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my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:04 am

so im ganna have a go at writing another story this ones set in 2011 and is about the rebirth of the warriors should be good
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby Ajax2613 » Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:57 am

Make sure you post it.
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Tue Nov 15, 2011 6:39 am

actully my storys ganna have to take a back seat takin on more hours at work
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:29 am

okay finally got the first chapter done now it dosent have much about the warriors but it introduces characters and enimies
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:34 am

Chapter 1 -Party


Richard started the old pick up which spluttered to life the dark green, graffiti covered Ute was his pride and joy he looked through the back window sittin in the back of his pickup was his greatest mates Josh, Warren and Callan they were ready Richard put the old pickup into reverse.

As they pulled up to the beach Richard could see the flames of the bonfire he knew the guys had seen it when there was banging on the roof and were yelling with delight people around the bonfire stood up and yelled back with excitement mostly because sitting on the back was another keg. It only took seconds for Warren, Josh and Callan to jump from the back with the keg and set up leaving Richard to park the Ute. Surrounding the bonfire was a circle of cars Richard slowly parked in the circle he didn’t realise to he was to late that he had tapped the skyline in front of him he backed up a bit, killed the engine and got out to survey the damage
“fuck” he muttered to himself. The pickup sat there unscathed however the Skyline had a baseball size dent. Richard started walking off thinking no one had noticed until he was tapped on the shoulder he turned to see a chick standing there.
“you know you just dented a Skinners car right?”
The Skinners were the local gang of Coney, they were boy racers with flash cars and even flasher clothes. There was plenty of them and they could fight.
“your fuckin kiddin me” he replied
“I wish I was you no what they do to guys who fuck with there rides”
“yea I’ve heard the stories you haven’t seen Warren have you ?”\
“he’s by the kegs if I was you Id get the fuck out of here not hang out with your friends”
Richard didn’t even reply he started walking towards the kegs he could already see Warren chatting up some random chick. Out of all Richards friends Warren was the best fighter he wasn’t the fastest or strongest but he defiantly could fight and Richard had relied on him in many fights
“hey warren”
“Richie grab a beer it’s a party and your sober your not dating that chick again are you the hippy one”
“no dude this is serious I fuckin dented a skinners car”
The look on Warrens face said it all
“I’ll go get Josh and Callan” he replied
Warren disappeared into the crowd and later returned with Josh and Callan who wasn’t very happy
“dude a fuckin skinner car are you crazy”
“don’t fuckin start Callan I know we may have to leave”
That’s when Josh interrupted and pointed towards the cars
“might be to late!”
Everyone looked towards turns out the car Richard hit and the car behind him were both driven by Skinners they had both backed off a bit and there occupants were hitting his pickup with bats there was about four in total Richard and the guys quickly ran towards them
“hey get the fuck away from my car “he yelled
Oh so you’re the faggot who hit my ride” one of them replied his blonde hair stood out amongst them the rest of the skinners wore hats
“lets teach these fags a lesson” the blonde guy yelled
The fight was on there was four on each side Richard pushed one of the smaller ones towards Warren out of his way so he could get the blonde. the blonde guy ran at him and swung wide which was easily dodged but before Richard could the blonde guy grabbed Richards leather and started laying hits Richard pushed him away and started a real fight both were swinging wild punches the blonde guy was just try to hit any part of Richard were as Richard as always aimed for the head after a few hooks to the face he landed the perfect right hook to the side of his face and the blonde guy dropped Richard looked behind him Callan, Warren and Josh were shit kicken there guys Richard ran over
“lets get going”
“I don’t see why these guys are such a menace there bitchs” said josh
"whats that fag doing"callan pointed
The guys turned to see the blonde guy running back from his car when Richard left he had ran to his car to grab something when he got closer it was obvious what he was carrying -a Molotov he lit the rag and threw it at the old pick up it burst into flames and after a few seconds exploded. The blast blew Richard to his feet the blonde Skinner then got in his car and drove off Warren helped Richard to his feet both Callan and Josh had retrieved the baseball bats from the knocked out Skinners that’s when the sirens started
“fuckin cops already we must near a fuckin doughnut store” Callan laughed
“we better go “ murmured Warren
“yea, right” replied Richard
The four them quickly left just as soon as josh had kicked a Skinner about to get up.
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby Scaley » Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:36 pm

I like it mate. Is there a bit of an "Outsiders" influence in relation to the Skinners? are they based on the Socs?
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Fri Dec 02, 2011 8:49 am

nah i based them on boy racers of nowdays there name comes from skynyrd part of lynyrd skynyrd cause i was listnin to them at the time i went with the boy racer theme because i wanted to start with a weak gang

anyone notice the rouge shout out with the Ute :?:
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:27 am

Chapter 2 part one -was it worth it
Richards Apartment

The cop had just left Richard place he had questioned the boys, who had all crashed at Richards apartment, about the night before the cop told Richard they found his pickup burnt out on the beach all four boys stated that they were playing halo all night and that the pickup must have been stolen the cop left not soon after it was Callan who spoke up first
“so are we ganna get them back”
“yea” said Josh ”those dicks deserve a beating”
“there having a race tonight we could fuck with the cars” said Warren
“nah I’ve got a better idea” Richard replied

Later
Terry’s Diner

They sat near a window so Richard could point out the old garage used as a hangout by the Skinners there was a few cars out side which were getting worked on for the race tonight. Richard explained the plan to his friends
“okay so we go in and burn the place down that should piss them off”
“because pissing them off always works out well for us” said Callan
“come on it’ll be fun” said Warren
“I should be able to do the lock” pointed out Josh
“sweet I’ve got some old petrol and a lighter” Richard replied
The ringing the door makes interrupted the conversation as two Skinners entered they walked up to the owner, Terry and a argument soon started
“this will be good” said Warren
“yea old Terry doesn’t take shit from anybody” laughed Josh
Just as Josh said that one of the Skinners hit Terry who stumbled back a bit but retaliated by smashing a beer bottle over the head of the skinner and slashing the other one with the sharp edges of the smashed bottle leaving a nasty cut on the Skinners arm who turned and legged it out the door the bottled Skinner stumbled to his feet and followed his friend Terry chased them and through the door and through the remains of the bottle after them which shattered in the street Terry turnt and entered the store again
“what was that about” Richard asked
“punks think they could try and get money out of me this would have never happened if the Warriors where still running Coney” he replied
“who’s the Warriors” asked Josh
“no one anymore kid, you guys better get going cops be here soon” replied Terry

Later around 11:50

“Dude hurry with the lock I don’t wanna get caught” Callan whined. . .again
“don’t make me hurt you” Josh replied
After a small click the door opened silently the four of them slowly creeped in and started a quick search of the main room they had walked into it was like a old waiting room/receptionist thing it was littered with beer bottles and old couches
“alright guys steal, smash whatever you like ill start spreading the oil and josh see what’s in the office part” Richard yelled “tonight we make those barstards pay”
Warren and Callan started smashing tables old shelf whatever they could find as Richard started pouring gasoline all over the couch’s and smashed objects
“office doors locked” Josh yelled over the noise of the carnage
“kick it in we have to be fast” Richard yelled back
Josh swiftly kicked in the weak wooden door he quickly ran back to Richard and tapped his shoulder
“dude there’s a chick in there…..
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Tue Dec 13, 2011 3:48 am

Sorry for the two parter my computer was acting weird I think I got it though
Part two of chapter 2

“what chick” Richard asked as Josh led him back to the office room hunched up in a ball was the chick from the beach party the one who warned him about the car
“shit what do we do now” Warren asked
“she’s seen our faces she’ll tell the fuckin Skinners we have to get …rid of her” Callan murmured
“Wait he’s kidding right” Josh asked Richard
“you guys wait out side ill handle the fire and this” Richard replied
Warren led the way as Richard knelt beside the girl who was scared out her mind she stared at him with light green eyes
“you okay” Richard asked
“please don’t hurt me” she said still staring at him
“look Im not going to but Im about to declare, practically war on the Skinners and the only weapon I have is they don’t know who I am okay so..”
She quickly cut Richard off “take me with you”
Richard almost fell over with shock ”what!”
“I mean away from this I don’t wanna be here” she said slowly starting to stand “please”
Richard stood stared at the girl her black, blue tinted hair was cut just above the shoulders and was straightened she was smaller then him the top of her head only reached Richards chest he looked down into her eyes and spotted the large bruise on the left side of her face
“fuck. . . lets go” he said
She turnt and grabbed a jacket from the table next to the dirty mattress she had been sitting on as she slowly stumbled pass Richard on her way out Richard watched a needle roll off the table to the ground.

Standing in the alleyway outside stood Warren, Callan and Josh who couldn’t wait to see the fire
“we should have just thrown Callan’s hair at it” Josh joked
“another ginger joke how refreshing” Callan sighed
“ shut up he’s coming out” Warren said
“wait is that that chick” Josh pointed out
The flames started burning the old garage as Richard half walked and half carried the chick from inside he met up with boys in the alley
“why did you bring her” Callan asked
“well she asked to come” Richard replied
“dude she looks like she’s coming down off something” Josh said
“I think she is man” Richard said pointing at the small injection dot on the inside of her arm
“fuck Skinners” Callan pointed out
The roars of engines silenced the conversation 7 cars pulled up outside the now burning garage Skinners poured out of the cars they were pissed it didn’t take long till one of them seen the 5 of them hiding in the alley
“you fucks are dead” he yelled

Heavily outnumbered the four began running with Richard carrying the girl from inside, they darted down the alleyways of Coney looking for a place to hide with the sound of multiple feet pounding the footpath behind them
“Warren where’s Josh?” Richard yelled a head
“he ran ahead to find us a place to hide“ Warren yelled back
Richard looked ahead he could see Josh’s head poking out of an abandoned looking warehouse up ahead
“hurry up and get your asses in here” Josh yelled
They all ran into the warehouse and closed the door staring through the cracks in the door they watched as the group of Skinners ran past some where carrying bats others were holding knives
“looks like a full on war party” Callan whispered
“well that was close” Warren said as they passed
“ Josh where the hell are we” Richard asked
“looks like an old gang hideout” Josh said pointing at the large graffiti piece on the wall
“yea but” Richard asked “who the hell are the WARRIORS”
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby The Vixen Scout » Thu Dec 15, 2011 7:58 am

Hey Hey Hey get back on here and post the next chapter lolz :lol: I mean Wow this is really good please hurry up lolz
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:51 am

hey thanks always makes me wana write wen i get the positive comments
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:51 am

okay startin chap 3 now i wont spoil but ill give the name
Chapter 3
They were good,Real good
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:50 am

Chapter 3
They were good, real good…
The next day

Richard stared out the window of the abandon warehouse he hadn’t slept since they burnt the Skinner’s Garage both Callan and Warren had went home only Josh had stayed he was asleep on and old mattress he found and the random chick they found lay passed out on one of the couches which was left by the previous owners
'The Warriors' he had heard Terry mention them its time to find who they really were.
“Josh” Richard whispered nudging his mate with his foot “wake up”
“what man Im sleeping” he said starting to stand
“Dude your not curious to see what’s around” Richard replied
“yea good idea could be free shit” Josh laughed
Richard looked around the warehouse there was a raised floor which they stood on its were they found the couches there were tables, stools an old TV even a fridge and radio it was a quite decked out covering the walls were Graffiti left from the gang they were mad pieces
“that’s pretty good taggin” Richard said
“its good but I think Callan could do better or at least replicate” Josh said
“maybe” Richard replied
“dude look down there the got a punching bag ”Josh said pointed over the railing
“looks like a workout area” Richard said, excited like a five year old
Richard looked around in a corner near the gym was a wardrobe and a table which looked like a photo frame resting on it
“hey what’s that” Richard pointed out
Richard jumped down and picked up the frame blowing the dust off revealed an old picture there were nine guys standing looking at the camera all of them wore red leather cuts he slid the picture out of the frame and looked at the back
“ the nine delegates 1979:Cleon,Rembrandt,Cochise,Cowboy,Ajax,Vermin,Swan,Fox,Snow” he read out loud
“who the fuck are they” Josh asked
“I don’t know but I think I know who can tell us” Richard replied
“oh yea who, these guys must be like in there 50’s” Josh laughed
Richard pointed at the ‘Warrior’ with the leather wrist band
“Vermin”

Terry’s diner
Richard walked into the diner Terry was standing behind the counter reading some magazine he looked up as Richard entered
“hey kid how’s things” he asked
“who are the Warriors Terry” Richard said
“told you kid there no one anymore” Terry replied
“no but who were they” Richard again asked
“kid why do you want to know” Terry asked
“I found this” Richard said pulling the photo out of his pocket ”I found it in an old hangout . . .Vermin”
There was at least a minute of silence as Terry stared at the photo Richard watched as Terry’s eyes
started watering Terry wiped them before tears formed
“sit down kid” Terry said
Richard sat down he watched as Terry sat down still holding the picture he finally handed it back to Richard that’s when he started talking
“The Warriors use to own Coney I was there bearer I handled money, supplies, beer and stuff like that our leader Cleon” he pointed to the guy with the leopards bandanna “and I started the gang back in ’78 when we left the destroyers the old gang of Coney it didn’t take long till we wrestled Coney off them and had a full number of around 120 soldiers we were well known to, everyone knew that they grew them strong in Coney that’s how the Riffs heard about us just in time to there leader, Cyrus had this great plan to unite all New Yorks gangs and rule the city so he called a huge meeting nine men from almost every gang showed up that’s” he pointed to the picture “that’s who the Warriors sent”
“what happened next” Richard asked
“Cyrus trusted to much” he continued “some guys snuck a gun in a shot him, cops showed every went crazy and the guys who shot Cyrus blamed us we lost good men trying to get back to our turf, Fox went missing we later found out he got pushed in front of a train, Cleon Riffs beat him to death and Ajax got arrested trying to get rough with a chick who turnt out to be cop, when we got back the guys who shot Cyrus, The Rouges’ tried to get us but we stopped them then Riffs showed up someone told them what really happened and they let us go but the Rouges well I haven’t seen or heard any thing to do with them in years” he finished his story and sat back
“shit you guys are…are I cant even put a word to it” Richard said
“ha we were the best” Terry said
“why did you guys stop” Richard asked
“that my friend is a longer story. . .
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby KingOfConey » Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:54 am

okay so the next chapter is going to be through vermins eyes in 81 and kind of ganna be a what happend i will get back to Richard and the rest but i have to do this 1st
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Re: my new story-rebirth

Postby Scaley » Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:13 am

This is really good work and much appreciated.
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