Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Planet Ryushi ,2134
Planet Ryushi. A place that was inhabited by colonist over 20 years ago. For the longest the planet has been abandoned. All that was left behind is gravel and broken buildings. The breeze of the night sky rush past the dirt and dust causing it to move out of place. Such a dead place. Unfortunately two species were responsible for the disappearance for the colonist and the destruction. The deadlist creatures in the galaxy.
The Alien and the Predator.
***
A huge spacecraft traveled the universe. This elegant ship was able to fly in the chronosphere of the sun and use invisibility cloaking. As the ship cruised through space inside were fierce hunters called the Yautja(Predator). These beast are equipped with brains and brauns and stand up to 7ft along with incredible and deadly weapons. Such honorable and strict creatues thrived in this ship in numerous clans it only takes one of these species to take out the population of gangs in any city.
The screen in the middle of the deck gleamed with a red dot blinking. Its a signal letting the Yautja know that there is still lifeforms dwelling on the old planet called Ryushi. The predators were familiar with this planet. The Elder yautja approaches the monitor and stares at the dot clicking his horned mandables. It looks like he is talking to himself. He knows that his squad of hunters can take this chance on breeding more aliens since they have perserved three eggs that have been produced by the alien queen that later died due to a miscarriage which made her loose lots of her acidic blood.
The Elder turns his head as his gray dreadlocks swung across his neck. His eyes light up to a yellow green. He has a idea.
***
The sound of metal clinging and the sound of small breathing came from the weaponry room. Three of the best clan hunters were hired by the Elder to do this job. Owashira was the brains of the group. Shafaru was the bearer of the three eggs.He was the youngest but he knew how to get around on his own. Yey'tara was the toughest. The three beast walked into the main hall ready for their mission.
The main hall was a beautiful site,golden columns shooting up into the darkness, the wall covered with skulls of previous centuries and memories of glory past, bathed in golden light was the place where the creatures gathered.
There the Elder stood before them. Inspecting his hunters for hire. He can count on them for sure especially Owashira. The brownish skin of Owashira looked as if it was sweaty while the mesh rested on his stomach. His mask was on right away. He was different from other predators but some thought he looked stupid. He had two blades stick out the mouthpiece of the mask and a mohawk like metal forged on the top of his dark gray mask.
The other two Yautja had normal masks and did not care if they were different from other parts of their society.
"I assume that there are more humans left on planet Ryushi. Capture them and bring them back so we can breed more aliens." The Elder said in a guttural voice that was deep and frightening.
The three humanoids looked up at their leader and took in every word he said. Now they are off to their individual dropships. The three shuttles target the planet Ryushi and fortunately the Yautja land safely.
What lifeform is on this planet? I thought all the humans died.
Honest feedback.
Chapter 2.......Coming soon.
Planet Ryushi. A place that was inhabited by colonist over 20 years ago. For the longest the planet has been abandoned. All that was left behind is gravel and broken buildings. The breeze of the night sky rush past the dirt and dust causing it to move out of place. Such a dead place. Unfortunately two species were responsible for the disappearance for the colonist and the destruction. The deadlist creatures in the galaxy.
The Alien and the Predator.
***
A huge spacecraft traveled the universe. This elegant ship was able to fly in the chronosphere of the sun and use invisibility cloaking. As the ship cruised through space inside were fierce hunters called the Yautja(Predator). These beast are equipped with brains and brauns and stand up to 7ft along with incredible and deadly weapons. Such honorable and strict creatues thrived in this ship in numerous clans it only takes one of these species to take out the population of gangs in any city.
The screen in the middle of the deck gleamed with a red dot blinking. Its a signal letting the Yautja know that there is still lifeforms dwelling on the old planet called Ryushi. The predators were familiar with this planet. The Elder yautja approaches the monitor and stares at the dot clicking his horned mandables. It looks like he is talking to himself. He knows that his squad of hunters can take this chance on breeding more aliens since they have perserved three eggs that have been produced by the alien queen that later died due to a miscarriage which made her loose lots of her acidic blood.
The Elder turns his head as his gray dreadlocks swung across his neck. His eyes light up to a yellow green. He has a idea.
***
The sound of metal clinging and the sound of small breathing came from the weaponry room. Three of the best clan hunters were hired by the Elder to do this job. Owashira was the brains of the group. Shafaru was the bearer of the three eggs.He was the youngest but he knew how to get around on his own. Yey'tara was the toughest. The three beast walked into the main hall ready for their mission.
The main hall was a beautiful site,golden columns shooting up into the darkness, the wall covered with skulls of previous centuries and memories of glory past, bathed in golden light was the place where the creatures gathered.
There the Elder stood before them. Inspecting his hunters for hire. He can count on them for sure especially Owashira. The brownish skin of Owashira looked as if it was sweaty while the mesh rested on his stomach. His mask was on right away. He was different from other predators but some thought he looked stupid. He had two blades stick out the mouthpiece of the mask and a mohawk like metal forged on the top of his dark gray mask.
The other two Yautja had normal masks and did not care if they were different from other parts of their society.
"I assume that there are more humans left on planet Ryushi. Capture them and bring them back so we can breed more aliens." The Elder said in a guttural voice that was deep and frightening.
The three humanoids looked up at their leader and took in every word he said. Now they are off to their individual dropships. The three shuttles target the planet Ryushi and fortunately the Yautja land safely.
What lifeform is on this planet? I thought all the humans died.
Honest feedback.
Chapter 2.......Coming soon.
Last edited by Baby Bear on Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:42 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Chapter 2
One by one the three pods crashed into the desolate and dead planet of Ryushi. The shuttles stuck upright out of the ground as the doors opened as the creatures proceeded to step out with no fear what so ever. They had to do their job and get it over with. Owashira stood straight and examined the cracked expansion of land and dilapidated homes. Its possible that some human might be thriving on what little they can find on this planet.
"We should split up and bring the survivors to the shuttles." Shafaru said adjusting the backpack of eggs on his back.
Owashira slightly cocked his head."Yes good idea but we don't know if any xenomorphs might be left."
Yey'tara chimed in."Well if there are any that means there shouldn't be any human lifeforms left. If it so happens that these two subjects are here then the humans must have weapons with them in order to defend themselves."
Shafaru and Owashira caustiously took off onto the as Yey'tara followed. They took a abrupt stop in middle of the city of Ryushi.
"We will split up." Owashira decided."Shafaru you will take the west part of the city. Yey'tara will the east as I take part in going north. We come back to the shuttle if any probelms get out of hand."
The two Yautja agreed with Owashira.
"Shafaru will you have any probelms with the eggs?" Owashira asked.
"No sir. I got it under control."
The three yautja disappeared into the darkness of the city.
***
A huge ship floated in space. It appears this ship wasn't boarded with our Yautja buddies. These people were rebels that managed to escape from a planet of bounty hunters that made them slaves. These rebels eventually made off with a few weapons to defend themselves later on in their travel.
Inside a young with short brown hair was controlling the ship. His name was AJ. This causasian technist was the smartest when it came to technology. A woman with long blonde hair was over at a table playing cards with a little girl. A african american guy and a hispanic man were messing around with the weapons.
"Put those guns down before you end up hurting someone." The Blonde haired lady said.
"Stacey, These weapons are life to us. A mans best friend compared to a dog!" The hispanic guy smirked.
"Mans best friend or not put it down!"
The African american man weilded a shotgun that he was recently polishing. Hoping to be able to use it. His name was Keith. He put the firearm close to his dingy white shirt as if it was a baby. The hispanic guy was playing around with a handcannon. His name was Sutherland.
Stacy looked at the little girl."Don't pay attention to those idiots." she whispered.
"Yes ma'am." The girl said in a soft voice."When will we find home?"
"Im not sure, Ellis. Hope it doesn't take years to find." Stacy thought. "Don't worry about it."
From the back another lady came out from a room. She was caucasian with long brown hair that was fixed in a ponytail. Her name was Taila. She sat at the table along with the two other females.
"So did AJ find a planet yet?" She asked.
"Well he didn't tell us, but earlier I suggested that we should go to planet Ryushi. Thats the place where the colonists were living. Im sure they'll accept into their society."
"We got our target. Home sweet home!" AJ shouted.
Looks like they finally arrived to planet Ryushi. Home has finally come. They can live in harmony. The ship gracefully lands onto the ground of the planet. The shuttle doors open out came the rebels. They walked onto the plain of the planet. They stood besides each other.
"Its dead here." AJ said to himself.
Honets feedback.
Chapter 3...Coming Soon!
One by one the three pods crashed into the desolate and dead planet of Ryushi. The shuttles stuck upright out of the ground as the doors opened as the creatures proceeded to step out with no fear what so ever. They had to do their job and get it over with. Owashira stood straight and examined the cracked expansion of land and dilapidated homes. Its possible that some human might be thriving on what little they can find on this planet.
"We should split up and bring the survivors to the shuttles." Shafaru said adjusting the backpack of eggs on his back.
Owashira slightly cocked his head."Yes good idea but we don't know if any xenomorphs might be left."
Yey'tara chimed in."Well if there are any that means there shouldn't be any human lifeforms left. If it so happens that these two subjects are here then the humans must have weapons with them in order to defend themselves."
Shafaru and Owashira caustiously took off onto the as Yey'tara followed. They took a abrupt stop in middle of the city of Ryushi.
"We will split up." Owashira decided."Shafaru you will take the west part of the city. Yey'tara will the east as I take part in going north. We come back to the shuttle if any probelms get out of hand."
The two Yautja agreed with Owashira.
"Shafaru will you have any probelms with the eggs?" Owashira asked.
"No sir. I got it under control."
The three yautja disappeared into the darkness of the city.
***
A huge ship floated in space. It appears this ship wasn't boarded with our Yautja buddies. These people were rebels that managed to escape from a planet of bounty hunters that made them slaves. These rebels eventually made off with a few weapons to defend themselves later on in their travel.
Inside a young with short brown hair was controlling the ship. His name was AJ. This causasian technist was the smartest when it came to technology. A woman with long blonde hair was over at a table playing cards with a little girl. A african american guy and a hispanic man were messing around with the weapons.
"Put those guns down before you end up hurting someone." The Blonde haired lady said.
"Stacey, These weapons are life to us. A mans best friend compared to a dog!" The hispanic guy smirked.
"Mans best friend or not put it down!"
The African american man weilded a shotgun that he was recently polishing. Hoping to be able to use it. His name was Keith. He put the firearm close to his dingy white shirt as if it was a baby. The hispanic guy was playing around with a handcannon. His name was Sutherland.
Stacy looked at the little girl."Don't pay attention to those idiots." she whispered.
"Yes ma'am." The girl said in a soft voice."When will we find home?"
"Im not sure, Ellis. Hope it doesn't take years to find." Stacy thought. "Don't worry about it."
From the back another lady came out from a room. She was caucasian with long brown hair that was fixed in a ponytail. Her name was Taila. She sat at the table along with the two other females.
"So did AJ find a planet yet?" She asked.
"Well he didn't tell us, but earlier I suggested that we should go to planet Ryushi. Thats the place where the colonists were living. Im sure they'll accept into their society."
"We got our target. Home sweet home!" AJ shouted.
Looks like they finally arrived to planet Ryushi. Home has finally come. They can live in harmony. The ship gracefully lands onto the ground of the planet. The shuttle doors open out came the rebels. They walked onto the plain of the planet. They stood besides each other.
"Its dead here." AJ said to himself.
Honets feedback.
Chapter 3...Coming Soon!
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Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
This is really good!
have you just recently become a fan of Alien vs Predetor becasue you must be obbseased with them to write that good about them!
like i said this is really good and you are an excellent writter!
cant wait for chapter 3 now!! :p
have you just recently become a fan of Alien vs Predetor becasue you must be obbseased with them to write that good about them!
like i said this is really good and you are an excellent writter!
cant wait for chapter 3 now!! :p
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[color=red]That that dont kill me can only make me stronger.[/color]
[color=red]That that dont kill me can only make me stronger.[/color]
Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Very creative, I like the deatal and back story of the predators. I like the fact that pradtors are more like warriors rather then destroyers of existence. Its like they hunt for sport and dominance, but respect life.
Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
I've been a AVP fan for a long time. I have especially been a predator fan for 5 years ever since I was 9 years old.Gezza wrote: This is really good!
have you just recently become a fan of Alien vs Predetor becasue you must be obbseased with them to write that good about them!
like i said this is really good and you are an excellent writter!
cant wait for chapter 3 now!! :p
Thank you much. The Yautja have always been honorable creatures. I will be working on Chapter 3 sometime this week.adam88 wrote: Very creative, I like the deatal and back story of the predators. I like the fact that pradtors are more like warriors rather then destroyers of existence. Its like they hunt for sport and dominance, but respect life.
Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Chapter 3
In the middle of nowhere. It looks like Dorothy isn't in Kansas anymore. Aj looked across the plains of broken houses and whatnot. He went back into the ship to see if he can fly his people off this place. Taila stood by Stacey as if she was once lost but now found.
"What happened here?"
Stacey was silent for a moment and then answered." Im not sure. Armageddon must have hit this place really fast."
The little girl cuddled next to Stacey pant leg feeling scared. Sutherland walked back into the ship also and came back out with the firearms. Keith stared at the hispanic guy and glanced at the weapons.
"You've read my mind." Keith smirked as he approached Sutherland and the case of weapons.
Stacey looked down at them with disgust. They were total a**holes for bringing firearms that might not be any use anyway. AJ rushed back outside with some bad news. If AJ came to them with bad news they might not be making it off this planet alive.
"Listen up...The ship doesn't have enough gas in it. So right now were screwed." He announced.
"Well shouldn't this planet have some gas tanks on it? It was a habitant to colonists." Stacey replied.
AJ nodded his head in agreement."Yeah....They must have.....But looking through this sh*thole will take some time. Thats the part im not liking at all."
"Really? Stop being lazy." Stacey smiled.
Taila and Ellis were occupied by the gun crazed idiots that were too busy loading weapons. The two also caught AJ's eyes.
"What's with the weapon, huh?" He asked."The planets dead. Nobody is here."
Sutherland stood up with his silver handcannon packed in his holster on his waist. Sweat was covering his forehead as if he ran a race. He stared at AJ. "The purpose is because however killed the colonist might be here. So we need to be ready! Get ready to blow some f*cking heads off!" he shouted in excitement.
"He will never be in his right mind." Stacey whispered.
***
Owashira cautiously entered a huge house that was some kind of compuond. The humans have to seeking refuge in here since this is the biggest place. He looked around as his black dreadlocks swayed off his shoulders. He looked down to see a doll on the cracked tile floor. He approached it and picked it up. Something was unusual about this doll. Something about its feeling.
He threw down the toy and saw his hand saturated in drool. He knew this was the mark of the Xenomorphs. They must have killed a little girl. Knowing this made him feel angry. He took a few steps forward while his armor shone in the dim light. The chairs were broken windows were shattered and he happens to find dry blood covering the ceiling. How can such a substance get up there?
All of a sudden a small hissing sound was heard behind him. He cocks his head to find the noise. For protection he unhinges his wristblades from his right wrist gauntlet. They're here no doubt. Owashira takes off and jumps through a huge hole in the ceiling and positions himself on the roof. He crouches still as a tree. He turns invisible as his eyes light up yellow. He's waitring for the alien to come out for a sneak attack.
***
Shafaru seems like he is having trouble with keeping the eggs postioned on his back so he can feel comfortable. Trust me holding a egg that weigh 4 to 5 pounds can be irritating. He stops and takes his backpack off. He lays it on the ground with easy since the eggs outer shell is fragile. He picks one up and sets it over behind a huge boulder. If the humans don't find he can at least p*ss off the xenomorphs since they are strict about their youngsters and breeding population.
He then loads the other two back on his shoulder. He looks like a 7ft santa clause only deadlier. He has now satisfied his comfort with the weight of the eggs. Now he is going to try and find his bethren just so they can help find the humans since he thinks the splitting up idea isn't going well with him.
***
Yey'tara walked across the rocky ground as if he was a god. He is still looking forward to capturing these humans so he can get back into the mood of hunting. Humans were easy sport for him and Xenomorphs were more challenging. Every strong human he hunted was never able to outsmart him. Rememeber memories of a glorious past was his strength and motivation.
He hears talking so cloaks and stands still. He sees humans walking. They're rebels he can tell by their clothes. Two of them have weapons. They must be a worthy kill right off the bat. Two skulls is just adds up respect from his clan. He won't attack yet it would be out of line to just rush in for the kill. He quickly climbs up a small mountain nearby without the humans noticing his presence.
He closely watches them form above silent.
One of the human males ask. "Do you feel like you are being watched?"
Honest feedback.
Chapter 4..Coming Soon.
In the middle of nowhere. It looks like Dorothy isn't in Kansas anymore. Aj looked across the plains of broken houses and whatnot. He went back into the ship to see if he can fly his people off this place. Taila stood by Stacey as if she was once lost but now found.
"What happened here?"
Stacey was silent for a moment and then answered." Im not sure. Armageddon must have hit this place really fast."
The little girl cuddled next to Stacey pant leg feeling scared. Sutherland walked back into the ship also and came back out with the firearms. Keith stared at the hispanic guy and glanced at the weapons.
"You've read my mind." Keith smirked as he approached Sutherland and the case of weapons.
Stacey looked down at them with disgust. They were total a**holes for bringing firearms that might not be any use anyway. AJ rushed back outside with some bad news. If AJ came to them with bad news they might not be making it off this planet alive.
"Listen up...The ship doesn't have enough gas in it. So right now were screwed." He announced.
"Well shouldn't this planet have some gas tanks on it? It was a habitant to colonists." Stacey replied.
AJ nodded his head in agreement."Yeah....They must have.....But looking through this sh*thole will take some time. Thats the part im not liking at all."
"Really? Stop being lazy." Stacey smiled.
Taila and Ellis were occupied by the gun crazed idiots that were too busy loading weapons. The two also caught AJ's eyes.
"What's with the weapon, huh?" He asked."The planets dead. Nobody is here."
Sutherland stood up with his silver handcannon packed in his holster on his waist. Sweat was covering his forehead as if he ran a race. He stared at AJ. "The purpose is because however killed the colonist might be here. So we need to be ready! Get ready to blow some f*cking heads off!" he shouted in excitement.
"He will never be in his right mind." Stacey whispered.
***
Owashira cautiously entered a huge house that was some kind of compuond. The humans have to seeking refuge in here since this is the biggest place. He looked around as his black dreadlocks swayed off his shoulders. He looked down to see a doll on the cracked tile floor. He approached it and picked it up. Something was unusual about this doll. Something about its feeling.
He threw down the toy and saw his hand saturated in drool. He knew this was the mark of the Xenomorphs. They must have killed a little girl. Knowing this made him feel angry. He took a few steps forward while his armor shone in the dim light. The chairs were broken windows were shattered and he happens to find dry blood covering the ceiling. How can such a substance get up there?
All of a sudden a small hissing sound was heard behind him. He cocks his head to find the noise. For protection he unhinges his wristblades from his right wrist gauntlet. They're here no doubt. Owashira takes off and jumps through a huge hole in the ceiling and positions himself on the roof. He crouches still as a tree. He turns invisible as his eyes light up yellow. He's waitring for the alien to come out for a sneak attack.
***
Shafaru seems like he is having trouble with keeping the eggs postioned on his back so he can feel comfortable. Trust me holding a egg that weigh 4 to 5 pounds can be irritating. He stops and takes his backpack off. He lays it on the ground with easy since the eggs outer shell is fragile. He picks one up and sets it over behind a huge boulder. If the humans don't find he can at least p*ss off the xenomorphs since they are strict about their youngsters and breeding population.
He then loads the other two back on his shoulder. He looks like a 7ft santa clause only deadlier. He has now satisfied his comfort with the weight of the eggs. Now he is going to try and find his bethren just so they can help find the humans since he thinks the splitting up idea isn't going well with him.
***
Yey'tara walked across the rocky ground as if he was a god. He is still looking forward to capturing these humans so he can get back into the mood of hunting. Humans were easy sport for him and Xenomorphs were more challenging. Every strong human he hunted was never able to outsmart him. Rememeber memories of a glorious past was his strength and motivation.
He hears talking so cloaks and stands still. He sees humans walking. They're rebels he can tell by their clothes. Two of them have weapons. They must be a worthy kill right off the bat. Two skulls is just adds up respect from his clan. He won't attack yet it would be out of line to just rush in for the kill. He quickly climbs up a small mountain nearby without the humans noticing his presence.
He closely watches them form above silent.
One of the human males ask. "Do you feel like you are being watched?"
Honest feedback.
Chapter 4..Coming Soon.
Last edited by Baby Bear on Tue Sep 25, 2007 5:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
This is looking really good, and that honest feedback!!
Cant wait for the next chapter, i can tell there will be some good action scenes involving the Predetors!
Also when are the Aliens coming in? i know they will be in soon!
Cant wait for the next chapter, i can tell there will be some good action scenes involving the Predetors!
Also when are the Aliens coming in? i know they will be in soon!
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[color=red]That that dont kill me can only make me stronger.[/color]
[color=red]That that dont kill me can only make me stronger.[/color]
Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Unfortunately, I have only had time to read chapter 1. But from what I've read, it's awesome!!! And I still stick with what I said in your previous fan fic. "Excellent, Phenomenal!!"
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Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Chapter 4
A huge fleet ship gracefully landed on planet Ryushi. More visitors. The platform unhinged and laid on the dirt and crushed rubble. Out stepped a captain of the refugee camp. It looks like our new friends are looking for the four rebels that travel this desolate planet. His black boots were well polished. His black and navy uniform was clean and reavealed a numerous badges.
He stood and examined the planet speechless. One of the soldiers came out of the ship to ask captain a question.
"Excuse me, Captain but should we set up base camp right here or further down the stretch."
The captains pale skin turned to a slight red."Yes we should be aware of our surroundings. We shall go further. Hopefully our prisoners will mistaken us for surivivors."
The grenadier nodded his head a headed back into the ship to tell the other troops.
"We'll get these bastards."The captains murmurs. He gets one last look at the enivorment and walks back into the ship.
***
The hive. A terrible place to be if your a human. Have your pride taken away by sophiscated beast called Xenomorphs(Aliens). The hive was decorated with slime and some type of skin that covered the walls. It resembled the skin of a exoskeleton. In the slimy surroundings of this place dwelled countless numbers of Aliens that looked after the queen and watched over the eggs.
One Alien scampers over to a huge black figure that slightly sways its head back in forth. The Xenomorph lets out a small squealing sound. It sounds like a girl screaming.
The huge figure lets up its head revealing sharp and jagged teeth. It jaw hung open. This creature was like the rest no eyes a huge crest on its head a inner tongue that can pierce through metal and give brutal damage to the human skin. Behold the almighty queen. Standing at 16 feet tall she lies down on the squishy ground her huge sharp tail rested among the wall. She looked down upon her eggs. Whos says she wasn't a good mother?
***
Owashira sat still and was aware of the xenomorph that snuck upon him with ease. The Xenomorph jumped onto the shoulder of the yautja like a jaguar but the yautja had a reversal attack. As soon as the alien pounced on him he flipped it over causing it to fall off the roof. The serpentine creature hit the ground struggling to regain stance. Owashira stood up straight and jumped off the roof and stood in front of the alien who was rustling in the dirt trying to get to its feet.
Owashira took his time and slowly approached the beast. He had to be careful since the tail of the creature was violently swinging in the air. One puncture wound from this tail and he might be dead. He watched the tail sway back and forth. The yautja threw his broad hands out and captured the sharp tail. With his strength he swung the Alien into the wall of the compund house.
Like a wrecking ball it left a huge imprint. The Yautja was filled with anger so he constantly and violently swung the xenomorph into the wall like a baseball bat. As soon as the head of the alien became colored with green blood he tossed it to the side. He turned his head and examined the dead creature.
"Runners. Hate those things. The weakest rank I've ever fought." he said in a guttural voice.
The Runner was part of the Aliens rank. It wasn't as strong as a Warrior Alien or guardian but it did make up for its weakness for seepd and dexterity followed by a hence of intelligence. Owashira walks off and has intentions to find Shafur who bears the eggs. He figures that his comrade is having a difficult time but Owashira senses another presences that recently arrived to this planet. Who is it?
Chapter 5..Coming Soon!
A huge fleet ship gracefully landed on planet Ryushi. More visitors. The platform unhinged and laid on the dirt and crushed rubble. Out stepped a captain of the refugee camp. It looks like our new friends are looking for the four rebels that travel this desolate planet. His black boots were well polished. His black and navy uniform was clean and reavealed a numerous badges.
He stood and examined the planet speechless. One of the soldiers came out of the ship to ask captain a question.
"Excuse me, Captain but should we set up base camp right here or further down the stretch."
The captains pale skin turned to a slight red."Yes we should be aware of our surroundings. We shall go further. Hopefully our prisoners will mistaken us for surivivors."
The grenadier nodded his head a headed back into the ship to tell the other troops.
"We'll get these bastards."The captains murmurs. He gets one last look at the enivorment and walks back into the ship.
***
The hive. A terrible place to be if your a human. Have your pride taken away by sophiscated beast called Xenomorphs(Aliens). The hive was decorated with slime and some type of skin that covered the walls. It resembled the skin of a exoskeleton. In the slimy surroundings of this place dwelled countless numbers of Aliens that looked after the queen and watched over the eggs.
One Alien scampers over to a huge black figure that slightly sways its head back in forth. The Xenomorph lets out a small squealing sound. It sounds like a girl screaming.
The huge figure lets up its head revealing sharp and jagged teeth. It jaw hung open. This creature was like the rest no eyes a huge crest on its head a inner tongue that can pierce through metal and give brutal damage to the human skin. Behold the almighty queen. Standing at 16 feet tall she lies down on the squishy ground her huge sharp tail rested among the wall. She looked down upon her eggs. Whos says she wasn't a good mother?
***
Owashira sat still and was aware of the xenomorph that snuck upon him with ease. The Xenomorph jumped onto the shoulder of the yautja like a jaguar but the yautja had a reversal attack. As soon as the alien pounced on him he flipped it over causing it to fall off the roof. The serpentine creature hit the ground struggling to regain stance. Owashira stood up straight and jumped off the roof and stood in front of the alien who was rustling in the dirt trying to get to its feet.
Owashira took his time and slowly approached the beast. He had to be careful since the tail of the creature was violently swinging in the air. One puncture wound from this tail and he might be dead. He watched the tail sway back and forth. The yautja threw his broad hands out and captured the sharp tail. With his strength he swung the Alien into the wall of the compund house.
Like a wrecking ball it left a huge imprint. The Yautja was filled with anger so he constantly and violently swung the xenomorph into the wall like a baseball bat. As soon as the head of the alien became colored with green blood he tossed it to the side. He turned his head and examined the dead creature.
"Runners. Hate those things. The weakest rank I've ever fought." he said in a guttural voice.
The Runner was part of the Aliens rank. It wasn't as strong as a Warrior Alien or guardian but it did make up for its weakness for seepd and dexterity followed by a hence of intelligence. Owashira walks off and has intentions to find Shafur who bears the eggs. He figures that his comrade is having a difficult time but Owashira senses another presences that recently arrived to this planet. Who is it?
Chapter 5..Coming Soon!
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Chapter 5
Base camp was set in a hurry. The troops had to stay here for the night that was about to pass in 7 hours. There were three soldiers stationed by a huge rock. Two of the men were drinking a cold bottle of beer taht was perserved from 2004. One man threw down his bottle as a little of the liquid splattered on his camoflague pants.
"I gotta go take a leak." he said.
The other soldiers looked up at him. The man that his own beverage took a quick swig and said "Don't take too long. They'll get you." The standing troop looked surprised. "Who the hell are you talking about?" The half buzzed man put down his beer and smirked."Nevermind just go do what you gotta do." The guy rolled his eyes and walked behind the huge rock to bleed the lizard.
He pulled his head back and looked into the dark sky. Stars twinkling. He undid his pants as the sound of liquid pattered against the hard soil. After the small sound stopped he zipped up his pants and heard a disturbing distarction. It sound like spit being twirled in someone mouth. He looked down to see a egg unhatching. Out of curiousity he crouched to get a good view of what it was. In a blink of a eye something inside moved. "What the-" In a instant the small creature jumped on the troopers face. It resembled a spider with a tail with tan slimy skin.
It wrapped its tail around its victims neck and cut off the guys breathing. The man fell to the ground helpless and stiff. He had no choice but to face his death.
***
Yey'tara slowly walked off into the abandoned colonist town after passing up the rebels. He felt that there was no room for caution becuase he had the feeling that nothing was here to hurt him. He stooped after a echo of crying came from his right. He cocked his head looking down a alley way. He slowly took off into the direction of the crying. The yautja was closer to the sobbing of a helpless human. He removed the door from a broken building and took a look inside.
There was a child crying in the corner. The yautja studied the small kid. This human was a male at the age of 9 years old. Yey'tara examined the kid from far away and saw something he didn't like but he couldn't do anything about it. He turned his back as his dreadlocks swayed around his neck. He wakled away leaving the terrified child alone. Something is wrong with that kid. What is it?
***
Owashira trotted across the city and ran into Shafaru."Have you seen Yey'tara?" Owashira asked. Shafaru adjusted the pack of eggs on his back."No I haven't. Why?" Owashira turned his head and ordered the other yautja to follow him. He has something to show Shafaru.
***
The rebels traveled and had no idea that they were going nowhere at all. Finding a source of gas on this planet will do them so good. Hopefuly when they get back to the ship it doesn't end up stolen by some space pirates and whatnot. Stacey stopped in her footsteps.
"We should stop and take a rest. We've been walking for hours." Stacey replied.
"Stop now? We're probably almost there..and you say stop now?!" Sutherland said.
AJ stopped." Look...can we just abid by what she says? Im sure the little girl is tired of walking too. But hey if you wanna go then you can take off. Alright?"
Sutherland raised his eyebrow and gave them all the evil."Alright screw you all then. When I get that gas im goin' back to that damn ship and starting it up and leaving you all here!" Keith had sweat drip from his head. Tension was rising between the group.
"C'mon Keith lets get our a**es outta here and leave these retards here to die!" Sutherland shouted walking off. Keith followed behind him.
Taila looks at AJ."What if he does manage to get to the ship before we do?" Aj smirked and looked at her.'Don't worry. He doesn't know how to operate it. Trust me."
As they watched Sutherland and Keith disapper they stayed in one place not tempted to get lost. The only thing to do is wait.But wait for what?
Chapter 6...Coming Soon!
Base camp was set in a hurry. The troops had to stay here for the night that was about to pass in 7 hours. There were three soldiers stationed by a huge rock. Two of the men were drinking a cold bottle of beer taht was perserved from 2004. One man threw down his bottle as a little of the liquid splattered on his camoflague pants.
"I gotta go take a leak." he said.
The other soldiers looked up at him. The man that his own beverage took a quick swig and said "Don't take too long. They'll get you." The standing troop looked surprised. "Who the hell are you talking about?" The half buzzed man put down his beer and smirked."Nevermind just go do what you gotta do." The guy rolled his eyes and walked behind the huge rock to bleed the lizard.
He pulled his head back and looked into the dark sky. Stars twinkling. He undid his pants as the sound of liquid pattered against the hard soil. After the small sound stopped he zipped up his pants and heard a disturbing distarction. It sound like spit being twirled in someone mouth. He looked down to see a egg unhatching. Out of curiousity he crouched to get a good view of what it was. In a blink of a eye something inside moved. "What the-" In a instant the small creature jumped on the troopers face. It resembled a spider with a tail with tan slimy skin.
It wrapped its tail around its victims neck and cut off the guys breathing. The man fell to the ground helpless and stiff. He had no choice but to face his death.
***
Yey'tara slowly walked off into the abandoned colonist town after passing up the rebels. He felt that there was no room for caution becuase he had the feeling that nothing was here to hurt him. He stooped after a echo of crying came from his right. He cocked his head looking down a alley way. He slowly took off into the direction of the crying. The yautja was closer to the sobbing of a helpless human. He removed the door from a broken building and took a look inside.
There was a child crying in the corner. The yautja studied the small kid. This human was a male at the age of 9 years old. Yey'tara examined the kid from far away and saw something he didn't like but he couldn't do anything about it. He turned his back as his dreadlocks swayed around his neck. He wakled away leaving the terrified child alone. Something is wrong with that kid. What is it?
***
Owashira trotted across the city and ran into Shafaru."Have you seen Yey'tara?" Owashira asked. Shafaru adjusted the pack of eggs on his back."No I haven't. Why?" Owashira turned his head and ordered the other yautja to follow him. He has something to show Shafaru.
***
The rebels traveled and had no idea that they were going nowhere at all. Finding a source of gas on this planet will do them so good. Hopefuly when they get back to the ship it doesn't end up stolen by some space pirates and whatnot. Stacey stopped in her footsteps.
"We should stop and take a rest. We've been walking for hours." Stacey replied.
"Stop now? We're probably almost there..and you say stop now?!" Sutherland said.
AJ stopped." Look...can we just abid by what she says? Im sure the little girl is tired of walking too. But hey if you wanna go then you can take off. Alright?"
Sutherland raised his eyebrow and gave them all the evil."Alright screw you all then. When I get that gas im goin' back to that damn ship and starting it up and leaving you all here!" Keith had sweat drip from his head. Tension was rising between the group.
"C'mon Keith lets get our a**es outta here and leave these retards here to die!" Sutherland shouted walking off. Keith followed behind him.
Taila looks at AJ."What if he does manage to get to the ship before we do?" Aj smirked and looked at her.'Don't worry. He doesn't know how to operate it. Trust me."
As they watched Sutherland and Keith disapper they stayed in one place not tempted to get lost. The only thing to do is wait.But wait for what?
Chapter 6...Coming Soon!
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Re: Alien versus Predator: Bloodlust
Great fan fiction i like it i like alien vs predator i have seen the movie like 100 times your fan fiction is great.
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