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RJ and Dewie were re leaved and walked away from Saracen turf.
"Hey! RJ, Dew." I said. "You done it man, awesome." I added.
"You guys show that you have the balls to be a Punk." Said Ed. Lets go to Dennis workshop and get your stuff." We were walking to the hangout. Hornet and Dennis had blood from there face.
"Some... Saracens came. But we wasted them.... All." said Dennis. "We are alright, there were four of 'em. How did and the new bloods go?" he added.
"They completed it! Now RJ and Dewie. Go put these Jumpers and Dungarees on in the two curtains." I said. RJ and Dewie came out, RJ had a white, black and green jumper on. Dewie had red and black. Similar to Hornets, except Hornets has green and black not red and black.
"Hey RJ, Dew." said Hornet. Before Hornet could continue, three baseball furies stand before us. One with White Eyes and black line on them and green on the rest of the face, blue face with a black line going down the face, black eyes. Finally the one in the middle had a white face, black lips, white eyes, black liner. Black lines from the eyes. They were swinging there bats up and down. They had a poster in there hand.
"We will help you take down Jones Street and Saracens." After that they ran into the darkness.
"You think they are 'gonna help us, or take us down? Vance..." Dennis said.
"We will find out..." I replied.

I've read over your story so far, and let me just say it's good to see a new writer around these parts. Your story has also been pretty good thus far. Haven't seen a Punks fan-fic around, so this is new to me, which makes it cooler. I like how you set the gang up, having Vance be a former member of the JSBs, and how the Punks are already feuding with the Saracens and JSBs. Interested to see where this Baseball Furies bit goes, whether the Furies help the Punks or not, so yeah, lookin' forward to that.

So far so good, man, keep it up!  8)

The Punks - Chapter 5 Part 2: The Baseball Furies

"Find out?" said Dennis. "What if they ambush us, we need more members man."
"Well, we will grab two more members." I replied.
"Two more, make it four more." said Dennis.
"Hey, who calls the shots around here Dennis?" I said. "Me, I did start this with Ed. But okay, we will find for more, then all of us will go in." As Me, Dennis, Hornet, Ed, RJ and Dewie were entering the subway. We found two guys beating up three guys in boiler suits.
"Hey!" I yelled. The two guys stared at me.
"What the [bad word deleted] do you want?" said the one with a green jumper.
"Join our gang, Punks." I said. "We need some tough guys like you." I added. They both stared at each other.
"Sure, Okay. I'm Lumpy and this is Hog. But our real names are Alex and Craig." said Lumpy.
"Alright, Lumpy." I said. But before I could say the rest two others walk on the train.
"I heard that there is a gang called the "Punks" One of them said.
"Yeah! Thats us!" said Lumpy. I instantly new that Lumpy had balls.
"We heard you guys are tough. So we wanna join you." said the one with a blue singlet.
"Alright guys, we know you have the guts." I said...

A nice little chapter, building up the gang. Now that the Punks have got the muscle, I hope they go see what the Furies wanted to do with them. Going to be pretty interesting whatever happens, so keep it up! 8)

If your gonna spam us up with some wrestling results you could have got some from this week not from 9 years ago, please somebody ban this ass clown.

turnbull gbr wrote:If your gonna spam us up with some wrestling results you could have got some from this week not from 9 years ago, please somebody ban this ass clown.

roflmaouid

Oh what in the god damn hell *bans*

e: Just realized I should probably mention for the benefit of future generations that there used to be an idiot spammer post in here. I'm not trashing the story author, and the two previous posters aren't insane.

GramercyRiff99 wrote:Oh what in the god damn hell *bans*

e: Just realized I should probably mention for the benefit of future generations that there used to be an idiot spammer post in here. I'm not trashing the story author, and the two previous posters aren't insane.

Not gonna lie, I lol'd at the idea of the first line being directed at the story and you banning someone for posting it.

GramercyRiff99 wrote:...and the two previous posters aren't insane.

You have no proof of this!