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GramercyRiff99 wrote: What is this other writing site?

Baby Bear wrote: its not actually a writing site but its a site called Predator hunted. They always nickpick little things in my story and turn them into big mistakes.

Once there was a man who always wished he could die he tried boungie jumping shooting himself and using a flamethrower but they did not work he always lived so one summer he had a oppium overdose so he could move or fell nothing it was summer and a predator was nearbye he then could only fell nothing after a while the predator started jumping through the city it was a bad blood then later there was a group of people coming bye he had laid out some barbed wire one bye one there necks were scliced blood spilled down there necks the wire was cutting deeper and deeper until it cut all there heads off simaltinously the predator then ran away after taking the bloody heads he than saw another gruop lined up with there brief cases getting to work he shot a spear from his gun and and it hit all of them there was a purplish red spiral running through the air the groaneed as they hit the wall they kept going and ther now were ppl rats and electronics on the spear. they fell in ocean then sharks ate the spear the point of the spear made it bleed causing a feeding frenzy the predator laughed then started breaking heads in a bloody mess he eventually came to the bathroom with the odd suiccide man in it he took him bye the legs and RIPPPed them apart then through them on the wall the blood started to spray the predator then riped the mans arms off and woth the mans last thought he said i don't want to die.

GramercyRiff99 wrote:

Baby Bear wrote: its not actually a writing site but its a site called Predator hunted. They always nickpick little things in my story and turn them into big mistakes.

Ahahahaha. They have no right to say you suck. In fact, I just checked them out and looked at a few fics. You're a better writer than most of them, hands down.

BaseballFury100 wrote: Man, who cares if somebody doesn't like your writing and people say it sucks,  unless  someone who has actually wrote a book and got it published and it sold at least 1 copy, says your writing is lame, then thats when you should be thinking about what others think, a bunch of losers on the internet who play critic on forums mean nothing, PM a copy to your next or most recent writing and i want to read it.

Baby Bear wrote:

BaseballFury100 wrote: Man, who cares if somebody doesn't like your writing and people say it sucks,  unless  someone who has actually wrote a book and got it published and it sold at least 1 copy, says your writing is lame, then thats when you should be thinking about what others think, a bunch of losers on the internet who play critic on forums mean nothing, PM a copy to your next or most recent writing and i want to read it.

in that case check out some of my other stories on this forum. I have some stories here.