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:shock: wow!

thats damned good stuff ya got their dope!

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Sounds like you've put a lot of effort in! 8)

Can't wait to see the first issue and good luck!
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Sounds great. I really love your avatar too!
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LOL this is great man.
I have a question will the gangs be wearing school uniforms....or are you going to work on different uniforms for them?

If you also have cameos I would suggest puttin in the BB Furys or the Punks.

Plus is the story around Alex an Ryan? I Played the game alot and found lots of scret Characters to join your posse (In the game).
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Read the gang descriptions. The new uniforms are described at the end of most of them.

Anyways, I can't guarantee when first issue will hit the net, but progress on it will be halted for a week after I get back to Chattanooga, for reasons including jet lag and depression. (I really don't wanna leave Japan. ;_; I sound like a whiny, spoiled bitch, I know, but you just have to be hosted by a friendly family in a town like Touno to get the real experience, with one of your best friends also in Touno. Especially when you fall in love with a girl in a country besides your own. D'oh! Ah well, I got her e-mail.)

Also, I'd like to note that the junk food and drinks here are much better than in America, but hot DAMN I miss all types of food but Japanese.

Anyways, I gotta flex my now-rusty artistic muscles if I hope to bring you guys a quality comic. Anybody who draws will know what I mean when I say it's not easy to get good attacking poses unless you have good reference.
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ahh japan.....home of the est junk food yet...
Thanks for ansewering my question too. Oh yeha by the way for the Breaks in the fighitng I would suggest this also. Junk food is something everyone needs even gangs gotta take a break....or even try and pick up chicks.
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Just a small sketch of Tex of the Cowboys (actually a very large sketch) that I decided to test my new equipment out on and inked it.

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Yeah.
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I can see the manga influences there,I likes..I likes...,Don't hold back,showoff what you got,if you got the skills,flaunt it!! come on Rembrant,show me what you have!!! :D :D :D
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Hey guys, in case you're wondering, this project's not dead yet. I am, however, completely rewriting the script, to a format I think will be much better, and less focused simply on beatdowns (with some more character interaction). I could probably post a small preview for you, but just the intro! I don't want to spoil too much of what happens.
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hi, I didn't see any of this post before, looks really exciting stuff.....keep on it! I have to admit I am unaware of the history but I love comics!!!!
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Okay, plotting the basics out, part 1:

WARNING, SKIP ALL YE WHO DON'T WANT IT SPOILED

The story takes place in a pretty small town.

Comic begins as the school day ends at River City High School. Ryan Numan is seen going to his locker, standard stuff. His bud Toby starts talking to him, and tells him the latest news from Crosstown High. Two tough Chinese guys, calling themselves Randy and Andy, have started causing hell in Crosstown High, and seem to have some real friends in the local gang scene. It is at this point revealed that as long as no one is killed, the outnumbered local cops stay out of the gang warfare scene.

Ryan's gal shows up, and Ryan regrettably tells her that he and toby have a detention. She tells Ryan and Toby that she'll meet them at a party later that night.

Ryan and Toby attend the detention, and there is one more guy in the room. A punk student, wearing a red leather jacket with a "Plagues" logo on the back. The punk proceeds to verbally and nearly physically assault the teacher. Toby heads off, and Ryan goes to get something from his locker.

On the walk home, Ryan rounds a corner to find the Dragons, an Asian gang, mobbing Toby. A violent and desperate fight ensues, as Ryan saves toby's arse. The leader of the dragons, Kunio, challenges Ryan. Kunio goes down, hard, letting Ryan and Toby get away.

Later that night, all the local gangs flood to a meeting in the Crosstown high gym. Tensions are high, but the truce is upheld. Finally, the Dragon Twins get all the leaders to the front, as a speaker, dramatically caped and unseen, gives his speech, proposing to the hordes, to join him. He states the city could easily be theirs, but one major obstacle, are Ryan... and Alex.

The gangs can join or leave. Some more minor ones leave, but a good number stays and sign the proposal.

GANGS THAT SIGNED: (Names may change)
The Crosstown Dudes
The Flatiron Frat Boys
The Dragons of Sticksville
The Grotto City Jocks
The Waterfront Rockers
The Sherman Park Rockers
The Burbville Rejects
The Oak Hill Home Boys
The Riverside Eagles
The Armstrong Mob
The River City Locals
The International Crew
The Rivermouth Avenue Cowboys
The Sergio Plagues
The Jones Street Gamers
The Ivory Hills Entrees

The next day, Alex wakes up in the morning, and decides to stay at home. He falls back asleep. At River City High, gang members start flooding in, and just start trashing the school. Finally, a Cowboy locks the gates, as Mobs, Plagues, and Internationals hoarde the students and staff into classrooms.

Ryan gets to school late, and backs off. He runs, and gets back to his house, as gangs return to their patrols. He finds a ransom letter, declaring the gangs have taken his girlfriend. Ryan traverses to Cross Town High, where Alex is just now arriving. They discuss, but are interrupted by the Dudes attacking them. The Dudes pose no threat. Alex and Ryan agree to bop their way across town. The Dudes, having gathered themselves, attack again. Onceagain, they are quickly disposed of.

Alex and Ryan barely get to round a corner, when the rest of the Dudes show up, with the leader and all the previously beaten ones. A fight scene ensues, and the Dudes' leader, Conan, is trashed. Conan and the dudes swear their allegiance to Alex and Ryan...

More later, probably.
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Aw man it sounds great. Can't wait to hear more man.
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