It All Starts Here: The Baseball Furies-UPDATED June 8th 200

[Kartoon]

ok theres a couple chapters updated. i know the build up is slow. but getting all my ideas out as to why the furies started is kinda a long thought. but if you guys like it, let me know and i will add on more when i got time. enjoy

[Tantive7]

1970 seems a little early to form the gang. Just my thought nothing offensive.

On the contrary,
Gangs have been around for as long as you think,my young patiwon.

Have you ever seen the movie "BlackBoard Jungle" or "Rebel without a Cause"
or Better yet "West Side Story" or "The Outsiders" ??

KARTOON,your story has many twist and turns,it's very compelling..
I waiting to see, how it all comes together,and How The Furies come together
Hell I'm want to see how The Name comes together, and how the theme
of Paint-faced Baseball Players come together..
And of course,the exciting part is how they become
a Name for themselves in 1970's New York!!!

I can already imagine them taking over the New York City Transit Authority
And how they stake their claim on their turf..
battling the corrupt New York City Police,
And of course,Which gang first starts Beef with them..
It's already building up,Kartoon keep it up..
Stay Tuned Boppers..
We only just begun 8)

[Tantive7]

If you are reading this..
If you are BORED with The Newbies Posting
Perhaps this story that Kartoon typed here will entertain you
It's better than reading for the 100th times which Gang would you join???
And trust me ,It's a good read,and I hate to see it
just disappear into the abyss of the forum as a forgotten topic

The Last of a Dying Breed...T7

[Tantive7]

Kartoon -

I just noticed this topic recently, and had no idea you could also write. This is a fantastic story, and I hope to see more of it. I realize that your music keeps you busy, but if you ever do have the time, I think a lot of people here would enjoy to see more of your fan fiction.

Between your music, Photoshop/Illustrator skills, and your writing ability, you are one talented dude. 8) Thumbs up!

Scurvy Dog..
Kartoon is a man of all trades..
I'm telling you,soon enough,
there's going to be Kartoon copycats here
I'm telling you it's coming..
Kartoon2 and Kartoon 3.0
W    T C H

[LIPPY]

Simon Cowell stylee:...

Ya know, I read this story at the end of last week and have been thinking about it ever since. I never left a comment at the time because, to be quite honest, I was blown away and didn't know where to start.

To put it simply it was stunning stuff. I really like the way you set the scene, and I could picture everything in my head as it was happening. I hope you keep this going because, quite frankly, it's one of the best stories I've read on the forum.

Kartoon... seeing as you're a US rapper, I'll put it to you like this: "That ish was DOPE, homie."

Indeed.

[Kartoon]

well thanks to T7 it seems a few people have looked at the forgotton story

honestly i just didnt wana waste time writting it. so im glad to know i didnt.

this isnt a story i wanna just wrote all the big stuff and bang it all out in a few chapters this is going to be really built up so you can enjoy each sectyion

i wil l try to add more soon!

[New Jersey Warrior]

great story kartoon. i didn't know you were a great writer

[Tantive7]

I just wanted to repost here,so that if anyone is new here..
Can enjoy a real good read!!!
And hopefully spark another intrest in
Kartoon Fantastic Baseball Furies Story.
It's very compelling and overall, It's a Fun read..
So here it is again
[glow=red,2,300]It All Starts Here: The Baseball Furies[/glow]