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a cochise story

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:41 pm
by papa arnold
the toilet stank the other gang was on the floor me snow and ajax had traveled down to tremont to get some frwsh wool when we ran into some bush league rejects called the orphans or somthing
"f*****g small timers"snow said
"their a bunch o'wimps i told you didnt i cochise"ajax said looking at me i just nodded we walked out of the apartment snow gave one a kick on the way out i just laughed and hopped over the banister of the stairs we got to the street ajax stopped suddenly in his tracks i  bumped into him not knowing what was going on i looked over his shoulder about 15 orphans all carrying switch blades snow picked up a pipe me and ajax cleched our fists
"snow ajax are ya ready"i said nervously
"lets do this"snow said
"yeah lets waste these lame f***s"ajax said confident we charged forward knockind down a few of them we got past  the line of them and sprinted off down the street my legs filled with jelly we ran down an ally ajax was behind me and snow  some of the orphans stopped but about 12 of them still chased us we hopped over a fence and his behind some crates
"hey look a door lets get in before they find us"snow said we walked over the door keeping an eye out for them orphans me and snow hit the door a few times but it would not open ajax helped us out abit the orphans appeared around the corner
"here take this"ajax said he pulled out a planked of wood ajax stepped behind us one otphand was ahead of the other he tried for ajax but ajax uppercutted him in the jaw then kneed him in the stomach i hit the door with the wood..it burts open ajax came rushing in i through the plank of wood at one and ran off folwing the ajax ans snow we ran up the stairs i jumpd up two stairs at a time i alomst got to the top whe n one stpe broke my foot got stuck down the gap ajax came crahsing down breaking the piece of wood that held my foot in the gap  the orphns had just reached the stairs when we ran off we ran for about a mile before we got to the station we hopped over the turnstils and got on the train the door closed when the orphans came charging round the corner i sat down and dozed off i woke up at coney 10:14 pm we waled for the hangout and for a drin...we stepped in and everyone looked at us swan came running over with rembrandt
"what happened up there"swan asked
"oh well we got there and walked around the streets for abit we walked in the public toilets when abotu 5 small time cliques the orphans or somthing  so we racked hem and walke dout on the street when more of those lame f***s were all lined up packed to the bone we chared forward knocking dwn a few we ran down and ally and and bust through an old building we ran up the stairs but i got me fppt stuck but managed to get free we ran for the station and now were here"i said to swan rembrandt had a shokcing look on his face
"so what we gonna do 'bout it warchief huh"ajax asked cleon walked in the hangout all bruised
"cleon what happened were the others"swan asked
"we got japped by the orphans down in tremont"cleon said
"ha ha so did we"i replied
"and we're gonna get revenge on them"cleon said"get the soldiers packed and ready"he added



part 2 coming up  :D

Re: a cochise story

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:54 am
by papa arnold
part 2


"cleon we're all ready"swan said cleaning a knife
"good noe lets roll i want those orphans stomped out by morning you hear me soldiers"cleon said standing on the table looking around at the warriors"ajax where your weapon"he added
"look im not a wimp so i dont need some dumb ass weapon ok!"ajax said
"fine lets roll we only need 30 soldiers down there so im taking you lot"cleon said the 30 soldiers including ajax snow cochise cowoby vermin the fox and swan went with him they got on the train to tremont most of the soldiers dozed off to sleep but cleon kept a wide eye out they got to tremont and they stepped off
"swan you snow cochise cowboy and those 12 and il take the rest we split off and ake for their hangout"cleon said swan lead his group out of the station and down to the park


"look some patrols 5 of 'em"snow said
"ok cochise snow me cowboy and rhino will take care of them you guys wait here and if we get wasted i want you to rack these lame f***s""swan said  me snow swan cowboy and rhino walked into the playground where the orphans were sitting n the swing swan puled out his knife cowboy had a bat asnow had a 2x4 rhino had a broken bottle and i pulled out a wrench swan ran up hopped over te fence and tried for one but the orphans dodged it..the orphan went for swan who ducked and lunged the knife into the orphabs leg the  orphan let out a little whelp and fell on the ground swan picked up a brick and cracked it on the orphans skull the rest of the patrols all looked in fear  cowboy came running over and clubbed one in the stomach then in the face 2 down 3 to go i hopped over the gate and ran for a orpans with a blade he swung at me a few times but i dodged them i kicked the side of his stomach them hit him on the head a few time with my wrench rhino crashed through the gate  slashed one in the neck and kicked him in the family jewels snow stepped in the playground gate one orphan was staring cowboy right in the eye snow snuck up behind him and WHAM he hit the orphans in the head blood spurted on his vest
"err discusting"snow said wiping it off



we  walked back to the others but they had diserpeared some where snow ran up and saw them beind escorted by all 30 orphans holding blades and broken bottle to their back and necks
"swan i think you  should have a look at this"snow said swan me and the rest walekd voer to the end of the ally
"holy s***"rhino said"we gotta get them"rhino added
"cool it il go distract those bush league rejects"i said snow handed me a bottle and some matches we sprimted over to the ally opposite us on the other end of the street i kicked a bum he woke up
"hey you il give you $10 if you give me that rag"i said
"yeah sure take"the bum said hesat up  i ran bhack over to swan and the guys i placed the rag on the lid of the bottle and held it in place with an elastic band  i lit rag and through it at a shop windwo the orphans all dived down and out warriors ran away ack towards us the orphans got wasted we all leaned back in the ally and smiled suddenly i felt a tug on my vest
"hey you where my $10"it was the bum
"get lost man i aint giving you s***"i said i kicked the bum ad he ran away we met up with cleon group at the hangout but it seems that the orphans had got about 20 more soldiers in a week we bustd in there
"come on orphans you think you can take on the warriors prove it motherf***** prove it"cleon shouted the orphans all jumped and got ready to fight






part3 soon
"holy

Re: a cochise story

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:26 pm
by adam88
hey not bad, it came out pretty good.