Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Jack

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Who posted the better fan fic

Poll runs till Fri Sep 30, 2050 4:32 pm

Union_Jack
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33%
Dud
2
67%
 
Total votes: 3

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nazzac
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Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Jack

Post by nazzac »

The writing is over, the vote begins. Both delivered great perices, but which was better.

YOU DECIDE

Is it Union_Jack or Dud
Don't vote for yourself or you will be elimanated

You can read the fan fics here:
http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index. ... 128278#new

Post you vote NOW
Nazzac The Living Legend: http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=11962.0

The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0

FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0

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Re: Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Ja

Post by GramercyRiff99 »

I voted for Dud, but it was damn close. I feel that he had the slightly better writing skills, and his premise was more interesting. By that I mean that I rarely see pieces written from the perspective of police officers, and as far as I can remember, I've never seen one specifically written about the cops who busted the meeting. Meanwhile, Ajax's story after getting arrested is fairly well-trod territory. Not to say it isn't done well, but that the relative originality gives it a certain edge.

As to the writing itself, I feel that Dud did a slightly better job of humanizing his character. At the same time, however, union_jack's action scenes were done better. All in all, it just came down to me finding Dud's slightly more interesting to read, because it was hard to find anything to hate in either of them. I wish the both of you the best of luck.

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Re: Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Ja

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I also voted for Dud for the same reasons as GramercyRiff99 said.

I enjoyed them both, and in terms of writing i couldn't seperate you. The action scenes at Union Jack did where brilliant, but Dud's story was slightly more interesting. But what picked it for me is the fact that Dud wrote something differant. It's rare you see storys from the cops perspective, and i did say i'd like to see soemthing differant, and Dud's was differant. Jack's idea was a common one, so it just pipped it towards Duds direction.

I love both peices, but i can only vote for one, and in the end it's come down to the idea, and not the skills.

I vote for Dud.
Nazzac The Living Legend: http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=11962.0

The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0

FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0

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Re: Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Ja

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Congratulations Dud  :D nice to compete with a great writer
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Re: Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Ja

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Dud progresess to the next round by a single vote.
Nazzac The Living Legend: http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=11962.0

The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0

FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0

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Re: Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Ja

Post by Dud »

Thank you jack for your kind words, and your competition. Was pretty worried for a while, and it appears from the comments that it was close, so well done on your piece as well. 8)

And thanks nazzac and Gramercy for you comments and votes. :D

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Re: Vote: Fan Fic contest: Round 1: Match 2: Dud vs Union_Ja

Post by union_jack »

cheers mate. you havent heard the last of my writing, dont worry  ;)
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