a warriors story

[papa arnold]

rembrandt bolted down the street five shadowy  folowed him he ran in the hardware the figures caught up with him
"no where to run small fry"one said rembrandt looked to his side a wrech lay on the shelfhe kicked a stall to distract them while he grabbed the wrench he knocked one down he looked above him a platform laid on the edge of the banister that was being built he grabbed a pot of paint slammed on the floor it got the figures cooked in paint he bolted past them ran up the stairs hopped the banister and stood on the platform but the figures closed in on him
"hey you saracens why dont you take on us"came voice from below swan vermin ajax snow and cochise stepped in the door a smile spread across rembrandt face rembrandt held up his wrench hit one ajax bolted up the stairs eager for battle he grabbed one slamed his head againt the wall cochise side kikced one in the stomach then punched him in the jaw vermi picked up a pot of paint and colided it with ones head then he kneed him in the stomach swan just stood there curious of somthing rembrandt stood back etting the others do the work snow came crashing  in with his box he swung it at one head then hit him on the floor swan looked out the window about 10 more saracens lined up on the street one came up from behind the corwd he had something in his hand.A MOLOTOV. he threw it at the harware stoor cochise jumped over the banister hoping not burn alive ajax dived on the floor and snow crounched down with his box over his head rembrandt dived under a shelf swan slamed himself againt a wall trying to get away from a flame
"guys over here come on"swan shouted the warriors all met up with him they ran through the back door into the street behind the store sadly the saracens were one step ahead of them the warriors dashed down the street they knew exactly where to go coney was their turf and coney would forever be their truf swan lead them into an alley and into an old warehouse about 100 warriors all stood inside




"WARRIORS...WARRIORS*the warriors perk up listening*SARACENS ARE COMING AND THEY HAVE MOLOVOS"swan said panting
"what how many"rhino asked
"about 10"rembrandt said running through the door
"only ten pfft we have 100 in here we will win for sure"rhino said laughing
"yeah but did tyou here the bit when swan said they all have molotovs"cochise said suddenly a crash came through the door fire spread round the seating area some warriors vgot burnt but none died the saracens waited out side all holding lit molotovs one by one they threw them but each time it semmed that fire spread more the warriors dived for cover some warriors died but not many swan lead them down the street in groups for all the sracens no the warriors are still inside the hangout swan lead them swiftly down the boardwalk and into the old spook house
"ok warriors this can be our hangout some of you go down to the other amusment warehouses and find what ever myou can the others try and find some furnature and some beer in thirsty



part 2 soon

[gorillaz968]

nice but with better grammar, a few more spaces and full stops nown again, it would be better.

[adam88]

yeah pretty cool story.

[gorillaz968]

why would the saracens chase the warriors? theyre allies, they got them into the meeting with cyrus in the first place

[papa arnold]

why would the saracens chase the warriors? theyre allies, they got them into the meeting with cyrus in the first place

ahh true buts thats only in the game not in the film