The Rogues: Luther's Mission

[Luther828]

This is one I wrote about what maybe could have gone on with The Rogues before the big meeting.
Hope you like it and don't be frightened to tell me if something's bad.
There is more chapters on the way.

Chapter 1: The Promise

“ Luther, you know this is your final chance. If you do what I want, you can have my place when I retire, if you don’t do what I want, you know you’re out. But that’s if I’m in a good mood. If I ain’t, then you’ll get wasted, if those Riffs haven’t get you already. You hear Luther!”
“ Alright boss, chill. Gimme the gun and the nine losers who are able to hand a gun over to yours truly here,’’
“ Don’t get cocky Luther. Remember, you’re messin with the biggest gang in the city here, and you ain’t that good!”
“ I can do it, I know I can. How hard can it be? All I have to do is shoot someone. I don’t matter how many soldiers you got when someone pulls a gun out,”
“ What about getting the gun past security. What about shootin’ him without getting found out. You haven’t thought about it have you! Well, you better think about it before you get to that meeting, cause I want my job done. Cause I want to have the streets. Cause I don’t want a truce!!! Now shut up, get your colours on and go do my job!” The Boss handed Luther the handgun, 5 bullets and showed him his delegates. There was Luca, Johnny, Stewie, Jimmy, Paulie, Doug, Mitch and Max. “ Where’s Cropsey?” Luther asked.
“ That wimp ain’t going, the loser can’t even soldier. The only reason he’s in this gang is cause I’m married to his lame f**k of a mother!” replied The Boss
“ I want him in my delegates. Cropsey’s my best friend,”
“ OK, you can have him. But I have to say; he could hinder your chances. I don’t know why you want him anyway, you always take the p**s and boss him around,”
“ He’s coming. Jimmy, out!”
“ What the f**k! Ahhhhhh, s**t!” complained Jimmy.
“ Right boys, the time has come. Once Luther has put on his colours and his Warlord’s headband, you’re gonna be going. Now, I want you to look after that crazy motherf****r, he can lose control at any moment. And remember, don’t get wrecked. That’s all I ask from you guys,” Luther emerged from the room he was changing in with full colours and his Warlord’s headband on.” Were you talkin’ bout me?” he asked.
“ No, just saying that you’ve gotta go now. Luther, you’re sure that you can do this?”
“ I promise!”

[The Jewish Juggernaut]

Dude, I like it- the unknown voice gives a lot to wonder about 8)

[Luther828]

Thanks, that's the effect I was trying to look for. I wanted to make that character very mysterious. One question, do you mind if I use your gang in one of the chapters?. It's nothing bad.

[The Jewish Juggernaut]

Dude, make it bad. We are enemies to the end. I want some bad ass trash talking. Off course don't make my gang look like wimps.

[The Swan]

Well, this is a Very Interesting Point of View of that Point, to be honest I don't like it so much... but wait, The Story is VERY GOOD!!!
That's only my Opinion about Luther...
So, Luther828, Great Job... waiting for Next Chapter!!! 8)

[Luther828]

Thanks The Swan! The next chapter is coming now! on The Rogues: Luther's Mission. PART 2! and Chapter 3 is ready. The Rogues: Luther's Mission. PART 3. These two ain't as long.

And The Jewish Juggernaut, thanks for lettin me use em and I will make you very, very bad!

1 hour later: Chapter 4 is now ready on the topic The Rogues: Luther's mission.PART 4.
Sorry for starting new topics for new chapters, wrong way to do it. Leave all your comments on this topic tho, stating what chapter you're talking bout.

Thnx

[ajax the warrior]

I love your story its awesome great story.

[Luther828]

Thanks; didn't expect anybody to like any of my stuff!

[warrior9721]

R U kidding? The rise and fall of Lucifer?!?! A great story! I read it about eight times, dude!

[Luther828]

You've read it that many times? I haven't even read it nearly as many times as you have! (and i wrote it)
I still doubt my work, whatever anybody says. I'm like that with everything.

[warrior9721]

You shouldn't be like that, tough. You have some great stories goin', as do i. We both have a real ear for this...business.