The Bluecrosses

Warriors fan fiction created by members of the forum.
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Swanstar
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The Bluecrosses

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1979 A.D- 9 soldiers stranded in the Bronx, 100 miles from home, 100 miles from the sea, sworn enemies on all sides. They were they were.. The Warriors. They were a legend.. A grand legend. Now five years later...
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    A tall black man, stands on a boardwalk with eight men. "Now, I think you're all wondering why I asked for you to come here. You are all my most talented soldiers. I wanted to tell you that we will be heading to the Bronx. A large Conclave is goin' down. Now I could only bring eight of you. It's kind of a of weird that are only 9 of us." " No friggin kiddin'." Interrupts a muscular man, wearing a blue and black vest. In fact, the rest of them were wearing blue and black vests. If you had lived in their city, you would know them as the Bluecrosses. And this is their story. "Shut your mouth Goliath!" Yelled a short yet powerful solider. "Plato,Goliath quit your arguing!" " But Battle Axe! he started it!" Said Plato. " All I ask you to do is paint, Not be a smart Alic." You tell em' warlord!" Yells Goliath. " Goliath you shut it! Now as I was saying, I chose you for your skills. Cab, your warcheif. If I get racked I want you to take over." A man with medium-long hay colored  hair done in a skater do nods. " Cobalt, Memory man. I want you to remember every thing that might be of use to us." A short man with bright red hair nods. "Turtle Boy, your bearer, carry the bread and get us on the subway."  Chimera, Goliath, your muscle." Chimera, who had his hair tied into a pony tail nodded. Goliath with his spiked black hair rolled his eyes. "Snake, your middle-man, just solider." A lean man with brow hair smiled. "Dragon, your music man." A tall black haired man with a blue dragon tattooed on his arm nods. "Now, lets get goin'! Battle Axe ties on a blue headband walks down the boardwalk, and the others start to follow..
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So, thats part one of my story more to come if you like. :|

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Re: The Bluecrosses

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Well since now one's posting for more I'll continue anyway....
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Out at the station, 2 men sit on a bench waiting for a train....
      " I don't think this a great idea." Conplained Goliath, lying back against the bench.
      "Why do you think that" Asked Cab, with a cocked eyebrow.
      "It dosen't sound right. The biggest gang in the city inviting some gangs to a meeting, sounds like a massacre.
      " It's a privlage to be invited to an AVI meeting. We were chosen out of 600 gangs."
        "Whoopdie do. I think it's a bad idea". Said Goliath with a grin.
        "It dosn't matter, Warlord said we're goin' and thats it."
        "Why should I care, I should be warlord!"
        "Keep shootin' your mouth like that and I'll wreck you." Snapped Battle Axe, who had during the conservation walked up behind Goliath.
      "You knew he was their, didn't you?"
      "Yup, just didn't feel like tellin'  you."
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Re: The Bluecrosses

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its aright, but its just way to similar to the actual warriors story
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Re: The Bluecrosses

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Thats what I'm goin for.
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9 men walk onto a train, not noing this may be the end.
      "Battle Axe, I don't like the idea of this. Goliath had a point, we might get killed."
      "Don't worry,we got your back Cab."  Replies Battle Axe. "Nuttin' gonna happen up there."
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      "Hey Dragon, what's with the hat. Teases Goliath, taking the hat from his head.
      "Give it back you meathead!"
      "Who you callin' a meathead!" Goliath said smacking Dragon in the face with his hat.
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        "Hey Plato. When we get there stick with Goliath."
        "Why do I have to stick with that lunk Cab?"
        "That lunk the best chance you got of not gettin racked."
        A frown spread across the boy's face.
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        " I still think we should be packed, just in case." Turtle Boy says in a worried voice.
        "Don't worry, I got your back T."
        "Thanks Chimera."
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          "I still don't wanna go." Goliath crosses his arms and rolls his eyes.
          "That dosen't matter cause we're almost there."
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Thanks for readin' :|

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