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heres my first story so i hope you like it!!
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CHAPTER 1-the cops

'arhhhhh  my f*ckin head'.cleon got up and looked around.'where is every body' the last thing he
remembered is getting pummeld by the riffs.he stands up too quickly and passes out again.when he
comes to he gets up very slowly,and looks at his reflection in a nearby puddle.f*ck im so wrecked. his
eyes were almost swolen shut,he had bruses and cuts every where,2 black eyes and a swolen
lip.'where the f*ck is everybody' cleon thought.he had told swan to stay by him.then he remembers
everything cyrus getting shot the leader of the rouges blaming him. 'im gonna KILL that little f*cker
for blaming me! he thought .he walked out of the stadium in to a graveyard.As he walked by a certain
gravestone he saw something red on it.a W the warriors had been here! then everyone must be ok!
suddenly he saw police lights flashing 'damn the pigs' cleon said out loud.he started to sprint as fast
as he could through the graveyard.he stopped to hide behind a gravestone. then off in the distance
he saw a train! that will take me to union square! he thought .he forgot all about the cops and started
to sprint down the road 'theres one!' a cop shouted. cleon turned around,picked up a garbage can
and threw it right in the cops face 'awww sh*t my f*ckin face'  then another one apeard behind a
gravestone 'freeze' he shouted. cleon picked up a piece of rubble from a tombstone,waited until the
cop got close then WHAM it colided with the cops skull knocking him out cold.cleon turned around and
started running towards the train. he was going up the steps when 4 cops apeared around the
corner.cleon lowerd his shoulder and ran straight in to them. but they just got up and ran after him.
he saw the doors to the train closing. he ran harder then he could ever think of. cleon got through
just in time. but then  one cop  also squeezed in the train car.as the train took of from the station the
cop whacked cleon in the nose with his nightstick blood started to pour out of his nose.thats when he
did a roundhouse kick to the cops face.when the cop landed on his knees cleon kneed him in the
face.he was now on the ground 'please dont kill me please' the cop cryed .cleon just shook his
head 'motherf*cker' as he stomped once as hard as he could on the cops head.

chapter 2 coming soon!!! 
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chapter2- the turnbull ac's part 1

Cleon searched through the cops belt he found handcuffs,handcuff keys pepperspray and the cops nightstick. all of that would be useful getting back to coney.sudenly the train stopped 'what the hell he said out loud'he couldnt be at union square already.he opend the door to the next compartment 'sh*t'
3 cops were in the train searching for gangmembers.cleon quickly grabbed a bag and put everything inside it.he locked the door to the next compartment and slipped outside.as the train pulled away he waved through the window to the cops as they started screaming to stop the train
cleon waited on a bench for the next train. when he saw more cops coming to the platform through the streets he knew he had to get out of there. he hid behind a pillar and waited for the cops to go by. when they did he bolted out the door onto the street.'f*ckin stupid pigs' cleon said suddenly someone grabbed his throught and lifted him into the air. he turned to see who it was.'holy f*ck' cleon cried out.there grabing him by the throught was the biggest turnbull ac cleon had ever seen.he must have been at least 6'10.'what the f*ck are you pussies doin back here!' the turnbull said.then he pulled a knife on cleon.'im gona teach you coney c*cksuckers a lesson'!cleon then kicked the turnbull as hard as he could right in the groin.'AWWWWW' he cried' as he sunk to the floor. cleon then picked him up,got his knife off the floor and screwed it slowly into the turnbulls ear.'ARHHHHHH' .'WHERE ARE THE OTHER WARRIORS' cleon screamed. after 30 seconds the turnbull confessed.'we heard on the radio that you guys shot cyrus then we saw the other warriors so we started to chase them but they made it on the subway car to union square.'thats all i need' said cleon as he jabbed the rest of the knife into the gangmembers ear.he pocketed the knife and continued to walk to the next station.then he saw the police roadblock.'sh*t' said cleon 'ill never be a ble to get around that roadblock'.then he saw something out of the corner of his eye a JUNKYARD sign with a turnbull logo on it.cleon sighed this would be the only way to get to the next station.he started talking to himself 'ok cleon you can do this just march through these lame f*cks territory and waste everyone along the way'.cleon took a deep breath and walked in the junkyard to do somthing that anybody else would say one word about it 'SUICIDE'
                 
anybody like it?
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Keep it up and its good. You should write longer and make it a little bit more able to read. SUCIDE i love that.
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CHAPTER2- the turnbull acs part 2

As cleon walked through the junkyard he thought he heard somthing on the othe side of a fence beside him so he looked through a hole in it.'I cant belive you missed those panzies'a turnbull said.he was huge african-american and instead of wearing a turnbull ac vest he had on a turnbull jacket that said WARLORD on the front.'its not my fault'cried the other one.'they was too damn fast'. 'you know how much you f*cked up or rep man?'.'so no other gang has got em  we missed ,the wimpy orphans even the furies missed man!'.'ya well you better not mess up again or ill wreck you punk *ss.'ok ok warlord' the warlord started to walk away.cleon backed away from the fence,picked up a brick and threw it against the wall beside him.'what the f*ck the turnbull said and walked over to him.cleon hid behind a dumpster and picked up a broken bottle.he waited until the turnbull had his back turned the cleon walked up and tapped him on the shoulder.'who the f*ck' the turnbull yelled as cleon lodged the broked bottle into his neck resulting in an instant death.cleon picked up his bag and walked along.

By the time cleon had seen the gate out of the junkyard he had already done the same to 3 other gangmembers.thats when he heard a bottle break behind him.he wipped around only to have a board broken on his face.cleon fell on the ground wimpering as the turnbull ac warlord got on top of him and started choking him.'f*cking pussie he screamed.'ill kill you!!!.'cleon could feel his face getting purple and he was starting to black out'.thats when he remembered somthing! he reached into his pocket and pulled out the knife he took from the turnbull ac before.'f*ck you'cleon said as he jabbed the knife right in between the other guys eyes.he pushed the dead ac off him and got up he started to feel dizzy.'arhhhhh' cleon moaned as he passed out.when he came to he saw 3 turnbull acs coming towrda him.'theres one' yelled an ac
'get him' yelled another .cleon pulled out the nightstick and pepper spray from his bag.he quickly threw the night stick at one turnbull.then sprayed pepper spray in anothers eyes.'take this f*ckers' cleon yelled.the third turnbull picked up a pipe and swung it a cleon.he ducked an puched him in the gut while he sunk to the floor cleon picked up the pipe and bashed his head open.by this time the first turnbull had gone around cleon and had him in a headlock from behind.'lemme go motherf*cker' cleon said.then he flipped the ac over him and right on to the other.he picked up the spray and kept spraying in the 2 turnbull eyes untill it ran out. when that happend he picked one up and smashed his face into a car door then through a car window.he turned around and looked at the other one still laying on the ground.'GO TELL YOUR NEW WARLORD TO NEVER EVER TRY TO F*CK WITH THE WARRIORS AGAIN ,YOU GOT THAT YOU TOY!!! cleon screamed.'yaya i got it man just leave me alone' the turmbull said.cleon said 'well then go tell him' and the turnbull ran off.cleon picked up the nightstick and put it in his bag.he walked out into the streets and sat down on a curb. 'man that was heavy' he said to himself.he looked in the bag there was still a nightstick,hancuffs and keys.'I might actually be able to get back to coneythe other warriors are probably almost there'.cleon then got up and started to walk to the next station.

by the time he got there he saw the train pulling in.then he heard somthing behind him'HEY WARRIOR WHY YOU RUNNIN OFF ARE YA SCARED'.cleon turned around .there standing 100 meters behind him were 30 turnbull acs .AHH F*CK YOU cleon yelled and started running towards the train.'GET THAT F*CKER' the warlord yelled.the turnbulls were running very fast but they were no match for cleon.by the time he got into the train car the acs were just getting up the stairs.he layed down on a seat and put his hands on his face as the train was taking off.'i just might actually be able to get back to coney,ya right'! 
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dose anybody like it? if they do ill keep writing
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Chapter3 the orphans

when the train stopped cleon got out slowly and looked around.'damn' he said. the train had been stopped by a fire that had burned on the track.he walked out of the station and started to go  down the street, it was the most poor part of new york he had ever seen.he knew this place 'tremont'

cleon turned the corner and saw a wearhouse that had a huge gang burner on it,in huge green messy writing it said ORPHANS.he looked more carfully at it and relized that this was still wet paint."they must be around here somewhere" cleon thought.He walked over to the wearhouse doors and kicked them open and what cleon saw made his insides tremble.

Orphans, there must have been about thirty of them all packed with knives,pipes and boards. worst of all they were all staring at him.
he heard someone yell from the crowd of orphans."ORPHANS CHARGE!!!!!". cleon just stood there and waited for the first orphan to get close and then WHAM he slammed the door right into the orphans face breaking his nose and bashing out all his front teeth.

by the time the other orphans had helped the other on up cleon was already running down the street and had turned a corner.

one orphan who looked like the leader started screaming "ALL OF YOU GET OUT THERE AND FIND HIM ,I DONT WANT ANOTHER WARRIOR INVADIN OUR TURF!!!"the rest of the orphans groand but did what they were told and went to go find cleon.

Cleon knew they would be looking for him so he had a plan he turned a street and headed back a differnt way to the wearhouse.by the time he had snuck up to the back door the rest of the orphans were all out lookin for him.cleon climbed a fire escape ladder to the roof of the wearhouse and looked down threw the window in the ceiling.

there were only 2 orphans in the intire hangout."hey sully when we catch that prick let me have his vest" the first orphan said "jesse" the orphan leader sully said "do you really think that I the leader of a solid outfit like , the orphans, would give you that d*ckwads vest?" "can i have it or not" jesse replied ."of course not you dumb pr*ck i want it" said sully.

such a good plan came up in cleons head that he smiled.he took out the handcuffs from his pocket .he jumped threw the window landing right on top of the two orphans.when they started sceaming from pain and of fright cleon grabbed the fat one called jesse and dragged him over to the orphans bathroom.

he bashed his face in to the mirrior and picked up rope off the floor as the orphan sunk to the ground.cleon tied a knot in the rope as if to hang someone.he then tied it around jesse's kneck and pulled hard."arhhh" jesse moaned as cleon strangeld unconcious

cleon walked out of the bathroom dragging jesse by the rope he tied around his wrists.he opened up the closet door beside the bathroom to find sully hiding and crying."pppplease llleave mmee alone". sully cried.cleon picked up a knapsack full of of spray cans from the closet and walked slowly towards sully while taking out his handcuffs.

by the time cleon had got to the next subway car to riverside, the orphans had gave up looking for him they were heading back to their hangout when they saw somthing red painted on it.they quickly ran up to see that over the large orphans tag it read THE WARRIORS.when they opened the doors to the building they saw somthing that made them all start crying.sully and jesse were hanged by their wrists dead.sully was hanged by handcuffs and jesse by rope.

cleon shifted uneasy in his seat the next place he would be going was furies turf.these guys were the 2nd biggest gang in new york.cleon looked inside the knapsack he'd takin from the orphans hangout there were 10 spray cans.cleon said out loud "i hope the furies dont mind me taggin their turf" he reached into his pocked and took out his cuff keys he quickly put them back.he'll never know when that might come in handy(hint hint)
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anybody like it? if noone dose ill just stop writing
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you're a great writer. don't stop, i want to hear more about cleons journey home!
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Keep on writing its really cool!
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here it is finally sorry it took so long  well... here it is


CHAPTER4:Ajax

cleon walked off the subway train onto the platform.he needed to change trains here. he saw two cops going up the stairs drinking coffee.cleon quickly turned the other way and started running. then in front of him another cop turned the corner."FREEZE" the officer yelled."f*ck" cleon said.they had spotted him. cleon dived right onto the train tracks right into a puddle of blood.he was getting up to run when he saw somthing.he reached down and picked up a torn vest that read 'the warriors'."sh*t" cleon said as he stuffed it into his pocket.'i wonder who it is' he thought as he pulled himself up.he started running down the platform.

he quickly turned left,running up the stairs and threw the doors to outside.cleon lowerd his shoulder and he came crashing threw the door into a cop who had been coming in.he kept running down the
street and into the park without looking at the sign he had passed
it read RIVERSIDE

as cleon ran threw the park he tripped over a bench bashing his face on it.he reached up and felt it.his face was bloody and his flesh felt raw.he reached up, grabbed the bench and lifted himself over.he had to keep going.cleon saw police lights ahead of him.and saw someone he would have never think of.

Ajax. caught on a bench by handcuffs."aww ajax" cleon said.3 squad cars surounded him.and he was on the ground bleeding outta the mouth.then a plan brewed in cleons head.he reached into the garbage can next to him ,pulled out a bottle and threw it infront of him over the police."what the f*ck was that" said one cop."lets go check it out" said another.then all of the cops left to go see what the noise was.

cleon started running over when he noticed a woman sitting on the hood of a squad car, "Ajax" cleon whisperd.ajax turned around and almost screamed of joy "cleon man we thought you was dead" ajax said back."whos the chick" cleon said as he looked at the lady who was now smoking a ciggerete,she had still not noticed him."shes a pig" ajax replied "look behind the bench theres a bat i threw over there".cleon looked and saw a baseball bat laying on the grass.he picked it up."hit that b*tch for me" ajax whisperd."shut the f*ck up" cleon said back.

cleon sneaked over to the trunk, of the car the lady was sitting on he climbed quietly on the roof.and lifted his bat high above his head and brought it down on the womans head knocking her unconscious.he threw the bat to ajax who caught it with his free hand."how the f*ck am i gonna get out, man those pigs are comin back!" ajax complained
"just hold on" cleon said.he jumped off the car roof and was taking out the handcuff keys outta his pocket,he threw them to ajax who started uncuffing himself from the bench."done" ajax said as he threw the handcuffs to the ground."good lets go" cleon said as he and ajax ran off into the night.

"you know whos this is" cleon said to ajax as he took out the shredded warriors vest that was stained in blood. "F*ck" said ajax "thats fox's" "he must have gotten hit by a train" cleon replied."you wanna tell me what happend to you guys" he said. "you wanna tell me what happend to you ajax said back as he twirled the baseball bat he was carying.
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