the warriors-a love story chapter 17

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the warriors-a love story chapter 17

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ok guys here's the big answer to the big question:

                                chapter 17
                                coney beach

Dianna just stared at him as he was kneeling down on one of his legs, it felt like the whole world was going in slow-motion as she was thinking hard but really it had only been 20secounds and then she exitedley said"YES, I WILL", the moment she said that swan jumped up and kissed her then put the beautiful white-gold diamond ring on!! she stared at the ring in amazement and asked"OMG this is gorgeous where did you get all the money for this?"
"well im a warrior aint i so ive just bin saving up and doing errands for my allies, and protection money really"
"oh swan this is the best ring ever i love you"
"i love you to, darlin"!! and with that they fell into each others arms and fell on the sandy beach kissing and embracing each other. cochise was on the roof of the hangout smoking a ciggie with cowboy:
"well cowboy it looks like we gotta dress smart and slick,for once, ha i might even get me a wife at a this wedding"
"well im certainley wearing this hat to thier wedding", after they had had a smoke they went back inside to party on but kept the wedding a seceret!!

The next morning swan woke up and was glad to see he was in his own bed,with his wife-to-be. he got up and kissed dianna on the cheek then went into the shower and got dressed into his colours, getting ready to go out to his hangout but before he went out he fed fletcher and bathed him and then but his comfy red baby dungerees on and then he put his baby warriors vest him seen as it looked like it was fletchers favourite thing to wear, swan laughed at him as fletcher's chubby little face gave him a cheeky smile and he said"ok cheeky-charlie dada's gotta go but mamma will see to you today until i come back bye my little soilder" and with that swan kissed his son on the head and went to tell dianna who was already awake that he'd be gone for about 2hours and then he would come back to spend some qaulity time with his baby and fiance. swan was strolling along coney's streets when he saw a teenaged boy getting beat up bye some thugs in an alleyway swan hid and listened to thier conversation:
"he you little asshole you bin messin around with my girl"
"no-please just let me go, i didnt do nothin i just walked her home from van-courtland park coz it was very dark and she seemed like she was lost"
"well i dont believe a word of that you little bastard", he punched him in the stomach and winded him then kicked him in the face, he finished off by saying"if i ever catch you near my girl again,your dead, ok",...and then swan jumped out and grabbed him and pulled him up agianst the wall and explained"hey dont you dare do that to him agian, ok have you saw the size of him compared to you you asshole"
"i dont give a fuck superman". swan punched him 5 times in the stomach and then headbutted him, then the man fell to the floor uncouncious, he then looked at the teenaged boy he had dark black hair and was very musly and he was medium sized and looked very atheletic and he had emerald green eyes. the boy looked up at swan then passed out, swan picked him up and carried him over his shoulders, and he knew exactly where to take him!! the boy woke up and looked around as he saw about a 100 red-vested dudes looking at him, his eyesight was kinda blurry but he could work out that he was in some-sorta hangout, after a few secounds he could see probally he looked around more and nearly freaked out as he saw lots of gang-members everwhere. swan came up to him and said" hey little dude ya probally wonderin who we are well we are the coney island warriors, bassicaly we're a gang but dont freak coz i took you here patch you up look" the boy looked at his stomach and face seeing there was a bandage around it and he said" thank you but i dont understand why you helped me??", swan laughed and said"because you look like a fighter what i mean is even you get knocked out in a couple of hours you'll be up walking around agian and i think we need someone like you kid, so are you in"
"yeah ok", and then he shook swans hand and everyone cheered at thier new-recruit. vermin asked the kid"whats ya name kid", the kid looked and said"delanie"
"how old are you, kid"
"16"
"and have you got a nickname"
"yeah champ coz i used to box alot and ive won my fair-share of trophy's", vermin laughed and said"your that good that we dont need to even test ya, so what are you good at mainly"
"well i know my way around the streets alot and i can easliy get the cops of my tail coz i know a few hiding places"
"well from now on your our new scout that means if we're ever lost you can derict us where to go and you can pick the best routes to go for us and like you said if we need hiding to get some cops off ower ass then ya know we can look to you bro, so welcome to the family champ"!!

ok that was the first part of chapter 17 and i'll be doing some more later or tommorow and i hoped you liked it, until next time adios boppers!! :D 8)

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  Great start of to the chapter  :D Champ sounds awesome! and YAY for Swan and Diana

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DOIN GOOOOOOOOOOOD :shock:
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause

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aaah this is gonna go on forever like a soap  :p sky+ !!
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Another good chapter. Yay for Swan & Dianna getting married, hopefully nothing spoils it in the last few chapters. Champ also sounds cool, hope he plays a role in the conclusion of the story.  8)

So yeah, doing good, just keep this good work coming until the last word, then you can relax.  :D

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aww thanx guys agian and you dud for your endless compliments and yeah it will be ending quite soon but not to soon coz i love writing it for you guys to read it!! oh and ican  asure you that diannas wedding will be good :D(and thats the only spoiler your getting :lol:), also tomoz i will be writing some more and once agian thanx boppers adios!! :D

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you can always continue it in a sequel? so u end the story-arc and then start a new one.
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well i just like making different fan-fics i mean im not always gonna do a sequel but i might do a sequel to this but we'll see,we'll see!!

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ok dudes this is the part 2 of chapter 17:

                                  the next part of chapter 17
                                  the hangout

Champ shouted"cool lets have a party!!" and the warriors cheered and partied, swan played cards for 15mins and won 50dollars and he said to cochise"victory is sweet and this will do for my wedding-oh shit, i was not ment t-
"its ok warlord we no me and cowboy were sitting on the roof-top when we heard you and dianna say it"
"oh well i guess im gonna get married then"
"haha you said it man", and everyone crowded around him asking questions and cheering while they were drinking thier beers, after about 5 more minutes,swan went home!! he walked in and sgut the door quetily behind him and saw dianna putting fletcher to bed she saw swan and walked over to him and said"hey baby, did you tell them", he looked and replied"yeah i sure did", she kissed him and then hugged him, she explained"so when do you think we should get married how about next month agust the 3rd"
"that sounds like enough time to sort things out" and he fell on the couch kissing her for about 10mins, he looked up into diannas eyes as she sat on him, and he said"i love you and i cant believe your gonna be my wife"
"i know and i think we should ya know get some practice in before our honeymoon if you know what i mean". then she bent down to kiss him, he stared and said"what now but im tired and ya know doing it takes the energy out of yeah"
"yeah but least its good" she replied flirtly, she started kissing him on his chest and took his vest off but before she could continue swan said"erm you want us to do it on the couch"
"well yeah i mean nobody can see can they??" he smiled and added"no i guess they cant"!!

the next day swan thought he should start to plan things about what he wants the men to wear and stuff and for dianna to plan the girl stuff and she could pick the flowers and little items and he can make the ivotations. so to keep things a suprise dianna thought it would be best to move out and move into her friends house sally in bensonhurst and have sally and her other friends help her to decide what wedding dress to wear, and swan would have the warriors to help him!!

Ok warriors that was the final part of chapter 17 and i know it is short but i felt that it would be good to do that because then i would have more time to plan what the weding would be like and for use to have a little guess in your mind to see hwat it will be like so you wont find out what happens in chapter 18, and i hoped you enjoyed it and till next time adios boppers!! :D

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doing good :D
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  Great chapter! Now i really have to see how this wedding goes!

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Another nice chapter. Short, but sweet, and all that remains now is the wedding & the final chapter; which I'm sure will be as good as the rest of  the story. This fan-fic certainly deserves an awesome ending.  8)

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