The turnbulls shot cyrus!

[krossthug]

ok im just new at making these stories sooo yea......

The turnbulls shot cyrus!

Part 1: The meeting!

There was a big meeting with the riffs and alot of gang would been there,a gang called the turnbull acs were the first ones invited so they were the first ones to come sid(warlord) said 'the plans gonna be perfect we'll shoot cyrus and blame it on the warriors to get back at those wimps'.Then the meeting was on and everyone was there, cyrus talked and talked and then thrash (warcheif) reloaded his gun and shot cyrus, everyone heard the gun shot, and saw cyrus drop, then everything went real crazy and the riffs were looking at were the gun shots were, then thrash and sid said 'the warriors shot him we saw with our own eyes' then all the turnbulls said 'the warriors did it the warriors did it the warriors did it!' then sid ran at him and a warrior elbowed him and threw him away and then thrash jumped on him then the warrior moved away and kicked his head then a riff jumped in front of him and kicked him and pushed the warrior
back and then all the riffs started attack him.

To be continued.....


i no its bit dodgy but this is my first story thingy

[Baby Bear]

Alright thats cool I could definitely picture that in my mind keeep up!!

[papa arnold]

prettyv good mamigo do wqrite more im enjoying it

[krossthug]

thanks

part 2:

The riffs started attacking the warrior and he suddenly died,then the turnbulls smashed there way through a wall and then they were in a train station, then sid said 'thrash lay down a burner on that wall' so then thrash laid down a burner then killer(the muscle) found 8 cops running after them then sid said 'thrash get 5 of our people and split up ill meet u at union square' then a cop grabbed sid and then sid elbowed him at the face and ran away' the whole 9 people went in the same train.The next station was at union square,the went up the stairs and then they saw the punks so the hid somwhere,and the punk went down the stairs and found a turnbull and he whistled and called in 10 of his soldiers then thrash and sid said 'reck these losers bury them in this junkyard!!' then a the punks leader said 'were not hear to fight'
'then why r u here' were helping u get through our turf were allies with u!'  then all the turnbulls said
'oh yeah lol' so they soldiered rite through then a group of girls just came and they said 'i no wat u did! u shot cyrus' then sid said 'killer reck these sissys but dont kill them there only sissys u can do it by urself'
so killer grabbed a bat and owned them and killer said 'pffft bunch of wannabes' then they made it to the next station and they were surrounded by cops and one of the cop punched killer on the face and he fell on the track.

Will killer survive or will he die horribly.....

[Baby Bear]

It seems like killer will die!! anyway this is solid!!Keep going,man

[papa arnold]

It seems like killer will die!! anyway this is solid!!Keep going,man

hey you never no he could role to the other side of the tracks so the train couldnt get him anyway a few pointers for you----since your new at writing it think when you do speech you do new line and in the bit that says they smashed there through and they were in the train station (or somthing like that)....it seems a bit rushed try making them do a little bit of a scene like talk to each other or even better run from some cops



just some few pointers

[krossthug]

lol yea it was true i was rushing ill fix it up now maybe

killer ran for it and the cop  grabbed him then kicked him away and fell on the train tracks.


Part 3- Boppin past the orphans

Luckily the train stopped and only hurt killer real badly so then sid said 'no one hurts one of soldiers like that kill those wimps!' and then the punk arrived and they both started bopping through the cops and finally they killed em so they took the next train to tremont (orphans turf) so they went past through there turf and just before they were gonna get to the next station they found some small time outfit called the orphans the leader sully said'wat the hell do u think u soldiering through my turf, we got a heavy rep we can beat u easily' but the turnbulls just kept walking but them wimpy orphans couldnt do anything bout it
and then finally they made it to there turf to there hangout then one of the turnbull taggers said look a warriors burner rite on my one!

...........

[krossthug]

I was waiting for someone to answer but ill just start

Part 4-The Big Battle

So They Glared at the burner 'Those wimps are gonna gett badly wasted, im gonna kill those warriors' Killer said 'Ur not ready, ur hurt badly i think u should stay at the hangout' sid said. one of the warriors was listening, and then walked away with all there plans. Sid said 'Everyone, Grab everything u can were gonna beat these small timers and bury them 6 feet under!, stupid motherf...' before sid could say anything thrash pointed at a warriors trynna run away 'get that warrior!' Thrash said, so one of the turnbulls threw a molotiv and the warrior got badly injured and thrash threw him off down the stairs and the warrior died. 'Now were going to storm there hangout and beat those small timers!!' so they all marched in there big bus and they saw 2 other warriors and the warriors run for there life when they were chased by the bus one of the turnbulls threw there knife and hit one of the warriors (cowboy) 'Go full speed!!' 'thrash said to one of the soldiers and ran the warrior over. They were at the station and they arrived to coney next day later. 'Lets march rite through these lame wimps territory' Sid said, they raided every store in coney and the warriors couldnt stop the turnbulls, one of the civvilians went to the warriors and said 'Swan! the turnbulls are here and there raiding our stores' then the warchief said 'alrite, snow get all ur soldiers and kik the hell out of these guys'
So 'snow' grabbed all the soldiers that he could and marched to the turnbulls 'TURNBULLS BEAT THESE BLOODY SMALL TIMERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' sid said' and they all yelled and the battle was one 'killer stay here and watch, when these wimps are done for bring all the soldiers to the hangout, thrash ur with me' sid said 'alrite' 'thrash said.....

Part 5-End of the warriors

So sid and thrash arrived at the hangout then a warrior came and said 'oh crap a turnbull get into the hangout!!!' so they followed him and went in the hangout 'heh the final battle is on warriors' sid and thrash said 'u and me 1 on 1 rite here rite now' warriors warchief said 'and if i die warriors kill the turnbulls' so it started sid grabbed a knife and the warriors warchief grabbed a machete 'its on!' sid said so sid went for the tummy and stabbed him then the warchief cut him on the back and the both bleeded then sid threw his knife at his eye and died 'fuh-fuh*cough* small timer'sid said, 'WARLORD WATCH OUT'thrash said then one of the warriors kiked him in the face and another one jumped on him and stepped on his face 'NOOOOO SID!!!!!!!!!!!!  UR GONNA PAY U WIMPS!!!!" thrash said then everything was shaking and a bunch of turnbulls turned up 'i told u ill be here' killer said 'reck these wimps they kill sid we kill them more painfully!' thrash said. 2 Minutes later all the warriors died except for one but he was real beat up. 'U join the turnbulls or die' thrash said 'ok ill *cough* join*cough*' the warrior said. 'ok burn this hangout with ur molotives' thrash said so they went outside and the burned it and they tagged all the warriors tags and claimed half of coney of there turf. 'hahaha we got a real solid rep now with 2 turfs and all, and im talking a really solid rep almost bigger than the riffs, and killer, i thought u wouldve died' thrash said and killer smiled. Everything worked out perfectly, thrash came warchief , they got away of killing cyrus and the warriors got japped.

                                                Turnbulls shot cyrus 2: The destroyers.

lol sorry for so much riting i did like 2 parts in one coz i cant be bothered doing another post lol