It was late Spring of 79. Fillmore High School in Upper Manhattan was lettin out. In Fillmore High there were 3 gangs that ruled. The Howitzers who ran the drug scene, the Real Boys which was a Puerto Rican only gang ran the cafiteria and bullying extorions racket, then there was us The Dudes who ran the West side of the school and tagging scene. Heres how it went Howitzers wore Black Shirts with Red head bands easy to say they claimed red. The Real Boys had a bit more style and class You wore Black shirts with Suspenders, a blue head band and gray pants or Black Shirt and Gray pants with a Gray Fedora.
We kept ours simple wear a Red Hawaii shirt (Being the name of the Street our Home turf is Hawaii Avenue).
Me Though? I belonged to the dudes. My nickname was Nickels which was when I joined is all I had. Infact I left alot of nickels in the hands of the guys I beat up.
There were my two friends Ghost and Caveman. Ghost is a real quiet guy he got his nickname cause he sneaked in to a Restricted and heavy guarded building without being noticed and he really seems to love cars alot.
Caveman was a cool homeboy. He fought for the hood Literally infact he took down some small time no out fit called the "Seville Family" without a scratch he's tall too and has a big forehead and dark skin.
Right now the School is changing a bit with Senior President jive coming up.
Though word is that the latest news is that Big man Cyrus wants to hold some big meeting.
The school isn't big but the team of security guards is. If theres a Fight the Principal will just say he will send them to that area for awhile when really he just gets rich off the money he makes from the kids that pay him to have the fight happen.
Anyway enough about that lets cut to the chase
The Big Leagues
The Big Leagues
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Chapter One
It was wensday, or pizza day as I like to call it since they charge pizza for a quarter a slice. Ghost was mentioning something about his car getting some upgrade. Caveman was playing with his pockets as I listened to ghost drone on and on. "Hey man watch where your goin." Some litte punk said obviously he was a Freshmen cause nobody would be idiotic enough to mess with a GM (Gang member of course). We stared back for a moment then kept goin.
"So what you gonna get?" Caveman asked.
"Same as usual Pizza."
"Hey Lend me 50 cents." Ghost said holding out his hand.
"wheres that dollar you still owe me?" I asked.
"I spent it besides Im hungry so gimme 50 cents."
"Yeah well Sh-- in one hand wish in the other see which comes faster."
"Hey you guys lets not talk about that Im about to eat here."
As we stood in line some dude has his radio with him listen to some disco music and then she came by.
Lucile a nice Black haired maiden from heaven. She had the most beautiful eyes Green something you don't see in alot of Asian Chicks these days. I had a crush on her since 9th grade. As she passed I didn't hear the comments of my friends telling me to move ahead.
I blushed and moved ahead. "Still checkin out Lucy eh?" Ghost commented as Caveman cackled with him. "She doesn't even know you like her give it up man."
"Up yours ghost boy besides atleast I can get a girl to like me." I said back to ghost.
Ghost givin me a cold stare then said "Yeah well you know what? Bite me."
"Whatever." I said
end of Chapter 1
It was wensday, or pizza day as I like to call it since they charge pizza for a quarter a slice. Ghost was mentioning something about his car getting some upgrade. Caveman was playing with his pockets as I listened to ghost drone on and on. "Hey man watch where your goin." Some litte punk said obviously he was a Freshmen cause nobody would be idiotic enough to mess with a GM (Gang member of course). We stared back for a moment then kept goin.
"So what you gonna get?" Caveman asked.
"Same as usual Pizza."
"Hey Lend me 50 cents." Ghost said holding out his hand.
"wheres that dollar you still owe me?" I asked.
"I spent it besides Im hungry so gimme 50 cents."
"Yeah well Sh-- in one hand wish in the other see which comes faster."
"Hey you guys lets not talk about that Im about to eat here."
As we stood in line some dude has his radio with him listen to some disco music and then she came by.
Lucile a nice Black haired maiden from heaven. She had the most beautiful eyes Green something you don't see in alot of Asian Chicks these days. I had a crush on her since 9th grade. As she passed I didn't hear the comments of my friends telling me to move ahead.
I blushed and moved ahead. "Still checkin out Lucy eh?" Ghost commented as Caveman cackled with him. "She doesn't even know you like her give it up man."
"Up yours ghost boy besides atleast I can get a girl to like me." I said back to ghost.
Ghost givin me a cold stare then said "Yeah well you know what? Bite me."
"Whatever." I said
end of Chapter 1
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hey thats great keep writing i cant wait for more 

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Re: The Big Leagues
are they all real gangs? i've heard of the dudes and the real boys
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Re: The Big Leagues
Man I've been gone along long time.
The Dudes, aren't one of the Movies Gangs but the Real Boys are listed as one of the gangs that arrived at the Conclave.
The Sun was high in the sky as usual. Thas Spring for ya. Alot of the Tension from the Students went up a little bit. "so anyword from Chief?" Caveman asked Ghost. "Not that I know of. He said after that whole Cyrus bein shot crap he was glad we didn't go to the Conclave." as soon as ghost finished his Say Two Asian students got into a Fight. Not to be stereo typical but when its two asian guys in a fight it tends to draw a Crowd. Me and Caveman tryed to hustel through the Crowd gathered around the two kids. The Cheering was loud, the people were pushing hoping to see blood.
"Hey YOu Kids Break it Up!" Hollered one of the Campus Sercurtiy Guards. The Crowd dispersed a little. Nothing mor the Fight was over any way.
"Who won?" Ghost asked. "Couldn't tell." Caveman responded.
Lunch was over and as usual I had to take English 3-4. Ms. Mc Ellers. She talked really funny and loved to find any reason kick her students outta class.
"Okay everyone Today were taking...Excuse Me! Thank you. Please Be Quiet! Today we will oh let me see....We will take off on Reading the Oh what Was it? THE TRAGEDY OF JULIUS CAESAR!" She said at the Top of her lungs making a couple of us chuckle a little. "Now Everyone Open your books to page 13." She said turning on the tape...didn't know why she bothered since she would yabber on through out the Tape.
"Okay now you see Brutus is pulling back a little which means..." "No One gives a Sh*** about Brutus!" A Student Yelled.
"Excuse Me. Now Caesar is worried about him." She went on and on till finally I had to say it.
"Now Cassius is really saying here is..." "SHHHHHHH Im trying to Learn.....Stupid a hole." I said.
"Excuse me!" She said as she walked over to me while laying over my book. "Sir you do not tell me what to do." She said.
"My Arse you do. Now be quiet Im trying to find out what happens." I said pretending to read.
Of Course I would get a Phone call home later by my foster folks wouldn't care. They were pretty cool with me. As long as I wasn't arrested and as long as I didn't get killed or wreck their place I would get free board.
The Walk home isn't too long. Me and Ghost always walked home together He lived one Corner from me. "So dude you got the new game on the Degenatron?" I asked. "Which One?" Ghost replied.
"Adventures of the Space Monkeys." I said. "Thats the one where you play as the Red Square and have to collect the Yellow Lines which are Bannas Right?" Ghost said.
"Something like that..." I stopped what I was saying and so did Ghost. Infront of us were the Savage Huns.
This was Way outta our League they only stared at us. We walked a Short distance looking back to make sure they weren't following us. And thats where the Chase began.
TBC
The Dudes, aren't one of the Movies Gangs but the Real Boys are listed as one of the gangs that arrived at the Conclave.
The Sun was high in the sky as usual. Thas Spring for ya. Alot of the Tension from the Students went up a little bit. "so anyword from Chief?" Caveman asked Ghost. "Not that I know of. He said after that whole Cyrus bein shot crap he was glad we didn't go to the Conclave." as soon as ghost finished his Say Two Asian students got into a Fight. Not to be stereo typical but when its two asian guys in a fight it tends to draw a Crowd. Me and Caveman tryed to hustel through the Crowd gathered around the two kids. The Cheering was loud, the people were pushing hoping to see blood.
"Hey YOu Kids Break it Up!" Hollered one of the Campus Sercurtiy Guards. The Crowd dispersed a little. Nothing mor the Fight was over any way.
"Who won?" Ghost asked. "Couldn't tell." Caveman responded.
Lunch was over and as usual I had to take English 3-4. Ms. Mc Ellers. She talked really funny and loved to find any reason kick her students outta class.
"Okay everyone Today were taking...Excuse Me! Thank you. Please Be Quiet! Today we will oh let me see....We will take off on Reading the Oh what Was it? THE TRAGEDY OF JULIUS CAESAR!" She said at the Top of her lungs making a couple of us chuckle a little. "Now Everyone Open your books to page 13." She said turning on the tape...didn't know why she bothered since she would yabber on through out the Tape.
"Okay now you see Brutus is pulling back a little which means..." "No One gives a Sh*** about Brutus!" A Student Yelled.
"Excuse Me. Now Caesar is worried about him." She went on and on till finally I had to say it.
"Now Cassius is really saying here is..." "SHHHHHHH Im trying to Learn.....Stupid a hole." I said.
"Excuse me!" She said as she walked over to me while laying over my book. "Sir you do not tell me what to do." She said.
"My Arse you do. Now be quiet Im trying to find out what happens." I said pretending to read.
Of Course I would get a Phone call home later by my foster folks wouldn't care. They were pretty cool with me. As long as I wasn't arrested and as long as I didn't get killed or wreck their place I would get free board.
The Walk home isn't too long. Me and Ghost always walked home together He lived one Corner from me. "So dude you got the new game on the Degenatron?" I asked. "Which One?" Ghost replied.
"Adventures of the Space Monkeys." I said. "Thats the one where you play as the Red Square and have to collect the Yellow Lines which are Bannas Right?" Ghost said.
"Something like that..." I stopped what I was saying and so did Ghost. Infront of us were the Savage Huns.
This was Way outta our League they only stared at us. We walked a Short distance looking back to make sure they weren't following us. And thats where the Chase began.
TBC
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i really like the first person. the story is great too. good stuff man
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Holy crap laffo.

Anyone who references the Degenetron is a friend of mine. Great story made better by a great video game reference.





Anyone who references the Degenetron is a friend of mine. Great story made better by a great video game reference.
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(Man I forgot about this site for a while. Anyway enough of that back to the Story.)
Down the china town streets we ran, dodging different folks in front of us. Cave man bumped into an old man causing him to spill his grocerys all over the place.
Panting hard, feet hitting the hard concrete ground the streets were like a maze here. One minute we were going to the right and then left, a sharp left. We finally stopped and cut a corner hopin to throw the Huns off.
"Huff huff What the hell they after us for?" Ghost said spitting saliva out of his mouth.
"Don't know and I don't want to be around to find out." Caveman stated.
He looked over to me and asked which way the Subway station was. I pointed to what I thought was west.
I hoped....... we walked for atleast 15 minutes before some asian gals were behind us.
They weren't bangers thats for sure, if they were they would have whistled as a signal to other Huns.
"Hey is them Urchins or hookers behind us. " Ghost whispered silently. Either way they broke off and stopped tailin us.
Chinatown is one weird place thank god we got out of their.
Finally we made it back to our home turf. Hawaii Avenue, the smell of cheapo burgers burning in grease and fat, the welcoming old lady who was homeless, the common stray cat was stirring in the trash.
Since all three of us had no money and no weapons we all decided to see what the warchief has in store for us.
Down the china town streets we ran, dodging different folks in front of us. Cave man bumped into an old man causing him to spill his grocerys all over the place.
Panting hard, feet hitting the hard concrete ground the streets were like a maze here. One minute we were going to the right and then left, a sharp left. We finally stopped and cut a corner hopin to throw the Huns off.
"Huff huff What the hell they after us for?" Ghost said spitting saliva out of his mouth.
"Don't know and I don't want to be around to find out." Caveman stated.
He looked over to me and asked which way the Subway station was. I pointed to what I thought was west.
I hoped....... we walked for atleast 15 minutes before some asian gals were behind us.
They weren't bangers thats for sure, if they were they would have whistled as a signal to other Huns.
"Hey is them Urchins or hookers behind us. " Ghost whispered silently. Either way they broke off and stopped tailin us.
Chinatown is one weird place thank god we got out of their.
Finally we made it back to our home turf. Hawaii Avenue, the smell of cheapo burgers burning in grease and fat, the welcoming old lady who was homeless, the common stray cat was stirring in the trash.
Since all three of us had no money and no weapons we all decided to see what the warchief has in store for us.
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dude really great story man. really hopeing to see more.