ok guys sorry about the wait my laptop broke LOL but ive got a new one now:
chapter four
riverside
Fletcher and ranger got off at the subway station and walked around the dim-lit looking streets until ranger looked over at the massive baseball feild(its the only way people know they are in riverside) and explained"ok white-boy you see that feild, well right over the other-side of that feild the BFS's hangout is situated. here take this", and with that ranger handed fletcher a revolver gun, fletcher looked at it just staring and thinking' god i hope i'll be ok'. before he could worry some more ranger finished off by saying in a depressed voice"it's for if we get split up brother you never know whats goin to happen out here on the streets", although fletcher barely knew ranger he nodded in agreement like he had knew him all his life then they set off across the road lookin like tough, idimidating gangster's ready for a rumble with thier hoods pulled up over thier eyes and on thier way there fletcher loooked in disgust as a scruffy,old bum asked"have you got 5 bucks kid", fletcher pretended to rake in his pockets and replied"sorry i havent" ranger looked behind and shouted"hey man would you hurry up i aint got all day".
"sorry warchief" and he shifted his tush and caught up with him!!
They were just outside of the BFS's hangout and fletcher took in every sight and smell of this shit-hole, he looked around and saw 10 bums around a bin lit on fire, he also saw the dumpster's at the side of the hangout which had alot of disposed,dirty needles hanging out of the top of them this made fletcher feel liked he needed a shower, he heard a loud banging noise in the hangout(it seemed like it came from the top floor)!! Ranger gazed at fletcher and with a sigh said"lets go blood, we got some buissness to take care of". when they went in the hangout fletcher pulled his gun out and followed ranger who took the lead, he whispered before going up the stairs"be very quiet dont make a sound or they'll know we are here"
"ok ranger sure thing", fletcher followed ranger up the stairs and got told to wait behind the door as ranger looked in to check no BFS's were in the room, there was but they were stoned and had crashed out, they went up the secound flight of stairs(which were very hard to step up on without out making a noise!) when they got up them flight of stairs there was some big wooden ladder's hanging out of a little hatch, they both looked at each other and decided this was the great,enormous basement where they mainly hungout, fletcher decided to go up the basemnt stairs first he crept up them one by one and when he got to the basemnt ground level he peeped his head over the top hoping not to get found out! he stared in great horror as he witnessed a hispanic looking man that only looked about 21-23 years old tied to a chair with gunshot wounds in his chest, he looked up and saw what he thought was the leader of the baseball furies suck gang he was a black man about 6ft tall with a yankee's american football jersey on and american football pants on and boots he had a scarred face and he looked very cold-hearted, the other's had the same thing on but different colours mostly blue,red and white outfits.
The leader jumped and went over to the hispanics man now lifeless body and screamed"YOU SEE THIS, YOU SEE THIS PUSSY SITTING HERE, HE GOT SHOT COZ HE BETRAYED ME... HE LIED THROUGH HIS TEETH SAYING HE WERENT A COP, FUCK THAT SHIT I KNEW IT I JUST KNEW IT BRO'S HE WAS A SLIME-BALL, A PIG AND HE TRIED TO TAKE US DOWN AND WE TOTALLED HIM, AINT THAT RIGHT BRO'S"
"THATS RIGHT" they all replied in usion. then fletcher stepped down and said to ranger"lets kill them they are nothin but savage sycho's", ranger laughed and then jumped up the ladders and pulled his gun out and shot the leader in the leg then before fletcher's eyes he could see that at the same time the 6 BFS's that had been listening to thier leader just secounds ago, stood up and ran at ranger just then fletcher pounced on two of the six guys and pistol-wipped them both before getting a shock when a unbelievable force tripped him to the ground making him bang his head of the wooden floor, he looked up and saw the BFS dude was just about to headbutt him when ranger swung him off fletcher and threw him at the wall very strongly! two of them was wiped out just 4 more to go then all of a sudden fletcher looked up in awe as he saw seven rough,strong and edgy men come in the room only then did he relise it was some of the green du-rags. then without another a secound to waste the got back to wasting them crazy mudda-dudes, they had wiped them all out and fletcher went over to the leader of theese dudes and said dragging him up from the from the wooden floor by his hair"hey asshole what ya name?"
"skitz"
"SKITZ haha i dont know about skitz more DICK-HEAD"
"dont kill me mann i got kids mann... please dont kill me", just then the leader of the green du-rags called du-rag came up to skitz and fketcher... pulled out a gun and said"yeahh thats what they all say" and as quickly as he said it he shot skitz three times in the chest. fletcher looked away at the ghastly sight of skitz splayed out on the floor with gunshots all over his chest before he wiped blood from his face!
Du-rag cam up to him and said"you did good bro and you can now proudly say your a du-rag and im sorry you had to see that but someone had to do it that man was sick, ok brother's lets move out"... as they were walking out of the building a young-blood by the name of gem poured gasaline all over the inside of the building before setting it alight and then following all the du-rags on the subway train going back to coney!!
Ok guys and gals this was chapter 4 and i hope you enjoy reading it as much as i do writing it, adios boppersxxx 8)
all grown up- chapter four
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Re: all grown up- chapter four
Love'd it lady warrior your a great writer
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