Mercy & Swan: Afterlife

[Mercy08]

(this takes place three weeks after the big meeting)

Chapter 1

Swan walked through the hangout doors with Mercy quickly following. It was dead silent.
"Mercy and I are leaving... We are going to Los Angeles." Swan said breaking the awkward silence.
"What?" They all said in confusion.
"Hey! When are you leaving?" Vermin asked
"Today." Swan answered. People began to whisper.
"So your going with some whore?" A newblood asked.
"Don't be calling me no whore... I 'aint no whore!" Mercy yelled. He walked up and smashed her against the wall.
"Yes you are... whore." Right then Swan grabbed him by his neck and threw him aginst the wall.
"She isn't a whore. And yes, I'm leaving with her." Swan threw him on the ground. "C'mon, Mercy." He said grabbing her arm and taking her out.
"You're just leaving them like that. No goodbye?" She said when they were outside.
"Yes. They don't like the idea of me going with you." Swan answered. They heard a scream comming from the window.
"Hey! HEY! Swan, who's warlord?"
"Vermin!" He yelled back "Cowboy's warchief."
"C'mon! Were gunna miss our bus!" Mercy yelled running down the alleyway with all the luggage she could carry. Swan took care of the rest.

I know its not much but i feel i shouldn't post it all in one and also, Im busy. PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK im usually good but its damn hard to write the warriors. I wrote a Titanic book and it was amazing.

[swan1]

how that was good u should post more to this

[the wigan warrior]

i liked it don't get me wrong but... it just couldn't imagine Swan doing that... i can imagine him leaving.. just not the way he did then

[Mercy08]

i know thats why i'm stooping it and i brke me arm and also i have -4 karma

[Vermin16]

-4 karma? youll never recover from that one.

[KingOfTheWarlords]

Hey, come on Mercy08 this is your art, your passion, don't let a few bad reviews get you down if you want to finish this story i'm behind you all the way