Furies!!!: their story.(Finished) MAJOR NEWS IN THIS THREAD!

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Furies!!!: their story.(Finished) MAJOR NEWS IN THIS THREAD!

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Ok this is the story of the Furies from the night the of the conclave to well you will find out when you read.
I will tell you the story in an attempt to tell you the secrets and feuds,highs and lows of the furies.

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Furies stood in their hangout getting ready for the big meeting in the bronx.
"Why is Cyrus having this meeting?" Asked one of the Furies.
"Well, we will find out when we get there" replied zack(second in command(the one with the red and black face paint))
"where is Thurman?" asked another furie.
"don't know. I think he is getting ready." replied zack.
Thurman walked into the romm and nodded his head. all nine furies exited their hangout and headed towards the train station.
" I am not happy with this" said jack.
"well just keep soldiering. We have a real hevy rep. We are third in the rankings of the best gangs. just behind the turnbulls and riffs." said zack.
Thurman stoped and the other furies stooped aswell.
" some of you may wonder why there is 10 of us. Well i'm stayin. I'm not risking my lifr for a stupid meeting" Exclaimed Thurman.
All the Furies start looking at each other.Then start chatting to each other.
"QUIET!" shouted Thurman.
all the furies stop talking and look at Thurman.
"Zack will be in charge at the meeting. Keep silent there. Don't talk because thats what we are known for. not talking. Intimidation is our key. now you lot roll. the rest will patrol the night." explained Thurman
The Furies get on the platform and the train eventualy arrives and they enter the train not saying a word.
An old woman is sitting on a chair asleep. Zack walks up to her.
"BOO" said Zack and the woman woke up and saw there faces she passed out. The furies starts laughing fainly.
The train stops, and they exit.
And walk into the park where the meeting is held.

The Furies are waiting and are getting annoyed.
"When is he going to turn up?" asks a furie in a whisper voice.
"quite" repleid Zack.
The furies look around and see known gangs and gangs unknown.
The Cyrus turns up.
"Can you count Suckers, i say the future is ours. If you can count." sayed Cyrus.
Cyrus then climbs up the frame.
He gets half way.
"now look who we have here before us.we have got the Saracens sitting next to the jones street boys, we have got the moonrunners right by the Van Cortland rangers. nobody is wasting nobody. Now that is a miracle, and micracles are the way things ort to be. You are standing right now with 9 delegets from 100 gangs and theres 100 more. That's 20,000 thousends hardcore members. 40,000 counted affidiats, and 20,000 more not organised but ready to fight. 60,000 soldiers, and there ain't but 20,000 police in the whole town. Can you dig it. can you dig it. Can you dig it!" explains Cyrus.
The crowd starts cheering, but the Furies stand and say nothing.
"Now heres the sum total. one gang can run this city, one gang. Nothing would move without us allowing it to happen. it will take the crime syndicates, the police, because we have the street suckers. Can you dig it!" explains Cyrus.The crowd cheer again.But the furies stay silent
"The problem in the past has been the man turning us against one another, we have been unable to see the truth because we have been fighting for 10 sqaure feet of ground, our turf, our little peace of turf. Thats crap brothers, the turf is ours by right. All we have to do is keep up the general truce. take over one bourough at a time. secure our out trratory secure our turf, because it is all our turf." explained Cyrus. The crowd cheer agin but the Furies stay silent.

Bang!

A gunshot is heard. And Cyrus falls to the ground. Everyone freaks out then the cops arrive. Everyone starts running so the furies decide to too. The round up all there soldiers and barge there way through untill the find a hole the crawl under it and see the train station. They head towards. The train comes and they head off back home.

They arrive back and head back for their hangout. They walk in to here the news report.
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"shit it was chaos up there. Cyrus got shot." said Jack.
" We know. The radio told us. now listen" Replied Thurman.
"All right now, for all you boppers out there in the big city, all those street people with an ear for the action. I have been asked to lay a request from the Gramercy Riffs. It's a special for the Warriors. Thats the real live bunch from Coney, and i do mean the Warriors. Heres a hit with them in mind." say the dj.
"Who are the Warriors. Never heard of them" said a furie
" Probably because they are right down in the ranks" Said another Furie.
"Well we are gonna waste them for the Riffs no matter what. I will go with zack,jack,max and some others at one side of Riverside.The rest go on the other side. Be loking and don't let them get away if they try running away. We want to waste their asses. You hear me. Now lets role." Commanded Thurman.
The Furies all go out of their hangout collecting thwir bats while exiting. They all go to their positions and wait for the warriors.

After around 1 hour. The warriors show but only four.The furies look like they have them stranded in a semi circle.The warriors start to run and the furies give chase. The chase them down one street then another untill they get to the park. " of the Warriors break up and go into the darkness. But the Furies still chase the other 2. eventualy they stop and Thurman knocks a cowboy warrior down. manwhile another warrior punches the furie down. Thurman does his bat tricks then swings for the warrior who ducks, then he punches Thurman in the mid section.Thurman swings again but the warriors repeats his lats routene then knees thurman down. The other 2 warriors come and one of the starts swinging a bat which he knabed of the furie he knocked out earlier. The other one who came with him choked one of the furies out, while the guy that knocked thurman out waqs swingging more punches. the  he slammed one of the furies soldiers down and another one whacked one in the stomach 3 times, and the furies were defeated.
The furies got up after about 10 mins later. they heard a cop car coming and it was getting closer...
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The furies looked around nervously. Then they saw a blue and red flashing light in the distance. The cops were coming. The car came closer and closer. The Furies were too shatterd to run. Bu they walked into the shadows and hid there.
"Why the fuck are the cops here?" asked zack.
"How do i know" replied Thurman
The cop car eventualy passed by, and the Furies made their way back to their hangout.
When they made it they sat down on their benches and looked at each other in a worried look.
"Well this is fucked our rep up. Big time." said a Furie.
"Man my head. Who were those punks." Asked another Furie.
"The Warriors. We failed guys." Said Thurman.
All the Furies loked down very angrily.
"Those were some bad mother dudes, i never thought they would be that tough." Said jack.
"They were indeed. Now lets foget about this night and get on" Said Thurman.
All the Furies walked off and Thurman looked around.
"is this a sign of the end. A low gang beating us." Said Thurman fainly.

The next day the Furies met up in their hangout.
The Warriors made it home, but the Furies wern't very happy.
"It's wartime now guys. We have to earn our rep back.Lets go over to soho and put an end to those fucking clowns the hi hats. That should get our rep back up. Now round up all our soldiers and roll" Demanded Thurman
All the fuies et off for Soho by foot.
When they arrive They see  the Hangout of the hi hats.
Thurman grabs a cocktail and launches it through the window. The hangout blows up and it wastes' about 50 hi hats.About 20 come around the corner to see whats the fuss. They notice the baseball furies. Amd charge at them. The Furies Prepare their bats and swing at the hi hats. They connect and start beating on the Hi Hats till it's enough. The Furies start to tag
The Hi Htas burners. Then they parade round to find chatterbox. They look around till they find him at the circus. Thurman grabs a knife he got when he wasted one of the Hi hats. Throws it and it connects at the back of the throat. And chatterbox dies gradualy. The Furies get a cocktail and set fire to the circus. They run out. and make it too the train station. They are greated by 10 hi hats. Thurman whacks one over the head with a bat, and then a rumble goes on. The Hi hats get whiped out and the Furies go back to Riverside on a good note.
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They arrive back at riverside. They go inside their hangout to a big suprise. A turnbull whacks Thurman over the head with a 2x4. Zack get a pole to the ribs then the back. And th Turnbullsstart attacking the Furies till the Furies are down and out. The Turnbulls leave the Furies in a pile of their own blood. 20 mins later Thurman gets up, and looks around his hangout. he sees his own soldiers down in a pile of their own blood. Some have injuries which can be delt with at home. Some have brocken bones and one was dead. Thurman turned the radio on o listen to the report.
"Alright now boppers. Heres the latest on the street. The Baseball Furies took out the Hi hats. So the hi hats are no more, but they got a big suprise when they go home. The Turnbull ac's ambushed them in their hangout. Sorry Furies you are not on good form at the moment. You need to get your rep back up. In other news The Electric elimanators got a shock when they tried to dance through the moonrunners.Half of their soldiers are down and possibly out, next time you might not try to dance through the moonrunners. Thats the latest boppers" said the dj

Theres a knock at the door and a riff enters with a note in his hand.
Thurman gets up and stares right into his eys.
"Erm, i have been sent to send you a letter about a king of the gangs competition our top eight gangs will be attending. 3 members from each gang will be allowed to attend. It will be held at riverside park" says the riff.
Thurman snatches the letter off the riff and looks at it.
"will the Furies be attending?" asked the riff.
Thurman nods his head and the Riff leaves.
"Right, Zack and Jack are coming with me" Saaid Thurman.
"So it's at Riverside park, this is a massive chance to boost our rep." Says zack.
"we set of tommorow" says Thurman.

The next day at the tournement. The Furies look at the teams and members that have joined.

1. Warriors: Swan, Ajax and Snow.
2. Turnbulls: Nailz, Bob and Hammer.
3. Punks: Alex, Jamie and jim.
4. Furies: Thurman, zack and jack.
5. Monnrunners: Josh, posh and dosh.
6.Boppers: duke, jamal, omar.
7. Jones street boys: johnny, casey, and josh.
8. E. Elimanators:flash, dash, hay.


Warriors vs Boppers.
Jones street boys vs Turnbulls.
E. Elimanators vs punks.
moonrunners vs Furies.

Warriors beat Boppers.
Turnbulls beat JSB
Punks beat E. Elimanators.
Furies beat Moonrunners.


Warriors beat Turnbulls.
Furies beat Punks.

The Furies are in the final and are in their section talking.

"we are doing well lads. only Th Warriors to get through then we will lift that trophy." Says Thurman
"yeh. Yoiur the only gang member not been knocked out. But the warriors are a heavy set." says Zack.
"come on, lets move. we have a final to win" Say Thurman.

They walk out and face the warriors face to face, the bell rings and the final is underway...
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Please post some comments. I don't care if they bad. If it needs improvements, fell fee to say. If it's good feel free to say. I will continue after some comments.
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It's good and you've got a really good imagination to think of what went on that we didn't see in the movie. The only thing I would say is that you haven't really linked the sentences; there all stop start, if ya know what I mean.

But that's a small note. good job!
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i enjoyed reading it! thx!
but
The hangout blows up and it wastes' about 50 hi hats.
thats a little bit over top? ;)
you can't kill a whole gang, and specially not the badass-mimes!;)
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its a good story B. but you need some more detail.

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awesome story buddy can't wait for more beautiful action

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I don't know when the next part will be up, but i have a clue. It's after the Fan Fic contest. I'm getting ready for that. And thnks for the comments
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It is a good story but I agree that it needs more detail in the story other than that great
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the next part should be up by the end of this week.
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Thurman lookes straight at Ajax. he remebers him, it was the guy who wasted him on the night of the conclave. Thurman then punches Ajax and it makes him grogey. Ajax retaliates with a right hook. Thurman is shocked. He didn't expect anyone to get out of a grogey position so quick.Thurman then punches Ajax, who falls to the floor. Thurman then starts to kick on Ajax. Thurman kept on kicking him untill he was wasted.
The others wre not doing so well. Jack got wasted by Snow and Swan took care of Zack. So it was two on one. The cold air made it's way past the competators. Thurman stared right into Swans eyes. He turned to look into Snows eyes. Thurman Braced himself, we was against the odds. He's full of nerves, he wonders which one to attack first, he breifly closed his eyes, and when he opened them again he saw that Snow wasn't there, Thurman looked shock, he raised his fists. From behind Snow cracked Thurmans head. The Furies had lost. The Warriors were the victors. The Furies were down again. The Warriors wasted them for the second time. The Warriors celibrated their victory, they are top of the ranks, It will be hard to beat them now. A while after the celibrations. Thurman gradualy made his way to his feet. It was night time, and the park was empty. Only thing you could hear was the owls. Thurman held his neck as he was in pain. He felt he needed treatment, he went to his knees in pain, His fellow Furies made their way up. They went to help Thurman, but they could do nothing. Thurman layed on the wet floor. He had rained while they were out. They were all damp and their face paint was smudged, thurman passed out because of the pain.

Riverside general

Thurman woke up to find himself in a hospital bed. He could feel a sliht pain in his neck, but it wasn't has bad as before. he looked around, Nobody was with him. Thurman tried to get to his feet, but fell back down, he tried once more and got up this time. He slowly started to walk, He burst out of the door holding onto the walls as he walked.
"You need to get back in your bed" Said a male nurse. Thurman glared at him and punched him in the face. The nurse fell to the ground. Thurman looked at him angrily, then kept walking. He made his way out of the hospital to find some empty streets. It was dark, well it was the middle of the night. He saw the hangout in the distance. Thurman smiled. He slowly walked towards the hangout, He was still hurting, but he was determind to get back to see his friends and fellow gang members. He arrived back, he grind
"Home" Thurman said gasping to himself. He walked closer and got a big shock...
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Great fan fiction mate really good keep up the good work.
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He saw no Furies tag on the wall . He looked  closely and their was a new tag, it had a grey gun on it, it was shooting out smoke, and in the smoke there was black writing saying The Bangers. Thurman slowly and reluctently started to walk down the steep stairs, he noticed no baseball bats on the hangers, he kept moving. He came closer and closer untill he reach the bottom, he slowly looked inside. He saw some men wearing bown jackets smoking, and playing cards. One of them was a tall one, around 7'0 wearing a cap.
Thurman looked around even more and saw a jukebox in the corner, then a bar right by it. He looked further still and saw some guns hanging on the wall.
"Who are you?" said a voice.
Thurman turned and looked at the men who were carrying pipes and all sorts of wepons, they looked ready to attack, ready to pounce any moment. Thurman said nothing an left the hangout.

After Thurman left he was suprised, suprised to see no Baseball Furie anywhere.
"Thurman" Shouted a voice.
Thurman turned to look at a group of men. He couldn't recognise them at first, but then he relized who they were. They were his Baseball furies but not wearing their colours or facepaint. He smiled and looked at them with joy.
"Whats gone on?" asked Thurman.
"We decided to go seperate ways. We were fed up of this gang shit and running the city crap, once you went in hospital we thought for hours on end to see what plans we could have for the future. We had no future, so we decided to stop the Furies and give our hangout to those Bangers who are a new gang. We still think it's the right thing to do. The Furies are nomore" Replied Zack.
Thurman stared at them, he turned and ran of in the distance never to return again.


The End
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