Red Soldierette (Updated 1/13)

[Space Toaster]

Red Soldierette
By Sarah B

Chapter 1
Introducing Rae

Rae Doyle grimaced as she stirred her now mushy cereal. It was her own fault, being so absorbed with the cut-out newspaper article she was reading. She enjoyed the article, except it distracted her to the point where her appetizing bowl of Froot Loops had turned into a bowl of rainbow vomit. She scooped up a spoonful, and let it fall back into the bowl with a wet plop. Rae sighed and picked up the bowl; dumping it into the sink and watching the colorful slop disintegrate as she rinsed it away. Her aunt came into the room, hung over and red-eyed.

“Morning, Raelene.â€

[The Jewish Juggernaut]

Great, detailed and flows well, i cant wait to see more.

[Space Toaster]

Chapter 2
Recruiting

Rae wasn’t exactly telling the truth when she said she was meeting friends. She was going up to Coney, but she wasn’t meeting anyone. She didn’t really have any friends at this point. She knew this one girl and they were pals for a while, until she got a boyfriend and all of a sudden she no longer had any time for Rae. She tried befriending a few guys, but each one ended up trying to make out with her. So she told her aunt she had friends so she didn’t send her to therapy again. Susan was not only an alcoholic she was also a bit of a worrywart. Every cough or sneeze was thought to be pneumonia or some other life-threatening disease. Rae developed a hatred of doctors through Susan. Not to mention everything that Susan found odd ended with Rae sitting with a shrink. She could picture it now:

“You don’t have friends? Dear God, what if you have antisocial personality disorder?! I’m calling Dr. Whathisface!â€

[ajax the warrior]

Cool fan fiction space toaster i like it keep up the good work.