm and looks Scotty in the face. "Well I knew that deal is cheap just like that Marlon Brando quote you got from the Godfather."
"Shut up! Why you didn't send any of your troops to help! The Go hards attacked us!"
"I don't know why didn't you ask? If I had my people down there..." Bear snaps his finger." Those Go hards would've been gone just like that!"
"Im sick of your dumb tricks and this stupid BS your talking! Why weren't you there!?"
Bear yawns. 'I don't know...Lazy perhaps?"
Scotty puts his hand on the gun that is now is nside his right pant pocket. He wants to shoot Bear in the face so badly. He is hesitate since there are three sentries by the door.
"You know what? I'll get you back. Don't come to us if you need anything,got it?"
Bear hunches his shoulders." I don't care. Like we really need something from your gang!"
Scotty stomps out the office in anger and rage. He feels like taking a chair and throwing at someone but he might get his revenge.
Chapter 4....Its too late... Coming soon
August 26,1976
2:09pm
Pelham Trainyard...
Scotty vaulted over a piece of metal while getting to the hideout. He was happy that the Grizzilies accepted the offer. He couldn't wait to tell Castor the good news. He burst through the hideout and encounters Stormstar at the entrance smoking a Newport cigarette.
"You got the Grizzilies convinced?" Stormstar asked.
"Yep." Scotty pulls out the revolver and smiles."Their Warlord must've seen this and started p*ssing hiself he had no choice but to accept it. Im going to talk this out with Castor."
Scotty smacks Stormstar on the arm playedfully and rushes towards Castors office.
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Castor office...
Scotty comes in the door and sees Castor laided up with some girls. Scotty hates to interrupt but he has to tell Castor about the news.
"Excuse me. Castor? The Grizzilies accept the deal." Scotty said twirling the revolver.
"Oh yeah?! Thats good to hear. Now if they send their soldiers down here to help we can hold them hostage and slowly kill them. We really don't need any help with that tribute. Our goal is to lead the mouse to the cheese and get caught by the mouse trap."
Scotty raises his eyebrow." What? You sure we can do that? They'll find out that their troops will be missing and their soldiers will come down hard on us."
Castor takes a breath and rolls his eyes." Look at what you have in your hand. They can't stop that. A gun against a brick who wins? The gun. So don't get your panties in a knot!"
The two girls laugh at the joke Castor was saying. Scotty cringes and walks out the hangout and goes outside. The Moonrunners are actually going to set the Grizzilies up?
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Outside....
Scotty looks up at the sky bored. He can go to the storeowners and collect protection money but he doesn't feel like it. He looks past the transit trains to see legs moving on the other side. Who over there?
Scotty slowly walks over to the unused train and puts his back on it to take cover and not be seen. yelling was heard and it sems that someone is wrestling according to the noise of ruffling dirt.
Scotty peaks from the side of the train to see Fryer on the ground hurt badly. Scotty comes from his hiding place and approaches Fyers body. Someone did this to him but who? Something on the train caught his attention. It appears that it was The Go hards burner.
He turns his head and sees three Go hard soldiers running away. Scotty produces his revolver and aims at the Go hards. His finger is steady on the trigger. He cocks the gun.
*Boom,Boom!*
He luckily shot one in the back of the head but the others got away. Scotty then turns his head to Fryers body. He puts his hands around his neck to check for pulse. No luck. Fryer is dead. Beaten to death. Scotty was late to find be the hero for today. He has to go back to Queens and talk to the Grizzilies about this. Why didn't they come? He didn't tell Castor but we're sure he'll find out later.
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Baby bears Office....
Scotty is angry so he kicks open the door of The Grizzilies warlord office. Scotty comes up to Baby bears desk giving him a angry look.
"You said you agree to our offer. For damn sake I gave you an offer you couldn't refuse!" Scotty shouts.
Baby bear stays calm and looks Scotty in the face. "Well I knew that deal is cheap just like that Marlon Brando quote you got from the Godfather."
"Shut up! Why you didn't send any of your troops to help! The Go hards attacked us!"
"I don't know why didn't you ask? If I had my people down there..." Bear snaps his finger." Those Go hards would've been gone just like that!"
"Im sick of your dumb tricks and this stupid BS your talking! Why weren't you there!?"
Bear yawns. 'I don't know...Lazy perhaps?"
Scotty puts his hand on the gun that is now is nside his right pant pocket. He wants to shoot Bear in the face so badly. He is hesitate since there are three sentries by the door.
"You know what? I'll get you back. Don't come to us if you need anything,got it?"
Bear hunches his shoulders." I don't care. Like we really need something from your gang!"
Scotty stomps out the office in anger and rage. He feels like taking a chair and throwing at someone but he might get his revenge.
Chapter 4....Its too late... Coming soon
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Loving this story. 
Fantastic, I cant wait to see more.
Fantastic, I cant wait to see more.
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Re: The Grizzilies:Smiling faces tell lies!( Trixter universal idea)
I hope im not confusing you all am I? I just wanna know what is the story plot about so far?
Cuz I think somewhere in the story I've lost you guys and made it a little difficult to understand.
Oh yes thank you for you all honest feedback.
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Well this is what ive got so far.
Basically:
Moonrunners want to enforce tribute so decide to ask Grizzlies, but there planning to cross them, for reasons unknown, presumably respect.
Moonrunners send someone to speak to Baby Bear, He wasnt going to take up the offer, but spots the Revolver in moonrunners pocket, he then decides he will cross the moonrunners too.
Moonrunner goes back thinking he has the Grizzlies on side, the Monnruneers get attacked by rival gang and Grizzlies dont show up.
Moonrunner is p***** and goes to see Baby Bear, who couldnt care less, moonrunner storms off.
Brief summary, hope i got that right.
Basically:
Moonrunners want to enforce tribute so decide to ask Grizzlies, but there planning to cross them, for reasons unknown, presumably respect.
Moonrunners send someone to speak to Baby Bear, He wasnt going to take up the offer, but spots the Revolver in moonrunners pocket, he then decides he will cross the moonrunners too.
Moonrunner goes back thinking he has the Grizzlies on side, the Monnruneers get attacked by rival gang and Grizzlies dont show up.
Moonrunner is p***** and goes to see Baby Bear, who couldnt care less, moonrunner storms off.
Brief summary, hope i got that right.
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Chapter 4: Its too late!
August 26, 1976
5:09pm
Pelham Trainyard....
Scotty seemed tired as all hell. He made runs from day to night. Scotty reaches Pelham and sees the warlord and Sntry, Stormstar burying Fryer. Scotty wondered why didn't Castor try to know about this sooner?
Scotty came up towards Castor as Stormstar was pouring dirt into the hole fryers body was in.
"Castor, You just found out about this?" Scotty asked.
Castor turns his head at Scotty." No. I found out about it when I heard a gunshot earlier and thats when I found this Go Hards soldier with a bullet in the back of his head followed by Fryer being beaten to a pulp!"
"Too bad you wasn't out here to save him. I was the one that tried to do something.The Grizzilies didn't help and your just making it worse not helping your own people!"
Stormstar stared at Scotty with his shovel posted besides him."C'mon Scotty boy don't do it. You can't get into no arguements."
"What are you talking about Stormstar? You taking up for Castor too? He was wrong when he didn't take the time to help patrol instead he was laid up with those whores!"
Stormstar gets quiet because he knew that Castor was wrong and it was a fact. Castor squinches his eyes in disgust as he stares down the ambassador. He's the one that talked the Moonrunners out of bad situations so they won't wind up digging their own graves.
"Get outta my face! Your a disgrace. The Grizzilies don't give a f*ck..and you know what? Im starting not to give a damn either!" Castor shouted.
Scotty backed away. He didn't want to say anything else. Castors day will come. This plan didn't go so well.Soon it'll be the Moonrunners undoing.
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Queens, Grizzilies hangout...
"Hello my babies and young Boppers? How are you doing today? Well heres the word from the streets. The Facecrackers cracked some heads when they put the Five Points down for the count! Next our big highlight the VC Rangers said they aren't taking the Moonrunners tribute respectfully so they might be coming in full force! You heard that Moonrunners? You better get that crew from Queens to get off their behinds and help throw some fist! Adios."
Bear sits in his chair with a grim smile on his face. He shuffles through his desk and pulls out his shiny revolver. Its loaded and ready for action.
"You want help you got it!" Baby bear jumped from his seat and burst through the door.
Out in the living room of the mansion two of his best high rank soldiers, Bearclaw and Sparrow followed him out the door. They are on their way to Pelham. We'll see what unravels!
Chapter 5.....Bullet with your name on it!..Coming Soon!
August 26, 1976
5:09pm
Pelham Trainyard....
Scotty seemed tired as all hell. He made runs from day to night. Scotty reaches Pelham and sees the warlord and Sntry, Stormstar burying Fryer. Scotty wondered why didn't Castor try to know about this sooner?
Scotty came up towards Castor as Stormstar was pouring dirt into the hole fryers body was in.
"Castor, You just found out about this?" Scotty asked.
Castor turns his head at Scotty." No. I found out about it when I heard a gunshot earlier and thats when I found this Go Hards soldier with a bullet in the back of his head followed by Fryer being beaten to a pulp!"
"Too bad you wasn't out here to save him. I was the one that tried to do something.The Grizzilies didn't help and your just making it worse not helping your own people!"
Stormstar stared at Scotty with his shovel posted besides him."C'mon Scotty boy don't do it. You can't get into no arguements."
"What are you talking about Stormstar? You taking up for Castor too? He was wrong when he didn't take the time to help patrol instead he was laid up with those whores!"
Stormstar gets quiet because he knew that Castor was wrong and it was a fact. Castor squinches his eyes in disgust as he stares down the ambassador. He's the one that talked the Moonrunners out of bad situations so they won't wind up digging their own graves.
"Get outta my face! Your a disgrace. The Grizzilies don't give a f*ck..and you know what? Im starting not to give a damn either!" Castor shouted.
Scotty backed away. He didn't want to say anything else. Castors day will come. This plan didn't go so well.Soon it'll be the Moonrunners undoing.
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Queens, Grizzilies hangout...
"Hello my babies and young Boppers? How are you doing today? Well heres the word from the streets. The Facecrackers cracked some heads when they put the Five Points down for the count! Next our big highlight the VC Rangers said they aren't taking the Moonrunners tribute respectfully so they might be coming in full force! You heard that Moonrunners? You better get that crew from Queens to get off their behinds and help throw some fist! Adios."
Bear sits in his chair with a grim smile on his face. He shuffles through his desk and pulls out his shiny revolver. Its loaded and ready for action.
"You want help you got it!" Baby bear jumped from his seat and burst through the door.
Out in the living room of the mansion two of his best high rank soldiers, Bearclaw and Sparrow followed him out the door. They are on their way to Pelham. We'll see what unravels!
Chapter 5.....Bullet with your name on it!..Coming Soon!