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				The mission of the newbloods * Final Update!!!*
				Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 9:13 pm
				by Orphen
				(This is just a ruff draft) 
Opening- Two guys are seen waiting outside the hidout of the Warriors. One of them is a Caucasian wearing jeans with a silver skull belt buckle, all star converse, gray sleeveless shirt, brown gloves with no finger tips, and some kind of medallion. The other is African-Indian wearing black combat boots, black husky Levis with a belt buckle of the #13, blood red sleeveless shirt, gold stud in left ear, tattoo of a demon that takes up most of his left arm, and black gloves with no finger tips. There names are Orphan and Demon.
It is just about 6:00 a.m., the boys seem to be waiting for someone.
  
Demon- Where are they?
Orphan- Don't worry, they'll be here.
Orphan then notices a group coming torwads them. Its the Warriors, lead by Swan. Swan stops in front of the boys.
  
Swan- What do you guys want.
  
Orphan- We're lookin to roll with The Warriors.
Swan looks at the both of them, and decides what to do with them.
  
Swan- You guys think you can roll with the best?
Orphan- Yeah...
 
 Swan smirks at the both of them.
Swan- Normally i would throw you in a pit full of Warriors and see if you could hold your own, but I'm a little tired from the dealings with some dead beats, The Rogues, so i got something special in mind for you two.
Demon and Orphan glance at each other, then look at Swan an nod.
Orphan- What you got in mind?
Swan- Meet us at the train station just before dark, and you better rest up it's gunna be a long night. 
By the way what's your names?
Orphan- the names Orphan.
Demon glares at Swan and says," ...Demon..."
They both walk away on to the boardwalk.
More to come... 
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods
				Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 9:30 pm
				by the wigan warrior
				sounds cool so far 8) write some more please it sounds interesting
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods
				Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 9:35 pm
				by Cubs On The Red Carpet
				yeah it sounds very interesting i wanna see what happens
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods
				Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 2:46 am
				by Juniper
				Yeah excelllent story keep up the good work and they seem like a great addition to The Warriors
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods
				Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 5:08 am
				by Ajax_91
				Excellint Story!! i look forward on more of your stuff!
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 8:33 pm
				by Orphen
				(Train station dusk)
 Orphan and Demon arrive at the train station, they look around to see if any of The Warriors are around, they find Swan, Mercy, Cowboy, and Vermin. The boys approach The Warriors.
 Orphan- alright so what you got in mind?
 Swan- Okay, last night one of our soldiers was arrested. As much as i hate him we need his muscle. Your job is to go in there and rescue him, then we can talk about getting you guys a vest.
 
 Orphan- Sounds easy enough.
 Vermin- Watch out for The Furies, they catch you guys with Ajax your toast.
 Orphan- Yeah sure...
 Boys get on the train and head on for Riverside Park
 (Riverside Park Night)
 The boys get off the train platform and walk into the streets. They notice three Furies hanging out outside the train station.
 Orphan- We might have to deal with them when we get back. 
 Demon nods his head in agreement.
 The boys arrive at the police station. Orphan notices 17 cops in the building along with the clerk.
 Orphan- 15 17 max cops, we need a diversion to get in there so we can free Ajax.
 Demon nods his head and grunts, he then runs off into the street and disappears into the shadows.
 Orphan whispers to himself, "He's never been the same since he lost his sister when they got jumped walkin home from school, and the day after he lost his girlfriend, man that kid has a bad luck streak goin for him."
 
 Orphan walks into the police station, no one seems to notice him so he quickly hides behind an empty desk.
 ... 2 minutes Later ...
 Police Radio- We need back up there's about 13 Furies causing trouble down here at the old abandoned werehouse, I need back up now! I'm going to need about 16 men down here now!
 Orphan- Good ol Demon he never fails when you need him.
 2 Seconds later about 16 cops rush past the desk that Orphans hiding in, the next thing he hears is the sound of fading sirens.
 The clerk walks past Orphan noticing him. Orphan comes up behind the Clerc and knocks him out. He then moves on down the hall towards the jail cells. He notices the cop sleeping at a desk.
 Orphan- Figures.
 
 He notices a guy lying down on an old army cot with a red leather vest on, he assumes this is Ajax.
 Orphan-  You Ajax?
 Ajax- Who the F*ck wants to know?
 Orphans- I do.
 Ajax- well who the F*ck are you?
 Orphan- The guy saving your A**. My friend and i got vests waiting for us.
 Ajax- why the hell do you fagots think we're gunna let you join The Warriors?
 Orphan- We're saving your A** aren't we?
 They both run out of the police station, to see Demon brushing off blood and dirt off this arms and chest, they notice blood all over his pant legs.
 Orphan- I don't even wanna know.
 Ajax- But i do! So where the F*ck you been and what happened?
 Orphan- He was the distraction i needed to save your A**
 Ajax- So how'd you get that many cops to leave the station?
 Orphan- you'll find out later
 Ajax- You look pretty week unlike um what's your names?
 Orphan- I'm Orphan and this is Demon.
 Ajax- Demon you look pretty weak compared to Orphan.
 Demon- Looks can be deceiving especially if they're belittling.
 Ajax- What the F*ck is that suppose to mean?
 Orphan- You'll find out later. Let's get our A**es back to Conney.
 The trio heads back to the subway, when they arrive they notice that the 3 Furies are gone. The head down to the train before they reach the platform the 3 Furies are waiting armed with bats.
 Ajax- these chicken Sh*t's will be easy.
 Out of the corner, 3 more Furies arrive along with their leader Cobb. Then a couple of civilians gather around. Demon sees a man in a ticket booth, he starts talking on the phone. demon taps Orphan on the shoulder a jerks his head towards the man in the ticket booth.
 Orphan- Better make this quick.
 Cobb snaps his fingers and the 6 Furies to the trio, one to Orphan, two to Ajax, and three go to Demon.  Orphans knocks his guy out in three punches.  Ajax takes down one but gets knocked down by the other with a bat. Demon positions himself kin a karate stance blocking the bats with his arms, he then does a round hose kick an knocks the first Furie backwards 5 feet and the blow knocks him out also. He then gets hit in the ribs with a bat and falls to the ground. While Ajax grabs a bat knocks out the the last Furie that went after him and heads towards Orphan.  Then Demonstands back up and positions himself again, he take the bat from one of them and throws it to Orphan.
 Ajax- He's gunna get himself killed.
 Orphan- No he's not, watch.
 Demon then does a backflip then grabs the Furie with out a bat and knees him in the back then flips him into the ticket booth.  Then demon jumps right over the last Furie turns around does a round house kick to the ribs, then a side kick to his legs. The Furie drops to the floor, then Demon drop kicks the Furie in the face. He walks up to the rest of the guys. They all stare at Cobb. Cobb when positions up what likes like 2 metal bats taped together.  Ajax starts to approach Cobb, but Orphan sticks out his hand and stops him.
 Orphan- This baseball B*tch is mine.
 Orphan postions his wooden bat to fight. Cobb's skull painted face makes a giant grin.
 Orphan- Okay bone head let's see what you got.
 In a flash Cobb takes his bat and bashes it downward with all his strength towards Orphan. Orphan dodges it, and in the middle of the dodge he hits Cobb on ribs on his side. Cobb grunts and re-positions his stance like the hit didn't Even fade him. Orphan then drops the bat and positions himself in front of Cobb, Cobb then positions himself to take another downward swing.  Orphan stops the bat with both his hands in Cobb's mid swing. Ajax looks in amazement that the force in that bat didn't really hurt Orphan. He then grabs the tip of the bat with right hand and pushed it into Cobb's stomach. Cobb stumbles backwards and swing quickly hoping to hit Orphan. Orphan dodges it and smashes it across Cobb's face. Bloody teeth lie all around as Cobb lie on the ground limp. Orphan picks up Cobb's double bat, and walks back over to Ajax  and Demon. 
 Ajax- Hmm not bad, what's that for?
 Orphan- A little souvenir. 
 They hear the sound of foot steps, they look the left to see cops standing. Then Ajax notices the person leading the cops is the same female that got him arrested the night before.
 Cop in the back- hey look it's the kid who beat up the cops we sent for back up!
 Orphan and Ajax look at Demon in amazement
 Demon- what???
 Female- You three are arrested for false alarm disturbing the ...
 
 Her sentence cuts short because of Ajax throwing a bat to her stomach
 Ajax- I told you didn't wanna play with me you lousy B*tch.
 The trio knew what Ajax did would get them arrested, so they haul A** through the train station just barely making it into the leaving train that's off to Conney.
 
 Ajax- You guys did pretty good, hope to see you guys on the team. So how did you take out 16 cops at once Demon?
 (The train leaves the station) 
 ... To be Continued ...
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 2:28 am
				by Ajax_91
				Amazing!!! you got a terrific imagination and Ajax is free! w00t w00t!
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 4:00 am
				by Demon
				   
  Yeah it's turnin out really great i like it, it took me about an hour an a half to typ it out, an a bout 2 hours th think up this much of the story.  I don't have more than guy Orphan is my friend.
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 5:38 pm
				by Orphen
				Sorry for the delay on the script. it's going to be awhile for the rest.
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:08 pm
				by Ajax_91
				awww 

 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 2:29 am
				by Bopper69
				nice story, keep it up.
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 9:31 pm
				by Orphen
				{ Sorry for the delay, i haven't been in touch with my friend for a while so here's part three, the rest might be up later today or two weeks from today. }
[ Subway train, 12:22 a.m., July 14]
  The trio is having a conversations when the lights start to flicker on and off.
Ajax- Who's F***ing with the lights?
  The train comes to a hault at Union Square Subway Station, the boys head out to the station platform.
Orphan- Wasn't this train suppose to go straight to Coney Island?
Demon- ... suppose to...
  Three mechanics come down towards the subway, Ajax shouts to one of them.
Ajax- Hey what's goin on!?
  One of the mechanics turn to answer him.
Mechanic- There's a power failure in the subway station, it'll be about 20 minutes before the subway is back up and running again.
Orphan- So now what?
Ajax- Let's get something to eat, i'm f***ing starven.
CUT TO
[ Union Square Station Arcade 12:33 a.m.]
  The boys are relaxing in the arcade, Ajax is sitting down scarfing down the last bit of a cheese burger. Demon is sipping a coke and playing a pinball machine, while Orphan is having a gun duel with a mechanical cowboy. Orphan fires the arcade gun.
Mechanical cowboy- You got me Partner.
  Orphan is about to put another dime in the machine, until he notices something in the corner of his eye, he sees a tag of the punks, and painted over it is a newly painted Hi-Hat Logo. Ophan walks over to Demon and points out the logo. The boys walk to Ajax.
Ajax- What?
  Demon points out the logo to Ajax with a little jerk of his head. 
Ajax- So? If we meet these clowns we'll bop right past'em.
Orphan- We better get go'in anyway, the train should be running soon.
  Ajax and Demon take last sips of their cokes, Orphan grabs his trophy from the previous fight, they walk towards the station. Right in front of them stands three Hi-Hats, they look fresh from a fight but it seems that they won. Two Hi-hats, with over-alls, pull out a chain and a crow-bar. The middle Hi-Hat, has no overals, and puls out an iron pipe. From the corner stands two Hi-Hats with white outfits, a short chubby one and a tall thin one. They are the warcheif Cracker Jack, and the warlod Marcel. Marcel with a knife and brass knuckles. the trio stare down the three soldier Hi-Hats. The Hi-Hats charge towards them. Ajax simply bashes his coke bottle over one of the soldiers head. Demon caches the crow-bar before it hits him and knees the Hi-Hat in the face. Orphan punches the final Hi-Hat in the face and falls. the guys turn to face the leaders. The two clowns drop there weapons and run. Demon picks up the crow-bar and Ajax grabs Marcel's discarded brass knuckles. The guys get on the subway and on to Coney. 
 5 min later the five Hi-Hats run to the tran to get another wack at them but are to late. they turn to see two badly beaten Punks and five other Punks ready to fight. The Hi-Hats know that there F***ed.
 {sorry for the low amont of action in this update. I promise tons of action in the next update.}
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Updated*
				Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:32 pm
				by Orphen
				{ Okay here is the final update. I promise tons of action and hopefully I did not fail.}
 [ Coney Island Subway Platform - July 14 - 01:23 a.m. ]
The trio head off the subway platform and look about, no enemies nor Warriors appear to be near by, so they start off to the hide out. They head towards the amusement park, which is now closed, they're hardly any lights about. They hear noises that sound like yelling and screaming and they head towards them, the noises lead them to an abandoned section of the amusement park. When they arrive there they see a gigantic street war between The Warriors and The Satans Mothers.
Ajax- They're not gunna last a minute with out us... let's get in there.
 The trio head in straight into the frenzy, there appears to be 100 Satans Mothers in the war, a good portion ,of the 150, warriors is there as well. Swan is leading the fight with his bowie knife in one hand and his switch blade in the other, cowboy is right beside him wielding a bike chain, Rembrandt is fighting any Satan Mother he can and blinding them with is spray can, Vermin is leading some newbloods through the fight, and snowball and Cochise are fighting their way to the Satans Mothers leader, spider. Spider is above an abandon roller coaster seat with a giant black combat knife. He hopes down to join the fight.
Spider- Reck all these little fagots!!!!!!
 Swan is about to take a blow to the head, by a bat, until a flying fist comes and knocks the Satan Mother out. Ajax turns towards Swan and smirks. 
Ajax- You're to f***ing lazy to come free my a**, so you send a couple of newbloods to do the job.
 Swan is in shock to see that Orphan and Demon had completed the job, his stated of shock is disturbed when a Satans Mother attempts to punch him in the chest. He dodges the blow and cuts the Satans face with his switch blade. Demon is in the middle of the frenzy, he spots Spider slashing at the newblood with his combat knife. Demon fights his way towards Spider, Orphan with his double bat starts swing at any Satan the get's near him. Rembrandt gets near by Orphan and notices him.
Rembrandt- You? You guys got Ajax out???
Orphan- Wasn't to tough.
Rembrandt- Man I thought you two were... 
 Rembrandt's sentence was cut short when he was tossed aside by the Satan Warcheif, Tiny, Tiny turns his attention to Orphan.
Tiny- What'sa matter never messed with a giant before?
Orphan- Actually... Yeah, about 3 hours ago, and there's only gunna be one of us walkin away.
 Tiny takes a full swing at Orphan and misses, Orphan swings the double bat at Tiny. Tiny stands up and whines about his broken nose. Tiny starts cursing at him, after Tiny stops he starts swinging his arms as fast as he can, and knocks the bat outta Orphans hands. Orphan throws a fierce blow into the giants stomach, Tiny gets knocked backwards, before he can get up red paint is sprayed into Tiny's face. Tiny gets up and he is blinded.
Tiny- You son of a b****, I can't see, I can't see!!! 
 Orphan trips Tiny and he falls flat on his face, Orphan turns to Rembrandt smiles at him and nods his head towards Rembrandt, and they both run into the frenzy.
 Demon finally makes his way towards Spider and sacks him as hard as he can, knocking Spiders sunglasses off. Spider looks at him and notices he's not wearing a vest.
Spider- Who the f*** are you, this ain't your battle!
 Demon raises his crowbar showing as a challenge to Spider.
Spider- Heh, I?m gunna have fun tearin you apart. 
Demon- In your dreams.
Spider- You look familiar... Has my gang f***ed you over before?
Demon- yeah... a little more than you should have
 Demon starts off he throws a blow to Spiders face and misses, Spider punches Demon in the chest knocking him back. The flash of Demons gold medallion catches Spider's eyes, he blinks and backs off. Demon gets up and kicks him in the ribs, knocking down Spider. Spider stands up.
Spider- You got stronger you little fagot. Yeah I remember you... yeah I killed your sister 5 years ago, and I still want that medallion.
 Spider bashes Demon in the head with his head and let's Demon fall to the ground and rips of the gold medallion. Demon gets back to his feet.
Demon- Hand it over... Hand it back or else...
 Spider laughs at this feeble plea, the he punches at Demon and misses. Demon kicks him in the head, then in the stomach, next in the balls. Spider drops the medallion and drops to his hands and knees. Demon kicks him if the face, Spider falls to the ground spitting blood out of his mouth. Demon picks up the medallion and puts it back on. Demon waits for Spider to stand up.
Demon- This is from my sister...
Demon picks up his crowbar and swings as hard as he can and nails Spider in the head. Spider spins through the air as he falls to the ground weak, wounded, and bloody. Demon starts to walk away but on his way back to the frenzy he steps on Spiders combat knife. Demon picks it up and puts it in his pocket. Spider gets up and looks for Demon, looking around he notices his soldiers aren't doing so well.
Spider- F*** this, through a bloody mouth, Mothers let's get the f*** outta here!!!
 The Satan Mothers hear Spiders command and run, many wounded ones hobble away on their own. The ones that can walk pick a few wounded and head off, 5 Mothers help Tiny up and split. Any Satan Mothers that were knocked out or crawling away where left there. All of the Warriors are whooping their victory whoops; they pick up their wounded and head to Swan to see what comes next.
Swan- Get their wounds treated and get them somewhere to rest. Snowball, Cowboy, make sure they get there safely.
 Swan turns to Orphan and Demon.
Orphan- So what about our vests?
Swan- Don't worry you earned your place with the warriors, Vermin will take your sizes for your vests.
 With that said Vermin, Orphan, and Demon head off for their vests
 [ Hangout - July 14 - 02:00 a.m. ]
 A huge party is held at the hangout for their victory, Demon and Orphan are on the sofa with their vests on, Orphan is telling everyone about the knight that they went through. Cobbs bat and Spiders knife are hung up on the wall as trophies. Many questions come up about their stories.
Warrior- You really beat down that fat mother f***er Tiny?
Warrior- How the hell did you get the cops outta the station to rescue Ajax?
 A lot more question arise but Orphan breaks from the group and heads to the roof top. Ajax is talkin to a couple of newbloods with Rembrandt, he notices Orphan and calls out to him.
Ajax- Hey! 
 Orphan turns to him.
Ajax- I normally don't do this to people, but i owe you and your friend one.
Rembrandt- You startin to go soft???
Ajax- Shut up you little smart a**. I'll show you who's the soft one here.
 Ajax prepares to fight him but Rembrandt backs away. Orphan finally gets to the roof, and he stares out to the wonder wheel, which oddly enough the lights are still on. Orphan turs and sees Swans Switch blade sticking out of the ground and picks it up.
Voice- You can have that if you want.
 Orphan turns to see Swan with a full beer and his Bowie knife.
Swan- The bowie knife works better for me.
Orphan- Thanks for lettin us in but I gotta get outta here.
Swan- For what?
Orphan- I gotta go see someone.
Orphan heads down to the party, informs Demon where he's goin and walks outside. Orphan pockets the switch blade and walks out into the darkness, while Demon gets up from the sofa and heads to a broken window and stares at the wonder wheel. Ajax walks up to Demon.
Ajax- He left.
 Demon nods his head...
Demon- Yeah I know...
Ajax- He gunna come back to waste a few heads with us later. Right?
 Demon nods his head...
Demon then turns towards Spiders knife takes it off the wall heads back to the broken window, he smirks as he looks at Ajax, and puts his hand on the broken window and hops down into the darkness.
{ More stories of Orphan, Demon, and The Warriors will show up soon, new gangs will show up as well as old ones. I'd like to hear some feed back on this story.}
			 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Final Update!!!*
				Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 5:06 pm
				by Orphen
				I take it no one likes it for not posting  

 
			
					
				Re: The mission of the newbloods * Final Update!!!*
				Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 4:22 pm
				by Cubs On The Red Carpet
				i liked it mate  

 it was very well written