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Track 1 - Where Do We Go From Here?
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The sun painted the sky a creamy gold as gusts of wind pushed the atlantic on shore.

Mercy's fingers crept to his and their hands interlocked... Swan knew she had no intention of letting go. Apparently she had made that decision upon first laying eyes on The Warriors... and on him.

It was the kind of moment you breathed in and savored... But when Mercy examined Swan's face, all she found was an empty stare.

"Hey..." she stopped him, "Why the sad face, huh? You made it... You're home!"

She waited for a response, wanting her words to sink in and resurrect a smile to his face.

Instead, he looked to her and spoke softly,...

"We made it..." he said before his eyes traveled to the remaining five following not far behind, "...but some didn't."

Her gaze dropped and she looked away, defeated by his words.

The bruised and restless fivesome finally approached. They looked to Swan, waiting to be led...

"What now, War Chief?" Snow asked, "...Where do we go from here?"

Swan glanced out to the ocean.

"Go home,..." he answered, "...I'll be in touch."

"What about you?" Rembrandt stepped out, still cradling his wounded flesh, "Where are you going?"

"...To get some answers."

A mixture of anxiety and confusion briefly crossed their faces. Nonetheless, their loyalty sent them on their way without another word.

To be continued...

That's awesome you got me wanting more please write more and fast!

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE, that was a really good star to the ending, if you know what im sayin, (its like waiting for the next harry potter book LOL)

Very good! Increadibly well written and it certainly has me awaiting the next part

thanx guys. so glad you all are enjoying it so far. i'm working on the update. i'll post soon.

dollFACE

The sun painted the sky a creamy gold as gusts of wind pushed the atlantic on shore.

Your words paint such a beautiful picture,That I had to add a visual of it!!
Well "sort of" a visual, But you get the idea,Use your imagination!



Where Do We Go From Here?

Tantive7 wrote:dollFACE

The sun painted the sky a creamy gold as gusts of wind pushed the atlantic on shore.

Your words paint such a beautiful picture,That I had to add a visual of it!!
Well "sort of" a visual, But you get the idea,Use your imagination!



Where Do We Go From Here?

your visual puts the cherry on top thanx!

Track 2 - They Must Not Know
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Dusty Chuck Taylor's headed towards the infamous Wonder Wheel. Too tired to speak, they let their faces express how they were feeling.

"S--t!!!"

"What's wrong?!" They all turned to Cowboy who had somehow ended up on the ground.

"Pulled a muscle... Damn!" He complained as he pressed against his left calf.

Vermin found this to be incredibly funny and suddenly burst into laughter.

"Ah, s--t..." Cochise looked down at him disappointed, "I thought somethin' was really wrong."

Snow leaned over to help Cowboy to his feet, "You alright, man?"

"Yeah,..." he replied dusting his pants leg, "Must've been all that running."

"Hey look!" Rembrandt pointed to the group of men in black clothing leaving the park.

"Oh s--t..." Vermin finally stopped laughing.

"I wonder what they did with them."

A black vehicle awaited Massai. He watched as the others loaded into the number of vans parked further down the lot.

Someone whispered into his ear, and Massai looked up towards Snow and the others.

"They must not know," the man continued.

Massai meditated on his words. He had heard about one of their soldiers who was beat to death after Cyrus' fall. Now he wondered if revenge would follow once they found out that the Gramercy Riffs were responsible.

"Don't worry about it," he replied before finally entering the car.

"If they want to make a move,... they know where to find me."

To be continued...

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh
That's my girl...THAT'S MY GIIIIIIIIRRRLLLL!!!
That's my beautiful baby sister
Oh my God, you have a gift!!! Go back to college, RIGHT NOW!
I could see the movie characters actually saying those lines.
You are beautifuuuuuuuuuul, I love yoou!!

Mercy wrote:YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh
That's my girl...THAT'S MY GIIIIIIIIRRRLLLL!!!
That's my beautiful baby sister
Oh my God, you have a gift!!! Go back to college, RIGHT NOW!
I could see the movie characters actually saying those lines.
You are beautifuuuuuuuuuul, I love yoou!!

THANX MERCY SWEETHEART!!! luv ya right back!

and i'm takin' my butt back to college in january.

dollFACE wrote:

Mercy wrote:YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh
That's my girl...THAT'S MY GIIIIIIIIRRRLLLL!!!
That's my beautiful baby sister
Oh my God, you have a gift!!! Go back to college, RIGHT NOW!
I could see the movie characters actually saying those lines.
You are beautifuuuuuuuuuul, I love yoou!!

THANX MERCY SWEETHEART!!! luv ya right back!

and i'm takin' my butt back to college in january.

Good girl

That was fantastic dollFACE! You even took into account the Riffs on Coney and the possibility of revenge for Cleon from the Warriors, I haven't heard of anyone writing from that point of view. Mercy is right you have the gift! Thankyou for being the first brave girl to post some fiction for us.

Great job cant wait to see more, ...

Please dont make me beg lol

lol @ rembrandt77 and thanx harley!!! i promise to update soon. i've been struggling w/ a little writer's block, ya know... but it's coming.

you words act like you are a shakespear!!!! :D
Also i think if you wrote a book i would b the first person in line!!!