my review

[papa arnold]

well i was the first guy on the froum the play kartoon asked me to writer a little review on what i liked and disliked and overall about the forum based RPG

well to start off id like to give credits to warchief and kartoon-but mainly kartoon for setting this all up

LIKED

the RPG was brilliant i am so glad you set it up toon i loved the fact that when you look for somthing to fight you randomly come across strange things like i found a fairy and stuffed it in my pocket (only a fairy because the LORDS format isnt all gone) and then you have to look for somthing to fight again to kill somthing

also the way the RPG was set up as in press Y for yes and press N for know...and in the menu for instants
(heres some examples)

(I)nside the hangout
(F)ight

also the different options when you get in the hangout

(T)alk to cochise
(A) ask swan to tell you a story
(F)lirt with mercy

my final like is how you set up the gangs we fight as in you have to be a certain level to fight certain gangs and you level up buy fighting your warlord (and you even used gareth) as a warlord (the 1st warlord lol) anyway as in my gangs (e,g) the riverside rollers you have to be level 3 to fight them and i saw kartoon talking to warchief on the shoutbox saying you have to be level 9 to fight th e alleycats...well thats it for the likes (there are much more but i cant write them down)

DISLIKES

ok there are few dislikes:

while i was building my character up(by fighting) sully the orphans leader showed up i killed him easily but then for the next 4 fights he showed up again and again..so toon i propse once yu kill i gang leader (e.g sully) you cant kill him again until a fight higher level

also this one can be fixed but you still have some LORDS stuff in the game get rid of that and you have a perfect forum based RPG

OVERALL

ok guys over this game was sublime with guidence from toon you can be he ultimate warriors the layout of the game is nice with only a few minor errors....so ENJOY!!!! 

[Kartoon]

very cool review


as far as the leader thing...

i wanted people to get to fight some key players so i had to name a few like "sully orphans leader" instead of "a orphan" they pop up at random, some more then others...only thing i could do is just change sully to a gang like "a warrior"


im still re coding alot to get the dragon stuff out, some stuff i dont forsee me changing anytime soon...so this may be a case of "play pretend"

but there for sure is more im gonna change


im working on getting this game on a JAVA window so you can play from the net and thats 50% of the issue


the other issue is the game has to be ran from a computer server so like its on my comp as we speak being run from there....so i need my comp on with this program on 24/7 its a pain im also workinng on that

thanks for the review and feel free to log on again

[papa arnold]

very cool review


as far as the leader thing...

i wanted people to get to fight some key players so i had to name a few like "sully orphans leader" instead of "a orphan" they pop up at random, some more then others...only thing i could do is just change sully to a gang like "a warrior"


im still re coding alot to get the dragon stuff out, some stuff i dont forsee me changing anytime soon...so this may be a case of "play pretend"

but there for sure is more im gonna change


im working on getting this game on a JAVA window so you can play from the net and thats 50% of the issue


the other issue is the game has to be ran from a computer server so like its on my comp as we speak being run from there....so i need my comp on with this program on 24/7 its a pain im also workinng on that

thanks for the review and feel free to log on again

thanks for the feedback yes of corse il play again