my remake video

wargod · Post by **wargod** » Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:39 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9pRllrGSffE

took parts from all those other remakes and other videos

ILLER... · Post by **ILLER...** » Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:26 pm

it makes less sense than before - oh and spell check is GOOD.

Post by **4nik8** » Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:16 am

ILLER... wrote: it makes less sense than before, oh and spell check is GOOD.

You've joined two dependent clauses with a comma.

That is a comma splice - you should have used a semicolon.

ILLER... · Post by **ILLER...** » Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:33 am

4nik8 is GOOD

*fixed

wargod · Post by **wargod** » Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:08 pm

ILLER... wrote: it makes less sense than before - oh and spell check is GOOD.

a simple "not the best" would have been fine

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