the 5th street killers please leave feedback part three now

[pozzy74]

                           The 5th street killers
Part one

A guy is walking in an ally when a military soldier goes up to him and says

Soldier: you there come with me

guy: what have I done

Soldier: nothing just come

guy: ok

They go to a cabin in the east side of Brooklyn

Soldier: age

Guy: 19

Soldier: name

Guy: A.C

Soldier: real name

A.C: Alex Clifford Harris

Soldier: now then sign here

A.C: what is it

Soldier: just sign

A.C: ok

Soldier: welcome to the marines

A.C: WHAT!

Soldier: too late now

A.C: I aint going d*ck

Soldier: if you don?t I will have you arrested

A.C: you cant do that

Soldier: we signed an agreement

A.C: sh*t

Soldier: now get outa here

Two weeks later

Military chief: welcome to the marines but that mops got to go. Go down to the barber

A.C: ok

He walks down the hall and all the other guys are looking at him

Barber: whoa ok kid sit down

A.C sits down

Barber: you?ve got a choice a crew or a baldy

A.C: crew please

Barber: cool

The barber gives A.C a crew cut

4 years later

After being in the military he returns to Brooklyn from Alabama he had gotten bigger than before not fat but muscle he was walking back to his house from the airport when he sees two guys one guy turned around and on his jacket was devil heads

Devil head#1: hey you ya pr*ck

A.C: what are you talking to me

Devil head#2: yeah asshole 

Devil head#2 GO HOME YOUR NOT GOING THROUGH ARE TERRITORY DON?T MESS WITH THE DEVIL HEADS

A.C: are you shouting at me

Devil head#1: YEAH

A.C sees a pole on the ground he picks it up then drops his bag

A.C: I?ll give you something to shout about

He runs over to them they already had baseball bats and A.C kicked there a*s

The two beat up Devil heads get up

Devil head#2: your gonna pay for that

A.C throws the pole at them to scare them they then run

A.C: GET OUTA HERE

He then continues casually walking home half way there he hears running
All the Devil head are standing there

Devil head#1: WE TOLD YOU YOU WERE GONNA REGRET THAT

A.C: F**K YOU

Devil head#3: get him

They run at him he fights them off but ends up getting beaten up

The devil heads here sirens and run
A.C gets up too grabs his bag and runs
A.C goes to his friend stumpy he knocks on his door
Stumpy opens the door

Stumpy: hey A.C what are you doing man I thought you were in the military

A.C:I got released

Stumpy looks at his cuts

Stumpy: sh*t what happened to you

A.C: some guys started sh*t with so I beat the h*ll out of them

Stumpy: the devil heads whoa don?t f*ck with them man

A.C: they came back with about 40 guys and beat the h*ll out of me

Stumpy: you ok

A.C: yeah man I just want to get a gang of our own

Stumpy: that?s not a bad idea

A.C: yeah but I aint been here in 4 years I don?t know anybody who would join

Stumpy: oh I know just the guys

A.C and stumpy go down to the old liquor store in Brooklyn where the saw about 50 guys and 100 devil heads getting ready to fight

A.C: who are we with

Stumpy: the guys that don?t look like devils

A.C: who are they

Stumpy: just brawlers.. nobodies

A.C: Lets go help

Stumpy: no? wait

A.C: there gonna get wrecked

Stumpy: no just watch

A.C and stumpy watch the fight 10 minutes later
The devil heads are beat down to pulp
A.C and stumpy go over to the guys

Stumpy: brilliant fellas

Guy#1: hey stumpy how you doing

Stumpy: not bad

Stumpy: how does a gang sound

Guy#2: hey not a bad idea

A.C: WHOS WITH US!

All: YEAH!!!!!!!

Stumpy: all rite then lets move

Stumpy lines up the guys

Stumpy: now as a gang you need a leader and as our leader I give you A.C

All: YEAH!!!!

They then calm down

A.C: now your first mission is to go and recrute new members for our gang and tonight we go down to devil heads territory

Guy#4: BUT WHATS OUR NAME!

A.C: what street is this

All: 5TH STREET A.C!!

Stumpy: good guys respecting warcheif


A.C: Then we are? the 5th street killers ill get you guys uniforms tomorrow but for that we need money
           
he splits two groups
now this half recruiting and this half robbing

A.C: now move

The gang go out

[Vermin16]

cool. there gonna be any more?

[pozzy74]

yes

[Vermin16]

cant wait. it sounds like it could end up being pretty good

[pozzy74]

part 2

2 hours later the two groups come in 1st group had about 100 more members 2nd with 3 bags of cash

A.C: how much money

Tim: $1000

A.C: good job your our new looter

Tim: alright cool

A.C smiles

A.C: ALRIGHT LETS GO TO TREMONT

All: YEAH!!!!

A.C: LETS MOVE

Gang move out they get off the subway and see about 40 devil heads

A.C: THAT?S THEM GET EM!!

they run after them then they final corner them

Devil#1: please don?t

Devil#2: what you pu$$y you bi7chin out on us

Devil#3: yeah f*ck 

Rodent: kill them

They kick there @$$

[Juniper]

I can see you as one of the stars as fan fiction I like it so much I wish I was wreiting it or we was both writing it.

[Jigsaw]

yes

There is a rule against 1 - 5 word posting. Also, you might want to note all the * signs you have in your story. There isn't supposed to be swearing or those symbols either, unless you are quoting the movie The Warriors.

[Bopper69]

cool

[pozzy74]

its not really swearing though

[Jigsaw]

its not really swearing though

I found out that swearing IS permitted in stories just try not to swear far to much.

[pozzy74]

ok

[pozzy74]

theres a new writer here so dont think hes intruding or sumthing lol

[pozzy74]

heres part 3


A.C: now to the hang out

All: YEAH!!!!!

they march down to the devils hang out which is an old school

they bust open the door

A.C: YOUR THE PRI@KS THAT BEAT ME UP ARENT YOU

All:YEAH!!

rain: get those b@sterds 

sorry more coming though...

[pozzy74]

ant beleive i didnt finish this oh well