Where Vermin Actually Came From

Jigsaw · Post by **Jigsaw** » Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:03 pm

Chapter 1 on my first try. Hope you like it.

Chapter 1: A Blood Rush That Changed Everything.

It was about 1966. A kid is getting picked on, naturally at the common place. A school. The kid gets pushed in mud, the most popular thing for humiliating someone. The kid decides he's not getting anywhere by "ignoring" which is b.s that his mom told him so he wouldn't end up getting suspended considering he was going to almost fail school already. This kid didn't care. The kid decided to get back up. The kid that was picking on him shakes his head and steps toward the mud covered child. The bully smirked and swung at the kid, but to his suprise the kid ducked and hit him in the gut. It was a hard blow, considering he's been saving it over three years. This was the beginning of him realizing he had true killer instinct. He got on top of the so called bully who was now starting to have tears come to his eyes, which is odd, considering it looks like they are in about seventh grade. The bully is clutching his stomach as the previously mud covered victum brings his knee up swiftly into this bullies face.

About 1970. This kid that had beaten the bullie about four years ago was now one of the worst kids going to the East Coney Island Highschool. You can easily guess that it is Vermin, judging by the way he looks. His grades were about a two percent in most subjects. But the grades wern't important. He was there to keep his rep up nice and fresh. Each day in a fight. Fight after fight. Eventually he got messed up real bad as anyone could have told. The dude called himself Jax, but thats not important. Important thing was that he knew if he was going to carry on this way he needed to get fit. He went to the gym very frequently and eventually met a guy named Virgil. Virgil one day mentioned "Man, you are getting some big buddy!" Vermin just looked back at him. Then he started to lift weights again. "You know I might be able to use you.." "Shut up. I'm planning on getting out of here, so I can just live on the streets and get a rep going again." Virgil smiled. "You don't know the half of it. How'd you like to come tryout for the Destroyers?" Vermin turned and looked at him. A smile crawled onto his face..

Warrior_Swan · Post by **Warrior_Swan** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 7:06 am

That is very similar to my own story, except for the gang elements. I dig it, keep on writing.

Matt S.F. · Post by **Matt S.F.** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 2:16 pm

Pretty good, please continue

Ash-Mckean · Post by **Ash-Mckean** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 4:08 pm

Hey great start, Really feel how it fits. KEEP IT GOIN

Jigsaw · Post by **Jigsaw** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 8:57 pm

Thanks, i was wonderin if people would like it. Was actually thinking you wouldn't

I was wrong

I Got some new ideas for this chapter

. Hope you like it! Anyway..

Chapter 2: First Time Job

At this point Vermin had talked to Virgil, and had been asked to try out for 'The Destroyers'. He thought for a while. Eventually he draped a towel over his shoulder and took a small sip of his water. "Yeah, I'll try it." "Great, come with me" Virgil said smiling, he obviously knew he'd be perfect for 'The Destroyers'.

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A few Destroyers are hanging around the entrance to their hangout. Just making jokes, disrespecting one another. Virgil came in with Vermin as some of the guys looked at him and laughed. Virgil looked at Vermin and shook his head. "Good for nothing new bloods. They ought to see you when you try out for our gang." Vermin just kept looking at them. They were all laughing except this one guy who seemed to be unsure of him. The guy eventually turned away and walked into the hangout. "Who was that?" Virgil turned to Vermin. "Oh, thats Cleon. He's a quiet one, but don't lip-off. He can sure as hell flex his muscle." "Ok, whatever. Who said I was gonna fight anyone anyway?" Virgil just smiled. "Come on I'll give you the test." Vermin followed Virgil into the hangout.

*******

Probably a few hours later, Virgil eventually came back to talk to Vermin, who had been sitting on a couch hanging out with some other Destroyers. Virgil called him outside. Vermin got up and started to walk to the door. "What the hell am I getting myself into? What's going to happen? Am I going to get wrecked?" All thoughts he thought of in the time period of about ten seconds. He made his way down the stairs and out the back door. There was Virgil and some other dude. Vermin ofcourse didn't know him, considering he didn't know any of the people here except Virgil, because he was watching him at the gym well over two months. "This is Artie, hes the one that usually helps soldier the middle. He is going to have a bit of a rumble with you to see if you are good enough to join the destroyers. Now, he is one of our best soldiers so make sure if he ends up beating you too much for you to handle just tell me." "Not Nessacery. I can handle it." Vermin smiled. Artie put his fists up as did Vermin.

*******

Hours later, the two exhausted, Vermin has a large gash on his forehead, and a couple on his hands a arms. Artie, on the otherhand, has a small gash on his arm. Now, at this point any other gang leader would have called it off hours ago. But Virgil decided to now. He must have enjoyed it, the sick minded freak. "Thats enough! Okay, Artie, go get cleaned up. As for you, Vermin, come with me." Vermin limped after in the footsteps of Virgil. They went inside the back door and up the stairs.

*******

Vermin was now all cleaned up, had on his new colors, he had slept for over 4 hours. He was feeling better. Then he thought. He thought about the fact that he has left his side of Coney Island to eat, sleep, and fight like a Destroyer. His mom ofcourse didn't know where he was, but she didn't care anymore. She did when he was in the seventh grade. But no, not anymore. He threw his life away for nothing. But now he thought harder, and came up with the truth.. "I threw my life away, but not for just anything.. Now, I'm a Destroyer!"

Hope you Like it, I will continue if you say you enjoyed it.

Sleeping Dragon · Post by **Sleeping Dragon** » Fri Feb 17, 2006 11:15 pm

Awesome bro!!please continue.

Jigsaw · Post by **Jigsaw** » Fri Feb 17, 2006 11:47 pm

Vermin was in the hangout when Cleon walked over to him.

Cleon: Hi, those other guys that laughed at you earlier, don't pay attention. Your bigger than them anyway.

Vermin(chuckling): Yeah, I noticed when you didn't laugh they quickly stopped.

Cleon: Anyway, I'm Cleon.

Vermin(sticking out his hand): Vermin.

They shake hands as Virgil came into the room. Virgil tosses them both a beer. Vermin catches his barely and looks back at Virgil.

Virgil: Don't worry, Newbloods can drink to!

They all laugh and take a sip.

A newblood flies in the door.

Newblood: Virgil! Three guys are starting some commotion outside!

Virgil: Cleon, Vermin, with me!

Virgil, Cleon, and Vermin fly down the stairs to see....

Sleeping Dragon · Post by **Sleeping Dragon** » Sun Feb 19, 2006 4:54 pm

nice!!And by the way,phat sig!!

Jigsaw · Post by **Jigsaw** » Tue Feb 21, 2006 1:39 am

Sleeping Dragon wrote: nice!!And by the way,phat sig!!

LOL thanx I made it in like 2 hours.

Sleeping Dragon · Post by **Sleeping Dragon** » Tue Feb 21, 2006 3:03 am

really?

Jigsaw · Post by **Jigsaw** » Tue Feb 21, 2006 1:51 pm

Sleeping Dragon wrote: really?

Yeah, had to make it in animation shop, it takes quite a while

Sleeping Dragon · Post by **Sleeping Dragon** » Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:08 pm

Vermin_2_2 wrote:
Sleeping Dragon wrote: really?
Yeah, had to make it in animation shop, it takes quite a whileÂ

nice new one.

$now4Ever · Post by **$now4Ever** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:32 pm

I like it man it's original.

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