The Punks And The Lizzies:One heck of a team

[Warriorfan54321]

The Bowery 1979 Night of the conclave.

A payphone in the lizzies hangout was ringing

Lisa:Hello
Johnny:Hey Lisa, look i'm gonna be honest i went down to that big meeting up in the bronx, real mess.
Lisa:Well, what happened.
Johnny:The Warriors happened, they shot Cyrus look if you see any waste em.
Lisa;Ok, so where are you now.
Johnny:A bar up in the bronx were heading back down there gonna really take these dudes down there's eight of em at leaset leave one for us.

Johnny hangs up

Lisa:Hey Jessie,got your gun?
.....
Sometime later.
Lisa:Why we waiting here man, these warriors ain't gonan show.
Jessie:Look, Union square is the main stop for all the trains they got to get off for wherever they heading.


Cochise:here are the others?
rem:Looks like were the first ones here.
Vermin:But we aint the only ones here.
Cochise:Well hey,hey,hey, look what you find here in the big city.
Rem:Come on guys we ain't got time.
Vermin:You kiddin, times what we got planty of.

The Warriors were walking over
Jessie:Told you.
Lisa;well sorry.
Jessie:shh.
The warriors were now all there smiling apart from Rembrandt but to the lizzies he was just a guy with an afro.
Jessie:Hi.
The Lizzies took them back to their hangout.
Cochise:Hey where's your dude? chicks like you always got dudes.

Lisa knew they were on their way back and just made up a lie to comfort the warriors
Lisa;They're up in the bronx for the night, dont worry they're real lame, real cripples.
Vermin:Hey when i got off that train and saw you I said to myself, oh baby throw some of that my way.
Jessie;Aw..come on.

Cochise:You know you the first friendly faces we seen all night.
Lisa:Hey its how we are, now relax look around take your pick.
Vermin:Oh hurt me hurt me...hey what clic is this.
Lisa:Were the lizzies.
Vermin:The lizzes hey i like that, thats great really great.

Lisa;Glad to hear it

Rembrandt was looking around , sees a lizzie bolt the door and tanother reach into her pocket.
Lisa:So you're the famous warriors, the guys who shot Cyrus.
Rem:S**T THE CHICKS ARE PACKED! THE CHICKS ARE PACKED!
The lizzies tried shooting the warriors but due to that one warning they were ready, they dodged a bullet, they smashed a chair on one of their faces, and broke down the door the most damage was a cut to the arm of rembrandt.

S**t shouted out the group.

the payphone rang.
Lisa:Hey.
Johnny:So did they come?
Lisa:They came alright
Johnny:Did you waste em?
Lisa:No, we almost got em though looks like its up to you.
Johnny:Ok, well it happens see ya later.
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The Bowery station

Johnny:They didnt get em.
Jack:Aw man.
Hayner:Hello, is that a warrior.
Johnny:Yep, hey Jack pass em my skates.
Jack:Ok here.

Johnny put his skates on
Johnny:Look i'll follow him, see where he goes  but i'm guessing he'll be near the mens room, remember the radio said coney island warriors the next train to coney, would be the nearest station to the mens room.

Jack;Good luck man.

Johnny quickly skated until he was close to the warrior(Swan) he slowly followed him down a ramp and on every corner made sure he wasn't running. until they reached the mens room and he was stopped.

Mercy:Hey I need to talk to you.

Jack and Hayner came around at this time
They all had smiles and looked at these two total starngers they knew just had to be wasted.

Mercy:See that guy with the skates...over there he's got them dudes with him, they're tryong to hurt you.
Swan:I know they're on my a** but now they know I know it.

Johnny:*whispers*Liitle b***h seh has to go too.
Jack nodded.
The other warriors came Swan tilted his eyes in the direction of the mens room doro,t hey all walked in.
Swan:Come on.
Mercy:I can;'t go in there that's the mens room.
Vermin:Are you kidding.

some othe rpunks showed up.
Johnny:They're in there lets do this, lets become the heroes of new york.

They slowly came in and ech one checked under the cubicles and the fight started when the warrior with the afro sprayed his paint in johnny's eyes.

AHHHH!
Two ganged up and kept hitting one in  the face others were being knocked down by their own weapon it was an even fight with brawling,  one wearing indian styled clothing, pulled something round one of my punks necks and pulled him down. The man being held hit the other punk and chucked him through the cubicle. The fight was over.

Swan;Let's go.

Johnny:Ow...guys are you dead?
No
Johnny:come on..ah lets go.

The Punks yet again called the lizzies.

Johnny:Yeah we failed too.
Lisa:The thing is it wasn't them.
Johnny:What?
Lisa:Yeah it was a gang called the rogues.
Johnny:Oh man, i knew tey looked like they knew something
Lisa:Next time we'll get our facts right that's all.
Johnny:Yeah and start working as a team, i'll call you later it seems one of our guys wants to tell me somethign
hangs up.

Johnny:What?
Hayner:One of our patrolers was at the 96th street platform, and... well you should look yourself.

The Punks took the train to the 96th street platform, the cops had barred off certain aread but the punks had to go through it to show johnny what they found.
Johnny:.....here.
Hayner:Yeah.

Johnny:Looked and almost puked, he hadn't seen anything like this before it was a body ripped to pieces on the track by the train the obly bit left was  a warriors patch on the vest.

[New Jersey Warrior]

awesome story man. you deffinently have talent as a writer.

[Warriorfan54321]

thanks man, i'll do more on this story due to the ideas i've had for a punks story.
Thanks again

54321 out for the rest of today

[Warriorfan54321]

Johnny:Come on we gotta get to coney, get that vest.
Jack picked it up and tried to without being sick.
Jack:.....*Cough* lets go.

The Punks got on the train.

Johnny:Search the jacket they may think it could be anyone.
Jack:Lets...see
Jack pulled out a knife it was dented everywhere and the handle had cracks in it due to the train, but he could make out a picture of a fox on the cracked handle.
Jack:An old knife that has a picture of a fox very hard to find these days, this dude knew where to get his stuff.
Johnny:What else.
Jack:A map of the city marked with all the gangs territories pretty ripped up though.

Johnny;Dude musta been a scout.
Jack:Yeah a good one too, not one of our scouts has two maps this other one has the perfect tagging spots marked down.

Johnny:Woah this guy went around. keep it in your hands then see if they can identify who's jacket this was.

The Punks were now at Coney Island stillwell avenue the stop which where the Warriors knew they made it.
Johnny:Come on then guys.

They came across the old boardwalk and the old shelter

PAST EVENT(flashback):
WARRIORS COME OUT TO PLAYYYYY!
WARRIORS COME OUT TO PLAYYYYY!
WARRIORS COME OUT TO PLAYYYYYYYYYYY!

PAST EVENT(Flashback) END:

Then they came across a wall with Warriors written across it.
Johnny:This must be the place. HEY WARRIORS GET OUT HERE!

Cowboy:Who the hell is that?
Johnny:It's the Punks your warlord here?
Cowboy:He's left, I'm warlord now.
Johnny:sorry to hear he left, look we found somin of one of your guys thought you could identify who he was with the stuff we found.

Cowboy:Sure, let me get vermin. HEY VERMIN COME OUT HERE!. he can identify everyone if they got wasted, so where'sd you find it?
Johnny:96th street Pltaform.
Cowboy had a look of shock on his face, like he knew who it was then ran inside.

Vermin:Jeez, so what you dudes want.
Johnny:Come down here.

The one called vermin ran down the stairs.
Johnny:We found this vest at the 96th street platform
Vermin:Christ...aything else.
Johnny:Yeah..two maps and a knife with a fox on the handle.

Vermin:........Fox.
Johnny:Yeah see right...
Vermin:NOT THE KNIFE1 he was our scout, his nickname was Fox.
Johnny:Do you want to keep these?
Vermin:Yeah i'll take em in, and thanks for bringing them we wondered what happened to him.
he went in with a huge sulk who could blame him, the punks were about to leave when they noticed The Orphans were near the Warriors hideout.
Johnny:Hey the least we could do for these guys is get rid of these lame a**es then we need to go to the bowery.
Jack:Lets do it.

To be continued...

[New Jersey Warrior]

great addition to your story. hope to see more soon.

[rob14]

well done keep it up this is a great writing so far

[Warriorfan54321]

Johnny had his skates ready and started skating around the warriors hangout making sure the invading orphans didnt spot them.

Johnny:Ok we need to get packed I've got my knife and I can use my skates but hey we could just use our fists for these lamewads.
Jack:Yeah my fists need a little training with punching bags.
Johnny:Lets move it then.

They came into the orphans iew none ran away although you could tell every single orphan was scared out of their colours.

Johnny:Why you guys here in Coney.

Sully:We could ask you the same question.
Johnny:We were returning something that belonged to the warriors, why's it matter to you?
Sully:Don't you give the Orphans any sass.
Johnnny:Oh no, what you gonna do.?
Suly:That's it ORPHANS...
sully clicked his fingers
Sully:WASTE EM!

Sully ran off while five other orphans creeped towards the punks.

Johnny:This is gonna be too easy.
Johnny kicked an oprhan in the head and knocked him  out due to his skates. Jack held one while Hayner hit him.
Johnny stabbed two an the last one wa staken out by Hayner.
Johnny:What a bunch of wimps my granny could fight better than these dudes.
Jack:We better get moving we need to catch that loud mouth.
Johnny:He's probably headed for Stillwell avenue train gets there in what two minutes we'll make it there.
in one.

Hayner and Jack ran while Johnny skated ahead of them they went up the stairs this slowed Johnny down but it was good since the train was coming closer and closer.

Johnny:Hey, Orphan.
Sully:Oh s**t.
Johnny:Don't miss your train.
Johnny kicked him in the gut sending him flying on the tracks the train ran him over just as it was stopping.

Johnny:Come on we need to get to the bowery.

Meanwhile in The Bowery.

The Lizzies were out looking for The Punks whent hey came across a rival gang.

Lisa:Oh s**t.
Jessie:These dudes.
Lisa:Well looks like we gotta rumble ehre girls.
Jessie:What against a bunch of guys.
Lisa:SO WHAT DO YOU SAY WE DO?
Jessie:I say......

To be continued....

[Warriorfan54321]

Ok lets recap The Punks are now on a train heading for the bowery, they just beat up a few orphans and fund out who the vest belonged too.
Meanwhile The Lizzies have been confronted against a male gang I may aswell tell you this male gang is the Baseball Furies.....

Jessie:I say....WE RUN!

The lizzies ran as fast as possible they didnt want to fight these guys since they were armed  with bats and they wern't packed at all they'd just have to hide and wait for the Punks.

Meanwhile on a train heading to the Bowery.

Johnny:You know what I don't get the whole shooting of Cyrus thing I mean we were there.

F;ashback:
Cyrus:CAN YOU DG IT!
Yeah
Cyrus:CAN YOU DIG IT!
YEAH!
Cyrus:CAN YOU DIG IT!
YEAHHH!

BANG.
Ends

Johnny:why did we just believe it straight away I mean we know who it was now but what if they said it was the Hi-hats or The Furies what about the lizzies what would happen if they were there and got blamed.

Jack;It's all f****d up man, but we all know Cyrus was right so why aint the gangs joining up.
Johnny:Cus were stupid jack we can't rebuild the bridges our enemies burnt.

They stopped.

Jack:Well we better go find The Lizzies Jessies gonna be worried about me man.
Johnny:Too right.

The three Punks were  confronted by some furies.

Hayner:Oh s**t, Warlord i'll go get our men damn where are our men.
Johnny:They're at the Lizzies place I told them to wait up there go get em.


Hayner ran as fast as he could and when he got to the lizzies place locked the door.

Hayner;Christ.
Kyle;What's wrong man.
Hayner:Furies they're here.
Kyle;aw man.
Star:Hey Hayner you seen Jessie.
Hayner: No not since...oh no. The Furies must be after them too.
Star:Those Facepaint freaks.
Hayner:Yeah, come on Punks Johnny and Jack must be getting wrecked up at the statiopn lets move it.

Johnny and jack wern't getting wrecked but they were having problems some Furies had been stabbed by Johnny but still they kept on coming.
Johnny:If we die, we die with honour.
Hayner;You aint dying at all.
It was Hayner and the other Punks all armed with bats pipes and knives and the onslaught began Furies fell and they fell ahrd one was thrown on the tracks ready to be ran over others were struck by bats and pipes and the remainders were stabbed.

Johnny:Alright lets get moving.
Hayner:We gotta save Jessie first she's gotta be with Lisa and some other lizzies.
Johnny:WHAT! Punks Lets go.

The war had begun and it seemd to be a big one but the worst was yet to come

to be continued...

[charlie_fisher]

real good man you have great talent.i could imagine that story in my head it was so realistic.keep it up.

[Warriorfan54321]

Thanks man.


here's an update


The Punks ran around The Bowery looking for the Lizzies and they did find them but not alone.

Johnny:It's the Furies.
Hayner:I'm gonna kill that one with the yellow facepaint.

he pointed to the one who was threatning Jessie with his bat.

Johnny:Everybody packed.
Punks:Oh yeah.
Johnny:Sweet, lets go waste these chumps.

Johnny skated rapidly and rammed himself into a Fury.

Johnny:WASTE EM!

The Punks charegd with a warcry. They teamed up and took out a blue fury with a pipe and a bat.
The yellow fury got stabbed by Hayner.
Hayner:Yeah.

Hayner then got hit in the head by a bat he wasn't wasted just knocked out.

The fight was raging on some Punks had been wasted and some Furies had too. Whatever the Punks did to p** the Furies off it definately caused this war.

a minute later the warzone was now like a wrestling ring just a few furies left but there were also less Punks then there were to start out with.

Johnny stabbed  some furies while other punks stabbed them The fight had ended but they didnt come out all clean they were covered in cuts and bleeding themselves.

Johnny:Hayner man you're up.
Hayner:Where's....where's Jessie.
Johnny;I don't know man we saw three lizzies run off
Hayner;One missing.
Johnny:might not be Jessie man come on don't woryy about it.
Hayner:No warlord for once I can't take your order.
Johnny:I understand don't make a habbit out of this man.

Johnny followed im while the other punks went to ice their wounds. and make a memorial for the wasted Punks.

Hayner:Ok she can't be that far away

they looked in every alley no Jessie. In every store..no Jessie then they looked in the local park and there they saw it happen....

Jessie:You wouldn't beat up a girl now would you.

The furie nodded with an evil smile and attacked her with his bat he kept attacking her she was wasted with three hits but he ust kept hitting.
Hayner:NOOOOO!
Johnny:That little f**k

ohnny skated in the park and kicked the fury in the face.
Johnny:You just killed a very good freind of mine you dick.
The fury put on another evil smile.
Johnny:Let's see you smile at this.

Johnny got his knife out and tried to stab the fury but the fury dodged and hit Johnny on the head. He stole hi knife and stabbed him.
Hayner:Johnny....

Hayner ran in picke dup the furies bat and repeatidly hit him over and over and over.
he didnt care if he'd wasted him he just saw his girlfreind and his best freind get wasted.
A tear came in his eye when he saw their two bodies just lying there. He would now have to break it to the other Punks. Hayner woulked to the hangout for the first time within three years all alone...


to be contiued....

[Warriorfan54321]

Kyle:Hayner and Johnny are taking their sweet time.
Star:And Jessie.
Lisa:oh god I hope they're alright.
Kyle:Furies could of got em.

Hayner walked through the door with tears in his eyes.

Jack:What's up Hayner.
Hayner;Jessie she's dead and....
Star:S**t  them furies I knew we should of kept an eye on her.
Hayner;It wasn't just her who got wasted.
Star;Well who else.
Hayner:Johnny.
The room went scilent.
All the Punks sulked and Lisa cried they were close.

The rooms scilence was broken when kyle said...
Kyle:So...what now?
Hayner:We need to put Johnny's name in our memorial and decide who becomes the new warlord.

Hayner then ran into his room.

Hayner:I'm going to do something else aswell.


The room again went scilent they never had to pick a warlord since Johnny was always around he didnt want to pick a warcheif thoguht he'd leave it to the punks to decide.

Hayner:Hey Jack you can paint good right.
Jack;Yeah.
Hayner;Come in ehre and help me with this.
Jack slowly walked in

Lisa had ran into her room and star followed trying to calm her down noone knew what to say or do.

Hayner and Jack cme out after thirty long minutes wth a painting of Johnny.

From now on any warlord we've had for more then three years we paint them and put the painting on a wall it canbe our wall of warlords.

Lisa came out after hearing these words looked at the painting and smiled at Hayner and Jack.

Jack;So i guess we vote now huh.

Hayner:Yeah, ok how we going to do this.
Jack:lets do it like a president election two candidates get picked and we vote for em.

Hayner;Ok lets nominate who goes up.

Kyle;I nominate Jack.

Jack stood up and walked to the front.

Hayner:Ok second nomination anyone....
The Punks ahd no answer.
Hayner:Lizzies you can vote too.

Lisa:I nominate Hayner

Hayner had a moment of shock but slowly went to the front with Jack.

Hayner:ok....er...who votes for Jack.


ten Punks hands went up but no Lizzies.

Hayner:And...me.

twelve Punks hands raised and all the lizzes that were there too.

Jack;Hayner wins.

They cheered Hayner was yet again shocked and said to Jack like nothing happened.

Hayner;Could you find me something.

Jack:sure

Hayner whispered in his ear what he wanted Jack to find. and gave him some moey.

ten minutes later.

Hayner had dressed in a pair of overalls the Warlord wears them and then he sat down.

Jack came through the door with a brand new pair of skates.

hayner put them on and  rolled around a bit.

Hayner:Alright Punks, new warlord new War, the Furies hit us so we hit em back for all the punks that got wasted and for Johnny and Jessie too.

They all cheered and gethered together ready for a war.


to be continued...

[New Jersey Warrior]

great story man. Like i said before,  you have some real talent at writting.
  Man i wish i had as much talent as you.

[Warriorfan54321]

Hey I just think up a story and when I've thought p a storyline i think what the characters would say and ut it down on paper anyone can do that it doesnt take talent to do that if you have a story in your head just write it.


and thankyou for the comments I'll be updating after i've read all my replied posts.

[Warriorfan54321]

Rivrside later that night

Hayner:Those Furies are dead every single one of em.
Jack:Shouldn't we send someone to get some allies they do have alot of numbers.
Hayner;Kyle what's their full strength.
Kyle:'bout fifty
Jack:More than what we brought.

Hayner:Ok, who are our closest allies to here.
Jack:The Turnbulls
Hayner:Jack take two soldiers with you and get some Turnbulls down here.

Jack took two newbloods with him.
Hayner:As for the rest of us were gonna divide and conquer rule with an iron fist...noone survives tonight WE ARE TAKING OVER RIVERSIDE!

YEAH!


The Punks divided into three warparties Kyle went and told Jack where his would be waiting while the others went off to waste some Furies.


All the warparties had ten men in them that wa twenty less then the whole of the furies but including the three that went for allies they had a ten percent chance of them all telling the rest they'd be split into two turfs The Attacks had begun.


Warparty 1:Arcade.
The arcade was empty which arcades never are until closed and the sign said open.
The Furies must be here.

And they were at a new fad in the arcades simulation and guess which one they were playing....baseball.

Hayner hit one of the furies in the back of the head the one playing the simulator swung the bat which was attached to a wire which made him fall. The Punks took their advantage from then as they stabbed and swung all sorts of weapons the arcade was done with but they spotted another bunch of furies across the street bats in hand ready to fight all with evil smiles on their faces.

if this was happening to them what about the other two warparties?


to be continued...