WARLORD JP VS CUBS ON THE RED CARPET

[cowboy rules]

The topic is : 'Rumble in Coney'

Rules: No Game referances. You can use any gang you like. Minimum of 400 words.

Judge: Storm86

Deadline: 2nd July

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[warlord jp]

BIG RUMBLE IN CONEY by WARLORD JP part 1
      NEW YORK 1981
Two shadows of desperate soldiers are fighting, clashing against their life, on the bloodied war spot of coney island. These two were best friends in a gang called the warriors, but but now they are full of hate, and only want to see their oponent dead. One wearing red vest labeled WARRIORS, one wearing a black vest labeled WARBLOODS!
  CLEON: im going to finish the error i started, im going to finish the warriors!!
SWAN: Youll never finish us off, the biggest mistake you didi in your life was create this wonderful gang called the warriors, so we could later finish you off!!
    Then swan does a quick movement, preparing himself to shank his ex warlord friend in the troat.
            CONEY ISLAND, 1980, 1 YEAR BEFORE THE INCIDENT!
  The coney island warriors are at their hangout, doing the usual. It took them one year to forget about their tragic loosses in the meeting, until one day swan was walking on the sand, and he saw a shadow standing by.
    The shadow became clearer and the person there had a rag over his head, an eye patch, and swan never in his life had seen such an ugly person. His face and body were completley bruised up, with huge bumps all over it! And the face all scared up. Then he saw the individuals right eye, and recognized that glow, that stare!!
  STRANGER: swan!!
SWAN: CLEON!!!
  Then swan run up to cleon, then cleon pushed him into the sand.
  CLEON: dont touch me!!!
SWAN: what is it?
CLEON: Im ending the gang, swan im ending the  WARRIORS!!. Because its a discrace!!
    SWAN: what do you mean?
CLEON: I hadnt known this gang would fell apart, look what happend to all of you in one night!! You let youre leader take a beating, you were cowards, you didnt come back for me!!
And you lost two of youre soldiers! Im still the leadrer and im ending the warriors, ill run a worthy gang, and dont want to see another red vest in coney again!!
      Swan his mind flowing with emotions about his leader coming back, sucked it up like a mam!
    SWAN: NEVER!!
    CLEON: looks like you still dont know who is the true soldier around here!!
Then cleon kicked swan in the ribs with tremendous force, elvowed him in the face, and before swan felt on the hot sand uncouncious, cleon told him.
  CLEON: You have 4 months, if youre not out of here by then prepare for war!!
                4 months later
Swan told everyone the news, including his fellow delegates. Everyone was upset about cleon, but they still had the heart flowing with red, WARRIOR red! And didnt want to see the gang end like that!
  SWAN: I hevent seen a lot of our warriors lately!
COCHISE: They probably out on vacation or something!
              COWBOY: hey guys im going out for some beers!
VERMIN: Ill go with you!
  When they were crossing the street they saw a whole army of soldiers, and recognized cleon in front of them! Cowboy noticed that cleon had changed a lot, he had a really disturbing look! His unpatched eye was stone cold red, and  the left side of his face was covered in a creppy skull painting like the rest of his gang, and he had a black vest labeled, the WARBLOODS???
VERMIN: Cowboy, remember cleons threat?
  COWBOY: OH MAN!!
They had noticed that cleons gang consisted of some baseball furies, some punks and some warriors that had doublecrossed them! All of them wearing the black vest like cleon, all of them had creppy skull peinting on their faces!
  CLEON: You should all have listen, now youre going to get wrecked!
    AJAX: The warriors are a bunch of wimps, now this... this is a real gang!
VERMIN: YOU TWO AJAX??
  CLEON: WASTE THEM WARBLOODS!!!
Cowboy and vermin took a severe beathing, but cleon stoped the warbloods, somehow he didnt want to see them dead!
  CLEON: come out swan!!!
All the warbloods were outside the warriors hangout!
CLEON: Lets settle this, lets have a deatmatch!! Pick youre best five soldiers, against my 5 best ones, including me and you! If i loose, you keep coney and my warblood soldiers, if i win, the warriors are finish and we get to keep coney!
  10 minutes later
Swan comes out of the hanghout with his best soldiers! Cochise, snow and two new muscle warriors!
    SWAN: were ready
Cone island seems to be getting sad of the confrontation about to happen, wonder whell stops functioning, and it starts raining.
  The 5 warriors and the 5 warbloods get ready for the fight at the top of therooftop of the hangout!  The first fight begins, its snow against a muscular furie lutentant
        SNOW: you were a good leader cleon, but i wont let the warriors go out like that, you would be the last persom i thought i would see act like this, ill take you down with both of my hands!
  Part 2 will be posted shortly!!

[Storm86]

*looks around* who wants to trade?

[warlord jp]

RUMBLE IN CONEY FINAL PART  WARLORD JP

  FURIE LUTENTANT: not so fast, you are mine!!
SNOW: Lets go then!!!
The furie swung at snows face, hit him on the nose, snow got up, kneed the furie on the ribs, the furie headlocked snow, and was pounding him on the head and on the face with extreme force. Snow could feell it, he would soon die! Then snow had a flashback when he was 16 years old when he first joined the warriors. It had taken a lot of self proved, and a lot of work. He then was imagining when cleon was handing him his vest, when he put it on. The feeling of being a warrior for the first time was great. This really angered him, and suddenly found himself with amazing power and energy. He elvowed the furie on the ribs breaking them, and punched the furie on the face so hard he  instantly broke his jaw, the furie felt of the rooftop of that amazing blow, and felt in the cold streets of coney, dead.
              The other muscled warrior was against a punk, but he got killed.
The other heavy muscle warrior named shadow beat the punk that killed the warrior.
        COCHISE: bring it on fool!!
Cochise fought well against another furie, but then died in a cuncusion by a straight blow in the skull.  Then the rest of the warriors coudnt take it anymore, and a huge rumble began against the warriors and the warbloods. Most of the warriors went after ajax for doublecrossing them. Then the fighting stoped. The tension could be felt in the air, they all looked at their leaders, and understood they needed their best mans to determine the outcome of this fight, the final showdown between cleon and swan was about to begin!
  SWAN: i wish i didnt have to do this, but cleon, you leave me no choice!!
    Swan and cleon got ready, the rain is hitting them hard on their faces, their determined looks facing each other.. Cleon started the fighting, kneeing swan on the stomach, swan punching him back on the face.  These two soldiers keept hitting, and hitting fighting for survival and reputation, out there wasting their lives for a leather vest behind their back, to prove which gang has more hearth, after all theyre just soldiers out there triying to survive.
The fighting was so intense, untill one of them droped on the floor.
  SWAN: You won cleon, finish me off!!!
Cleon getting ready for the final blow suddenly stoped!
  CLEON: looks like you are worth it soldier!!
SWAN:what?
      CLEON: i had died but i know i came back for a reason, Its now so clear now! I came back to test you one last time, to thest one last time that my WARRIORS are really the best!! My anger of the beating the riffs gave me blocked my heart and my mind!! I guess my work here is done now, and i have to go!! Kill me now soldier, be a true WARRIOR  and acomplished the final task i have for you, kill me now its the only way youll end this uselles feud!!
Swan seeing no other shanked cleon in the throat, and got covered by cleons blood... swans own blood.
CLEON: im proud of yyyouuu, gggoood jjjob!
SWAN: you were always the best, teaching me to become a better man, to grow up as a TRUE leader!
    Then the wonder whell started to function again, coney island started playing their ususal carnival music. The blood soaked cleons back vest turning it red, and the rain took slowly away the skull painting he had on his face. There he laid on the ground, like the true leader they used to know, not the angered warblood he temporaratley became, he laid like a true warrior, a good leader, THE BEST!!
THE END!!
         

[Cubs On The Red Carpet]

RUMBLE IN CONEY

PART 1
GRAMERCY

Masai walked up and down the room his glasses reflecting his fellow gang members in an array of wonderful colors. Occasionally he would pause and study his soldiers then keep on moving again then suddenly he stopped and stood still routed to his spot ?RIFFS!!?
?YEAH RIGHT!!? they shouted back at him, there was a pause then Masai started walking again staring down his soldiers as he slowly walked past them.
He began to speak
?You know what happened one year ago to this very day don?t you, Cyrus was killed, and it was his dream to rule this city with one united gang?
He carried on walking studying his soldiers the shuffle of his feet echoing out around the room. ?Well this time it?s gonna be a little different, were gonna eliminate every gang in this city and rule the big apple? ?CAN YOU DIG IT!!!!!?

The room erupted u as the Riffs started yelling and cheering. Then Masai lowered his hands ordering for quiet and started to continue his speech again ?Now if we want to do this properly we?ve gotta start of big real big. My soldiers in three days we hit Coney, send the word?

?CAN YOU DIG IT!!!!!!!!!!?

The room erupted once again into cheering and screaming in three days that real live bunch from Coney were gonna fell the full force and power of the riffs.  Who know what the streets will be like after that [bad word deleted].

quite short but part 2 will be up soon

[Cubs On The Red Carpet]

sorry guys  im gonna have to pull out i havent got enough time unlees my part one was good enough to beat jp doubt it though  :doubt:

[Storm86]

hmm. well as the judge of this here round, and in the interest of fairness, I rule this is a DOUBLE DQ whoever was to go up against the winner of this round automatically goes on to the next round.

[warlord jp]

hmm. well as the judge of this here round, and in the interest of fairness, I rule this is a DOUBLE DQ whoever was to go up against the winner of this round automatically goes on to the next round.

What do you mean, can you please explain?

[Storm86]

well I don't think it's really fair to declare a winner in this since Cubs couldn't finish his  so i just threw this round out .