Tremont 1979:Intro
It all began on the night of the conclave. A street legend, Cyrus A.K.A Magic Man died from a fatal homicide in front of over 100 hundred gangs. The unknown culprit That took his life away with one shot and shot only to the chest. This was totally unexpected and unbelievable. Now a gang named The Warriors were accused of murder of the riffs leader.There leader, Cyrus was inspired due to his Charisma and creativity about uniting gangs for a truce. With the lose of their leader,Cleon they make it out of Pelham, Bronx( Turnbull A.C Turf) Now their on their way to Tremont and on the subway they discover that the subway platform is on fire. I think you're wondering who set that godd*mn fire?
Tremont 1979
The streets of tremont were dark and windy. The street lights were dim and flickering on and off. Since Tremont was known to be the junkiest place in the New York City the city officals refused to help tremont become a better neighborhood. In tremont the number of murderings and Beatings decreased to 3% since the 1960s. The reason why is because a gang named the Orphans made the gang life lame which made other unknown gangs such as The Gorillas, Parlor mob Boys and the 5th street Spartans to be forced out the gang life. Well enough of that, lets find out who set that fire!
On 38th street by the Orphan clinic a couple of orphans were sitting on the proch listening to the radio about the incident that recently occured at the conclave in Van Cortlandt Park. One of the orphans, Tyler was pitching pennies on the brick wall in boredom. They wanted a good reason why they weren't on the riffs network. The other orphan, Kyle turned the radio off and knocked it off the porch.
"Why weren't we invited to the conclave?"Kyle asked.
Tyler shruggs his shoulders being clueless and didn't have the slightest idea.
"They told other gangs about it but they didn't invite us. Thats why they threaten to kill us if we found the meeting in the park. I hate the gramercy Riffs! Who'd they think they are? They don't own us!"
Klye takes a deep breath.
Tyler flings a penny at kyle "Shut up and stop acting like a little B*tch!"
Kyle grabs the penny off the cold concrete ground and stuffs it in his pocket. Tyler walks down the street ignoring Kyle's crazy gestures. In anger Tyler flips him off and walks away. He put his hands in his pockets wondering about the meeting in the park.
"Our leader, Sully..He's a dumb sucker, if our last leader, Jo-Jo was here we could have been the best gang in the whole city!"
He started to give more thought about his idea. To think that his fallen leder, Jo-Jo got wasted by a gang called the Gladiators two years ago. They found his body under the park bench of tremont. His body was cut up, it was cuts in places that you won't imagine! That day December 19, 1977 was a memory that sometime stuck inside his mind. Jo-Jo was born in 1956-1977. To get his mind off this homicide he went to a abandon house that was under the subway train station. Thiswas the orphans new home since they were just foster kids and they didn't have any guardians that cared about them.
Chapter 2
Firestarter
Swan_Jax vs Copperhead
Re: Swan_Jax vs Copperhead
That's really great stuff Copperhead.
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Chapter 2
Tyler walked into the rundown dilapidated house and saw the other orphans partying. Tyler was wondering why they were partying because they haven't did anything to help the orphans rep. No matter how much booze they store from the liqour store didn't really bother tyler at all. He knew that they didn't have any chicks because they were a bunch of lames. He was always looking out for himself and his dog jimmy that always spent time in the backyard.
Tyler walked outside to check on jimmy to make sure he was being treated right.
Jimmy ran out of the homemade dog house and rushed towards tyler wagging his tail while he barks.*Roaf! Roaf!
Tyler rubbed jimmy's black and white coated fur and gave him a hug."C'mon boy lets go eat!"
They ran into the house and noticed that the other orphans were gone. Jimmy scampered into the living room and jumped on the couch lying his head down. Tyler was in the kitchen getting a baked potato that was wrapped in aluminum foil out the refrigerator also he got a plate of casserole that had a metal spoon in it. He put them into the microwave when he got a box of fish sticks out of the freezer and set them on the stove. At the same time he turned both of the appliances on. He walked over to the sink to wash his hands until a voice startled him.
He looked over his shoulder and saw mercy.
"What do you want stupid bimbo?"
"Watch you mouth cuz I just might kick your a** myself so you won't be worried about having gangs run up on you. Now I was just asking could you get my sink out of the drain? And dumba** your not suppose to put aluminum foil in the microwave you'll burn your a** up!" mercy exclaimed.
Tyler reached his hand in the sink trying to retrieve the ring for mercy."Shut up...You always get on my nerves! I do what I want when I want!"
After five minutes he caught hold of the ring. The microwave and the stove were still running but the two were making some kind of popping noise. Tyler attempted to pull his hand out the sink but it got stuck. He glanced over his shoulder to find mercy, but she was gone. At this point of time he should have called Jimmy so he could get help but so many things were going through his mind at that time.
"Ouch....Ah MERCY!" he shouted in pain.
The smell of smoke filtered the air and traveled through out the house. Once tyler got a wiff of that smoke his intent to get his hand out of the drain grew. He peered over his shoulder to see the microwave hurling sparks and igniting small flames. It seemed like a cry for help wouldn't do any good at all. He looked over at the stove and saw grease falling into the flames that made the fire grow and consume the pot. When he witnessed this happen he started to yank his hand again. Now that the microwave and stove were catching fire, he's screwed.
He yanked his hand over 10 times, but no success. The fire started to grow even bigger and set the microwave on fire. Tyler snatched the rag of the sink and hit the pot calling himself trying to put out the fire. He hit it the second time and after that the pot fell over on the floor. The fire spreaded through the kitchen burning up the walls and tile.
Tyler eyes watered up with the deep intention to cry. He tugged his hand again and luckily he was let loose. He yanked it so hard that he fell on the floor. The fire almosy burned up his hand but he fortunately he got up and ran out the back door holding his bloody hand. He rushed down the street and arrived at a payphone. He put in 75 cents and dialed 911. With every button he pressed his bloody fingers slipped off of them in desperation to call the fire department.
"Hello? Operator!? I need help!" tyler said.
"Whats the probelm?"
"My house is on fire I live on 38th street.......Oh Sh*T!"
The phone slipped out his grasp.
He looked up at the house his eyes widened when he saw that the orphans new home was consumed by flames and not only that, the subway above the house caught fire.Tyler stood in the phone booth stunned.
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After 20 minutes the sirens of police and the fire trucks came by. The trucks parked in front of the burning house. They quickly jumped out the truck and quickly hooked up a hose to the hydrant. The fire was finally put to a end, but what about the subway fire? They put it out as well. Tyler found himself sitting on the back off the ambulance being treeted for his injured hand. He pulled up his head to hear two fire fighter talking.
"Were there any survivors?"
"We were too late... A dog died in that fire"
After tyler was treated for his injury he ran up to the guys yelling."Thats my dog jimmy!"
The two guys stared at him as he ran into the charred house. He kneed on the soft dirt that once was the living room but now its just gravel and mud. He started to dig through the gravel and dirt crying. "Im coming for you jimmy!Im comin! Please wait don't leave me, please!" He shouted in anger and sorrow.
Three days after that accident tyler finally got adopted by a middle class family. Finally this is what he was waiting for, a caring family that loved him. Now that he left the orphans he has a chance to straighten out his life. And for his dog, jimmy he will always keep him in mind and love him to the very end.A tragic lose.
THE END
Tyler walked into the rundown dilapidated house and saw the other orphans partying. Tyler was wondering why they were partying because they haven't did anything to help the orphans rep. No matter how much booze they store from the liqour store didn't really bother tyler at all. He knew that they didn't have any chicks because they were a bunch of lames. He was always looking out for himself and his dog jimmy that always spent time in the backyard.
Tyler walked outside to check on jimmy to make sure he was being treated right.
Jimmy ran out of the homemade dog house and rushed towards tyler wagging his tail while he barks.*Roaf! Roaf!
Tyler rubbed jimmy's black and white coated fur and gave him a hug."C'mon boy lets go eat!"
They ran into the house and noticed that the other orphans were gone. Jimmy scampered into the living room and jumped on the couch lying his head down. Tyler was in the kitchen getting a baked potato that was wrapped in aluminum foil out the refrigerator also he got a plate of casserole that had a metal spoon in it. He put them into the microwave when he got a box of fish sticks out of the freezer and set them on the stove. At the same time he turned both of the appliances on. He walked over to the sink to wash his hands until a voice startled him.
He looked over his shoulder and saw mercy.
"What do you want stupid bimbo?"
"Watch you mouth cuz I just might kick your a** myself so you won't be worried about having gangs run up on you. Now I was just asking could you get my sink out of the drain? And dumba** your not suppose to put aluminum foil in the microwave you'll burn your a** up!" mercy exclaimed.
Tyler reached his hand in the sink trying to retrieve the ring for mercy."Shut up...You always get on my nerves! I do what I want when I want!"
After five minutes he caught hold of the ring. The microwave and the stove were still running but the two were making some kind of popping noise. Tyler attempted to pull his hand out the sink but it got stuck. He glanced over his shoulder to find mercy, but she was gone. At this point of time he should have called Jimmy so he could get help but so many things were going through his mind at that time.
"Ouch....Ah MERCY!" he shouted in pain.
The smell of smoke filtered the air and traveled through out the house. Once tyler got a wiff of that smoke his intent to get his hand out of the drain grew. He peered over his shoulder to see the microwave hurling sparks and igniting small flames. It seemed like a cry for help wouldn't do any good at all. He looked over at the stove and saw grease falling into the flames that made the fire grow and consume the pot. When he witnessed this happen he started to yank his hand again. Now that the microwave and stove were catching fire, he's screwed.
He yanked his hand over 10 times, but no success. The fire started to grow even bigger and set the microwave on fire. Tyler snatched the rag of the sink and hit the pot calling himself trying to put out the fire. He hit it the second time and after that the pot fell over on the floor. The fire spreaded through the kitchen burning up the walls and tile.
Tyler eyes watered up with the deep intention to cry. He tugged his hand again and luckily he was let loose. He yanked it so hard that he fell on the floor. The fire almosy burned up his hand but he fortunately he got up and ran out the back door holding his bloody hand. He rushed down the street and arrived at a payphone. He put in 75 cents and dialed 911. With every button he pressed his bloody fingers slipped off of them in desperation to call the fire department.
"Hello? Operator!? I need help!" tyler said.
"Whats the probelm?"
"My house is on fire I live on 38th street.......Oh Sh*T!"
The phone slipped out his grasp.
He looked up at the house his eyes widened when he saw that the orphans new home was consumed by flames and not only that, the subway above the house caught fire.Tyler stood in the phone booth stunned.
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After 20 minutes the sirens of police and the fire trucks came by. The trucks parked in front of the burning house. They quickly jumped out the truck and quickly hooked up a hose to the hydrant. The fire was finally put to a end, but what about the subway fire? They put it out as well. Tyler found himself sitting on the back off the ambulance being treeted for his injured hand. He pulled up his head to hear two fire fighter talking.
"Were there any survivors?"
"We were too late... A dog died in that fire"
After tyler was treated for his injury he ran up to the guys yelling."Thats my dog jimmy!"
The two guys stared at him as he ran into the charred house. He kneed on the soft dirt that once was the living room but now its just gravel and mud. He started to dig through the gravel and dirt crying. "Im coming for you jimmy!Im comin! Please wait don't leave me, please!" He shouted in anger and sorrow.
Three days after that accident tyler finally got adopted by a middle class family. Finally this is what he was waiting for, a caring family that loved him. Now that he left the orphans he has a chance to straighten out his life. And for his dog, jimmy he will always keep him in mind and love him to the very end.A tragic lose.
THE END
Re: Swan_Jax vs Copperhead
I thought it was creative and Sad!
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Re: Swan_Jax vs Copperhead
Oh dont give us that junk!! ::)RRA wrote: Why StickWarrior?
Because I lost interest. I have a job. I go to school. I have a life, and unfortunately, I just couldn't get a story going without thoughts of mediocrity creeping through my fingers.
Besides, since I didn't enter a story in that round, I never lost. Its like boxing. You don't lose a match by throwing in the towel, you just quit.
So technically....I am still undefeated. I have a blemish on my record with "1" for Throwing in the Towell, but I'm still undefeated.
Care to directly challenge me to a story-brawl sometime?
Re: Swan_Jax vs Copperhead
here it is my story, i hope it doesnt suck
JULY 16 1979, the biggest gang in the city the riffs put out the word that there will be a meeting in vancortland about there being a truce with all the gangs, and become one, and the riffs leader cyrus was the one who planned this, but his right hand man masia told him sh@t could happen and someone could get killed but cyrus told him nothing will happen, these are my brothers. but little did cyrus know that his dumb idea would cause him to loose his life, get thousands of gang members arrested, and put the life of each member from a gang called the warriors at risk. the warriors had been blamed for killing cyrus and had also lost there leader due to the massive beating by the riffs. now they have to make it back to coney island and watch there backs. it was 11:00 pm and they where on home turf of the orphans the lamest gang around, but the reason they were there was because there was a fire on the metro train tracks and a few houses. so know they must walk to the next train station.
THIS IS HOW THE FIRE STARTED:
8:00 PM TREMONT- the pussiest and lamest gang around the orphans where celebrating cause of a small raid they did in the jones street boys turf earlier (thats why in the movie, in the meeting part all the jsb's are dirty, they rumbled with orphans and a few cops). 9 of the jsbs went up to the mmeting witch the orphans had no idea of, but they would surprised in a matter of time.
pedro- (afro man from the movie) yeah man we did it, we busted up a few jsbs and some cops
hicks-that was some hard core sh@t right there
you know why they where happy but this is all they did, jump 5 jsbs and run from cops and accidently run over there leader and scout.
suly- shust the f@ck up!
every thing was quiet, no talking, no beer crushing noises and they turned off the radio witch was playing some zeppelin.
sully- we didnt do anything, were pussies, we ran over 2 jsbs and bobed 5 of them and top top this sh@t off we ran from the cops!
jizzy- relax man
sully-you want me to waste you, you prick
jizzy- f you sully, f you
sully was going to throw some blows but jizzy walked away
rod- man sully you and jizzy have been friends forever why do you always argue eith him?
sully-screw it!
one of the orphans turned the radio back on and now abba was on and everyone booed, changed it to 9.46 and when they heard the sound of the lick that angus young does from ac/dc's dirty deeds done dirt cheap the party was back on.
8:45
jizzy went into a a store to see if the girl he liked was there, and she was.
alyssa- hi jizzy!
jizzy- WHATS UP alyssa how you doingg
alyssa- good just finishing up here.
jizzy- cool, hey alyssa were having a party down the street, would you like to come
alyssa- yeah in 5 min im off
5 min were up and alyssa's shift was over and closed the store.
jizzy-lets go!
alyssa and jizzy walked down to the party and in minutes there would be trouble and death
jizzy- so you still go to school
alyssa- yeah you should go go back your only 17
jizzy- i know but school sucks
alyssa- you cant be in a gang forever you know
jizzy- your right.
after 2 min of talking about going back to school jizzy decided that he would go back and apply to his old school where alyssa also went.
alyssa- im happy for you
jizzy- thanks, i cant be with these guys any more and with gang related activity, i need to.......
when they turned in a corner, there were jsbs's 30 of them at least armed and dangerous
jizzy- ALLYSA RUN
alyssa and jizzy ran but before jizzy got 5 feet he had a knife in his leg, allysa turned back and was coming to help jizzy but he told her to run. she listened and ran to the orphans hang out.
the jsbs were beating jizzy with bats and knifes. jizzy was screaming and the second a tear came out of his eye he died, stabbed 16 times and beaten with bats, jizzy was gone.
alyssa- sully jizzy in trouble
sully- what happen?
it got quiet again in the orphan party
alyssa - there jsbs's and there beating jizzy
sully said nothing and ran towards where alyssa worked and there he found jizzyies body with a knife in his chest with a not saying "orphans are dead, temont is ours
when all the orphans reached to where sully and jizzies body where they found what sully found and a crying sully
sully- round up the men where going to find these jsbs
pedro rounded up thirty men witch was all they had and walked down the streets of tremont looking for jsbs. they where still there at tremont cause the letter said all orphans would be wipped out that night.
part 2 jsbs, cops and a fire. coming before monday
JULY 16 1979, the biggest gang in the city the riffs put out the word that there will be a meeting in vancortland about there being a truce with all the gangs, and become one, and the riffs leader cyrus was the one who planned this, but his right hand man masia told him sh@t could happen and someone could get killed but cyrus told him nothing will happen, these are my brothers. but little did cyrus know that his dumb idea would cause him to loose his life, get thousands of gang members arrested, and put the life of each member from a gang called the warriors at risk. the warriors had been blamed for killing cyrus and had also lost there leader due to the massive beating by the riffs. now they have to make it back to coney island and watch there backs. it was 11:00 pm and they where on home turf of the orphans the lamest gang around, but the reason they were there was because there was a fire on the metro train tracks and a few houses. so know they must walk to the next train station.
THIS IS HOW THE FIRE STARTED:
8:00 PM TREMONT- the pussiest and lamest gang around the orphans where celebrating cause of a small raid they did in the jones street boys turf earlier (thats why in the movie, in the meeting part all the jsb's are dirty, they rumbled with orphans and a few cops). 9 of the jsbs went up to the mmeting witch the orphans had no idea of, but they would surprised in a matter of time.
pedro- (afro man from the movie) yeah man we did it, we busted up a few jsbs and some cops
hicks-that was some hard core sh@t right there
you know why they where happy but this is all they did, jump 5 jsbs and run from cops and accidently run over there leader and scout.
suly- shust the f@ck up!
every thing was quiet, no talking, no beer crushing noises and they turned off the radio witch was playing some zeppelin.
sully- we didnt do anything, were pussies, we ran over 2 jsbs and bobed 5 of them and top top this sh@t off we ran from the cops!
jizzy- relax man
sully-you want me to waste you, you prick
jizzy- f you sully, f you
sully was going to throw some blows but jizzy walked away
rod- man sully you and jizzy have been friends forever why do you always argue eith him?
sully-screw it!
one of the orphans turned the radio back on and now abba was on and everyone booed, changed it to 9.46 and when they heard the sound of the lick that angus young does from ac/dc's dirty deeds done dirt cheap the party was back on.
8:45
jizzy went into a a store to see if the girl he liked was there, and she was.
alyssa- hi jizzy!
jizzy- WHATS UP alyssa how you doingg
alyssa- good just finishing up here.
jizzy- cool, hey alyssa were having a party down the street, would you like to come
alyssa- yeah in 5 min im off
5 min were up and alyssa's shift was over and closed the store.
jizzy-lets go!
alyssa and jizzy walked down to the party and in minutes there would be trouble and death
jizzy- so you still go to school
alyssa- yeah you should go go back your only 17
jizzy- i know but school sucks
alyssa- you cant be in a gang forever you know
jizzy- your right.
after 2 min of talking about going back to school jizzy decided that he would go back and apply to his old school where alyssa also went.
alyssa- im happy for you
jizzy- thanks, i cant be with these guys any more and with gang related activity, i need to.......
when they turned in a corner, there were jsbs's 30 of them at least armed and dangerous
jizzy- ALLYSA RUN
alyssa and jizzy ran but before jizzy got 5 feet he had a knife in his leg, allysa turned back and was coming to help jizzy but he told her to run. she listened and ran to the orphans hang out.
the jsbs were beating jizzy with bats and knifes. jizzy was screaming and the second a tear came out of his eye he died, stabbed 16 times and beaten with bats, jizzy was gone.
alyssa- sully jizzy in trouble
sully- what happen?
it got quiet again in the orphan party
alyssa - there jsbs's and there beating jizzy
sully said nothing and ran towards where alyssa worked and there he found jizzyies body with a knife in his chest with a not saying "orphans are dead, temont is ours
when all the orphans reached to where sully and jizzies body where they found what sully found and a crying sully
sully- round up the men where going to find these jsbs
pedro rounded up thirty men witch was all they had and walked down the streets of tremont looking for jsbs. they where still there at tremont cause the letter said all orphans would be wipped out that night.
part 2 jsbs, cops and a fire. coming before monday
Re: Swan_Jax vs Copperhead
swan_jax wrote: here it is my story, i hope it doesnt suck
JULY 16 1979, the biggest gang in the city the riffs put out the word that there will be a meeting in vancortland about there being a truce with all the gangs, and become one, and the riffs leader cyrus was the one who planned this, but his right hand man masia told him sh@t could happen and someone could get killed but cyrus told him nothing will happen, these are my brothers. but little did cyrus know that his dumb idea would cause him to loose his life, get thousands of gang members arrested, and put the life of each member from a gang called the warriors at risk. the warriors had been blamed for killing cyrus and had also lost there leader due to the massive beating by the riffs. now they have to make it back to coney island and watch there backs. it was 11:00 pm and they where on home turf of the orphans the lamest gang around, but the reason they were there was because there was a fire on the metro train tracks and a few houses. so know they must walk to the next train station.
THIS IS HOW THE FIRE STARTED:
8:00 PM TREMONT- the pussiest and lamest gang around the orphans where celebrating cause of a small raid they did in the jones street boys turf earlier (thats why in the movie, in the meeting part all the jsb's are dirty, they rumbled with orphans and a few cops). 9 of the jsbs went up to the mmeting witch the orphans had no idea of, but they would surprised in a matter of time.
pedro- (afro man from the movie) yeah man we did it, we busted up a few jsbs and some cops
hicks-that was some hard core sh@t right there
you know why they where happy but this is all they did, jump 5 jsbs and run from cops and accidently run over there leader and scout.
suly- shust the f@ck up!
every thing was quiet, no talking, no beer crushing noises and they turned off the radio witch was playing some zeppelin.
sully- we didnt do anything, were pussies, we ran over 2 jsbs and bobed 5 of them and top top this sh@t off we ran from the cops!
jizzy- relax man
sully-you want me to waste you, you prick
jizzy- f you sully, f you
sully was going to throw some blows but jizzy walked away
rod- man sully you and jizzy have been friends forever why do you always argue eith him?
sully-screw it!
one of the orphans turned the radio back on and now abba was on and everyone booed, changed it to 9.46 and when they heard the sound of the lick that angus young does from ac/dc's dirty deeds done dirt cheap the party was back on.
8:45
jizzy went into a a store to see if the girl he liked was there, and she was.
alyssa- hi jizzy!
jizzy- WHATS UP alyssa how you doingg
alyssa- good just finishing up here.
jizzy- cool, hey alyssa were having a party down the street, would you like to come
alyssa- yeah in 5 min im off
5 min were up and alyssa's shift was over and closed the store.
jizzy-lets go!
alyssa and jizzy walked down to the party and in minutes there would be trouble and death
jizzy- so you still go to school
alyssa- yeah you should go go back your only 17
jizzy- i know but school sucks
alyssa- you cant be in a gang forever you know
jizzy- your right.
after 2 min of talking about going back to school jizzy decided that he would go back and apply to his old school where alyssa also went.
alyssa- im happy for you
jizzy- thanks, i cant be with these guys any more and with gang related activity, i need to.......
when they turned in a corner, there were jsbs's 30 of them at least armed and dangerous
jizzy- ALLYSA RUN
alyssa and jizzy ran but before jizzy got 5 feet he had a knife in his leg, allysa turned back and was coming to help jizzy but he told her to run. she listened and ran to the orphans hang out.
the jsbs were beating jizzy with bats and knifes. jizzy was screaming and the second a tear came out of his eye he died, stabbed 16 times and beaten with bats, jizzy was gone.
alyssa- sully jizzy in trouble
sully- what happen?
it got quiet again in the orphan party
alyssa - there jsbs's and there beating jizzy
sully said nothing and ran towards where alyssa worked and there he found jizzyies body with a knife in his chest with a not saying "orphans are dead, temont is ours
when all the orphans reached to where sully and jizzies body where they found what sully found and a crying sully
sully- round up the men where going to find these jsbs
pedro rounded up thirty men witch was all they had and walked down the streets of tremont looking for jsbs. they where still there at tremont cause the letter said all orphans would be wipped out that night.
part 2 jsbs, cops and a fire. coming before monday
sorry for the mistakes.