"The Beginning" (Again.)

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Sat Dec 24, 2005 5:39 pm

hey guys, this is an old story i wrote a long time ago!
i know a lot of the new people here, haven't heard it. so, check it out!!

a young hoodlum about 19, 20 maybe, is escorted into his new home an 8x10 cell at rikers island! he's blonde, kinda tough looking, a little scared. this is his first bit. he shudders when door slams behind him, and just then he notices he is not alone, he has a cellmate!
sitting against the wall in the shadows on the bottom bunk is a large dark figure. the dark figure calls out what the [bad word deleted] is that on your hand? he's refering to a small W on the back of the new guy's hand.
the young hood gathers all his courage and shouts warriors, from coney! the dark figure snickers a little bit and snorts and then replies what the [bad word deleted] do you know about warriors? the real warriors.
the figure slides out from the bottom bunk and the shadows, stands up, and turns to go to the sink and the youngster see's the tattoo's on the back of the older inmate, across the top shoulder to shoulder was "warriors" in old english, across the bottom was "ajax" also in old english.
it struck him like a bolt of lightning he knew who this was, could it be? everybody in our hood knows about the 9 who went to the bronx for a big meeting back in the day, and got blamed for some [bad word deleted] they didn't do and got through miles of enemy hood just to get home, and beat-ass all the way!
hell yeah they were famous in our neighborhood, you better know, especially if you are a warrior! it's folklore! ajax turns around and says i'll tell you about the warriors!

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Sat Dec 24, 2005 5:44 pm

ajax turns from the sink, got a name boy? popeye, the youngster replies. ajax, laughs sarcasticly. what are you a tuff guy, like popeye? i do o.k. the kid says back. ajax laughs again, we'll see!
ajax stare's hard for a few second's, well more than a few. he then sigh's heavy, and start's to speak. i always knew cleon was a fuckin idiot, swan too. warchief, my ass! i told em it was stupid, goin to the bronx, truce, big meeting, ha! bullshit! if cyrus was the one and only how come he couldn't stop a bullet?! he says snickering!
he then start's to stretch, and crack his neck and the younger con, notices several long, ugly scars on the side of ajax's face, and neck.
that happened in here, ajax says. not on the street. it's the only way they can get me, 4, or 5 at a time! 5 boppers, out in the yard got me.
yeah, cleon comes walkin up one day talkin some [bad word deleted], about goin to the bronx. every gang is goin he says, we GOTTA go, he says. the leader of the g. riffs, biggest gang at the time. what about now, ajax asks? still are, popeye replies. fuckers, says ajax.
anyway this faggot, cyrus, supposed to be all mystic and [bad word deleted]! got this brilliant plan for a truce, all the gang's to be one, and all this garbage about takin over the city! yeah right! we see how that turned out!
so this one friday, it's hot man, middle of july. cleon comes walkin up the boardwalk, says we're goin tonite! he got the word this morning! i thought it was bullshit! i though we we're bein set up! but what i though didn't matter! i guess they were the ones who weren't very smart!
so he says be here at 4:00 for your assignment. so i take off, go see my chick. thank god i did! i ended up in fuckin jail that night, and ain't seen daylight since! fuckin cleon!
so we show up about 4 or so. there was 9 of us, that's what that dickhead cyrus wanted, 9 guy's and nobody carryin. weirdo!
it was me, cleon, swan, my buddy cochise, cowboy, vermin, snowball, rembrandt and the fox. we were the 9 cleon picked, out of about 120 warriors at the time. the only good idea he had!
how many now? he ask's popeye. about 350, he replies. we're still kinda small compared to some, riff's got over 800!
so cleon dishes the line-up, and we start rollin down the walk, man! i guess it was kinda cool, i figured at worst we would get some kinda action! either fist's, or chick's!! so after we stop and eat, it's just getin dark by the time we hit the platform, to catch the train. we bullshit for awhile, till train pull's in. hop the train, and start movin!

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Sat Dec 24, 2005 5:48 pm

"so, we're movin along, man! train's empty!
you know, no civillian's come out after dark!! and with this so-called truce on, we had free-ride through all the neighborhood's! we're screwin around, bullshitin, and finally, we get there, to the bronx!
i still think we're bein set-up!! we get met in this underpass, by riff soldier's tryin to sneak everybody into this park, for the meeting. fuckin cyrus!! though he had everything covered!! everybody get's felt to make sure they're not packed, and then we get sent down a tunnel.
we come out of this tunnel, (the young warrior can't believe he's actually hearing THE story!!! THE story!!! from one of the 9!!!!! ajax, no less!! baddest warrior, there ever was!! and none of the rest of em are left anymore anyway, either dead, or just gone.
this story is what made the warriors famous, all across the city, even now!!!) and i see the biggest, bunch of faggot's i ever seen!!!!! my god!!! purple, and pink, for color's! guys wearin make-up! all kind's of weird [bad word deleted]! it was like a circus, a buncha clown's!! i never seen nothin like it!!
so finally, this cyrus guy, show's up! he didn't look like anything special to me! and he's goin on, and on, about peace, and truce, and everybody's BUYIN it!! i couldn't believe it! cowboy, snow, everybody!! even my partner cochise!
all i wanted to do was bust head's!! he's talkin and he stop's for a second, then.... BOOM!!!!! a gunshot!
some fool took old cyrus out!!! ha,ha, wimp!!! riff's soldiers, mutsa missed somethin, i guess!!
then it's quiet for a second, and then, ALL FUCKIN HELL BREAK'S LOOSE!!!!! CHAOS!!! at this same time, THE PARK GET'S LIT UP, by cop light's!! they were on the meeting the whole day, before it even started, some soldier, from some click, got picked up the day of the meeting, and lipped his way out of jail, by tellin the fuzz, about it.
they're everywhere!! we don't know where the hell we are, we ain't never been here before, so we don't know where to go! cleon, point's a direction, we head that way, and we lost cleon in the park somewhere.
all of a sudden dead end! i say [bad word deleted] it! and start punchin through the wooden fence! swan and cochise join in, and a couple seconds later, we're through the fence and runnin scared through a fuckin grave yard!!
haha i thought little rembrandt, was gonna [bad word deleted] himself! you know what happenned to him? ajax ask's popeye. yeah, replies popeye, o.d. 5 or 6 years ago. when all the senior warriors started leavin, the younger guys kinda ousted him, and he didn't handle it to good. and you'd see him in the neighborhood, every once in awhile, all doped up. to bad ajax says. i liked that little guy. (loud buzzer sound's) and all the cell door's, on the tier electronicaly open. there's lunch, say's ajax, after lunch we'll go outside, in the yard, i'll tell ya some more, and we'll stir up some trouble! he,he and see what you're about!.....................

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Sat Dec 24, 2005 5:52 pm

"popeye", follows "ajax" out of they're cell, after the buzzer sounded, and the cell doors opened for lunch.
ajax, stops at a cell a few cells down, turns to popeye and says, we aint alone! popeye could feel the stupid look on his own face! what the hell does that mean? he thought. (he wasn't to hip on penitentary lingo yet) ajax pops his head into the cell, and yells,
YO VERMIN!
WHAT?? is the reply, from inside the cell.
LUNCH, FAGGOT!
WHAT, BALONEY SANDWICHES AGAIN?
THAT'S ALL WE EVER HAVE FOR LUNCH, I'M SICKA BALONEY!!
VERMIN, QUIT YOUR BITCHIN, AND GET OUT HERE!! I GOT SOMETHING TO SHOW YA!
WHAT?? again is the reply from inside the cell!
OK, THAT'S IT!! ajax fly's into the cell!! and after a short commotion, and what sound's like a bit of a scuffle! he emerge's pulling a big, stocky black haired dude, out with him.
he looks at popeye, with "that just punched somebody in the eye" kind of evil, smile!! and says, you know who this is? he was there too!! this is "vermin"!
get the [bad word deleted] outta here!!! says popeye! (he can't believe it!! two, of the original nine, are here! one, his cellmate, and another two cell's down!! he can't believe his luck! except, for the whole prison thing!!)
at least he had some back, if [bad word deleted] ever goes bad in here!! and who better than the man himself, ajax!! to have his back!! (there were none of the younger, newer generation, warriors here.)
because of the over crowding prison system, most of the young, new first-time cons were being sent out of state. it was just timing and a fluke, basically that popeye ended up here!
vermin looks popeye up, and down, and says who the [bad word deleted] is that? what the [bad word deleted] is that?
ajax, gives vermin a skipper-slap to the back of his melon! (ya know one of those slaps, that slide over the back, and top of somebody's head!!)
he's from coney, ya moron!!
you mean..he's?
yeah, he's a warrior!!
vermin's face lit up!! (neither him, nor ajax, had seen another warrior come through those door's, except for "cowboy" when he was there for a 15 month bit! for the attempted murder, of a *mongol*!! five years ago.) (vermin was doing a twenty five to life for the MURDER of a mongol! he got here about six, or seven years after "the meeting"
then a million questions, come flying out of vermins mouth!! is the wonder wheel still there? and the bathhouse? what about the boardwalk? what does it look like, now?? are the warriors still holdin it down?? how many warriors are there?? we still rackin the *mongols*??
popeye doesn't know which question to answer first!! and starts to stutter a bit! ajax laughs, and tells vermin, shut the hell up!! let's go get lunch! he's got time to answer questions, he ain't goin nowhere for.. how long rookie?? he snicker's!!
twenty two month's popeye replie's, wearily.
like i said, he ain't goin nowhere!
so the three of em head down the metal stair's to the cafeteria, there are six, or seven line's in the cafeteria, until ajax, vermin, and popeye come through the door, the line's split, and go to either side of the cafeteria, opening up the center of the caf. for the three warriors to walk straight up to the chow line! (kinda like the parting of the red sea) the warriors even now commanded, and were given, and showed respect!!!
it was due in part, to ajax! everybody knew who ajax was!! (and if the truth be known, ajax was responsible for more than a handful of con's meeting they're maker, and leaving rikers, in a bag! since he started his extended stay, courtesy of the state!)
and vermin was nobody to be [bad word deleted] with either!
and then there was the fact of who they were, from back in the day.
and there was the riff's! they had deemed the eternal respect brand on the warriors! meaning they were given a lot more pull, slack, and consideration then any other gang, since that hot-ass night, back in july 1979!
they got they're grubb, and sat. ajax tells vermin, i was tellin him about "the meeting" vermin laughs! how much were you plannin on tellin him? i'm guessin only up to the part, where you dumb-ass got busted tryin to rape a chick-cop!! he laughs!! ya can't tell him anything else ya lunk-head! ya weren't there! you were playin grab-ass in the back of a squad car!!!
ya know you ain't funny sometimes, vermin! ajax sneered! i didn't try to rape, anybody!!
relax, tough guy!! i'm just playin with ya!
yeah, says ajax!
anyway, don't listen to him! he probably told you HE was warchief, not swan!!
i aint got that far yet, wise-ass! scoff's ajax.
well, where did ya get to?
just past the part where cyrus took the slug, ajax, laughs!!
hey!! not so loud!! says vermin. you wanna wake up missin a one of you nutt's?? the riffs don't tolerate any bad talk about cyrus! even now, he's still magical to them! i always thought the riffs were pretty weird, anyway. but there's way to many of em in here, to be talkin [bad word deleted] about cyrus!!
let's go outside, says ajax it stinks in here!! like baloney, right vermin??
shut-up ajax, you know i hate that goddamn baloney!!
ya know that little high-hat, that i think snatched my shampoo, the other day, i'm gonna turn popeye on loose on him in the yard!!
and if he's a punk, i'm gonna cut that w off his hand and throw him out of my cell, and tell everybody he sweet-fag! don't worry, hell find another celly, probably one who'll be VERY NICE to him! bein so young, and blonde!!
popeye's stomach got queasy, he wondered if ajax was serious? but he knew one thing, there was no way he was gonna look like a punk, in front of two of the most famous warriors, in coney history!
as they walked out of the cafeteria, on they're way out to the yard, vermin leaned in close to ajax, and wispered, you're not really gonna do that to him, if he gets whupped, are ya?
of course not!! he's from coney!! and he's a warrior!! but you gotta admit, that look on his face when i said that was pretty damn funny!!! ajax, cackles!!
vermin kinda smiles, and says yeah, that was pretty damn funny!!
meanwhile, popeye in back of them is starting to sweat, and it's only about forty degree's outside!!!

p.s. i know you guys are waitin for ajax to continue the story, but i had to work someone else in the mix!! ajax wasn't there for the whole story!! i'll get the next page up tommorrow, tommorrow night, latest!!

*mongol* the warriors closest, rival gang! as per the original script!

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Cowboy79 · Post by **Cowboy79** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 1:46 pm

SHM This is Great You should Update this soon I want to know what happens to popeye.

Mercy · Post by **Mercy** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 3:16 am

p.s. i know you guys are waitin for ajax to continue the story, but i had to work someone else in the mix!! ajax wasn't there for the whole story!! i'll get the next page up tommorrow, tommorrow night, latest!!

*mongol* the warriors closest, rival gang! as per the original script!

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This "tommorrow night" was 20 years ago

So... where is the rest? I loved it, is very real, I guess

...never been in a gang.
But seriously, it's great. Believable.

Post by **Kartoon** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 4:02 am

i remeber this, reading the very first part you posted and thougt how awsome it was....this is still my fav fan writting ever

the intro to it was just great

"ill tell you about the warriors"

its the only fan stuff i really get into like its a real part of the movie

Ajaxxx · Post by **Ajaxxx** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:35 pm

Good story so far, I like how Ajax uses the word "Faggot" so many times just like the real Ajax

Storm86 · Post by **Storm86** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 1:16 am

good. real good. this is kind of like watching a movie at school. the teacher always stops it as tension is building up.

Matt S.F. · Post by **Matt S.F.** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 6:45 am

Please update again soon

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Fri Jan 13, 2006 7:23 pm

it's gray and cloudy, a little misty, when they first walk out of the cafeteria.
the mist hit's "popeye's" face, as looks around the yard.

he notices sveral "aquaintences" from his neighborhood, some friend's, some not.
(you always run into people they know in jail!)

"ajax' and "vermin" head towards the middle of the yard, "popeye" hesitates a second, as he continues to look around the yard.

"POPEYE" "ajax" yell's!!!
WHAT ARE YA DOIN?? STAY WITH US, YOU DON'T WANNA GET CAUGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE YARD BY YOURSELF, DUMBASS!!!
popeye hastens his step, to catch up to the two older warriors!

they cut across the field, they stop and turn, and ajax says, you see that little guy over by the punching bag? with the 2 other dudes standing there?
yeah, "popeye" says.
that little faggot took my shampoo out of the shower the other day, and i haven't got around to busting his head yet!
so i figure i'll let you do it!
just walk over there, and make like you know em! and then blast em!!
i think you know wht to do, after that!!
you better, or that little fucker's gonna tear your head off!!!
"popeye" immediately turns, and head's in the direction of the high-hat, "ajax" pointed out.

"ajax" look's at "vermin" and says, this should be fun!!!
why don't you got get the rest of the guys, "ajax" tell's "vermin", just in case!
ok, says "vermin" and he heads off to a corner of the yard, where there are about seven, or eight, inmates talkin, bullshittin, swappin smokes.

as popeye gets closer, to his target, the other two high-hats pick themselves, up from where they were sitting, and stand next to the high-hat workin the bag!
he's a little shorter, than "popeye", but he's got some arms, and some weight!!!!
the high-hat workin the bag turns around and says, WHAT YOU WANT FOOL??
"popeye" shout's, S'UP, KIDD!!!
HOW YOU DOIN??
DIDN'T YOU USED TO LIVE IN MY COUSIN'S BUILDING???
the high-hat sneer's, and says, YOU DON'T KNOW ME BITCH!!
but, he never got out the whole sentence!!!
BAMM!!! "popeye" put a straight right hand, right into the bigger con's chin!!
the high-hat stumbled back a step, or two, and "popeye" jumped on him, and jackhammered two more right's, into the side of his head!!
the third one, was brushed aside, and the bigger con rolled "popeye" off of him, and got to his feet.
"popeye" was on his feet a miilisecond after the high hat, only to run into a left, that put him right back on his ass!!!
he tried to get back up, but tripped over his own feet fell back down, and the high-hat was on him instantly!!!!
he hit "popeye" three, or four, time's before standing up!!
he then walked over and kicked him in the back of the head!!!
the other two high-hat's started to join in, when they looked up and saw "ajax"and "vermin", and about 3 other "warrior" cons running over!!!
they grab the high-hat workin over "popeye" and try and pull him away!
"ajax" runs up to the high-hat, who beat the shit out of "popeye" and hit's him so hard, he flew back about five feet, and it was light's out!!
"ajax" then walks over to him, and says, THAT'S FOR FUCKIN WITH A WARRIOR, AND FUCKIN WITH MY CELLY!!!
"ajax", then walks around the fallen high-hat, and kicks him right in the mouth, knocking out a couple of his teeth!!!!!
and says, AND THAT'S FOR MY SHAMPOO, YA LITTLE FAGGOT!!!!
"vermin" looks at the other two high-hats, and says, WE DONE HERE??
YEAH, THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT!!!

"ajax" and "vermin help "popeye" to his feet,!!
he's bleeding, out of his nose, and his eye is already purple, and swollen!
but, he's got a smile, on his face, and so does "ajax"!! (surprisingly)
"ajax" says, I LIKE THIS LITTLE GUY, HE'S OK!!!

ok, we'll tell ya the rest!!
tonigh after we eat, we'll go in the tv room, and we'll tell ya the whole story!

Cowboy Soldier · Post by **Cowboy Soldier** » Fri Jan 13, 2006 8:50 pm

Nice story, im thinking of one right now. But how long is Ajaxes sentence to prison anyway?

Mercy · Post by **Mercy** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 3:03 am

This is great!!!!! Please don't wait too long before your next update.
" THAT'S FOR MY SHAMPOO"

Instant classic.

tomboy · Post by **tomboy** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 5:44 pm

This is a kick-ass story! update soon?

TheDarkKnight666 · Post by **TheDarkKnight666** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 7:36 pm

good story keep em coming