the elimanators

[nazzac]

[glow=red,2,300]The Elimanators[/glow]

chapter one. the meeting and the train.

it starts of with a meeting.

cyrus: people. we have a major announcement to make.
we have got a new gang. they are called the

a gun goes of, and cyrus falls to the ground.

the gangs go wild and it alerts the cops who come to the scene.

niall( the leader): hey guys. get your asses out of here.

the elimanators escape through a hole in a fence.

niall soon follows them out.

josh: hey. what went on back there.

luke: cyrus got shot.

niall: right now we have got bigger things to worry about at this moment.
we have to make it back home.

corey: your kiddin arn't ya. we will never make it.

ben: yeah. evryone will think we shot cyrus after what happend to desire.

matt: yeah we got blamed for that and now we will get balmed for this.

niall: shut up. we are going home and thats final. now lets move.

the elimanators walk away from the park


In the riffs hangout.

masai: who did this ?

a knock is then heard and the albert assasains walk in.

connor( the leader of AA): we sw who busted cyrus.

masai: who ?

connor: the elimanators!

matty: yeah it was them.

masai: send the word. i want them ?

dj: alright boppers in the big city. i have just got a word from the gramercy riffs. they want the elimanators.
they shot cyrus. they want them alive. adios.
nowhere to run plays and shows the gangs getting ready.

then the elimanators are show under a bridge.

Oliver: theres our station.

josh: so why arn't we going.

corey: yeah we are acting like fagots.

niall: shut up will ya.

then they see a van. it's driving towards them.

niall: just keep talking.

corey: who are these guys.

luke: the cider crew. very tough gang.

corey: those lousey [bad word deleted] head [bad word deleted]s

matt: theres our train we have got to make it.

niall: lets go for it.

they run out in front of the cider crew and head for the platform.
the cider crew chase them all the way.
the elimanators escape and get on the train.

josh: yeah aby. we made it and we are going home.

corey: we are home free suckas.

a couple of mins later

the train as to stop because of a fire.

niall: what the [bad word deleted] is this.

josh: this sucks big time.

robbie: who set that fire.

matt: beats me.

naill: lets go.

they exit the train only to be surrounded by the moonrunners.

end of part one.

[nazzac]

    [glow=red,2,300]chapter 2: the moonrun[/glow]

Ben: we have had it.

Luke: the moonrunners.

josh: come on lets take them out.

niall: we have to think of something fast.
run.

the elimanators run to the left of them and manage to get passed not hurt.
the moonrunners are chasing them.
josh stops and hits one of the moonrunners, corey stays to help.
but there is too many and they start running again.
they turn onto a street, trying to get away.
when suddenly whack one of the runners went down and the cuers appear.
with dark face paint and black clothing. they are hard to spot and they beat up the moonrunners
allowing the elimanators to stop and get a breather.
pool cue after pool cue hit the runners. then they turned to face the elimanators.

corey: shit.

josh: we are gonna get japped.

they walk up to the cuers.
the leader does some tricks with the cue, and swings at niall.
he duck and punches him in the stomach 2 times before hitting him in the face.
he goes down then a brawl goes on between the elimanators and the cuers.
the cuers get laid out, and the elimanators celibrate.

josh: yes, thats what i'm talking about.

corey: yeah a bit of fist throwing for once.

niall: lets go. we need to make it to the next station.

matt: he is right. if we miss the next train to sowerby. we will have to wait another day.

luke: we have got 45 minutes. thats plenty of time.

niall: lets go.

dj: the moonrunners didn't come out at night.
and the cuers missed the pot.
our friends are getting closer.
be sure to greet them, adios.

in the riffs hangout.

riff: we have just heard from the moonrunners, they blew it.

masai: what about the cuers

riff: they blew it too.


the elimanators are walking across the street only to stumble into the orphans.

niall: who are these guys.

luke: the orphans. so low down they ain't even on the map. real low class.

josh: lets take them, they are wimps.

sully: perhaps you may show us your invitation.

niall: we don't do invites.

sully: so why are your invading our turf.

luke: we are just passing through. our train got wrecked by the fire.

sully: what fire.

a beep goes of and most of the orphans get ran down by the cider van.

robbie: holy shit.

oli: we better take of.

niall: lets go. to the station.

the elimanators start running to the station.
the cider crew see them and for the second time thye chase them.

josh: why can't we take these wimps.

niall: just shut up and soldier.

they get to the platform, and on the train.

when they get there they see the warriors.

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[glow=red,2,300] cahpeter 3. the elimanators meets the warriors[/glow].

niall: the warriors.

luke: we have had it now.

swan: hey, we know you didn't shoot cyrus.

ajax: yeah we are cool with ya.

niall: hey we are cool with you too.

corey: ajax, digin any chicks lately.

niall: keep your mouth shut. by the way wheres cleon.

josh: and who is that chick.

fox: cleon got wasted by the riffs, we got blamed aswell. so they are onto us both.

swan: this is mercy. she decided to tag along with us after we wasted the orphans.

niall: we trying to get home where we are safe.

swan: same here. we trying to get back to coney.

the train stops.

they here tapping.

niall: who the fuck is that.

they see the cops and run of. they split up.
fox gets caught and gets ran over by a train.

the elimanators break up from the warriors and find themselfs at riverside park.

there stand the baseball furies.

niall: lets run.

thye get chased by the furies.

luke gets caught and beeten down by the furies.

matt: luke has just got wasted.

josh: thats it i'm wasting these clown fucks.

josh stops and punches one of the furies.

and then a brawl between the furies and elimanators breaks out.

niall comes face to face with the leader.

niall: i'll shove that bat up your ass and turn you into a popsical.

the leader does all his tricks and swings at niall.

niall ducks and hits him in the face.
then he knocks him out.

josh: yes. thats how we play ball.

corey: about time we kicked some but.

niall: lets go.

the elimanators walk of.

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chapter 4: nowhere to run.

niall: we need to make it to the next station and fast.

robbie: hey guys. who's that over there.

they all turn to where robbie is pointing.

ben: the punks. it seems we might after get through them to get to the train.

matt: they are blocking the entrance to the subway.

josh: we'll just have to fight our way through tose hillbilly fucks

niall: lets go.

the walk to where the punks are.

leader: where do you think your going.

niall: where going home. now if ya mind we want to get passed.

leader: your not going anywhere, but the riffs hangout.

josh: lets waste them

josh runs up and punches the leader and they start fighting.
niall gets stabbed in the arm, but corey comes and whcks a bottle over the punks head.
oliver throws one through a car window, and the fight ends.

robbie: are you alright niall.

niall: yeah, now lets go before the cops get here.

corey: those hillbilly whimps. we took care of them.


it cuts to where the alber assasians are.
they enter a shop and take some drinks.

connor: hey jarret, get down here.
i need you to get of your ass up and get some wepons.
we might catch the elimanators at the street station.

matty: hey. that platform will be crawling with cops.

connor: i don't care. lets go.


the elimanators get of the train.

josh: ohh fuck.

matt: we have just walked into the riffs turf.

niall: we need to split up.
3 go east
3 go west.
i'll go straight on.
move.

thye split up.

robbie: josh, i don't like this at all.

josh: yeah back to the station.


the other half.

corey: lets go back. we are gonna get japped.

they walk back.

they meet up with the others.

josh: hey.

corey: hey.

josh: niall is still out there.

ben: what a crazy bastard.

josh: lets get to the station.

meanwhile niall is looking for masai.

niall: where is he. i need to tell him we didn't do it.

masai: riffs !

riffs: yeah right.

masai: your over. we need to get revenge. you shot cyrus.

niall: no we didn't.

masai: get him.

they gang up and niall and kill him.

back at the station.

josh: here's our train.

corey: hey wheres nazz. he should be back by now.

josh: we better get going.

they enter the train.

dj: alright boppers. good news. the leader of the eliamantors has been elimanated by the gramercy riffs.
the rest are still yet to be catched. adios.

[nazzac]

[glow=red,2,300]chapter 5: wreckege.[/glow]

corey: now nazz is wasted.

ben: he might not be.

corey: anyway who's warchief.

josh: i am.

corey: who said.

matt: niall. he said his word, josh is warcheif.

corey: so what. i don't care what he said, i want to be warcheif.

robbie: lighten up man, josh is warcheif.

oli: yes he is. and we better get of the train.

they exit the train.

josh: well thats it for the trains.

corey: what?

matt: he is right. theres no stop in our turf.

josh: we'll have to walk the rest of the way.

corey: fuck this. that sucks.

josh: lets move.

they walk of.

in the riffs hangout.

masai: wheres the rest of them.

riff: i don't know.

masai: i want them.

the elimanators walk into the reck park.

robbie: we are done for.

corey: shit. who are those guys.

voice: the reckers.

luke appears walking into the park.

robbie: what the fuck happend to you.

luke: the furies got me. i walked to here.

josh: robbie. mark that powerstation.

they stare at the reckers.

josh: lets go.

corey: why don't we waste them.

josh: wait for them to make their move.

they walk up towards the elimanators.

chris: hey. your the guys who shot cyrus. kill them.

josh: run.

they run and the reckers chase them. after a couple of mins.
they take a turn and lose them.

ben: why didn't we waste them.

josh: because look.

corey: hey some chicks.

robbie: we have no time for that sort of shit. we need to get home.

josh: leave these. we better get moving.

they walk of.

meanwhile with AA.

connor: we are here. in a matter of mins we will be kicking their heads of.

matty: yeah.


they see their turf.

josh: we have made it.

corey: but look who's their to greet us.

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[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 6: home sweet home part 1[/glow]

connor: so it's come down to me and you.

josh: when we see these houses we think we are home and safe.

connor: your wrong.

corey:  come on. fight us.

josh: yeah. if your so tough.

connor: lets move.

they get right in the face of the elimanators.
corey walks up and punches connor and a riot goes on.
josh gets hit by ethan. but he strikes back.
ben throws jarret into a wall and corey knocks connor out.
robbie sprays paint into sams eyes and oli knocks him out.

the fight finishes.

josh: come on. lets go to our hangout to dig the chicks.

the rest: yeah.

the move untill they see by riffs.

masai: riffs.

riffs: yeah right

they walk up to the elimanators.

masai: your time is up. your all going to die.

masai: we'll ask. who shot cyrus.

josh: I did. he killed my mum my dad and my brother. and i was only 5 years old.

i needed to get revenge.

masai: kill him

the elimanators run.

josh grabs a bottle. sets it alight and throws it onto a car.

half of the riffs get blown up and they flee home.

corey: you shot cyrus.

josh: well he killed my family.

matt: a motive worth shooting for.

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[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 6: home sweet home part 2.[/glow]

josh: i had to get my revenge.

meanwhile at the riffs hangout.

niall wakes up.

niall: where am i.

masai walks in.

masai: you. get up.

niall gets up.

niall: hey. i didn't waste cyrus.

masai: we know. your free to go.

niall walks out.

riff: hey. how are we going to catch that sucka who wasted cyrus.

masai: youn will see.

back home josh walks down the elimanators street. they see niall's girlfriend michelle sat down.
she see's them and notices no niall.

michelle: wheres niall.

corey: i can't break this too ya.

josh: he is dead. the riffs killed him.

michelle starts crying.

michelle: how do you know he is dead.

matt: we saw him.

michelle runs inside crying.

josh: well we are here, and were safe.

corey: not quite. the riffs are still on our ass.

matt: he's right. we better getgoing before we get wasted.

josh: we are moving to london for a couple of days. then we are safe.

corey: london. fuck that. there after you not us.

ben: yeah we are staying here.

josh: but my ass is in danger.

corey: i'm of inside to check on michelle.

the rest follow him apart from josh.

josh: they won't save my ass. i'm going.

inside.

corey: josh is gone and i'm warlord. now robbie get of your ass and finish our tag.
rest of you search the streets. i want no other gang on our turf. see any waste them.
now move.

michelle: he will come back.

corey: we don't know if he is dead. but i know he is with the riffs. who think he shot cyrus, untill josh bloated that he did it. so we are asuming he is dead.

[flew to high]

Um, I geuss if I where you I would change the names of the characters. I just cant take a gang seriously when there are names like Matt and Josh. Not bad though.
Just one question, are the names based on real friends?

[nazzac]

Um, I geuss if I where you I would change the names of the characters. I just cant take a gang seriously when there are names like Matt and Josh. Not bad though.
Just one question, are the names based on real friends?

yes. they are based on my mates. so thats why they have those names.