surprising alliance (finished july 5)

[Cowboy606]

          Swan waited on the boardwalk, looking up at the stars as he felt a slight breeze blow past him, causing him to look down and sheild his eyes. Suddenly he saw three men walking towards him, not looking to pleased to be out in the cold this late.
"So whats up warcheif?" It was vermin speaking, with cowboy and ajax on his sides.
"I want you three to do me a favor. mercy needs to get to Tremont, has some things she needs to pick up, i want you three to make sure she gets there and back safely". 

          Ajax looked at swan, anger flashing in his eyes
"Whats the point, The Orphans wont do anything, theyre a bunch of wimps! this is a waste of our time". Swan shot ajax a cold stare
"I aint worried about The Orphans, word is theres a new set up there, called The S.O.C.," Cowboy stepped up, cutting Swan off as he takes his hat off.
"Yea, i heard about those guys, theyre new but theyre already about 70 strong. made up of tremont rejects and what was left of the rogues after the riffs got done with em, so its safe to say they wont be warrior friendly".

          An hour later, Ajax, Cowboy, and Vermin are sitting in the subway station when they hear footsteps behind them. turning around, they see Mercy walking up.
"What the hell do you need thats so important anyway?" says Ajax when he sees her.
"Whats it to you? its just something i need ya big ape".
"Cmon, we gotta escort ya there, least you could do is tell us" says Cowboy as he stands up. "Well, if ya gotta know, its my kid sis, i left her with my aunt when i left Tremont, i wanna bring her here to Coney". Ajax gets up also, standing next to Cowboy
"Ahh this is crap, its a waste of our time."
"Yea, but its swans orders so just relax Ajax, besides, maybe you could waste some heads along the way huh?"
"Yea i guess, whatever, trains here, lets go". the three Warriors and Mercy climb on the train as the doors close and it pulls out of the station.

(part 1, what do you guys think so far? any suggestions?)

[Mercy08]

Great! Just remember to leave a line when another person talks and Capitalization. Example.
"Hey." Mercy said
"What do you want?" Rembrandt asked. Just a suggestion to make it eaiser to read but i really liked it!

[Cowboy606]

thanks for the suggestion mercy, is it easier to read now?

[Cowboy606]

          Mercy, Ajax, Cowboy, and Vermin all walked out of the subway station two hours later, looking around uneasily.
"Were gonna get japped man, theres two gangs here, both gunning for us!" whined Vermin as they all stared down the empty street.
"Relax wimp, we'll be fine, just shut up and stick close ta me" said Ajax, cracking his knuckles and looking over at Mercy,
"So where to?" Mercy looks at Vermin and Ajax.
"Swan wants you two to go check out this new gang, see whats up with em. Cowboy, your with me."

          "Ahh crap, were gonna get japped!"
"Shut up!" Ajax and Vermin bickered as they moved slowly down the street, towards the S.O.C. hangout.
"Follow me kid" said Mercy to the young Cowboy as they walked towards an old looking apartment complex, stopping just outside.
"I'll keep watch out here, go do what you have to do" said Cowboy, sitting on the stoop, taking his hat off to scratch his head.

          After about 5 minutes, Mercy came tearing out of the front door, tears in her eyes as she ran into Cowboy.
"Shes gone! laceys gone and my aunts dead!" cried Mercy as she held tightly onto Cowboy.
"The Orphans?" he asked, looking down at her.
"No, they wouldnt do that, no matter how much they hate me, they just wouldnt. Lacey is like a little sister to sully, hes known her since birth. the S.O.C. musta taken her to get to him."
"Aright, aright. relax, we'll find her. lets go catch up with Ajax and Vermin."

          Ajax and Vermin make their way down an alley when they suddenly stop. peeking around the corner, they see 6 guys wearing black jeans and blood red shirts with S.O.C. printed on them in old english style writing.
"We got em made Vermin, i say we go in there and bust some heads!"
"Six on two? your crazy Ajax... Ajax?!" looking up, Vermin sees Ajax running towards the six guys and follows.
"ahh crap!"

          Running in, Ajax scoops up a rock, bashing it into the skull of one of the members, connecting with a sickening thud, alerting the other five members to them. seeing the five advance on Ajax, Vermin keeps running, eyes closed and heart pumping, throwing his body into the group, knocking 3 of them down, only to be picked up by the other two and being thrown into the brink wall. Ajax kicks one of the fallen three in the jaw, keeping him down as he walks up behind the two beating vermin against the wall. Grabbing their heads, he sends their forheads flying into the wall, knocking them out.
"Thanks man" panted Vermin.
"Like i said, stay close and you'll be fine" said Ajax as the two warriors turned around, facing the last two S.O.C. members.
"Lets finish these wimps!" yells Ajax, stepping forward with an uppercut, sending his opponent flying through the air and into the dirt.
"these guys aint so tough!" says Vermin, hitting the ground and sweeping the last S.O.C. members legs from under him, knocking him on his back.
looking up, all he sees is Vermin and Ajax standing over him, a wicked grin on Ajax's face as his boot comes down over him.

[Cowboy606]

should i keep going with this one?

[CAZ]

yeah its good, btw.......whats  s.o.c. stand for?

[Cowboy606]

S.O.C. is a local gang in my area called the supreme oi crew. its the first gang name that came to mind when i was writing

[CAZ]

oh, cool. thats the first time i,ve read an actual gang in a fan fic

[Cowboy606]

sorry i havnt updated in awhile guys. i have a job now, but i swear i'll find some time.

[Cowboy606]

Mercy and Cowboy walked silently down the street, looking around for any sign of Ajax and Vermin. Cowboy suddenly stops, looking up at a giant abandoned house with S.O.C. burners laid all over it.
"So what do we do? wait for Ajax and Vermin?" Said Mercy, letting her eyes roam nervously around the old house.
"Not a chance, for all we know, they could already be in there, maybe even in trouble." Cowboy looked over at Mercy, sensing her nervousness.
"You wait out here in case they show up. i'll go in and have a look around."
"be careful Cowboy, dont get japped!" yelled mercy after cowboy as he jumped the old gate and walked silently up the path.

Stopping at the front door, Cowboy slowly pushes it open, peeking inside at the empty room, realizing at this time of night, most of the soldiers are out on patrol. working his way up the stairs, he stop at the very top step, hearing someone walking down the hallway towards the stairs. pressing himself up against the wall, facing away from the noise, Cowboy waits silently for and oppurtunity. As the S.O.C. soldier walks past the wall, Cowboy comes up behind him, grabbing his head and twisting his neck, smiling at the sattisfying snapping sound as he grabs the body, laying it down softly to avoid making any noise.

Seeing a door open ajar at the end of the hallway, cowboy walks up, slowly peeking in, he see's a little girl sleeping on a dirty matress thrown on the floor in the corner ofthe room. walking up to her, leans down and lightly shakes her to wake her, covering her mouth to silence her scream.
"Lacey, dont scream okay? im here to help you. listen to me, your sister Mercy is waiting for you outside, do you think you can make it?" Lacey gave a silent nod, looking at the man in the cowboy hat who saved her. Leading her to the stairs, Cowboy watches lacey run out of the house as he continues his search for Ajax and Vermin. turning around, he see's 5 soldiers walk out of a room, spotting him as they rush towards him.

Seeing lacey running down the path and out through a hole in the gate, Mercy scoops down and picks her up, hugging her.
"Oh Lacey, i missed you so much, are you okay? did they hurt you?"
"Im fine, a Cowboy came in and saved me" waiting for another 30 minutes, Mercy began to get nervous again, not having seen Cowboy coming back out or Ajax and Vermin show up. seeing a group of S.O.C. soldiers turn on the street suddenly, Mercy grabs Lacey, ducking into an alley, out of sight as the soldiers walk towards the house.
"Billy says we caught a Warrior in the house. one of the 6 that got luther taken down and the rouges torn apart at the beach last year!" says a soldier to another as the group walks past Mercy's hiding spot.

[CAZ]

keep writing please , i am a loyal reader of your story

[Cowboy606]

Hearing the soldiers talking, Mercy realises that Cowboys been caught and is being held inside. grabbing Lacey, Mercy jumps out of the alleyway and tears down the street, tears in her eyes as she tries to figure out what to do. turning a corner, Mercy slams into someone and falls back to the ground. Looking up, she see's two familiar faces looking down at her.
"Ajax! Vermin! i need your help!"
"Whats going on? Wheres Cowboy?" says Vermin as he steps up, helping Mercy and Lacey up.
"The S.O.C. got him, hes in their hangout" says mercy as she dusts herself off.
"You have to take Lacey back to Coney for me!"
"Screw that. were going in to help cowboy!" says Ajax grabbing Mercy roughly.
"Now wheres that hangout?"

"If you guys go in, all three of you will get wrecked! you cant take on all those soldiers!"
"Then whats your plan?" asks vermin
"Just take Lacey back to coney for me and i promise i can get Cowboy out." Ajax and Vermin look over at each other, deciding on a plan .
"Alright, we'll take her back, but you got 3 hours to show up with cowboy, or were bringing a crew back up here"

Mercy watches Ajax, Vermin, and Lacey get on the train, deciding its time to put her plan into action. Racing down several streets, Mercy finds herself in front of a crappy looking apartment with 4 or 5 guys sitting on the stoop wearing faded blue jeans and green shirts.
"What the hell are you doing back on Orphan turf Mercy?! you aint welcome here!"
"Shut up Johnny! Wheres Sully? I need to see him"
"Now why would i help you with that?"
"Just shut up and call him out Johnny, its important"

Twenty minutes later, Mercy is standing in a small room full of Orphans, standing face to face with Sully.
"So, watcha want trick? why you back here in tremont?"
"you need to help Sully. The S.O.C. caught a Warrior friend of mine, you have to help me save him." at this,  few orphans start laughing along with Sully.
"A Warrior? what makes you think we'll help a warrior?".
"What happened with them was a long time ago sully, youve come along way since then, i mean, your almost a 100 strong now. your rep is gettin heavy, cant you just get over it?" Mercy looks up into Sully's eyes, tears starting to form in hers.
"Besides, he got caught while saving Lacey." The orphans suddenly stop laughing as Sully looks back at her.
"What happened to Lacey, she okay?"
"Shes fine, The S.O.C. Kidnapped her, obviously to get to you, and Cowboy saved her, you guys owe him. besides, With The S.O.C. gone, tremont is all yours."

[Vermin/Cowboy]

DUDE, U CAN'T SAY MAY U NO WHAT OR KANE WILL KILL U!!!!!!!!!!!!

[CAZ]

DUDE, U CAN'T SAY MAY U NO WHAT OR KANE WILL KILL U!!!!!!!!!!!!

dude, what does that mean in english?

[Vermin/Cowboy]

What, you don't watch wrestling?