Baaackkk To The Big C.I., The Warriors 2

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:badgrin:Im back!!!...again.
:lol:

This is a little story that is short and sweet. A returning story and i have to leave to go somewhere soon so this will be a little short story for my comeback :o

Cleon: Alright, God damn!!!!
Cleon shuts off the radio.
Cleon: Listen up everyone, those orphans came into Coney and 20 of them wasted 3 newbloods. Than Sully, that faggot, smashed the shrine we had for Swan, Rem and Fox. than claimed to have wasted us all on the radio. I have some buisness with our friends the boppers. And many of us are on patrol. so i am sending Ajax, Vermin, Snow and Cochise to find and kill Sully.
********Orphan turf*********
Cochise: Ajax. I know you are warchief and all but maybe could you stay by the train and see if any Orphans are coming back to their Turf, so you can waste em, it would be a lot easier on us.
Ajax: I think its an alright idea. Sure. ;)
........................................................
The Warriors were walking down the street and came to see Apache, the warchief rummaging through a garbage can.
Cochise giggled to himself and Apache heard.
He Ran.
Snow grunted angrily toward Cochise. and they all ran to catch up to him.
As many of you may know, apache is not in the best shape. They caught up with ease.
Snow shoved him against a wall.
Vermin: Were is Sully?
Apache: Who dat mang?
Snow slapped him
Cochise: Don't play dumb asshole. Where is he, before you say hello to our little buddy
(signals to snows molitov)
Apache: He in a meeting mang, wit 10 othaa guys. In that warehouse. (points to small shack with a door opening on the roof and and barred door out front.)
Snow punched him in the head and let him go. He ran toward the subway station
Vermin: say hello to Ajax for us. :p
Snow took his molitov and lit it, it hit the barred door and exploded. only 3 orphans made it out. Sully being one of them.
one orphan fell back in the warehouse off a roof they jumped to. another orphan breathed in too much smoke and fell off the roof into a dumpster.
sully threw his blade at them and Snow with his good reflexes dodged it, grabbed it in midair and threw it to Vermin who threw it in Sully's thigh. Sully fell off the roof and jogged to the train station.
When they arrived they seen several Orphans laid out, including apache,
Sully was cornered. and Ajax grabbed him by the throat and threw him into the wall. Sully was immobalized in pain by the sudden whiplash. and was sitting on the ground trying to get up.
Snow quietly said: He destroyed our shrine to our best friends...........how about we let him...... live on without a best friend. Snow had a sick look in his eyes. :twisted:
Cochise grabbed Apache and threw him into Ajax who smacked Apache in the face and gave him to Vermin who threw him on the tracks, the train came and stopped right on Apaches legs. he screamed in pain and Sully looked in horror and could do nothing. The warriors walked into the train. and it took off. the last thing they saw before blood splattered the windows was Sullys face, which looked so horrible, as if it were him on the tracks as well.
**********************Hangout**********************
Cleon was listening to the radio and nothing big was going on, he was dissapointed about Sully not being dead until he heard the radio DJ's sweet voice say the following:
Dj: Alright Boppers, The Warriors of Coney, are not to be taken lightly. After some horrible things that happened several hours ago. The Orphans Warlord Sully watched his Warchief die in front of him, gruesomely. :evil: But Sully could not move to help him after an attack from the Warriors Warchief Ajax. Which left Sully Brain Damaged, Emotionally crippled as well as physical, He is now a Parapulegic(sp?) :!:
And took all his life savings and bought himself therapy, not many sessions because of being poor. The Orphans are too afraid to take on The Warriors after what happened. thats all boppers, and remember, do not mess with the Coney island warriors
Cleon had a mixed look on his face, whether or not to be happy or disguted was puzzling him.
Everyone looked at Snow because it was his idea. And snow was looking out the indow with a smile on his face.

What Buisness will Cleon Do with the Boppers? What will become of Snow? Will I take another leave of absence and leave you guys waiting for another chapter?(no)

But find out what happense next time.
Please comment because it makes me make more

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this is really great man. this is one of the best fan fics on the site. keep it up man, you've got some real talent.

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hi is one sweet story man keep goin
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Cleon: alright boys, i'm going to Harlem, And Since Cochise knows Harlem like the back of his hand, he is coming too. Boppers and I have buisness. We are thinking about running the Rouges out of New York. And taking Hells kitchen to be a Boppers/Warriors turf. Take care of things.. And keep an eye on that punk with the adidas jacket on.

*******Several Hours Later********

Cleon comes back in.
Mercy: Wheres Cochise?
Cowboy: He's ok? Right?
Cleon: Bad news, The deal was going all ok. Big Moe and I were doing alright, Agreeing. Than Cochise noticed his old pal boxcar, being beaten down by three other boppers. Apparently Boxcar cut out from the boppers and was being beaten down. Cochise laid out 2 of the boppers. the third got him down.  he recognized him as a punk who used to cause trouble in Harlem, and once blamed it on the boppers. They held Cochise and big moe said if i didn't come back to coney and get some money for the damages Cochise did that one day in Harlem. Or surrender over Hells kitchen. I sad i would go get money. but Screw him, you guys will come with me and we can take out the boppers and rescue Cochise.
Ajax: F'n A!!!
Cleon: Snow, You've been acting up lately I'm scared man, i think you need some time away from rumbles, go home and come back in a couple of weeks.
Snow: Screw You Cleon, ever since i came up with killing apache, and for beating those newbloods into shape and other things i've been doing lately. Fine i'm going, i will be back sometime soon. But i would have loved to lay out those boppers. Bye.
Snow left.
Cleon: hopefully he will be normal when we get back.
Vermin: If we get back.
Cowboy: i'm ready to rumble. Lets do this thing.
******Train******
Cowboy:It's a long way to Harlem, at least an hour and a half.
Vermin: Ajax, Cleon, You guys never told us fully how you got back. Why don't you gus tell us.
Ajax: K
Cleon: OK, well it all went like this:

The End for now


How did they get back?
Were Heads smashed?
Was that female cop beaten up? like everyone wishes.

Until Next Time

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Nice work
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just a small one for now.

This is how they got back.

Cleon woke to the sound of talking. he didn't open his eyes but he heard cops talking.

Officer: Alright Joseph i think this one was killed by the Riffs. We will call an ambulance later. Arrest that Jsb. and watch out for that Riff, he is starting to stir, i will go call the ambulance.
Joseph: Let's just leave him Jake.
Jake: Yeah, who cares, just another low life.
After the cops left Cleon opened his eyes and looked around, he thought to himself:
Alright Cleon. Get a hold of your self, grab your headdress and head home, last thing i remember i was being hammered by the Riffs. Some rouge blamed me for shooting Cyrus. Cops musta broke up the beating before i was killed. Wonder if the others made it home, Riffs could have got them i think i know what happened.
Rem: Dead
Swan: Alive
Ajax: Could have beaten up Swan for leadership, and then got them all arrested.
Cowboy: Arrested
Vermin: Alive
Fox: Riffs might have got him,
Cochise: Not Sure
Snow: Alive.
........
Damn, what am i thinking.. Thats what might have happened, I know the Riffs must have gotten them.
Gotta get back no matter what.
Cleon heard cop cars pulling in again. So he bailed in some sort of graveyard. and Slowly walked down the hill towards Gun Hill. He seen a W on a gravestone. Maybe there was hope he thought. He made it to the train station without any trouble from the A.C.'s. Cleon sat in the train waiting for the next stop.

Will Continue next Chapter

*******Next Chapter*******
Cleon got out at River Side and stayed silent incase the cops were looking for him.
He was in the park and he heard sirens, he stuck to the shadows and crept lightly.
He was on his way to check out the noise.
He than saw a person dressed in a yankees uniform.
"either a baseball freak, or a fury." Cleon thought
He was bruised up and aching.
Surprisingly, he spoke to Cleon.
Person: Hey Warrior. Just heard on the radio, you guys didn't kill Cyrus.
It was a rouge LT.
He started to put on some face paint.
Fury: I'm a fury incase you didn't know, We were wrong about you guys, and you guys served us a beating, and we are one of the heaviest in NYC. And I respect That. I'm the Furies Warlord, Thurman.
He put 3/4 of his makeup on,
Thurman:take it easy Warrior. If you need anything, the Furies are here,
Cleon: Thanks, Thurman.
Cleon was surprised at the Furies' kindness and he walked down to inspect what the commotion was.
He then seen something that was all too non-shocking.
Ajax yelling at a bunch of cops. and he was tied to a bench.
Cleon thought for a minute, too many cops for him alone.
Cleon ran back to Thurman,
He explained the situation. Thurman Rounded up a posse of Furies
Thurman: don't talk to me after i put my make up on, i dont talk when i have it on.
He put the rest of the make up on.
Cleon: Ready?
Thurman said nothing.
Cleon: Go

In a flash they all ran down the hill and attacked the cops the female cop jumped in the cop car and hid. The furies knocked the Cops senseless and Cleon took one of their guns and shot the hand cuff and freed Ajax, he beat down many cops. After they knocked out all the cops, they hand cuffed them. and the Furies gave both of them a bat, Ajax was actually nice and thanked the furies.
The female cop snuk out of the car.
Ajax and Cleon got into the cop car,
Cleon started it. The female Cop went in front of the car and told them she wasn't moving unless they got out and surrendered. Ajax threw his foot over the seat and stepped on he gas pedal. He ran over her and she probably didn't live. The warriors Drove to Coney Island.

****************

Vermin: Good story
Cowboy: and perfect timing, we're almost there.



Till next time.



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great man really great
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What a Twist!!!!

Ok im back, so lets do this.

The warriors got off the train and donated a couple bucks to a hobo in exchange for some info on where they keep the people that p.o.'ed the Boppers. Turns out that they are being kept in a small warehouse behind a nightclub called "Purple strobe". The warriors wasted no time getting to the night club.
In front of the club Cleon took Ajax around the corner and said, no worries fighting these guys, i called in a couple of friends. Ajax puzzled said "k" and walked inside, Cleon took Cowboy and Vermin to the shed with him. They stealthed one guy amazingly. Cowboy put his hat over the bopper and Vermin punched him in the throat. Hah!!
Cleon: Ok, now all we gotta do is go in there and get Cochise.
As they walked in they saw 2 Rouges and Cochise, tied to chairs and duct taped mouths. They untied Cochise and The Rouges and said Tell your boys we're coming, to whatevers left of you rouges. Then 7 Boppers came in and took down the Warriors and tied them up.
Bopper: I will go tell big moe that you have arrived.
Big Moe: Ahh how you guys doing, Boppers, you can leave, i wanna take these guys myself.
Boppers Leave
Moe slaps Cleon
A strange voice said "whatcha gonna do to them fatass??"
Vermin looked up "Snow?"
It wasnt Snow, it was a White man with medium curly blonde hair, he was wearing a bright gray tee-shirt and had black jeans on. he did some fancy kicks and some elbows that sent big moe down, he jumped on his face and there was a snap, something of big moes broke, and big moe stopped moving. The man turned.

All: Swan???
Cleon: I thought you was dead man.
Swan: I was.
Swan untied the warriors and began what had happened
Swan: I was dead, or severly unconcious. Thankffully you didn't waste anytime, whenver theres a dead soldier, you creamate him, when you guys sent me to become ash, before i got to the fire, the creamter heard a gasp. he pulled me out . apparently the knife stopped blood flow to my heart and whoever took it out let the blood flow slightly back into me. and when i got close to the fire my blood got warm and pumped faster and my blood went into my heart and justled me from my sleep. I was at the hospital for a long time, than i needed therapy. Than i needed to learn how to fight again and go the gym. I been perfectly fine for 3 months, and now that im good again, i'm ready to soldier.
Vermin: In-F......-possible
Cowboy: Swan heres your blade,
Swan: keep it, i got my own.
The Warriors stepped over Moe and walked towards the night club Cleon smiled as a bunch of Furies left the club smiling. Ajax came out
Ajax: those freaks are O.K. guys.
Ajax looks surpirsed as he sees Swan.
Ajax: I Don't even want to know.
Everyone walked to the subway and asked Swan about what happened. The Warriors got a heavy soldier back. As they walked back into coney they seen Snow, Snow looked once at Swan and instantly became the same ol' Snow, Everything is now......perfect.


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Great fan fiction mate really good make some more fan fictions you write some great stories.
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Dude, this is my favorite fan fic. :D It is awesome.

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Well, to be honest i actually had no ending for this chapter. and i kinda missed swan dying so early so i threw in some sci fi explanation and it all fell into place.

kinda twisted


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New Chapta

Swan was walking down the streets of coney and was shining a knife he took off a blade dealer. A teen in a black shirt walked up to Swan.
Teen:Swan, i thought you was dead
Swan:does it look like im dead??
Teen:N...nnn...ooo
Out of nowhere 2 people wearing all black and masks attacked Swan, they tripped him to the ground a took his vest and ran
Swan stood up dazed
C'mon Joey, make with the shirt lets go.
Joey, the teen ripped his shirt off and gave it to Swan. Swan took off after them looking like Darry from The Outsiders,with his muscles rippling through the shirt.
Swan caught up to the two people. one got caught on a fence and tripped. Swan jumped over the fence onto the guys back and jumped off kicking him in the face. He through his knife in the other guy with the vest's calf he fell against a wall and Swan took the fists to him. he pulled off the mask and he could not tell who it was.
Swan put his vest back on puzzled. a voice behind him said:
Sheeeehheet, Cleon says you was tough, but i didn't think you was this good.
Then another voice said:
Aghh man, you hit me almost as hard as Ajax did when i spilled his beer.
The man who had the vest was black, had a moustache and short hair. He pulled off the black shirt to reveal a warriors vest. the behind him, who tripped on the fence had a vest also, he was white, and looked like vermin but with longer curly jet black hair and a big Tom selleck mustache.
Swan: uh....
White gang member: Hi, im Chachi, and this is Bilko. Cleon was unsure on your skills so he sent us to train you.
Bilko: heres your knife, clean the blade, you might get herpees
Swan: it was clean(he muttered under his breath)
Chachi: Wow, never been to the outskirts of coney before, we are like real close to the edge of coney.
Swan: In fact i've never been here neither
Bilko:I heard something about a new gang being around here. Call themselves the Coney Edge Saints, or C.E. Saints.
Swan:So they can never take our warriors.
Bilko: They are getting pretty heavy though.
Chachi: almost 120 of em, we got over 200
Swan: where are they? are they alll hibernating or somthin?
Chachi: No, they got a bunch of safe houses, so you never know, they could be anywhere, they circle all around the edges of coney. they could have us trapped...Surrounded, oh jee-sus
Bilko: If we are wearing our colors, we can't hide.
Chachi: so who wants to hide?
Swan: you guys hang out with Vermin and Cowboy too much, matter of fact, wish they were here, somethings oming around the corner.
Swan flipped out his knife and around the corner came Vermin, Cowboy and Cochise.
Cochise: Wtf are you guys doin around here, streets aint safe, those C.E. punks might be listening
Ajax came from around the corner
Ajax: and if you are, Go F'k yourself. heh heh. hey, had to shake off a couple babes, just heading back, see ya.
Swan: Maybe we should take the train back, much safer
Vermin:Yeah.
The Warriors got on the train
Bilko was going on about how the C.E Saints were an all black gang except for there leader, a half black guy named Malakai.
When they got back to the hangout Bilko was still going on ......"s'all about ethnic-i-sity and stuff man"
Cleon overheard
Cleon: heard whatchu guys was talkin about. If its all black, then we got to do some infiltrating, they japped a couple of out guys, so Cochise, take Snow and Bilko up to the hangout.
Cochise: Which ones the main one?
Cleon:Vermin, you know where it is, take Cochise, Snow, Bilko, Chachi, Swan and Cowboy up and show em where it is, we need to be ready for anything where we're down there so once you show them where it is, the blacks will split off from the whites and go seperate ways, take the long way around to the train station and stay out of sight
Vermin: gotcha.
the 6 walked out the door.
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Thing is...this writing style is more like a script than a fanfiction  :cry:
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