"Yo, Vance! You [bad word deleted] weird ass. Get some beers and [bad word deleted] up in here Man." said one of the Jones Street Boys. I gave him an evil stare and then left... I was going into Barry's Bottle shop. When I entered, it was empty. I saw Barry cleaning up after like a party or something.
"Hey Barry." I said. He looked up from cleaning the bench.
"Hey, Vance..." he said in a low voice. I looked at him strangely. Something was going on.
"Barry man, whats up?" I said.
"Saracens, they came and ruined the place." I suddenly looked around the place. It was sort of messed up.
"I.. I couldn't do anything, they surrounded the place." Barry said.
"... Barry man-" I said. But I saw three Saracens come in from the back. Before I could tell Barry one of the Saracens came and hit him in the back with a baseball bat. He didn't knock him out, but it did wind him. I saw the middle one stare at me with an evil smile. I instantly ran to the door. But I felt something hit me in the head... I woke up in a dumpster with some money.
"Five bucks..." I whispered to myself. There was a letter as well.
"Ha Ha Ha, thanks Jones Street Boy. Here five
bucks for letting us beat you, you [bad word deleted]
joke. Bloody Punk.
I instantly threw it away. I leaned my head back.. confused. I put my head back up and I saw two Saracens right near a ladder. I was shocked, I didn't know what to do. I quietly got out of it, but I fell on a bunch of boxes. That caught the Saracens eye. They saw me,
"Jone Street!" one of them yelled.
I got up and ran for my life! I tripped and dozed a bit. The last thing I saw was a Saracen... With a plank... I woke up again, in my hangout. I was happy, but then I saw Ed, he didn't look happy.
"Beaten up by some Saracens eh?" he said.
"Well Ed, I was out numbered man." I said.
"Ha Ha, I understand man." he said.
"[bad word deleted] Hell man." I said, I rubbed my face.
"God I am sick of Jones Street Boys man, they treat us like [bad word deleted]" I said. I got up from the bed and I begin to to walk in the hallway. Tode came and shoved me while walking in the man area. I look at him confused and I turned back and walked.
"The latest news Boppers, looks like a Jones Street Boy shouldn't be walk at night time when Saracens are about. Sorry Bopper, be careful next time."
Everyone looked at me. I was nervous. They turned back like it didn't happen.
"Hey Vance." It was second in command. Pache. "We are kicking you out of Jones Street... You made our rep look terrible!" he said.
"Hey! [bad word deleted] you man!" I said. He caught me off guard and punched me in the face real hard. I found myself laying on top of the Jones Street Boys hangout. I only heard one thing.
"Your out.." I didn't know who said it. But he pushed me off and I fell on a bunch of bums.
"Ahh, sorry." I said. They looked hurt, but I left them there. I found Ed.
"Ed man, they are really [bad word deleted] [bad word deleted]ing me off!" I said. "I say we start our own gang and show these [bad word deleted] heads what we are made of!"
CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON!
The Punks - Chapter 1: I'm a Jones Street Boy.
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Re: The Punks - Chapter 1
nice! great to see a new writer on here. this was good stuff, looking forward to the rest of it. hope youve checked out some of the other stuff on the board like Dud's, Lady Warriors and ... myself 8-[

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Re: The Punks - Chapter 1
brill chapter mate it was very intreging and i hope you continue this great story!! 
