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sorry about leave it till late when i said i wud do it ages ago but here:

                                  chapter 20
                                  swan and dianna in las-vegas!!


Swan and dianna had been in las-vegas for 4days now and were loving it!! they were earning big money in the casino's(probally's coz they were cheating but still) and they were having the time of thier lives being able to splash loads of cash on posh hotel's and they were being very romantic too!! dianna was in the jacussi in thier hotel and swan came in to join her and he moved next to her and said"i wonder if my bro's are ok and if little champ is fine ya know with him being young he's at risk", dianna rolled her eye's and exlpained"he'll be fine ya know the warriors are the best but you dont have to worry coz they're strong ok so just stop worrying about everything and just relax". then she grabbed him softly and made out with him and then swan started taking her bra off then, knock,knock, swan said"aww man someones at the door i'll have to go check it out!! dianna signed and then replied"oh ok" and then he kissed her and got out the jacussi and then answered the door:
"yeah what do you want"
"the phone down-stairs rang and asked for you mister johnson"
"oh ok".... then he shoved past the room service dude and went down-stairs and picked up the phone:
"yeah this is george johnson what do you want"?
"hey it's me champ"
"oh hey kid, so how's the gang"
"fine well...sorta fine listen i came on here to tell you that there was this gang called the preacher's and they wanted coney and we wiped half-of-thier gang out so we've sorta started a war but dont worry everything's under control man rembrandt kept fletcher at ya mamma's and snow is making the warriors work hard to secure the place up so,.. wa fine"
"WHAT THE HELL DO THEY WANT A WAR WITH US FOR..AWW MAN I'LL HAVE TO COME BACK TO CONEY AND EVERYTHING"
"hey dont worry man you just enjoy yourself we've got it sorted and oh dont tell your lady coz ya know what girl's are like she'll end up screaming so just go have fun until you want to come back"
"ok bro look after yourself and oh i'll be coming home in 3day's so yeah you tell snow ok, goodbye"
"bye", and with that swan hanged up and then sat-down for 10mins to think and then decided he'll just forget about it seen as he can alway's trust his brutha's to sort things out!!

                                  the warriors hangout

After that champ told snow what swan had said and snow said back that he wouldnt let him down and that champ is a good soilder then champ went to play card's with vermin,cochise and ajax, about half-way through the game ajax noticed that champ was staring at some chick dancing, ajax said"hey kid if your interested in her go over there and dance with her she look's like your type, go, on go", champ smiled and replied"ok i will". as he was cooly walking over to this chick cochise and ajax were cheering him on, he turned around and signed sshh and then they shut-up. when he got next to her he couldnt stop staring at her big juicy lips and beautiful blonde hair and her gorgeous figure and smile, she noticed him within a secound and asked"hey what's your name"
"erm champ, your's"
"daisy, so are you in this gang too"?
"yeah, i sure am", then he turned around and pointed at the logo on his red vest, she smiled and asked"so how old are you, champ". he causaully replied"im 16and a half, you"
"oh im just went 16 about 2month ago, so do you wanna dance"
"sure" and with that they danced to knock-on-wood daisy's favourite song.

At about 5pm rembrandt decided to go to swan's mamma's to take fletcher out to give fletcher's grandma a break and as he was walking out he saw daisy and champ making out and he laughed and teased"jesus you should get a room buddy haha" and then he walked down the street to go get an ice-cream one for him and one for fletcher, he smiled thinking of fletcher's pleased chubby face when he see's what uncle rem's got. he knocked on and asked for fletcher and then he got him and put him in his push-chair and gave him his choclate ice-cream and took him to the hangout, to see his other uncle's!!

Ok guys that was part1 of chapter 20 but i will be doing the secound part of this chapter tomoz or on tuesday and i hoped you enjoyed this part and until next time adios, bopper's!! 8)

I STILL LOVE THE STORY

hey guys have you noticed that the lady warriors hasnt been on writing in a long long time

Indeed. In fact, the whole of the fan-fic section seems to be in the middle of a slump.

Quick, wargod, go write a story and get it posted. 

And that goes for the rest of you too, this section deserves more activity than it gets.  8)

Dud wrote: Indeed. In fact, the whole of the fan-fic section seems to be in the middle of a slump.

Quick, wargod, go write a story and get it posted. 

And that goes for the rest of you too, this section deserves more activity than it gets.  8)

lol well you are one of the few with the gift of writing/typing i like your fan fics i just never got to post my opinions on them because of my 5 posts a day but i see other people posting more then 5 a day so i might too

Covington: Say there, Snodgrass! Have you read the new Dud fiction?
Snodgrass: Of course! That fellow has the gift of typing!

4nik8 wrote: Covington: Say there, Snodgrass! Have you read the new Dud fiction?
Snodgrass: Of course! That fellow has the gift of typing!

Billington: indeed
williams: quite
buzznik: certainly

ok guys sorry for the long,long,long wait but here is part 2:

                                                        part 2 of chapter 20


Rembrandt walked through the door and straight away everyone cooed and awwed over thier smallest warrior,fletcher!! after about 10mins fletcher was really tired so rem put him in his push-chair near the gym area so he could get some rest. snow came over and sat on the couch next to champ to watch the news and the news reporter explained"this morning at 10:00am a much loved police officer harrison committed suciude and jumped infront of a train in the bronx" as the news reporter trailed on fletcher debated"no way has he committed suciude them asshole,baldy-headed fuck's the turnbull a.c's woulda pushed him infront of the train man", snow looked at him and agreed"yeah they defonately have killed him no doubt about that". after about a hour of talking and drinking a skull suddenley came smashing through the warriors hangout window, the warriors jumped with shock and snow went over and examined it and lifted the note out of it and it read,you warriors are gonna pay for what you did to my scout travvie and all the rest of my men and tonight when we wreck youse up big time we'll then take coney island along with it signed by the preachers warlord phrofettie!! 2 secounds after that 10 moltive cocktails came shooting through the window and it set fire to the roof and some of th furniture,snow saw this and quickly but calmly explained"ok the preachers have sent us a note saying they want coney but we're not going to give-up coney just yet and they are probs outside right now so get packed and cowboy,rocket,wire youse three will stay behind and get everyone to safetey and trying but out the fires,so warriors ARE YOU READY"
"FUCK YEAH" and with that they charged outside and rumbled with the preachers, snow got to action straight away and went down the steel-stairs and got the only fire extinguisher they had and got to work putting the little fires out while the other three rescued people from there hangout!!

Meanwhile outside the warriors were holding up well in the rumble and espically ajax because he was being exactly what he was A FOUR-MAN ARMY!! he ran up to one preacher and charged at him and ajax punched him in the face several times and then slammed he's head on the wall and that was the end of that preacher, he fought for another 10mins when all of a sudden 3 preachers cornered everyside of him!! the first one(the one at his right-hand side) charged at him so he elbowed him in the face then the secound one(the one at his left-hand side) came at him so he tossed him on a wall then got a bottle and  smashed it over the preachers head and then he went up to the final one and said"do you really want that to happen to you", the preacher was only a young boy so that is why he did not want to kill him and asked him that qestion, the preacher  answered"ok you win im out of this gang and thanks for letting me be"...ajax smiled and then the preacher took his colours off and ran and just before ajax turned around vermin shouted"ajax look out behind you", ajax turned around to find a really muscly man(phrofetties soilder and right-hand man jesus) charging at him so ajax reacted quick and punched him the face and knee-slammed him in the gut then passed him to vermin who cracked his neck. ajax wiped his brow and said out of breath"thanks man", vermin smiled and replied"anything for a brotha".

Back in the hangout it wasnt looking so good the fire extingiusher foam had ran out and the moltives were getting thrown in by the dozen, also the roof was starting to cave in abit, so snow full of rage went outside and saw that there was only about seventine preachers left and he ran up to the leader and punched him with a lft and a right then kicked him in the balls and kept on kicking him and then fianally wiped out foxes good luck fox knife out(fox gave it to snow on his last birthday before the conclave) and stabbed him in the gut then he said"my god have mercy on you soul and one more thing dont ever fuck with a warrior, we're the best"
"fuuuck y-youu" was the last word that came out of phrofetties mouth before he died!! ajax went over to snow(the warriors had wiped out all the rest of the preachers) and patted him on the shoulder"come on man let him lie" snow looked up at him and cried"look what they done to my hangout man, look", the warriors looked in shame at the mess what the wimpy-preachers had done. all of a sudden champ explained"do you hear that omg its fletcher, he's still in there", champ ran in and rembrandt was going to but before he could vermin stopped him and said"let him be rem he'll have a better chance then saving him then you and what were you thinking leaving a baby in the hangouut when it's on fire".
"oh what have i done? i forgot all about him being in there coz he was downstairs at the door-way and i guess nobody saw him and now he's gonna die becos of me and vermin i cant live with that, oh im sorry fletcher"... and with that he leaned on vermin's shoulder and cried helplessley. champ was in the hangout and couldnt see a thing!! the hangout was filled with black,foggy smoke, champ heard fletcher crying and said reasuringly"it's ok uncle c's gonna get you out, dont worry", he knew he had to act quick he heard the radio making a noise so he knew he was close to the steel-stairs and then he quickly went down them and found fletcher and he then put his bandanna on fletcher's mouth and ran out the hangout door's to safety!!

As soon as he got outside he gave the baby to rem and then collapsed on the floor, daisy saw this and ran up to him screaming"NO MY BABY, NO NO NO I LOVE HIM OH PLEASE GOD"!! then the ambulance came and took poor champ away with daisy and then the fire engine came and put out the fire then snow thought the best thing he could do was to go to the saracen's hangout to recover form the shock and to try and figure out how to fix the warriors dear hangout!!

ok guys i hoped you liked that chapter i will be doing part3 really soon, thanx boppers adios!! 8)

i been wonderin where you was and i love the story still

4nik8 wrote:Covington: Say there, Snodgrass! Have you read the new Dud fiction?
Snodgrass: Of course! That fellow has the gift of typing!

I lol'd, thank you. And thanks wargod.   

But anyway, moving onto this story: it's good to have you back lady warrior, and with a very good chapter. Good to see the Preachers get what they deserved, good to see Champ be a hero (but I hope he's okay ) Also feel sorry for Snow and the rest of the Warriors, and can't wait to see how Swan reacts. Keep it up lady warrior, this is as good as ever.  8)

ok here's part 3 where hopefully the warriors hangout will be back up and running :

                                                    part 3 of chapter 20
                                                    bensonhurst-the saracens turf


Snow and the warriors were at the saracens hangout front door,it had been a long and dreadful night and snow felt like he had in someway failed swan, his brotha.cochise went up to the shabby wooden door and knocked on then edge answered with a beer in his hand(they must of been having a party) he asked"hey warriors whats up?", snow looked glumly and answered"well...its a long story but our hangout has been,its been nearly destroyed and i was wonderin if we could take refuge here until we figure somethin out...i mean if it's any problem i'll understand-
"no of course its not a problem my friends come on in" and he holded the door open to let the warriors stroll in!! when they got inside snow looked to see the party music had stopped and every saracen was staring at the devasted looking warriors-even the dude making out!! edge went over to his saracens and explained"ok listen up saracens the warriors are gonna stay here until they can find a way to fix up thier hangout ok so because it will be cramped in here i suggest that some of youse go on patrol and hang around on the streets for a bit until they leave in about 2days ok so no fighting coz of course we are allies and if any of youse fight with the warriors you will be excluded from this gang for a week or so, have you got that saracens"
"yes" they all said in unison and then they got back to partying.

Later on that night ajax decided he should phone swan and tell him about what happened, so he did. he dailed the number and waited for it to pick up:
"hey who is it
"hey swan whats up it's ajax"
"you sound sad are you alright"
"yeah but i dont know if you'll be when you hear what i will be telling you next"
there was a tense but silent pause....
"the rest of the preachers came this evening and we wiped them out but they were throwing moltives on the roofs and in the windows,a dozen at a time and all of the furniture has been burned and the roof has sorta caved in so we need to fix it up"
"omg i cant believe what them slimy bastards did, aww man and im due home soon so youse are gonna have to act quick but dont worry am not angry with youse and i wish i could come home know but i cant because this ticket is only for agust the 11th my birthday"
"oh man im sorry man warlord and so is snow and i'll seeya when i seeya bye"
"bye brotha and tell snow he did well". then ajax hung-up and went to snow and told him what he had said and he told rembrandt that he never told him about what had happened to baby fletcher rem looked with a guilty face and then they just all fell asleep on the floor and chairs!!

The next day snow woke up and knew he had to start getting things organized for when swan came back for his birthday party in the hangout, so he phoned the re-construction company(coney island re-construction is what the company was called) and said that would they re-build the roof of the hangout and inside but he said for extra money could they work a very late shift and they agreed and then he went to the hangout to see what had survived and the gym area had survived,the t.v,the stero,pool table,arcade machine and some of the tabled and chairs. so then he went to a store and bought a brand-new red saude couch and got some tables and chairs from the black beauty(the local pub) and other bits and bobs and then by the time it was 4:00pm he was finished he went back to the saracens hangout and told the rest of the wariors and they praised him saying that swan would be proud of him. ajax and cochise were playing poker with one of the saracen's members called ratty he was winning but cochise noticed somethin strange about the way he was playing it and whispered in ajax's ear"hey i think he's cheating coz his pokers look just a little bit different to the ones we've got and they look like there in order", ajax quitely said"yeah he must be cheating coz nobody's ever beat me in poker not even cleon when he was alive", just then ratty said to him out of interest"hey so i saw your hangout the other day it was a real mess haha", just then a flash of rage went through ajax's body and his muscles felt like they were going to gouge out of his skin and then he just jumped up and shouted"YOU LITTLE DIRTY RAT DONT YOU EVER CALL MY GANG,ALLIES OR NOT AND YOU WERE CHEATING GIVE ME MY 300DOLLARS BACK BEFORE A WIP YOUR ASS", then everyone stopped what they were doing warriors and saracens as they saw this big-bad wolf in fornt of them going threatining a fellow allie then edge and snow ran over when ajax started to headbutt ratty and making his mouth and nose bleed herendously, ratty pleaded"STOP MAN STOP, ok here's your money you fucking maniac", edge and snow grabbed hold of ajax just incase he went for him agian and they got the money from ratty. edge glared at ratty and ajax and said"get outside now,THE BOTH OF YOU!!" there was a loud oooh going around the room and just before snow,edge and the two men went outside snow shouted"AND YOUSE ASSHOLES CAN SHUT THE FUCK UP TOO!!" and the kept thier mouths trapped-shut after that!!

The two leaders went outside and spoke sternerly but lightly to ajax and ratty and snow warned ajax and took his knuckle-dudters from him and his precious leather clothes and edge banned ratty from player poker and excluded him from the gang for a week, after that ajax went away from the over crowded-hangout and decided to chelax and hit the town with vermin and cochise for some wool, old habbits die hard! rembrandt stood up and explained"yeah warlord am going to see champ i owe him one", snow lightly smiled and replied"ok bro be careful". rem went outside and got a cab to bensonhurst medical center(where champ was located at) it took him 20minutes and when he got there he breathed in and out slowly and walked in to be greeted by the kind old lady receptionist:
"how can i be of service?"
"im looking for delanie whitfeild"
"oh here's in room 14 just along the right-hand side corridor"
"thank you"
"your welcome young man"...and with that he slowly walked into room 14 which was named"recoverey room", rem went in and smiled a very solem smile and champ looked over and said"hey rembrandt how are you man, i missed you, i hope fletcher is safe, is he?"
"yeah and i came here to say sorry and for what you did im very grateful for it and i only hope you can forgive me for what i done"
"for what you done hey buddy you did nothin to hurt me, and thanks for feelin grateful"
"well if you say so but whenever i piture you collapsing and hear baby fletcher's cry in that terrify fire i'll always feel guilty", champ got slowly got out of his bed(he had broken his foot from the fall) and cuddled rembrandt and asked"is everything going alright with the hangout"
"yeah it's coming along great they've managed tostart the roof and some of the inside but nothing much else happened none of the side of the building was badly burned it was just a bit so they are going to do that up and put the windows in and then we put the brand new stuff in"
"sounds like it's going to be even stronger when it's done"
"yeah it does, oh and so you know we're at the saracens hangout if you are coming out of hospital today"
"ok seeya"
"bye brotha", and with that rem went out and saw daisy passing him and going in to the room she smiled politely at rembrandt and he smiled back then he went back to the saracen's hangout to see his brotha's!!

ok gang that was the end of chapter 20 and i'll be doing chapter 21(the last one!!) tommorow or on monday and i hope you enjoyed this chapter and yeah chapter 21 will be quite long, so until next time adios,boppers!! 8)

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

These last two chapters remind me a lot of the picture in this link

http://www.flickr.com/photos/urbanphotos/449855050/sizes/o/

Ninth Delegate wrote: These last two chapters remind me a lot of the picture in this link

http://www.flickr.com/photos/urbanphotos/449855050/sizes/o/

WOW now that i see the pic it does fit the story perfectly......they should have kept that place up

wargod wrote: WOW now that i see the pic it does fit the story perfectly......they should have kept that place up

It is a shame they closed the bath house

It's getting harder and harder to find a steaming vat full o' virus!