Ajax goes free! Part 1 of

BaseballFury100 · Post by **BaseballFury100** » Sat Dec 10, 2005 3:47 pm

flash Back of The night ajax was arrested.

chapter1:real good....or am i!?

Ajax:Can't Believe she was a cop....D***..now im in a cell ran by F**s
3 riffs walk in
Riff 1:So your leader killed cyrus...
Ajax: F*** you he did not!
riff 2: Ok buddy lets go!! :badgrin:
Ajax:You Goin Fa**** on me?
*punches riff in the face*
2 riffs gang on ajax from behind.
Ajax Cracks one into the wall head first knocking him out
The other 2 gang him as one more comes in with a knife
2 Riffs hold him back...just as ajax is about to be stabbed
***RIFFS!!!!*** The leader walks in
Leader:Let him go!....turns out he is innocent, that little guy who blamed the warriors, was the one who shot cyrus!!!
Ajax:Yeah Thats right Punks!
Leader:actually we are the riffs, not the punks,leave now before i change my mind kid!!!
Ajax walks out towards the train station Bloody mouth and all
Ajax:Heh, free, I can't wait to get back.gotta take up that war lord problem with Swan.
Ajax looks around. Coney looks alot better than this dump.
voice:Hey sexy!
Ajax sees this hot woman standing in a short skirt.
Woman:looking for a good time hunk?
ajax:sure baby!
Woman: follow me sexy
ajax:ohhhh yeah!!! can't wait......wait where you goin!?
Woman runs into alley
Ajax Follows
suddenly the lady is cornered by ajax
woman:sorry im just anxious about having hot love with you baby
Woman:heh just kidding you dirty slime
Ajax: huh?
suddenly ajax hits the pavement hard with a pain in his head
when ajax wakes he finds himself surrounded by faces he'd seen the night before...plus maybe 10 more...to equal about 20.+ 1 woman
Tall, Strong men, armed with bats. face painted.....oh...crud

Part 2 along Soon
"armies of the night, outnumbered 20+ to 1"

hope you like its my first so tell me how to improve!

Si-Lee-Warrior · Post by **Si-Lee-Warrior** » Sat Dec 10, 2005 6:25 pm

im not sure about hte whole 'breaking out, there mate, i mean even if the riffs let ajax go, the police aint gonna let him walk right otta jail, am they

Storm86 · Post by **Storm86** » Mon Dec 12, 2005 1:31 am

the Riffs are powerful they prolly have the cops in their back pockets

Cowboy79 · Post by **Cowboy79** » Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:55 pm

I like the story, Please write more as soon as possible It's really good.

BaseballFury100 · Post by **BaseballFury100** » Mon Dec 26, 2005 4:07 am

******i am making a new story about somthing different ok?********

Zen444 · Post by **Zen444** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 6:00 pm

...Ok.

Furies4life · Post by **Furies4life** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 11:21 pm

Wonder who the 20 women are. Lizzies maybe?