The new gang

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Mercy88
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The new gang

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(First of all I just wanted to let you know I'm not very good at writing stories but I'll try!)
Mercy and Swan were having a fight. "Fuck you dickhead!" Mercy yelled to Swan.
"Mercy, I said I was sorry." He yelled back.
"Sorry doesn't cut it! You cant just go around jumping hookers!" Swan was silent as Mercy just walked out into an alley. She was looking down kicking a can around as she walked around. She heard people talking.
"Okay. Jesse you and the others raid them and I'll get Mercy then we'll leave...This will also  put us on the map if we pull it off." It was Sully and the Orphans! She grabbed a glass shard from the ground. She did NOT want to leave. As they walked by she grabbed Jesse who was at the back by his neck, then slit his throat. He fell down silently. They overnumbered the Warriors and it was an unexpected attack. She had to do something!
"Sully! I'm over here! It's Mercy!" She saw the gang turn around.
"Mercy?" He walked over to where Jesse's dead body was lying. "Fuck... JESSE! Mercy you fucking bitch! I know you did this!" Mercy ran to the hangout and told the others.
"I took out one of their best guys!" She told them.
"Then it must be easy..." Vermin said.
"Believe me... I was lucky!"
"But we already fought those guys... we already know how sucky they are." Rembrandt butted in.
"They're after me and they're gunna kill you all! Your outnumbered, at least 3-1!"
"Then why don't you save us and go with them?" Swan suggested. Mercy slapped Swan acress the face.
"You better kill them!" She told them.
"Then go get reinforments!"  Swan ordered. Mercy was just about to open the door when it felw open and smashed her head. She fell on the ground... She looked up at the door and saw Sully standing there with his followers.   

Please tell me if it was good and what i should change to be a better writer! please. i need feedback! :D
"That's right Warriors, keep walking...Real tough mothers  'aint 'chya? You know, you don't show me much. Why don't you dickheads just walk all the way back home?"

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Re: The new gang

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excellent Mercy!
\"Caaan you dig iiiittttt?!\"

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Mercy88
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Re: The new gang

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thank you
"That's right Warriors, keep walking...Real tough mothers  'aint 'chya? You know, you don't show me much. Why don't you dickheads just walk all the way back home?"

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Re: The new gang

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Im going to stop now cuz i kinda suck....
"That's right Warriors, keep walking...Real tough mothers  'aint 'chya? You know, you don't show me much. Why don't you dickheads just walk all the way back home?"

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