my new story-rebirth
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Re: my new story-rebirth
Three words: Update really soon: lolz I loved it
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- The Vixen Scout
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Re: my new story-rebirth
wow please update soon I'm loving it
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Re: my new story-rebirth
id love to but im takin a break due to it being so close to xmas but as soon as i get the time ill post chapter 4:
time has its way of destroying things
time has its way of destroying things
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Re: my new story-rebirth
Loved cant wait till chapter 4
Every one in my town knows that the Warriors are here!!!
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Re: my new story-rebirth
Chapter 4
Time has a way of destroying things
1981
Vermin stared out the window of his apartment he could see two men in red vests heading towards his apartment he found his own vest lying on his couch he ran his fingers along the patch on the back he remembered when the name Warriors meant something to him lately all it had cost him was friends he put it on over the black hoodie he was wearing he grabbed his keys and left his apartment.
Vermin headed out side at the front of his apartment there stood Cowboy and one of the new bloods Glasses named on the account he always wears Glasses
“hey man how ya doing” Glasses asked
“how the fuck do you think im doing you fuckin idiot” Vermin yelled back
“wow just calm down man were all edgy but you don’t have to lose it” Cowboy said trying to calm Vermin down ‘leave the poor kid alone man”
“Im sorry Glasses im just… im just sick of burying friends ya know” Vermin apologised
“hey that’s ok man lets just get to the cemetery” Glasses said
There was quite a few people at the cemetery vermin was sure the whole gang had showed up which in the last few years had rocketed to around 250+ he could also see non affiliated people he saw the Warlord Snow talking to them Vermin headed over
“once again Mrs Sanchez, Marcelino was like a brother to us Im sorry” Snow said
“and this is what you let happen to your brothers shot in the street! my Marcelino was a fool to join a gang” she burst in to tears and walked away with her family Snow stood there with a sad look on his face
“hey Snow” Vermin yelled
“Vermin glad you made it” Snow
“yeah hey I saw what happened you okay man” Vermin asked
“im fine she was right though I should have sent more men with him” Snow answered
“you sent two with him and they got the same fate no matter how many guys you would have sent they all would have received the same. no one can out fight a gun man” Vermin said
“yea ….Hey stick around afterwards at least till everyone leaves we need to talk about the outfighting situation” Snow muttered
“hey guys” Cochise said “look who just showed up”
Vermin looked to were Cochise was pointing there was a tall man and a women they both stood near the grave. The Swan
“im ganna go talk to him see how he’s been you guys coming” Cowboy said
everyone went silent only Vermin spoke up
“yea ill come man”
Swan stood over Marcelino’s grave with his arm around Mercy. Vermin and Cowboy walked over
“Swan” cowboy said
The tall man turned and faced him the sad look on his face disappeared he smiled and hugged Cowboy
“hey man glad to see you and you Vermin” Swan looked at Vermin who smiled and nodded
“and Mercy how are you” Cowboy said
“Im good Cowboy a bit tired from all this moving” she said
“oh shit I haven’t told you yet were moving back to Coney” Swan said
“are you rejoining?” Cowboy excitedly asked
“nah man just moving back” Swan said
“oh…ok man but still come to the hang out and party it’ll be like old times” Cowboy said
“yea well we better go man watch yourself out there Cowboy you to Vermin” Swan said
“ I look after him Swan” Vermin said “ see you around”
“yea cya”
The service was short Vermin looked around he could see Marcelinos girlfriend crying poor girl was pregnant with his kid there was some sad songs and the priest said stuff that Marcelino didn’t even believe in then just like that every one started leaving as Vermin walked off alone Snow caught up
“yo Vermin wait up “ he yelled
Vermin turned ” oh hey man what’s up”
“I wanted to give you this” Snow replied pulling a pistol out of a backpack
“What the Fuck Is this Snow” Vermin said angrily
“Look Vermin our world is changing soon this is all well have guns are replacing rumbles we have to adapt or well end up wiped out” Snow said
Vermin started thinking he remembered when using a knife in a fight was a last resort now guns were on the street making any wannabe who could get his hands on one better then a skilled fighter. So many people were dying. He started taking off his vest.
“what are you doing” Snow asked
“ya now we were criminals but we had a code we had respect but there’s no way guns can into this and everything will stay the same the ways of the street families dead all that’s left are to-bit gun slingers thinking there men. I’m out” Vermin said handing over his jacket
“your just going to quit just like that” Snow said
“Cause I don’t wana end up like Rembrandt” Vermin said he turned and walked away.
He had lost so many brothers and he knew he just said good bye to the last of them he walked down the street he saw Swan moving a couch into a house with Cowboy helping
“hey Guys” he yelled “need a hand”.
Time has a way of destroying things
1981
Vermin stared out the window of his apartment he could see two men in red vests heading towards his apartment he found his own vest lying on his couch he ran his fingers along the patch on the back he remembered when the name Warriors meant something to him lately all it had cost him was friends he put it on over the black hoodie he was wearing he grabbed his keys and left his apartment.
Vermin headed out side at the front of his apartment there stood Cowboy and one of the new bloods Glasses named on the account he always wears Glasses
“hey man how ya doing” Glasses asked
“how the fuck do you think im doing you fuckin idiot” Vermin yelled back
“wow just calm down man were all edgy but you don’t have to lose it” Cowboy said trying to calm Vermin down ‘leave the poor kid alone man”
“Im sorry Glasses im just… im just sick of burying friends ya know” Vermin apologised
“hey that’s ok man lets just get to the cemetery” Glasses said
There was quite a few people at the cemetery vermin was sure the whole gang had showed up which in the last few years had rocketed to around 250+ he could also see non affiliated people he saw the Warlord Snow talking to them Vermin headed over
“once again Mrs Sanchez, Marcelino was like a brother to us Im sorry” Snow said
“and this is what you let happen to your brothers shot in the street! my Marcelino was a fool to join a gang” she burst in to tears and walked away with her family Snow stood there with a sad look on his face
“hey Snow” Vermin yelled
“Vermin glad you made it” Snow
“yeah hey I saw what happened you okay man” Vermin asked
“im fine she was right though I should have sent more men with him” Snow answered
“you sent two with him and they got the same fate no matter how many guys you would have sent they all would have received the same. no one can out fight a gun man” Vermin said
“yea ….Hey stick around afterwards at least till everyone leaves we need to talk about the outfighting situation” Snow muttered
“hey guys” Cochise said “look who just showed up”
Vermin looked to were Cochise was pointing there was a tall man and a women they both stood near the grave. The Swan
“im ganna go talk to him see how he’s been you guys coming” Cowboy said
everyone went silent only Vermin spoke up
“yea ill come man”
Swan stood over Marcelino’s grave with his arm around Mercy. Vermin and Cowboy walked over
“Swan” cowboy said
The tall man turned and faced him the sad look on his face disappeared he smiled and hugged Cowboy
“hey man glad to see you and you Vermin” Swan looked at Vermin who smiled and nodded
“and Mercy how are you” Cowboy said
“Im good Cowboy a bit tired from all this moving” she said
“oh shit I haven’t told you yet were moving back to Coney” Swan said
“are you rejoining?” Cowboy excitedly asked
“nah man just moving back” Swan said
“oh…ok man but still come to the hang out and party it’ll be like old times” Cowboy said
“yea well we better go man watch yourself out there Cowboy you to Vermin” Swan said
“ I look after him Swan” Vermin said “ see you around”
“yea cya”
The service was short Vermin looked around he could see Marcelinos girlfriend crying poor girl was pregnant with his kid there was some sad songs and the priest said stuff that Marcelino didn’t even believe in then just like that every one started leaving as Vermin walked off alone Snow caught up
“yo Vermin wait up “ he yelled
Vermin turned ” oh hey man what’s up”
“I wanted to give you this” Snow replied pulling a pistol out of a backpack
“What the Fuck Is this Snow” Vermin said angrily
“Look Vermin our world is changing soon this is all well have guns are replacing rumbles we have to adapt or well end up wiped out” Snow said
Vermin started thinking he remembered when using a knife in a fight was a last resort now guns were on the street making any wannabe who could get his hands on one better then a skilled fighter. So many people were dying. He started taking off his vest.
“what are you doing” Snow asked
“ya now we were criminals but we had a code we had respect but there’s no way guns can into this and everything will stay the same the ways of the street families dead all that’s left are to-bit gun slingers thinking there men. I’m out” Vermin said handing over his jacket
“your just going to quit just like that” Snow said
“Cause I don’t wana end up like Rembrandt” Vermin said he turned and walked away.
He had lost so many brothers and he knew he just said good bye to the last of them he walked down the street he saw Swan moving a couch into a house with Cowboy helping
“hey Guys” he yelled “need a hand”.
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Re: my new story-rebirth
so there we go i finally got chapter 4 up sorry bout being late its just been full on latley anyway ill try update more often
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