"the beginning." (maybe)

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Tue May 24, 2005 1:17 pm

*****warning**** there will be some swearing in the next post!! sorry warchief's!!!!

Post by **The Fox** » Tue May 24, 2005 1:20 pm

Since it's quoting from the future chapters of the film then that's o.k on this link. 8)

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Tue May 24, 2005 3:04 pm

ajax turns from the sink, got a name boy? popeye, the youngster replies. ajax, laughs sarcasticly. what are you a tuff guy, like popeye? i do o.k. the kid says back. ajax laughs again, we'll see! ajax stare's hard for a few second's, well more than a few. he then sigh's heavy, and start's to speak. i always knew cleon was a fuckin idiot, swan too. warchief, my ass! i told em it was stupid, goin to the bronx, truce, big meeting, ha! bullshit! if cyrus was the one and only how come he couldn't stop a bullet?! he says snickering! he then start's to stretch, and crack his neck and the younger con, notices several long, ugly scars on the side of ajax's face, and neck. that happened in here, ajax says. not on the street. it's the only way they can get me, 4, or 5 at a time! 5 boppers, out in the yard got me. yeah, cleon comes walkin up one day talkin some shit, about goin to the bronx. every gang is goin he says, we GOTTA go, he says. the leader of the g. riffs, biggest gang at the time. what about now, ajax asks? still are, popeye replies. fuckers, says ajax. anyway this faggot, cyrus, supposed to be all mystic and shit! got this brilliant plan for a truce, all the gang's to be one, and all this garbage about takin over the city! yeah right! we see how that turned out! so this one friday, it's hot man, middle of july. cleon comes walkin up the boardwalk, says we're goin tonite! he got the word this morning! i thought it was bullshit! i though we we're bein set up! but what i though didn't matter! i guess they were the ones who weren't very smart! so he says be here at 4:00 for your assignment. so i take off, go see my chick. thank god i did! i ended up in fuckin jail that night, and ain't seen daylight since! fuckin cleon! so we show up about 4 or so. there was 9 of us, that's what that dickhead cyrus wanted, 9 guy's and nobody carryin. weirdo! it was me, cleon, swan, my buddy cochise, cowboy, vermin, snowball, rembrandt and the fox. we were the 9 cleon picked, out of about 120 warriors at the time. the only good idea he had! how many now? he ask's popeye. about 350, he replies. we're still kinda small compared to some, riff's got over 800! so cleon dishes the line-up, and we start rollin down the walk, man! i guess it was kinda cool, i figured at worst we would get some kinda action! either fist's, or chick's!! so after we stop and eat, it's just getin dark by the time we hit the platform, to catch the train. we bullshit for awhile, till train pull's in. hop the train, and start movin!

Tantive7 · Post by **Tantive7** » Tue May 24, 2005 4:31 pm

soldierheavymuscle

KEEP SENDING IT,I WANT MORE..it entertains me at work...
That Young Buck,is gettin schooled by the Main Man..AJAX

KEEP IT COMING...

I SHOT CYRUS · Post by **I SHOT CYRUS** » Tue May 24, 2005 10:20 pm

really good, look forward to more of it

The Rogue · Post by **The Rogue** » Tue May 31, 2005 8:07 pm

man you should be writing books or something lol. if you do man you know were to find me

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Sun Jun 12, 2005 3:05 pm

next page, in a day or two! been busy!!!!!!! if you guys wanna hear it!

Post by **GonzoNYC** » Sun Jun 12, 2005 5:18 pm

Of course we want to see it, soldier! Bring it on!!

Post by **The Fox** » Sun Jun 12, 2005 5:26 pm

Looking forward to it!

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 4:27 am

"so, we're movin along, man! train's empty! you know, no civillian's come out after dark!! and with this so-called truce on, we had free-ride through all the neighborhood's! we're screwin around, bullshitin, and finally, we get there, to the bronx! i still think we're bein set-up!! we get met in this underpass, by riff soldier's tryin to sneak everybody into this park, for the meeting. fuckin cyrus!! though he had everything covered!! everybody get's felt to make sure they're not packed, and then we get sent down a tunnel. we come out of this tunnel, (the young warrior can't believe he's actually hearing THE story!!! THE story!!! from one of the 9!!!!! ajax, no less!! baddest warrior, there ever was!! and none of the rest of em are left anymore anyway, either dead, or just gone. this story is what made the warriors famous, all across the city, even now!!!) and i see the biggest, bunch of faggot's i ever seen!!!!! my god!!! purple, and pink, for color's! guys wearin make-up! all kind's of weird shit! it was like a circus, a buncha clown's!! i never seen nothin like it!! so finally, this cyrus guy, show's up! he didn't look like anything special to me! and he's goin on, and on, about peace, and truce, and everybody's BUYIN it!! i couldn't believe it! cowboy, snow, everybody!! even my partner cochise! all i wanted to do was bust head's!! he's talkin and he stop's for a second, then.... BOOM!!!!! a gunshot! some fool took old cyrus out!!! ha,ha, wimp!!! riff's missed somethin, i guess!! then it's quiet for a second, and then, ALL FUCKIN HELL BREAK'S LOOSE!!!!! CHAOS!!! at this same time, THE PARK GET'S LIT UP, by cop light's!! they were on the meeting the whole day, before it even started, some soldier, from some click, got picked up the day of the meeting, and lipped his way out of jail, by tellin the fuzz, about it. they're everywhere!! we don't know where the hell we are, we ain't never been here before, so we don't know where to go! cleon, point's a direction, we head that way, and we lost cleon in the park somewhere. all of a sudden dead end! i say fuck it! and start punchin through the wooden fence! swan and cochise join in, and a couple seconds later, we're through the fence and runnin scared through a fuckin grave yard!! haha i thought little rembrandt, was gonna shit himself! you know what happenned to him? ajax ask's popeye. yeah, replies popeye, o.d. 5 or 6 years ago. when all the senior warriors started leavin, the younger guys kinda ousted him, and he didn't handle it to good. and you'd see him in the neighborhood, every once in awhile, all doped up. to bad ajax says. i liked that little guy. (loud buzzer sound's) and all the cell door's, on the tier electronicaly open. there's lunch, say's ajax, after lunch we'll go outside, in the yard, i'll tell ya some more, and we'll stir up some trouble! he,he and see what you're about!.....................

The Rogue · Post by **The Rogue** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 6:51 pm

good stuff SHM, i like how the story is progressing, althought i didnt exacly like how rambradt was kiked out and is now a stoner but i respect the way ur writing this. keep it up

anto · Post by **anto** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 9:59 pm

Yeah i like it! Sounds a lot better than what i expect from this remake. More please...

I SHOT CYRUS · Post by **I SHOT CYRUS** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:28 pm

Like A Book You Cant Put Down, Want More Of It

Harley · Post by **Harley** » Fri Jul 29, 2005 12:33 am

This is a great read! You could sell it as a downloadable book when it's done.

I just don't like hearing Rembrant dying, he was always my favorite.

vermin76 · Post by **vermin76** » Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:39 am

in the midnight hour we cried more more more!